Snow Bawl by Anon (Luna / Colt) (03/12/2017) https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/31472117/#q31480634 --- >be colt >have snow fight with friend >see bunch of boring adults talking >throw snowball at them >you realize you hit Princess Luna >oh shit oh shit oh shit >run the tartarus out of there >friend doesn't >meet with friend hours later >he took the blame for your sake >his parents apologised to the Princess and her companions >apologies were accepted >but now his parents are going to punish him >you don't know what to do >he tells you it's ok >bed time >you are in your bed looking at the ceiling >guilt is eating you inside out >you couldn't react properly both times >now it may be too late >as you feel sleepy you wish you could turn back time >you wish you could talk to Luna >"Talk, then, my child" >.... >There she is >Princess Luna herself >You are both floating in a messy dark space >sometimes with stars in the distance >sometimes with pieces of buildings >sometimes with rooms of your house >"I... I'm sorry..." >"For what?" >"For... throwing that snowball..." >"Why?" >"Because... it's... disrespectful..." >"Why?" >"Because you are a princess??" >"That's it?" >"..." >"What if it was any other pony, somepony wasn't part of your game." >"..." >"It would be disrespectful too, child." >"..." >"Would you feel guilty too?" >"Uh..." >"Is that really why you feel guilty?" >"... ....my friend..." >"What about him?" >"He got punished instead of me..." >"..." >"I- I'm sorry!" >"What will you do?" >"I... I don't know!!" >silence >you want to cry >"We can't turn back time, but we can make thing right in the present. We can apologise. I know that. I wasn't bothered by your snowball attack at all, but others may have, and neither their social status nor wether there will be consequences should matter. You must understand that. Worst of all, your friend was innocent and got punished unfairly, and you can do something about that. I ask you to think about that as I give you the punishment your friend received." >as she talked, you floated in her direction >and then you were perpendicular to her >you didn't fight it >you weren't even surprised >it all felt so natural >yet grim >because you knew what was going to happen >especially as your bottom rised *SLAP!!!* >And before you knew Luna was spanking you >mercilessly >one smack after another >you were defenseless >you kicked all your hooves >but it was pointless >you were floating in place >nothing to hold to >no way to escape >you cried with all the strenght of your lungs >but it didn't matter in that "place" >it's like you could solely feel the smacks and the pain >the smacks kept coming >and coming >and coming >and coming >yet >they couldn't distract you... >from thinking about your friends >or those vague memories of the other ponies that were with Luna >wich you could have hit too >... >you weren't sure how much time had passed >or when the spanking had stopped >you were just crying in the air >then the crying stopped >so had the pain >but not the guilt >you felt a kiss in the forehead >as you felt you were falling >you wake up in your bed >you realize you had a nightmare >you are just not going to be able to sleep peacefully until you confess >you get out of bed >you head towards the door >doesn't matter how late it is, your friends' parents need to learn the truth >they'll understand the guilt couldn't make you wait any longer >but something stops you in place >a glince in the corner of your eye >the mirror >now you are starting to feel it too >your butt is glowing red like a tomato End.