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>Day Dress to Impress
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>You're in Canterlot, tired of the scene in Ponyville.
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>Boring, nothing to do but attend Pinkie's parties.
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>You step out of the shower and towel off.
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>Pull on your lucky boxers, some socks, black pants.
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>Button up a clean shirt as you slip into the shoes you bought yesterday.
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>A black tie goes around your neck, and you slip your silk suit jacket on.
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>A few accessories to complete the look, and you head downstairs to the garage.
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>Your pride and joy, restored after you crashed into Equestria, sits before you.
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>A gift from your Uncle Dusty, it's a beautiful hot rod- an eliminator coupe to be specific.
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>Runs on magic now.
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>Still sounds the same though.
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>You roll out from under the apartment complex, the stallion in the gatehouse waving as you exit.
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>The sound of guitars on the radio mixes with the rumble of the engine as you cruise through the city.
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>Waving to the mares, your cufflinks catching the setting sun.
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>Girls can't help but doubletake.
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>One stands out, despite hre best efforts not to.
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>Its that one shy mare, from Ponyville.
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>She moved here not long after you.
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>Fluttershy, you think it was.
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>Cute girl, but didn't say much and avoided the nightlife.
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>What a shame.
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>You wave to her as you rumble past.
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>All the other mares throw jealous glares her way.
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>There he goes.
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>Oh my Goodness!
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>He waved...to you!
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>You can feel the blush creeping up your face.
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>The other mares are green with envy, causing you to shrink back as best you can.
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>As he speeds off towards the heart of the city, they disappate.
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>Except for three mares, who start strutting towards you.
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>You can hear guitars in the background.
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>Where was that coming fr-
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>Your train of thought is interrupted as they reach you.
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>Circling around you, they seem to be appraising you.
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>It's really embarassing.
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>Maybe you can just-
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>Nope, not gonna get away.
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"C-can I help you?"
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>The leader just smiles at you and winks, as the other two take hold and lead you down the street.
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>At a nearby hair salon the leader tips a mare out of the chair, and she runs off as you're thrust down into the seat.
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>That was mean...surely the stylist will kick you all out for that, and then you can escape.
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>...or maybe she'll just start working on your mane.
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>The mares whisper things to the stylist, and she just nods as she works.
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>You weren't due for a haircut, but...this is nice.
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>Even if you don't really understand what's happening.
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>As the mare washes your mane, your thoughts drift to Anon.
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>He's always out partying, maybe you should find him tonight.
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>Show off your new mane style...
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>You always were a good dancer, you just didn't like all the other ponies being around.
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>Yes Fluttershy, that is what you have to do.
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>We'll go find him!
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>Right after these crazy mares let you go.
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>Hopefully that'll be right after you're done here.
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>You were wrong.
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>After a long makeover session, your mane is...different.
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>It's wild, and cool and not very Fluttershy.
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>But it is PERFECT for what you plan to do tonight.
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>After that they didn't let you go though.
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>They took you for a hooficure.
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>Which was also nice.
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>They're very nice mares, you've decided.
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>You just wish they'd talk to you.
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>They always just wink, and smile and things like that.
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>At least they're friendly though.
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>Right now you're changing into another outfit.
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>You've been shopping for quite some time now.
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>Stepping out to go to the mirrors, the mares fawn over you.
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>As you spin around, they share a look, and drag you out of the store.
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"...but we haven't paid yet..."
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>One of them just smiles and winks at you.
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>They lead you into a fancy carriage, and the storeowner waves cheerfully as you drive away.
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>You just don't understand.
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>Parking the rod, you check that everything is in place.
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>Seeing that it all is, you step out onto the street and head for the club entrance.
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>You bypass the line, and the bouncer nods you inside.
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>LaGrange isn't a big club, not like some of the ballroooms, but its intimate and exclusive.
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>The low ceilings and varied levels make it dark, cozy, and hard to see across the crowd.
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>A couple of bearded rockers you met told you "they've got a lot of nice girls" here, whatever that meant.
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>You've gotten weirder tips though.
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>And the layout hides your ridiculous height well.
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>Grabbing a drink from the bar, you settle into a booth in a corner and sprawl out.
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>The main band just showed up -those bearded guys from before, plus their drummer.
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>But for now, there was just a DJ.
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>A couple mares out on the floor catch your eye.
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>But it's early, you're gonna let the floor heat up a bit first.
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>Its been an hour or so, and you've got your best chances picked out.
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>Also, you're suitably liquored up.
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>That part is important.
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>Alcohol is to dancing as grease is to machinery.
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>Rising to head onto the floor, a commotion nearby draws your attention.
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>A quartet of mares stuts out onto the dance floor as the main band starts their set.
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>...
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>Those mares have got it going on!
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>Man, tonight just got way better!
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>A smile on your face, you push your way through their admirers, and three of the mares take notice.
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>They move right up to you, and quickly pull you past the other stallions onto the floor.
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>As you start to do your thing, they share some smiles and winks.
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>Soon the group moves in around you, and pushes you towards a leggy yellow and pink pegasus.
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>Damn, she looks fine.
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>She's got legs, and she knows how to use them.
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>Without hesitation, you take the hint.
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>As the next song starts, the mare turns and notices you.
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>Holy shit!
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>Its Fluttershy!
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"Fluttershy, right? From Ponyville?"
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>"Y-you remember me!?"
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"I always remember a pretty face."
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>She blushes and looks away.
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"You look totally different than earlier though!"
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>"Oh, I just felt like going out tonght. Nothing s-special."
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"It looks great. You should go out more often." you smile.
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>As the song hits its stride, you cut the chit-chat and start to dance.
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>And good God, Fluttershy more than keeps up with you.
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>This girl knows what she's doing.
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>As the night draws to a close, you sit in a booth with Fluttershy.
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>It was a great night, and you're both tired out.
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>Her friends have left to go hang with the band, and you're too busy talking to the mare in front of you to care.
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>The lights come up, and you stand.
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"Can I drive you home?"
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>"Is that all?" she teases, a blush on her cheeks.
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>This mare is alright.
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>Tonight has been just perfect.
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>You never did get to thank those girls for everything.
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>But after the band's last set, they just disappeared.
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>Or maybe you were too busy with Anon to see them leave.
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>Oh well.
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>But now you're here with him, in his car.
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>You feel so cool, cruising through Canterlot with the windows down and the radio up.
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>Just hanging out with Anon.
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>But what do you do next?
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>You've never gotten even close to this far with a stallion before!
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>Oh Fluttershy, you should have listened to somepony other than Rarity.
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>She was such a tease to her stallions, but you really wanted to reel this one in!
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>He was smart and fashionable and cool...
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>...and he was nice to you. He was interested in you.
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>Oh what to do, what to do!
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>The car stops at a red light, and you look out the window.
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!!!
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>Its those three mares! And the stallions from the band!
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>They're sitting on a long bench outside a diner.
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>The stallions are sitting like Anon, and one of the girls winks at you before laying her head down on his leg.
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>She runs a hoof absently along the inside of the same leg.
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>The light turns green, and the stallions wave as you drive away.
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>You do exactly what the other mare did.
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>It feels nice, you could fall asleep like this.
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>You jump a bit as he lays his hand on your withers and gently rubs up your neck.
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>It feels so nice, you drift off.
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>Damnit.
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>She fell asleep.
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>And you have no idea where to go next to get to this mare's apartment.
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>It isn't far from yours, so you just redirect and head home.
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>You'll sleep on the couch tonight, you guess.
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>In all honesty, when you go downtown, you're usually looking to get some.
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>Lord knows you don't have any inhibitions any more.
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>But no matter how choice that flank is, you're not the kind of guy to take advantage of a mare.
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>Looks like you won't be getting any tush tonight.
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>Back at your place, you carry the sleeping mare to your room and tuck her in.
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>In the closet you strip down to your boxers and throw on some pajama pants, then head for the couch.
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>Leaving an old 45 to play on the record player, you fall asleep.
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>In the morning, you wake up to the smell of breakfast.
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>With a groan you roll off the couch, and get to your feet.
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>In the kitchen you find yourself having a terrible case of morning wood.
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>Which is not helped by the sight before you.
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>Fluttershy singing to herself, shaking her flank in time as she cooks.
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>"Give me all your loving, all your hugs and kisses too~"
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[spoiler] It was a very ZZ Top weekend. [/spoiler]
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