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Note: This is the original draft of this story, but not the best one. Another version, expanded, and rewritten in prose can be found here:
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and here:
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I hope you'll check it out. It's much better than this one.
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A Blueberry and her Greenery
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Post 1
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>You are Trixie,
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>Having one hell of a time.
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>Circling Equestria in your wagon.
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>Stopping when you reach a town,
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>performing magic.
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>Pearls before swine.
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>They don't appreciate it,
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>not enough, anyway.
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>They can't see your greatness.
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>But it's there.
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>You are the GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie
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>...
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>Aren't you?
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>...
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>...
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>You are anon
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>You are, ...somewhere.
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>Lot's of trees.
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>Weird animals
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>Do those clouds have spikes?
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>You've been here for a few days.
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>That sun can really fuckin' move.
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>So can the moon.
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>Who knows how you got here?
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>Wherever here is.
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>Not much to eat
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>Clothes are dirty and torn.
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>Those clouds DO have spikes!
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>And there're lots of them!
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>It's getting darker.
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>Suddenly brighter.
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>Lightning! Way too close for comfort.
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>Rain too.
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>Fuck.
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>Is that a... a cave!
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>I've read enough novels to know this never works out
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>But that's only novels right?
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>Real life has empty, unused caves, right?
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>Man, the rain is really coming down
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>Besides, everyone knows monsters aren't real!
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>BOOM!
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>Lightning turns a tree in to fragments
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>That cinches it: cave it is.
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Post 2
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>You are anon
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>More importantly, you are out of the rain.
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>More or less
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>This cave isn't so big.
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>But it is long.
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>The storm makes it dark outside,
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>but the cave continues in pure blackness.
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>[spoiler]Shit's creepy, yo.[/spoiler]
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>You vaguely recall reading caves are bad places to be in thunderstorms
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>Lightning can jump the gaps.
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>Was that why?
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>You can't remember.
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>Should you go deeper?
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>More lightning.
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>It's even closer.
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>You see something out of the corner of your eye.
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>Glinting in the flash from outside.
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>What's that in the darkness?
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>It's gone
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>No more lightning,
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>No more light.
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>A sound.
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>Barely audible over the din from outside
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>Different from the din outside.
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>faint
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>scraping
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>Like fingernails on stone
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>Fingernails, or...
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>No, this is real life.
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>More lightning,
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>More light.
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>Holy shit!
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Post 3
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>You are anon,
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>and there are jewels!
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>There are many jewels!
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>Rubies, Saphires, Diamonds, Emeralds!
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>Scattered a few meters further in the cave.
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>How convenient.
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>But they're big.
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>And your pockets are empty.
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>Before you realize it, you're squatting and stuffing them.
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>Hmmm, not as many as you thought.
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>Still a half-dozen thumb-sized gems are nothing to sneeze at.
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>Wait, what's that?
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>At the edge of the darkness?
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>Another one?
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>Sweet!
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>Oh, another?
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>Just a bit further?
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>And another!
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>And another!
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>And...
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>Lightning flashes again.
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>It doesn't seem so close this time.
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>Shit you're deeper than you realized!
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>But there are still more jewels.
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>Little sparks of light
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>laying one after the other.
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>a trail of winking eyes
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>beckoning you to follow.
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>To go deeper.
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>You look back.
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>You can see the mouth of the cave.
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>A distant, dark gray splotch against the black
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>You look forward.
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>Darkness. Not merely the absence of light.
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>A darkness so absolute it seems to be material.
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>Something...
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>Something's there.
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>You can feel it.
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>Like the abyss staring back at you.
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>A smell
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>rotting meat and unwashed fur.
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>Dread and fear wash over you like a wave
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>GET OUT NOW
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>You turn to run, dropping the gems in your hands.
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>That sound again.
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>Fingernails on stone
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>No, not fingernails:
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>claws.
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>Scrabbling for purchase
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>Louder than before,
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>and closer.
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>You break in to a sprint.
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>A step.
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>Two.
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>Something hits you from behind.
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>Large and filthy and hairy
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>Laughter like nothing from a human throat echos in the cave.
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>You're thrown to the ground
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>Bound with coarse rope.
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>Something wet and clingy and noxious goes over your head.
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>Darkness.
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Post 4
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>You are Trixie.
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>The day is looking good!
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>Sun
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>blue sky
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>Diamond Dogs.
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>They're kind of stinky, sure.
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>But easy to impress!
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>And loaded with Jewels!
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>Not much further now.
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>Good thing to
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>turning your wagon's wheels with magic is hard!
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>Not too hard of course.
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>You are Great and Powerful!
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>But hard enough.
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>Sure does impress though.
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>Even other ponies.
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>And the Diamond Dogs?
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>You giggle to yourself imagining their reaction.
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>You put on a haughty expression.
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>Nose up
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>sly smile
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>palpable arrogance.
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>Your wagon carries you through the tree line.
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>Showtime!
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>"Come one! Come all!"
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>"See the amaaazing feats of magic that can only be done by the most amaaazing unicorn in Equestria."
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>Memories rise unbidden.
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>A town not too far away.
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>An amulet.
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>Another unicorn.
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>...
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>Your expression never wavers
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>your eyes don't betray your thoughts,
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>Your smile even grows.
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>Magic isn't the only amazing thing about you.
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Post 5
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>You are Trixie
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>And you cary on with practiced ease.
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>Your vardo rolls on.
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>Toward the wide mouth of the Diamond Dog's cave.
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>"See the dextrous manipulation of reality itself!"
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>They've definitely noticed you.
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>"Be AWED with power you never knew existed!"
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>Diamond pups yip and jump excitedly
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>Some rush in to the cave
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>"Power you never knew *could* exist!"
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>More Diamond Dogs emerge
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>ears perked,
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>wagging tails,
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>some with lolling tongues.
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>The wagon trundles on.
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>"For while Trixie has graced your home with her presence before,"
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>that *was* some time ago."
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>The wagon stops.
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>"Gather round and see Trixie as you've never seen her before!"
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>You stand on your ledge.
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>Hat cocked just so.
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>Cloak billowing behind you.
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>"Blessed with talent beyond any other unicorn!"
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>"Trained by Princess Celestia herself!"
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>"Victor of a duel with *Princess* Twilight Sparkle!"
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>Memories
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>Not now
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>"Ruler of Ponyville..."
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>"Until I got bored and left!"
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>"The one! The only! The Great and Powerful Trrrixie!"
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>You leap from your vardo,
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>subtly hitting a switch as you go.
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>Your magic carries you higher than a mere leap would have,
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>and slows your descent to a glide.
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>From your wagon trumpets blare and cannons launch confetti.
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>Smoke erupts and a stage juts forth.
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>Perfect timing, you think,
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>magically adjusting your fall.
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>You touch down as the smoke clears.
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>A wand in your hoof.
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>A dramatic flourish and bow
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>To a cacophony of excited howls
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>and tails drumming the ground.
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Post 6
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>You are Trixie
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>And you have the audience in the frog of your hoof
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>You flash your perfect smile
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>And raise your wand
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>Sweeping the crowd
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>You can't help but laugh as their heads follow it's movement
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>Every last one of them
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>Silly things
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>You play to it.
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>"Hahaha!" Your voice gradually rising in pitch
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>"Behold! An artifact from *beyond*!
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>[spoiler]Just a stick, yo![/spoiler]
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>"Unknown to Griphons!"
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>What should I call it?
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>"Unknown to Taurs!"
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>Think fast
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>"Unknown to to the Dragons, and the mighty Diamond Dogs!"
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>What was that thing called?
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>"Unknown even to Ponies!"
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>Lives under the sea, part pony part octopus, little bat-wings?
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>"All but two, that is!"
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>Ah, that's it!
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>"Brought to this world by Starswirl the Bearded himself!"
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>"Used to work wonders!"
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>"Then banished beyond the sea by Princess Celestia herself
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>because even SHE feared it's might!"
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>"Tremble, for you are in the presence of the dreaded Wand of Colthulhu!"
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>They all actually gasped.
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>perfect
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>"But *I*, the Great and Powerful Trixie could not be denied!"
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>"I, through wit and sorcery unmatched,
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>stole this artifact from the depths of Tartarus itself!"
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>"I, and I alone know the secret to it's use!"
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>"But the Great and Powerful Trixie is not cruel!
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>"The Great and Selfless Trixie would share the marvels of this relic!"
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>"Who would witness it's power?"
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Post 7
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>You are Trixie
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>The center of attention
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>As it should be
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>The Diamond Dogs stand transfixed by the stick
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>Eyes glazed, ears down
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>You levitate the wand
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>Flourishing here and there
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>Your pink aura sparking and glowing
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>"Not even The Great and Powerful Trixie can use it in hoof."
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>"It's magic is too dangerous!"
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>"One of Starswirl's apprentices tried...
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>and was seen dragged away by tentacled horrors!"
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>"Things from beyond the veil of worlds!"
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>You hold it steady
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>A few meters over the crowd
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>With your magic you call forth screams
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>Shrill and wild
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>They sound like they're coming from the wand
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>with a wispy vapor
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>it darkens and thickens
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>A cloud
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>More magic!
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>From the lobes and pillows of smoke a face forms
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>Twisted and rotten
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>Then melts away.
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>Another one
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>larger and more monstrous than the last
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>You look around
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>They're all focused on the show above them.
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>A few of the pups are hiding their eyes behind their paws
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>More magic
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>A new shape rises
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>Swift and terrible
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>Like a shark attacking from below
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>it swallows the monsters face
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>and leers at the crowd
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>Gasps, and even a whimper or two.
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>Not just from the pups
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>Ha!
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>Here we go...
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>Dramatically you allow the pink aura of magic to sputter.
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>You make the screams louder
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>Add new voices
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>Twist them
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>Some stones fall down the mountainside
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>Some of them turn to look
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>Now a voice for the face
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>"Pathetic creatures"
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>"You can not hold me! I will devour you!"
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>Not good enough for ponies, you think
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>More than enough for these mutts.
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>Some of the pups flee in the cave
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>"Silence beast!" You shout.
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>"You are at my command!
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>I the Great and Powerful Trixie will not allow you to harm!"
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>"Begone!"
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>Your horn glows brighter, so does the wand.
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>The face contorts in agony
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>it keens as it's absorbed back in to the stick.
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>It drops
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>The Diamond Dogs flee from where it lands
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>You smile, allowing yourself to seem just a *bit* flustered.
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>They look back and forth from the wand to you
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>And erupt in cheers
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Post 8
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>You are Trixie
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>You just saved the day
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>Or so they think
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>You hop down from your stage
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>Suddenly, a pin drop would be loud
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>You stroll nonchalantly toward the wand
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>quietly laying in a circle of dumbstruck Diamond Dogs
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>They part like water as you approach
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>"Not e-ven the Immaterium's Horrors can match the Great and Powerful TrrrixIE!"
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>You emphasize the last sound
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>savoring it
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>"But really..."
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>Your horn glows and the wand jumps to your cloak-pocket
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>The Diamond Dogs jump too.
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>"was there *ever* any doubt?"
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>You smirk a moment
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>then saunter back to stage
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>Feeling their eyes on you
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>Relishing it
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>Sitting on stage now
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>Hind hooves crossed
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>dangling languidly off the edge
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>Time for the goodies
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>"Now then"
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>"The Great and Powerful Trixie,
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>quondam royal student,
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>triumphant in uncounted duels
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>and contests of magic,
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>has juuusstt
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>saved your bacon."
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>You like that phrase
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>Picked it up from the Gryphons
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>A murmur passes through the crowd
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>A trio of them sprint to the cave
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>"Trixie will accept your adulation..."
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>The briefest of pauses
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>The faintest of smiles
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>"Now"
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>As one they rush to you
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>Stopping just shy of your hooves
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>Yipping cheering and whining
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>Hopefully they don't piddle again
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>You raise your gorgeous face to the sun.
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>The sounds and more importantly
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>The feelings wash over you.
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>A warmth swells in your chest
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>You smile more broadly
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>And look toward the cave
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>careful to let only the barest of glances fall on your worshipers
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>They should be returning with your reward soon
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>Last time it was a basket full of glittering jewels
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>Ah there!
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>Two of the cave-sprinters emerge
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>Empty-handed
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>Behind them
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>Movement in the gloom
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>That must be number three
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>...
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>What under Celestia's sun is that!?
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Post 9
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>You are anon
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>Still alive
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>Maybe you'd be better off dead
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>Chains around your wrists and ankles
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>Pushing a heavy gem-laden cart
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>There's barely any light
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>Even less food
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>And brutish foul-smelling... things are everywhere.
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>Following you
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>taunting you
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>whipping you
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>How long have you been here?
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>It's hard to tell when you can't see the sky
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>Something's happening
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>The big blue hunchbacked one
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>Your captor, is coming
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>Where he is, the other two are never far behind.
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>They sniff the air and bee-line for you
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>Fuck
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>The big one's got something in his paws
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>One of them holds your chain
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>The big one shoves that thing over your head
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>It's wooden, and heavy
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>Baskets hang from its sides
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>They stuff gems in one basket
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>Bottles in the other
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>and drag you by your chain
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>You are Trixie
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>And for once in your life you are speechless
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>Something has emerged from the cave
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>It looks like...
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>well it looks like nothing you've ever seen
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>Walks on two legs
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>covered in dirty tattered cloth
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>It has a mane
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>of a sort
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>But no coat you can see
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>Bearing a yoke with two full baskets
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>And prodded along by...
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>Fido was his name?
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>Well the biggest of the three
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>Whatever his name was
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>They're heading your way
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>Rover and Spot push through the crowd
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>and genuflect at your hooves
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>Tails stiff
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>just the ends wagging
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>They're excited
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>trying to be subtle about it
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>"Oh Trixie..." He begins
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>Fuck that!
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>"AHEM!"
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>A pause
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>"Oh Great and Powerful Trixie!"
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>"You may continue."
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>"Thank you for saving us"
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>"Look, look!" The other one adds
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>"Our servant brings you treats!"
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>"Gems, and Cider, and Gryphon ale too!"
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>So it's their servant?
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>Why anything would serve the Diamond Dogs
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>Is beyond even the Great and Powerful Trixie's ken
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>It's closer now
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>back bent under it's burden
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>Wait a moment
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>What's that on it's... limbs?
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>Chains?
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Post 10
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>You are the Great and Powerful Trixie
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>You no longer feel good
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>Warm and smug a moment ago
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>Now chilled to the bone
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>Chains?
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>Memories rise
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>They always do
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>But never so soon after a show
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>An amulet
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>Incredible power in your veins
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>An even more incredible cruelty in your heart
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>Watching through your own eyes
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>Somehow not really comprehending
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>as you do things
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>Things you still can't believe you would have
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>But you did
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>And Twilight...
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>NO!
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>No No No No No No No
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>...
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>Better now
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>Not a hair out of place
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>No matter how strong the feelings
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>Damn, you're awesome
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>You are anon
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>SUNLIGHT!
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>You can't see shit
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>Your eyes ache and burn
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>But it's a good pain
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>And the warmth on your skin is unmistakable
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>The thing behind you pokes
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>forcing you to go where it wants
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>Your eyes are starting to adjust
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>You're heading toward a large group of brutes
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>clustered around a stage
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>There seems to be a blue pony sitting on it
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>A blue pony
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>with a white mane
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>And a robe and wizard hat
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>Maybe you have been in the dark too long
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>You are Trixie
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>And it doesn't look like an animal
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>As soon as it arrives
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>the dogs push it to the ground
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>and laugh
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>You aren't laughing
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>Neither is it
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>Such a weird face
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>but you can read it as clearly as anypony's
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>This is no thoughtless beast
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>"Why would I want your prisoner?"
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>Blase, but not overly
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>"No, Great and Powerful one
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>servant only bring treats!"
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>"Look, Look!" says another
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>They point to the baskets
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>They hold up the bottles
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>Wow! How did Dogs get luxuries like those?
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>They went all out this time
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>The show must have been better than you thought
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>memories
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>A stab of conscious
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>Damn it
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Post 11
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>You are Trixie
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>And hard experience has taught you
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>reckless action is trouble
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>You need to know more
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>"Why do servants need chains?
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>Their pay *is* their chain, is it not?"
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>"He thief!"
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>"Come to cave in forest!
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>Steal Diamond Dog treasure!"
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>You've heard of this
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>Dogs baiting creatures and capturing them
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>For labor and eventually food
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>But always animals
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>Maybe he was a thief?
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>But even so
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>Does he deserve what they have in store for him?
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>And worse
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>what if he isn't?
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>How to proceed?
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>You have to know more
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>and honey catches more flies than vinegar
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>"The Great and Powerful Trixie approves!"
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>"Oh thank you Great and Powerful!
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>His pockets bulged when we found him!
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>They were so fat we almost couldn't net him!"
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>"Exaggeration, I'm sure." You sardonically reply
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>Another spoke
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>"Yeah he didn't even get them all. We laid out too many gems in the line."
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>Your heart sank
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>They DID lure him
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>You know what you have to do.
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>You are anon
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>They're talking about you
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>Knuckle-walking dog-things conversing with a blueberry wizard pony
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>You'd laugh if you could
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>But you can't
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>So all this is for the blueberry?
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>You wonder who she is
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>She keeps looking at you
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>But not like the others
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>They leer
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>and scowl
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>and throw things
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>She-not human but clearly female
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>regards you with...
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>pitty?
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>A split second
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>Then it's gone
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>The set of her face
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>The carriage of her body
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>Everything exudes confidence and power
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>The dog-things extol their gifts
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>She actually looks somewhat impressed
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>A sideways glance at you
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>She asks about you
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>They say you're a thief!
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>Your anger overcomes your fear
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>You're just about to say something
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>Before you can the big dumb(er) one drops the truth
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>Their tails stop wagging
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>They wince and look at him
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>He doesn't seem to realize what he said
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>Blueberry does
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>She doesn't seem happy.
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>"Well, The Great and Powerful Trixie has need of a new servant."
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>What?
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>Does she mean you?
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>should you be happy?
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>"She will graciously relieve you of this burden."
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Post 12a
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>You are Trixie
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>They are Diamond Dogs
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>and don't want to let their toy go
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>"But Great and Powerful one!
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>He's not a treat!
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>He's a thief!"
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>You scowl
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>"What Trixie wants
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>Trixie gets!"
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>[spoiler]Especially from Diamond Dogs[/spoiler]
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>"And Trixie wants him"
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>"If you take him maybe he try steal from you!"
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>The dog seems genuinely worried
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>"Great and Powerful Trixie might get angry at us!"
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>You laugh
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>A gentle melody
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>lilting on the breeze
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>"If it steals from Trixie it will be punished
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>The Great and Magnanimous Trixie
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>would not hold you responsible"
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>"But... but..." the dog stammers
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>"But!" Your voice hardens
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>"The Great and Terrible Trixie will get angry"
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>They whimper at this
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>"if you deny her!"
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>"The Great and Famous Trixie will tell all she meets
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>'Diamond Dogs have no gratitude!
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>I saved their town from unspeakable terrors
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>yet they refused my simple request!'
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>Who will trade with Diamond Dogs then?"
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>The dogs look at each other
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>indecision crumples their brows
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Post 12b
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>"Ok" Spot relents
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>"No!" Shouts Fido
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>"He mine!"
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>"But Trixie saved us!"
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>Rover jumps between them
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>"We give her the servant
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>but we keep the jewels!"
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>Fido thinks a moment
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>It looks painful for him
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>"And Drinks!" He says finally
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>No
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>Not only no
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>but hell fuck no!
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>"Fine!"
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>Your horn glows
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>The wand leaps from your pocket
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>and drops to the sand
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>"Maybe I should leave that here?"
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>You smirk
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>"Maybe you can find a way
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>to defeat whatever comes out next?"
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>Their eyes widen
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>their ears droop
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>They even tuck their tails
-
>"I the Great and Powerful Trixie will have it all
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>Or you will have it
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>plus everything that comes from that"
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>You gesture with your hoof
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>A subtle touch of magic
-
>a faint wailing and a wisp of smoke
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>Most of the dogs break for the cave
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>You lock eyes with Rover
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>Head high
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>and cock an eyebrow
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>He grimaces
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>staring at the nascent cloud
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>"They yours Great and Powerful one
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>Just take away magic stick"
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>[spoiler]Especially from Diamond Dogs[/spoiler]
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>The wand is back in your pocket
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>You regard your new help
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>"Can you speak?"
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>"Yes Great and Powerful Trixie"
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>He not only picked up your name
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>But the proper way to say it
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>You like him already
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>"Good. Come with me if you want to live
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>And bring the baskets"
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Post 13
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>You are anon
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>You belong to a pony
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>Pointy-ears-red-vest dog-thing relented
-
>The screaming cloud vanished
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>The stick the cloud came out of glowed
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>then flew through the air and in to your pony's pocket
-
>On any other day that would seem strange
-
>But holy shit
-
>Nothing's normal
-
>Not since waking up in that forest
-
>And this day has been the weirdest one yet
-
>You still have no clue where you are
-
>only the vaguest about
-
>what's going on
-
>But if belonging to her
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>gets you away from them
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>it's fine with you
-
>She turns to you
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>"Can you speak?"
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>Don't fuck this up
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>They called her Trixie
-
>Something else too
-
>Was it a title?
-
>The way she carried herself
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>The way she was treated
-
>She was obviously important
-
>Maybe a noble?
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>Better to say it
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>even if not needed
-
>than not say it
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>and get in deeper shit
-
>"Yes Great and Powerful Trixie"
-
>Her eyes glimmered
-
>A smile played across her lips
-
>"Good" she said
-
>She continued talking as she spun on her hooves
-
>Wait did she really just say...
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>Well you heard the part about the baskets
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>So you pick them up and follow
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>She leads you around the stage
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>hunh
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>It's a wagon
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>With huge trumpets
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>And little cannons
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>Her horn glows
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>The door opens
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>"Put them in here"
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>She points with her snout
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>Done
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>"The Great and Compassionate Trixie
-
>thinks you know how to behave"
-
>She points her horn at your feet
-
>A brilliant golden beam shoots out
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>The chains crumble
-
>"You would be a FOOL to prove otherwise"
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>Of that you had no doubt
-
>"The Great and Powerful Trixie wishes to depart forthwith"
-
>Her horn glows again
-
>A whirring comes from the wagon
-
>the trumpets, cannons, and even the stage retract in to it
-
>"You will follow alongside"
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>"Yes Great and Powerful One"
-
>She climbs aboard the wagon
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>her snout up
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>Her horn glows
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>and stops
-
>She looks at you askance
-
>Then in a surprisingly soft and warm voice:
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>"Are you injured?"
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>"No Great and ...Kind One. I can walk"
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>"Good"
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>Nose up again
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>Her horn glows
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>The wagon lurches to motion
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>And you follow
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Post 14
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>You are Trixie
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>and he called you kind
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>For some silly reason
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>that makes you very happy
-
>Isn't that silly?
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>Feeling warm and fuzzy
-
>because the help complimented you?
-
>How silly!
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>A little "harumph" escapes your lips
-
>But is lost in the wagon's sounds
-
>Down the road
-
>Continuing in silence
-
>Stealing glances at him
-
>He's so strange
-
>And he smells good!
-
>You thought one of the dogs found an equine cologne
-
>But now that you're away
-
>It's definitely him
-
>Even though he's filthy
-
>And those rags he's wearing need to go too
-
>You've been down this road before
-
>Countless times
-
>There's a hot spring a bit further along
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>It's hard to find
-
>You've never seen anpony else there
-
>Your special place
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>Your magical realm
-
>But you could use a bath too
-
>Filthy Diamond Dogs
-
>And there's no way you're taking him to town looking like that!
-
>some time later you arrive
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>"What's your name?"
-
>"Anon"
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>"We stop here anon"
-
>You hop from the cart
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>"This place is very important to Trixie, anon
-
>Normally, Trixie wouldn't bring anyone here
-
>But today is special;
-
>In her wisdom
-
>Trixie can see that you need to rest
-
>In her generosity
-
>Trixie will let you
-
>and let you do it here."
-
>She stares into your eyes
-
>"This place is magical to me
-
>Treat it well
-
>Do you understand?
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>Dare you enter my magical realm?"
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>The look on his face
-
>You wonder what that's about
-
>"Follow me"
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Post 15
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>You are anon
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>following Trixie
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>Off the tiny path
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>through trees
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>and boulders
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>hidden among the stones
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>A small pool
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>And glorious blue sky
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>"Trixie wishes to bathe anon. You will wait
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>When she is finished
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>you will bathe too"
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>Without another word
-
>She drops her cloak and hat
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>Hips sway as she makes her way to the pool
-
>Is she so confident
-
>nudity doesnt bother her?
-
>Or is it because she's a pony?
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>Well it doesn't matter
-
>You stretch back in the grass
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>Closing your eyes
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>Soaking in the warmth of the sun
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>Splashing
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>dripping
-
>Your mind wanders
-
>Some time passes
-
>Is she singing now?
-
>"You better believe
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>I've got tricks up my sleeve..."
-
>You lay back again
-
>Hands behind your head
-
>The sun is so nice
-
>"See me dominate"
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>A tugging
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>You look down
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>your hand is glowing pink
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>"cause Im powerful and bra-a-aaave"
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>You sit up
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>"Your turn anon"
-
>She stands before you
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>Naked
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>Wet mane plastered to her neck
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>She shakes like a dog
-
>Water goes flying
-
>"What are you waiting for?"
-
>"Can I have some privacy
-
>Oh Great and Kind One?"
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>"You dont need privacy anon"
-
>A trace of annoyance in her voice
-
>"You need a bath
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>Strip"
-
>You freeze
-
>mind reeling
-
>What to do?
-
>"Anon the great and powerful Trixie is loosing patience!
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>You are a servant not a noble
-
>and servants don't need clothes
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>Stop reaching above your station
-
>and remove them at once!"
-
>So that was it
-
>Ponies dont care about nudity
-
>In fact neither did the dog-things
-
>They wore armor and vests
-
>But those were for protection and pockets
-
>No care for modesty at all
-
>But you care
-
>"Pardon Great and Powerful one
-
>but humans always wear clothes!"
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>"That's probably why nopony's ever heard of them!
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>Those are ruined anyway
-
>youd look better naked"
-
>She turns up her snout
-
>"Strip! Now!"
-
>She stamps her hoof
-
>"But Trixie..."
-
>Her eyes widen
-
>Oh fuck
-
>Pink light shines from her horn
-
>"I am the GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie to YOU!
-
>"and YOU will obey ME! "
-
>Suddenly youre airborne
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>"The Great and Powerful Trixie
-
>has had enough!"
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Post 16
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>You are anon
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>floating a meter or so above the ground
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>Flipping and turning about your own axes
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>Struggling to keep your clothes on
-
>The friggin' things are glowing pink
-
>and doing their best to fly off your body
-
>"Damn it anon stop struggling!"
-
>"Stop trying to tear off my clothes!"
-
>Suddenly you drop
-
>and stop just shy of the ground
-
>That gets your attention
-
>"From how high do you think
-
>the Great and Powerful Trixie
-
>could drop you
-
>before you sustain injury?"
-
>dead silence
-
>"Would you like to find out?
-
>"No great and powerful one!"
-
>"Then take those cursed things off!"
-
>She's bluffing
-
>probably
-
>You hope
-
>"I will Great and Powerful one!
-
>Just *please* give me some privacy!"
-
>"UUUGGGHHHH!"
-
>Your shirt flies off before you can react
-
>Your pants open
-
>and shoot down your legs
-
>Your underwear too
-
>You catch them just in time
-
>Holding with all your might
-
>desperate to keep them from slipping off your legs
-
>You're rising higher too
-
>Glowing bright pink
-
>curled in a fetal position
-
>pants around your ankles
-
>spinning bare-ass over heels
-
>cock poking backward between your thighs
-
>Higher still
-
>She was bluffing right?
-
>Suddenly you're falling
-
>oh shit
-
>and falling
-
>She will catch you!
-
>and falling
-
>right?
-
>SPLASH!
-
>right in to the pool
-
>Holy shit
-
>hitting water *does* hurt
-
>It's warm
-
>and tastes horrible
-
>You look up at the surface
-
>and swim
-
>You emerge to a very amused looking unicorn
-
>She looks down at you
-
>smugly
-
>Then saunters to the grass
-
>tail swishing
-
>Lies down
-
>and laughs
-
-
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Post 17
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>You are anon
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>You are clean
-
>So are your clothes
-
>So are Trixie's
-
>She eventually relented
-
>And let you wear them on the condition you wash and repair them.
-
>Of course you have to do hers too.
-
>But since she's been naked the whole time,
-
>You've only had to wash them once.
-
>You've been resting by the spring for over a week now.
-
>The sight of the heavenly bodies
-
>suddenly racing across the skies
-
>drove you to comment.
-
>She says there's a pair of princesses that raise and lower the sun.
-
>That's got to be figurative
-
>She seemed absolutely incredulous
-
>that your sun and moon move on their own.
-
>Or that the sun and moon could share the sky.
-
>You're feeling much better too.
-
>Getting tired of oatmeal though.
-
>She won't let you in the wagon,
-
>so you sleep wrapped in a blanket outside.
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>Under the wagon,
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>In case it rains.
-
>Also, it turns out
-
>She's not a noble at all:
-
>She's in show business!
-
>And practices her magic a lot.
-
>Uses you as a captive audience to try out new ideas.
-
>That's fine.
-
>You don't know how her magic compares to other unicorns,
-
>but it impresses the hell out of you.
-
>She's smart too.
-
>You share stories of your home with her,
-
>and she regales you with tales of her adventures.
-
>You don't know how much is true,
-
>But her observations are poignant,
-
>and her questions incisive.
-
>She uncovers things about you with a shocking talent for subterfuge.
-
>While she is more than a bit full of herself,
-
>she isn't mean.
-
>In fact,
-
>She's been kind to you:
-
>making sure you have enough to eat,
-
>offering you extra blankets
-
>those kinds of things.
-
>She's actually kind of sweet.
-
>In her own way.
-
>You like her more and more.
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-
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Post 18
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>You are Trixie,
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>and it's time to leave.
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>Your wagon's mechanisms are reset,
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>Your suplies are running low,
-
>and Anon is feeling better.
-
>Anon
-
>You smile despite yourself
-
>But how could you not?
-
>For the first time,
-
>you've found somepo-someone with as many stories as you have.
-
>Literally an entire other world's worth.
-
>Some of it you just can't believe:
-
>the sun and moon moving on their own?
-
>No way!
-
>Still, for all that,
-
>he's ignorant of things that anyone who grew up in Equestria would know.
-
>He's completely dependent on you.
-
>For some reason,
-
>you really like that.
-
>He's also patient,
-
>and attentive.
-
>Not in the tail-nosing way so many are to famous ponies.
-
>Neither in the simple brain-dead way servants are to their employers.
-
>He seems to be genuinely interested in you,
-
>and what you have to say.
-
>You like that too.
-
>A lot.
-
>Your smile broadens
-
>And...
-
>It's such a silly thing,
-
>but he smells good.
-
>He says all humans smell like that when they work.
-
>He also says they don't like it.
-
>Humans are silly.
-
-
-
-
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Post 19
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-
>You are Trixie.
-
>A couple of days further down the road.
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>And you aren't a happy pony.
-
>It turns out Anon isn't as strong as you thought.
-
>he's taller than you,
-
>So he looks imposing.
-
>But a few hours in to the first day back on the road,
-
>and you could see it wasn't going to work.
-
>He was hitched properly
-
>and he really did try.
-
>But he was slow,
-
>even on flat ground.
-
>Trips at Anon-speed would take too long.
-
>And the first hill you came to...
-
>He tried that too, but slipped.
-
>You'd had to use magic to keep from careening backwards.
-
>How were you supposed to relax, or study, or do anything,
-
>when you might have to leap to the rescue at any moment?
-
>That put an end to that.
-
>Humans, it seems, just aren't as strong as equines.
-
>So you, the Great and Powerful Trixie,
-
>are pulling your own wagon.
-
>While your putative servant strolls beside you.
-
>Again.
-
>You are not a happy pony.
-
>Even if he does smell good.
-
-
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Post 20a
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>You are Anon.
-
>And you can see that Trixie is frustrated.
-
>She's been snippier than usual.
-
>And quieter when you've stopped.
-
>You want to help her,
-
>and you think you know a way.
-
>"We're stopping here, Anon."
-
>"All right, Great and Powerful one. Let me help you."
-
>You walk over and begin unhitching her.
-
>"The Great and Powerful Trixie doesn't need your help, Anon."
-
>You pause.
-
>She practically spat it,
-
>and hadn't referred to herself in the third person for a while.
-
>The buckles flared pink, and dropped to the road.
-
>"Pull it off to the side, Anon."
-
>"There's a stream beyond those trees."
-
>Her snout gestured to the left.
-
>"Get some water and start dinner."
-
>She disappears in to her Wagon.
-
>You did as you were told.
-
>A knock on her door.
-
>"Dinner is ready, Great and Powerful One."
-
>She emerges,
-
>walks to the fire,
-
>and begins to eat.
-
>You watch her take one glum bite after another.
-
>"Great and Powerful One," you began
-
>"I can tell you're upset."
-
>"I want to do something for you."
-
>"Like what?"
-
>"You can't pull the vardo, you can't work magic, and you can't eat hay."
-
>"I'm stuck feeding you oats."
-
>Then in a small voice, barely audible:
-
>"I want the oats."
-
>She pouts in to the flames.
-
-
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Post 20b
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>"It's something special, Great and Powerful One."
-
>"Something humans do for each other,"
-
>"when we... when we care."
-
>She looks up at you
-
>"You're always pulling the cart,"
-
>You say, sitting at her hooves.
-
>"And I think you must be sore."
-
>She watches you reach out,
-
>and cup her pastern;
-
>gently lifting it and setting it in your lap.
-
>She's stopped chewing,
-
>now silently looking you in the eyes.
-
>You rest your hand on her cannon
-
>"I'm not being too familiar, am I?"
-
>silence
-
>Gently you begin to stroke along it's length.
-
>Lightly at first,
-
>then with gentle pressure.
-
>Following the grain of her fur.
-
>It's extremely soft,
-
>and very fine.
-
>She's chewing again,
-
>Not so gloomily as before.
-
>Under her leg and up to her hock;
-
>pinching your way down to her fetlock.
-
>You do it again.
-
>And again.
-
>She's staring at the fire,
-
>very intently.
-
>An uncertain look on her face.
-
>Back to her pastern;
-
>caressing her coronet:
-
>Lightly running your fingertips between hoof and fur.
-
>Then work from hock to coronet again.
-
>You glance up; her eyes are closed.
-
>A quiet sigh
-
>You continue along her hoof wall,
-
>to her heel.
-
>Massaging her frog;
-
>Pressing and rolling in little circles.
-
>She winces and melts.
-
>You must be doing well.
-
>Up and down, from hock to hoof,
-
>Over and over.
-
>Feeling her tension drain,
-
>and body loosen with each pass.
-
>Kneading her hooves,
-
>with strength, and with great care.
-
>On and on.
-
>First one, then the other.
-
>firm muscle, soft blue fur,
-
>and a unicorn who's lost in the moment.
-
>...
-
>She hasn't moved or made a sound in some time.
-
>Her breath is deep and rhythmic.
-
>You can't help but smile,
-
>placing her hooves back on the ground.
-
>You gently brush an errant strand of mane from her face,
-
>And cover her with your blanket.
-
>Softly: "Good night Trixie."
-
>You clean up,
-
>and lay down a short distance away.
-
>The night is clear.
-
>The fire is warm.
-
>As it fades you drift off,
-
>to pleasant and unexpected thoughts of Trixie.
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-
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Post 21
-
-
>You are anon
-
>And you're being followed.
-
>This is your first time in a pony town.
-
>Ever since Trixie's show,
-
>you've had a handful of ponies around.
-
>They'd watch you from their windows.
-
>They'd watch from the streets.
-
>They'd even watch from the sky.
-
>You thought at first the clouds were chasing you too.
-
>Until you saw pegai peeking over the edges.
-
>Her show was, of course fantastic.
-
>She made what little you'd seen at the Diamond Dogs cave
-
>seem like parlor tricks.
-
>"It's for the ponies" she'd said in private.
-
>"They can use magic too"
-
>"so I have to pull out all the stops"
-
>But even so, you were a distraction.
-
>The ponies just couldn't focus on Trixie
-
>with you there.
-
>After the show, she seemed a little put-off.
-
>Then, an idea must have struck,
-
>because she immediately took a bag of bits,
-
>and told you to follow.
-
>So you found yourself being led through the streets
-
>by a gorgeous blue unicorn
-
>with a half-dozen others trotting along behind you.
-
>Trixie'd been much more relaxed lately.
-
>She smiled.
-
>Genuine smiles,
-
>no longer putting up a facade when you were in private.
-
>In fact, she had stopped referring to herself in the third person.
-
>Until you came to town.
-
>The difference was amazing.
-
>But you were in public now.
-
>Surrounded by equines of all colors and descriptions.
-
>She had an image to maintain.
-
>So, her demeanor came as no surprise when she said:
-
>"We're here, Anon."
-
>"Open the door for the Great and Powerful Trixie!"
-
>Then shouldered her way past
-
>with an annoyed little squeak
-
>and her snout in the air.
-
>"Anon, you will turn the lock, and take a seat."
-
>"The Great and Powerful Trixie will return momentarily."
-
>And with that, she vanished down a hall.
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-
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Post 22
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-
>You are anon
-
>Sitting in the most enormous couch you'd ever seen.
-
>Wide, long and with padding thick enough to swallow you.
-
>You take stock of your surroundings:
-
>You are sitting in one of a pair of huge plush couches.
-
>Across from you, an ornate wooden counter.
-
>The hall down which Trixie vanished behind it.
-
>Short, but very wide windows in the walls just below the ceiling.
-
>A large door to the outside on your right,
-
>with many nosy ponies peering through the glass.
-
>The walls: lined alternately with full-length mirrors
-
>and equine dress-forms,
-
>adorned in the most ornate clothing you'd ever seen!
-
>A tailor's shop.
-
>And a high-end one by the looks of it.
-
>Why would she have brought you here?
-
>"Anon!"
-
>Speak of the Blueberry.
-
>"Stand up!"
-
>She trots in to the room, another pony in tow.
-
>"Come here, Anon. The Great and Powerful Trixie has need of you."
-
>You stop a step away from her.
-
>"Do you think you can do it?"
-
>She's speaking to the other pony.
-
>This one's wearing fancy clothes,
-
>with her mane in elaborate coifs and curls.
-
>She's even wearing make-up.
-
>"Maybe, great and Powerful one."
-
>"I need to get a better look."
-
>"Very well. Anon, strip."
-
>You look back at the door.
-
>Anxious faces still pressed against the glass.
-
>They follow your gaze.
-
>Trixie's horn glows and a shade drops.
-
>"He's easily embarrassed, the silly thing."
-
>Trixie replies to the other mares quizzical expression.
-
>"Now don't make Trixie repeat herself!"
-
>Well they are ponies...
-
>You disrobe in front of them
-
>and stand tall.
-
>"Nicely done, anon." she says with a mischievous grin.
-
>"That wasn't so bad, was it?"
-
>"Better than the alternative, Great and Powerful One."
-
>"For you."
-
>Your eyes lock; her mirth is unmistakable.
-
>Cheeky little blueberry.
-
>The other pony doesn't seem to care.
-
>Trotting around and around you
-
>then back to check your garments.
-
>Making notes on a piece of paper,
-
>measuring you,
-
>scribbling again.
-
>Finally she says:
-
>I can accommodate your request, Lady Trixie."
-
-
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Post 23
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-
>You are Anon,
-
>back under the wagon.
-
>After leaving the clothier's,
-
>Trixie had led you around the city.
-
>Pointing out the good and bad.
-
>Talking about how it had looked before
-
>or where such-and-such a thing had happened.
-
>Her memory must be incredible.
-
>She had obviously been in a good mood,
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>and even treated you to a restaurant.
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>She'd said it was a favorite of Pegai
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>And that she'd chosen it for one reason:
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>It served fish!
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>And vegetables.
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>Who knew how delicious they could be after so long on oatmeal?
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>She also paid you.
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>Minus expenses, of course.
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>But that still left you with some bits in your pockets.
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>Near the end of the scheduled day
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>You had returned to the store and found an outfit waiting for you.
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>And what an outfit!
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>Based on what you'd worn,
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>but embellished beyond belief:
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>rhinestones, and showy fabric,
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>with enormous liberties taken with the cut.
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>It looked ridiculous, but fit suprisingly well,
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>So Trixie had you carry it out, wrapped in brown paper.
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>It seems Trixie had noticed how much attention you garnered.
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>And being the keen business-pony she was,
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>decided to capitalize on it.
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>You were to join her show.
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>Whether you liked it, or not.
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>All in all it had been a very nice day.
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>So even when the clouds rolled in and a drizzle started up,
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>Your spirits were high.
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Post 24
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>You are Trixie.
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>In your wagon.
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>Thinking about the day.
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>What a wonderful time you'd had with Anon.
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>How happy he'd been to eat the fish.
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>"Anything but oatmeal" he'd joked.
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>But he seemed to enjoy the fish the most.
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>Turns out you guessed right.
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>That made you happy, of course.
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>But Anon being happy...
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>That made you feel...
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>Good.
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>So good.
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>It made your chest warm
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>And a funny little flutter creep in your stomach.
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>Like some school-filly crush.
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>How silly.
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>But it *was* nice.
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>You couldn't remember the last time you felt so good.
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>In fact the memories hadn't come back, either.
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>Not at all.
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>Not since you'd met Anon.
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>You hadn't had a good night's sleep since you were a filly.
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>Your parents, other fillies,
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>teachers, and so many others.
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>They'd all rejected you.
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>So you rejected them back.
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>That didn't make them like you, of course.
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>But it did make you feel stronger.
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>No longer at their mercy.
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>You didn't need anypony!
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>Even as an adult mare.
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>But they needed you.
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>Your talent, your showponyship.
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>They craved your attention
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>and you gave it to them.
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>Until Ponyville, and...
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>that amulet.
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>You had known the danger
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>had known it twisted and corrupted the minds of it's wielders.
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>You hadn't cared.
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>You wanted revenge!
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>Revenge for what she had done to you!
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>You'd thought you could control it,
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>or at least resist it.
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>But you were wrong.
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>And when your own mind had returned,
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>you had so many new personal horrors to face.
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>So many things to haunt your waking moments,
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>and keep you up at night.
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>Until you met Anon.
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Post 25
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>You are Trixie
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>You sit lost in thought.
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>The sound of rain drumming your caravan.
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>Anon
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>Anon
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>Anon is...
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>Out there.
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>Can you really...
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>What if he says "no?"
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>No.
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>You're no school-filly.
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>You are the Great and Powerful Trixie.
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>You will not be cowed by fear.
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>You sigh, and open your door.
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>A little touch of magic and a canopy forms over your head.
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>"Anon?"
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>Why was your voice so soft?
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>"Anon!"
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>He looks out from under your wagon.
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>"Yes Great and Powerful One?"
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>How to put this without giving the wrong idea?
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>What was the right idea, anyway?
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>You're no longer sure.
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>"You..."
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>"You shouldn't be out in the rain, Anon."
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>"Dry off..."
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>You levitate a towel.
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>"and..."
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>"come inside."
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>"I... don't want those new clothes being ruined."
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>You are anon
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>You know the new clothes are in the wagon.
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>She knows too; she put them there.
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>That look on her face.
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>What's wrong?
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>You climb out from under the wagon
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>and towel yourself on it's ledge.
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>Suddenly your towel gains a life of it's own;
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>ruffling your hair and stroking your face and neck
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>"Hold still anon"
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>"I don't want any of that in here."
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>You realize she's using her forehooves,
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>not her magic.
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>"That's fine, Anon. You may enter."
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>Her snout is up
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>But she doesn't meet your eyes.
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>You crawl in to the wagon for the first time.
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>It's cozy.
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>With small, modestly carved cabinetry
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>stained a shade darker than the wooden walls.
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>Scents of cedar, gardenias, and horse.
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>She pulls another blanket and pillow from a net
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>suspended from the ceiling.
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>She gives them to you,
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>her eyes at last meeting yours.
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>"I... I hope there's enough room."
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>There is.
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>She snuffs out the candle.
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>The steady patter of rain,
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>and Trixie's gardenia-scented mane
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>carry you softly to sleep.
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Post 26
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>You are Trixie,
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>and you couldn't be happier!
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>It's been weeks now,
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>since you added Anon to your show.
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>You've visited farms, and towns, and a big city too.
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>Arriving to find that your reputation has preceded you,
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>and everypony is just dying to see you.
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>Your profits have skyrocketed!
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>Not just from the show, either.
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>Afterward, many of the ponies want to talk with him.
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>You and Anon are invited to restaurants,
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>pubs, cidereys and so many other places.
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>They take vignettes,
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>hang banners,
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>And tell everypony who comes by
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>that *their* establishment
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>is a favorite of the Great and Powerful Trixie
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>and her "pet."
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>You rarely have to pay for food or supplies.
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>Even your seamstress
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>is offering to make new clothes gratis.
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>If only you'll "Please, please, please,"
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>"tell everypony who made them."
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>Your little chest of bits is overflowing.
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>Literally.
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>Also, Anon.
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>Anon.
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>Your little human.
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>You shared the wagon every night.
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>His scent in your home.
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>His warmth in your bed.
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>You had gone to sleep facing the walls,
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>that first unforgetable night.
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>But when you awoke
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>-before he did-
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>snuggled in his arms,
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>muzzle under his chin,
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>You knew a peace you never thought you would.
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>A warmth and contentment
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>that had only grown stronger.
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>You didn't think those feelings were silly any more.
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>They were serious.
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>And you wanted more!
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>But what could you do?
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>He was your employee, and not even a pony!
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>Hiding your feelings around other ponies was easy;
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>You are the Great and Powerful Trixie!
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>And you act like it.
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>Around them.
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>But Anon was different
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>You wanted him to like you
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>Not just respect you.
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>...
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>What would you do when estrus came?
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>What would he do?
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>You thought and wondered.
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>Wondered and thought.
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>Until one day...
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Post 27
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>You are anon.
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>Squatting by the fire, preparing lunch.
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>Your arrogant, demanding,
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>wonderful boss is lying under a tree.
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>Clacking beads on an abacus and scratching in a notebook.
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>A shadow passes overhead.
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>A pagasus.
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>You had seen many around.
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>Especially in this part of Equestria.
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>There were more pagai here than any other kind of pony.
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>But this one was different.
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>He wore gold armor.
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>His mane and tail: blue.
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>Cropped and pushed through his helmet.
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>Redolent of a Roman soldier's comb on Earth.
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>He circled, and flew overhead again.
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>Much closer this time,
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>and landed a few paces away.
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>Trixie noticed him then.
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>She stood, watching impassively.
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>Upon seeing her, the pegasus spoke.
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>"Are you Trixie Lulamoon? Magus of the Road, and Guardian of Anon?"
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>"I am." She replies in an equally haughty voice.
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>"What brings a royal guard"
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>"to search out the Great and Powerful Trixie?"
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>He produces a scroll from his saddlebags,
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>and lays it at her hooves.
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>"Their Royal Highnesses, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna,"
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>"have heard of your magnificence!"
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>"They wish to see your performance, and meet your pet!"
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>"You are hereby summoned to appear in the royal court,"
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>"no later than the end of summer. You are invited to stay,
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>"as a guest of Their Royal Highnesses in the castle,"
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>"and enjoy their hospitality. How do you answer?"
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>She pauses a moment,
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>raises the scroll with her magic,
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>and reads.
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>If you didn't know her like you did,
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>You might believe her nonchalance.
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>But you do,
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>and her excitement is clear.
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>With a smirk, and toss of her mane, she says:
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>"You may tell Their Royal Highnesses,"
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>"That The Great and Powerful Trixie,"
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>"Magus of the Road, and Guardian of Anon,"
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>"accepts their invitation."
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>"She will make all due haste toward Canterlot."
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>The pagasus bows and takes to the sky.
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>Trixie watches him go, snout raised.
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>Then suddenly prances circles on tippy-hooves
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>swishing her tail and arching her back.
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>"Yes!Yes!Yes!Yes!Yes!"
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Post 28
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>You are Anon
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>marching beside your vardo.
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>Well Trixie's vardo.
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>But you can't help but think of it as yours too.
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>Your relationship has blossomed.
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>You work together, travel together
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>eat together and share the same bed every night.
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>And she's a real cuddlebug.
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>Always finding excuses to touch you while you work.
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>She particularly enjoys leaning against you,
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>and uses your lap as a pillow for her naps.
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>Many pleasant hours had passed under trees,
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>watching your little pony dream her dreams.
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>Herd animals are prone to physical contact,
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>but this didn't feel casual.
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>And you loved every moment of it.
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>On this particular morning,
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>she had put on her costume, chattering incessantly,
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>Excited and nervous.
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>Saying today was the day you'd reach Canterlot.
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>You had seen the castle from far away,
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>sprouting from a cliff in defiance of all prudence.
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>But now you drew close,
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>so with a little nuzzle of your arm,
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>she put on her archetype.
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>Tail and nose high,
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>eyes: bright and imperious.
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>Pride oozing from beneath her wide brim.
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>"We are nearly there Anon."
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>"As we have come by Royal Invite,"
-
>"doubtlessly they will be on the lookout for us."
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>"In fact, Trixie wouldn't be surprised if they already know we're here."
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>It turns out, she was right.
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>Moments later 6 guard ponies in sparkling armor approached.
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>The captain bowed.
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>"Lady Trixie"
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>"by order of Their Royal Highnesses, we bid you welcome."
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>"Please allow us to escort you to the Royal Palace."
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>"Yes Captain, The Great and Powerful Trixie accepts your welcome"
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>"and bids you lead on."
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>4 took position in front.
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>Another behind you, buckled himself to your wagon.
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>You had a retinue!
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>The captain bowed again
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>"At your convenience, Lady Trixie."
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>She looks at you.
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>Her smile is as smug as you'd ever seen.
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>But this time she isn't smiling at you,
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>she's smiling with you.
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>Enjoying the moment, and inviting you to do the same.
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>Your smile meets hers,
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>and with pomp barely concealing glee,
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>she marches forth.
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Post 29
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>You are Trixie
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>Strutting over the drawbridge and through the gate.
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>Guard ponies bow as you pass
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>Acknowledgement, admiration, and respect:
-
>everything you've ever wanted
-
>made all the sweeter because Anon is here to share it!
-
>All ponies watch as you pass by.
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>Probably wondering who's so important as to get a Royal escort.
-
>As if there was anyone more deserving!
-
>Well, maybe one...
-
>as deserving, anyway.
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>You look at anon.
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>He's watching you!
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>All the grandeur, all the wonder of Canterlot
-
>and he's watching you!
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>Of course you deserve it,
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>but still...
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>His smile rivals the sun
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>But can't compare to the blaze in your heart.
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>Could this day get any better?
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>You close your eyes and savor the feeling.
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>Anon
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>You
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>Together
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>Shit!
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>The hoi polloi can't see you like this!
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>You force yourself to look away
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>and notice other ponies in the crowd.
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>Watching you and watching him.
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>And who is that?
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>Fleur Dis Lee!
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>Very clearly watching him, not you.
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>He's noticed too.
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>A smile and that weird "hand-wave" thing he does.
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>She turns as you pass
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>gives him a wink[spoiler]with her eyes[/spoiler]
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>and prances off.
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>Why do you feel like this?
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>He does that to all the ponies when you enter a new town.
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>Smiling and flailing those "arms" around like the silly thing he is.
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>Why do you feel like this?
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>Suddenly, your facade is no act;
-
>genuine anger burns inside you.
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>You never told anyone,
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>but you're a monogamist.
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>It's your dirty little secret.
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>You don't like to share.
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>Are humans monogamous?
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>You don't know.
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>You should tell Anon.
-
>He must know, it's not fair to keep it a secret if you love him.
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>And you do.
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>Beyond any shadow of a doubt.
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>He's not a pony, so maybe he won't be angry.
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>He might not...
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>reject...
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>No, no, not again!
-
>It's been so long!
-
>Sadness.
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>Anger!
-
>You focus on it and let it focus you.
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>All the ponies "great" and small make way for you.
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>They had damn well better!
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>All the way to the castle.
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Post 30
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>You are anon
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>And Trixie is very, very angry.
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>Not at you, thank goodness,
-
>but you can see right through her fauxequanimity.
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>Not that she pretended out there.
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>Her eyes had hardened and her stride lengthened unexpectedly.
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>You had been pressed to keep up,
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>until she noticed you lagging and slowed.
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>Once you reached the castle you had been shown to your chambers.
-
>The guards said you would be summoned a little after sunset.
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>Until then, you had the run of the place.
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>The doors close and her demeanor changes.
-
>Like flipping a switch.
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>"Trixie, what's wrong?"
-
>She looks at you.
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>Calculatingly.
-
>Trying to decide how much to say.
-
>Then she smiles.
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>It doesn't reach her eyes.
-
>"I'm thinking about meeting the princesses."
-
>Like hell, but it's best not to pry when she's like this.
-
>"There're only a few hours until sunset."
-
>"We should bathe, and make ourselves presentable."
-
-
>You are Trixie
-
>lying on a massage table in the Royal Spa.
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>The masseuse was good, but not as good as Anon.
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>Fingers really were better than hooves at this.
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>It's just as well;
-
>you can't focus on it anyway.
-
>Images of Fleur's smirking wink dance in your mind.
-
>What if she asked him to herd with her?
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>No, she wouldn't do that.
-
>She might try to use him as a cooler, though.
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>He was famous, and exotic, and new.
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>Just the kind of thing Fleur would want as an accessory.
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>And you don't like to share.
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>Suddenly, behind your closed eyes:
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>Anon rutting Fleur.
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>Sucking her horn.
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>You grimmace,
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>the masseuse's touch lightens.
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>You love him.
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>You love him,
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>By Celestia you love him.
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>And now that you know, you have to say something.
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>You may be a monogamist,
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>but that didn't mean you were heartless.
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>Despite what some ponies would say.
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>You want him to love you too.
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>And how can he love you, if he doesn't know you?
-
>He'll probably leave after he finds out what a freak you are.
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>But you need this show.
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>You'll tell him after.
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>Tears well up unbidden,
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>But they are small, and easily hidden.
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Post 31
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>You are Anon
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>And it's almost sunset.
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>Trixie takes you to the window and points
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>"See, Anon? Those are the princesses."
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>"Celestia is the white pony, the other is Luna, her sister."
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>"They're bigger th..."
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>"Shhh." She chided.
-
>"Remember what I told you? About our sun and moon?"
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>You nod
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>This you had to see.
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>She leans against you and whispers
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>"Watch."
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>The larger one's horn glowed brighter than any you'd seen.
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>And the sun dipped.
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>"That's impossible!"
-
>"I told you so. Keep watching."
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>After the sun sank below the horizon, it was the other pony's turn.
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>Her horn flared and the moon rose.
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>"But..."
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>She smirked and nipped your arm
-
>"Now what did the Great and Powerful Trixie tell you?"
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>"But..."
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>"Even if they did move it, we wouldn't see it had moved for... a few minutes!"
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>"That doesn't make any sense Anon."
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>"But..."
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>"Magic."
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>"But..."
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>"Magic."
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>What else could it be?
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>"Magic." you finally agree.
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>You are Anon,
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>following guards through the palace.
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>Trixie is beside you,
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>leaning ever so lightly in to you as you walk.
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>She hasn't left your side since your bath.
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>After watching the day change to night
-
>She pillowed her head on your lap and talked.
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>You could tell something was off, but she wouldn't say what.
-
>Eventually the guards came, and she switched personalities again.
-
>But she still wouldn't leave your side.
-
>It was actually frightening.
-
>Were the princesses tyrants?
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>They didn't *look* all that bad,
-
>but looks could be deceiving.
-
>And there was no shortage of rumors about Luna.
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>Suddenly, you stop at huge ornate double doors.
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>A guard announces your arrival,
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>and they swing slowly open.
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Post 32
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>You are anon.
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>The doors opened on a fairytale room.
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>Banners, stained glass, tall as the sky itself.
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>Polished marble floors, red carpet,
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>and a throne against the far wall.
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>Both princesses waiting for you.
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>Trixie took the lead.
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>You followed, stopping when she did, bowing when she did,
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>and let her do the talking.
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>It seems your little pony had some history with the princesses:
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>a former pupil at the royal school.
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>Celestia seemed happy things turned out well for her.
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>They also wanted to know everything about you.
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>Who you were, where you came from, how you had arrived.
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>They were surprisingly unconcerned you didn't know,
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>but were angry to learn how you'd met.
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>She promised to correct the Diamond Dogs.
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>Princess Celestia was vague about what she meant, but
-
>she moves stars, united Equestria and held power for over a millennium.
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>The thought of her true might,
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>and what she could do if she chose made you shudder.
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>The sisters set a date for the show:
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>one week hence!
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>Then dismissed you.
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>A long time to wait,
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>not long to practice.
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>It didn't help that Trixie was distracted.
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>She hid it well; you doubt any of the ponies picked up on it.
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>But you knew her, and it hurt she wouldn't confide in you.
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>Especially when was so much needier than usual.
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>She never left you alone.
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>Once, when you were out, you passed a flower cart.
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>Trixie lingered a moment and asked:
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>"Isn't that blue one pretty?"
-
>The florist's eyes widened, and gave you both a funny look.
-
>It really was a pretty flower.
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>The same powder blue as Trixie's coat.
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>You were about to say so when she laughed
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>nervously
-
>and trotted on.
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>Flower pony watched you go, looking a bit shocked.
-
>But the week did pass.
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>Now here you are sitting backstage,
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>about to give the show of your life.
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>Trixie nuzzles behind your ear
-
>"Whatever happens after this Anon, this is our show tonight."
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>Another nuzzle, and more leaning.
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>"Forever and always, yours and mine."
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>Is she crying?
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>You're on!
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Post 33
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>You are Trixie,
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>and it's time.
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>The night's been wonderful:
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>an incredible show, and a fabulous party.
-
>Mingling with the haut monde,
-
>with attention and admiration from the Princesses themselves!
-
>Of course you always knew it was your due,
-
>but now the other ponies couldn't deny it!
-
>Then she had come.
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>Stepping from the woodwork,
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>like a stupid, gangly, pink-haired termite!
-
>Actually leaning against your stallion!
-
>Nuzzling him!
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>In front of everyone!
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>You're the lead mare in your herd.
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>The only mare.
-
>True, you and Anon weren't officially a herd.
-
>You'd never given him a flower, after all.
-
>But she doesn't know that.
-
>How dare she not come to you for permission to court Anon!
-
>Not that you would have given it.
-
>Of course you didn't let it show.
-
>You are the Great and Powerful Trixie!
-
>You master your feelings, not the other way around.
-
>But it hurt.
-
>A lot.
-
>So when the princesses retired,
-
>you captured Anon's attention with a word,
-
>guided him away with your touch,
-
>and returned to your chambers straight away.
-
>Making *damn* sure she saw it.
-
>All but laughing at the look on her face when Anon told her "goodnight,"
-
>and left with you.
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>Now here you were, behind closed doors.
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>It's time.
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>Celestia help you.
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Post 34
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>You are Trixie
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>sitting with Anon.
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>He knows something is coming.
-
>But not this, how could he?
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>"I love you, Anon."
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>"I love you too Trixie."
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>You blink
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>Just like that?
-
>"You're not surprised?"
-
>"Is this what all the matter's been?"
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>"Didn't you know I felt the same, Trixie?"
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>Such joy!
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>Such warmth!
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>Threatening to wash over and carry you away.
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>"Of course I knew, doofus."
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>He laughs
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>"My incredible little pony really didn't know?"
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>Pressure swelling in your chest.
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>It's almost painful.
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>Surely your heart will burst?
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>He moves to hug you,
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>but you stop him with a forehoof on his chest.
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>There's more, and he must know.
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>"But there's something about me you need to know."
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>"Something disgusting, and vile, and selfish."
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>"Something..."
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>You won't let yourself cry yet!
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>That comes later.
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>When you're alone again.
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>This is the hardest thing you've ever done.
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>But love, true love, demands honesty,
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>love will demand you let him go.
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>You breathe.
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>"I'm a monogamist."
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>Your ears fold back despite yourself.
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>Your eyes cast themselves to the floor.
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>"I love you, Anon. With all my heart and soul."
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>"I want to be with you more than anything. But I can't share you."
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>"I can't."
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>"Seeing you with Fleur..."
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>"I... I just can't."
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>"I understand if you don't want somepony like me."
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>"Understand if you... hate me, for being so selfish."
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>"But I want you to love me."
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>"To know me. All of me, so you have to know this too."
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>There.
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>You've done it.
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>Whatever happens next, you've done what love required,
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>and bared your soul to this one, special someone.
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>Moments pass.
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>Whole eternities,
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>but the expected castigation never comes.
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>Instead he leans in and hugs you,
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>squeezing you against his chest.
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>"I don't want anypony but you."
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>You are Anon,
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>Holding your very special somepony.
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>Her sobs racking both your bodies.
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>A kiss on her neck.
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>A whisper in her ear:
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>"I love you, Trixie."
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>"All of you, and only you."
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>You look down:
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>tears,
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>hot and round
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>running down her face
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>Her eyes, so soft,
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>and so very, very large.
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>"Don't leave me, Anon."
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>"Please, please don't ever leave me."
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>You kiss away her tears, and hold her close.
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>"I never will."
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Some people asked that I write a lewd scene for these two. It seemed like fun, but didn't fit anywhere in the story, so, here it is, after the end. Think of it as a "deleted scene", and not part of the tale. I hope you enjoy it, too.
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>You are anon.
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>Cuddling with your special somepony by the fire.
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>The sky, clear and cold above.
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>It's spring and you and Trixie are back on the road.
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>She's been acting funny lately.
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>Very touchy.
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>Very friendly with you,
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>very snippy with everypony else.
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>She wants massages every night,
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>so, when she kissed you, and asked for one,
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>you thought nothing of it.
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>She hopped up on the wagon-ledge,
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>"So you're at the just the right level" she'd said.
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>And set her left hind leg on your shoulder.
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>you tilt your head and kiss the inside of her hock.
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>Gently taking her leg in your hands and holding it up, off your shoulder,
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>then kissing your way down her cannon.
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>Stopping at her fetlock you look sideways;
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>She's watching you, a smug little smile playing on her lips.
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>"Keep going Anonymous. Trixie did not say to stop."
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>You lean back against a stone and set her hoof on your chest.
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>Your fingertips follow the curve of her leg,
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>up and down it's length,
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>as your tongue finds her coronet.
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>Kisses follow, and her eyes close.
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>You gently reach to her thigh,
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>kneading the firm muscle between fingers and thumb.
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>Then pinching gently from hock to fetlock,
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>and down to her hoof.
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>Pressing under it with your thumbs,
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>her frog flexing beneath your touch.
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>"Mmmmmm Anon."
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>She raises her other leg and rests it on your shoulder too.
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>You look up;
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>she's leaned back on the wagon's ledge,
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>forehooves extended and touching the overhang,
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>eyes closed.
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>"Anon, do your mares have any special times?"
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>"What do you mean, Tixie?"
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>She smiles and stares right in your eyes.
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>"Heat, Anon. Do human mares go in to heat?"
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>She leans down, mouth open just a bit, and sniffs you.
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>"Not really, Great and Sexy Trixie"
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>She smiles and bites her lip.
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>"We do."
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>She trails her forehoof along your arm
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>"In fact..."
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>little circles against your chest
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>"I am right now."
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>"You're my very special somepony, Anon,"
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>"and you're also my servant, little human."
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>"Do you know what that means?"
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>You think so
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>You *hope* so
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>You tilt your face to kiss her
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>She pulls back at the last moment with another smile
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>"Kisses are nice, Anon,"
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>"but I want to do something else."
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>She slides her hind legs from your shoulders and leans further in.
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>Sitting on the wagon, legs spread, her marehood just at eye level.
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>She nuzzles you, nips your ear and whispers:
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>"Touch my horn."
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>Trixie takes your hands in her hooves,
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>guides them to her face.
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>"The base first, sweety. Use those soft little fingers."
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>She gasps a little as you trace circles around it
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>A strange feeling on the side of your face,
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>like static electricity.
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>She leans against you more firmly as her breath deepens.
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>"Mmmmmmmm good boy."
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>She rubs your back
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>"Now...Oh!"
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>Her words catch in her throat.
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>You knew what she wanted, and began to stroke before she finished her sentence.
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>Her breathing grows faster and deeper,
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>and her horn glows brighter, its light reflecting off the wagon.
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>"Suck my horn, Anon."
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>"Do it now!"
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>Your mouth opens, and you carefully guide her past your lips,
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>and close them around her tip, sliding along her shaft.
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>She actually tastes like blueberries.
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>And whipped cream.
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>While you suckle, her muzzle finds it's way to your crotch.
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>She nuzzles and licks at your pants,
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>little moans emerging now and then.
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>"Anon, your dick belongs to me."
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>"Give it to me. Now."
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>Your hand slides down her shaft, around the back of her ear,
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>curves along her jaw, and finally comes to your belt.
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>She licks and nibbles at your fingers as they work the fasteners.
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>Suddenly the blueberry and whipped cream flavor grows stronger,
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>Your trousers glow pink, and slide down your legs.
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>Trixie takes you eagerly inside her mouth.
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>Her nimble equine tongue turning circles and loops,
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>even able to wrap itself completely around you.
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>Your own ministrations flag as waves of pleasure wash over you.
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>But only for a moment:
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>There's no way you're letting your little pony do all the work!
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>Back down on her, pressing your own tongue against her horn.
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>Copying her own motions as closely as you can.
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>Little whinneys and moans escaping around your cock.
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>She lays her ears back and forces herself down
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>Taking you as deeply as she can
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>All the way in, and holding you there.
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>Her tongue emerging and licking between your legs
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>then back in and around your shaft again,
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>actually rubbing you inside her mouth.
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>You take her out and purse your lips against her horn
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>running your head up and down its length,
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>It's blazing now.
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>bright pink with little jets and sparks flying off now again.
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>The feeling of static is warm and contagious,
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>filling you with erotic energy.
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>"Anon! I..!"
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>You quickly pop her back in your mouth,
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>taking in as much as you can.
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>"Anon!"
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>An odd heat fills your mouth as she convulses and grunts in your lap.
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>A taste, overwhelmingly like blueberries, and whiped cream.
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>With a little extra.
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>In fact, it tastes just like...
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>"Oh, Anon, I'm sorry. Right in your mouth, you didn't deserve that!"
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>It's cute when she switches, you think to yourself.
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>You purse your lips tightly and slide her out,
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>letting your tongue find every crease in her spiral groove on the way.
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>"It's fine Trixie. In fact it tastes just like Poprocks."
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>"Blueberry and whipped cream Poprocks."
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>"What are Poprocks?"
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>"They're a kind of candy we have back on Earth."
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>She looks at you strangely and lets out a languid laugh.
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>"Somehow, I'm not surprised."
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>"But we're not finished, little servant."
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>She bites your hair and gently pulls you up in to the wagon.
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>Trixie rolls over on the floor,
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>sweeping the bedding up with her forelegs and pillows her head on it.
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>She looks back: ass up, tail raised, hips swaying and bites her lip.
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>"Make me whinney like a little filly, Anon."
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>You pounce on her, sliding your hands up her back.
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>Balling her mane in your fist and jerking.
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>She whinneys.
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>Fuck me right now, Anon! Prove you're worthy of me!"
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>You guide yourself inside her with your other hand.
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>She's... wet would be an understatement.
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>Sopping, would almost be enough to describe it.
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>You slide in with no resistance.
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>She moans loudly and her marehood convulses around you.
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>It grips you like a vice, but is too slick to hold.
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>Your thrusts slip in and out; balls deep, then just the tip.
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>Her ponut swollen and sensitive,
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>pressing against your stomach and drawing a fresh pony groan with each thrust.
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>Her flanks begin to quiver
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>She burries her face in the blankets
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>Her ponytang clenches and holds,
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>and she suddenly goes stiff and silent.
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>Collapsing moments later.
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>Time to get yours.
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>She's lying now flat on the bed, and you continue to ride her.
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>Thrusting into her, not bothering to pace yourself.
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>Letting the sensations wash over you.
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>Finally erupting inside her and crashing down to her flower-scented mane.
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>After some moments you both rise to clean yourselves.
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>Staring up in the cold night air, savoring your lingering pleasure.
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>She leans against you.
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>"Estrus lasts about a week, Anon."
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>"Just so you know."
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>Then she steps back in the wagon and begins straightening the bedding.
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>The stars shine down on you.
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>This is going to be one hell of a week.
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Note: This is the original draft of this story, but not the best one. Another version, expanded, and rewritten in prose can be found here:
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I hope you'll check it out. It's much better than this one.
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