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Note: This is the original draft of this story, but not the best one. Another version, expanded, and rewritten in prose can be found here:
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and here:
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I hope you'll check it out. It's much better than this one.
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A Blueberry and her Greenery
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Post 1
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>You are Trixie,
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>Having one hell of a time.
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>Circling Equestria in your wagon.
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>Stopping when you reach a town,
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>performing magic.
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>Pearls before swine.
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>They don't appreciate it,
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>not enough, anyway.
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>They can't see your greatness.
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>But it's there.
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>You are the GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie
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>...
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>Aren't you?
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>...
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>...
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>You are anon
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>You are, ...somewhere.
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>Lot's of trees.
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>Weird animals
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>Do those clouds have spikes?
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>You've been here for a few days.
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>That sun can really fuckin' move.
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>So can the moon.
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>Who knows how you got here?
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>Wherever here is.
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>Not much to eat
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>Clothes are dirty and torn.
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>Those clouds DO have spikes!
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>And there're lots of them!
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>It's getting darker.
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>Suddenly brighter.
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>Lightning! Way too close for comfort.
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>Rain too.
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>Fuck.
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>Is that a... a cave!
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>I've read enough novels to know this never works out
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>But that's only novels right?
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>Real life has empty, unused caves, right?
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>Man, the rain is really coming down
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>Besides, everyone knows monsters aren't real!
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>BOOM!
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>Lightning turns a tree in to fragments
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>That cinches it: cave it is.
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Post 2
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>You are anon
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>More importantly, you are out of the rain.
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>More or less
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>This cave isn't so big.
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>But it is long.
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>The storm makes it dark outside,
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>but the cave continues in pure blackness.
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>[spoiler]Shit's creepy, yo.[/spoiler]
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>You vaguely recall reading caves are bad places to be in thunderstorms
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>Lightning can jump the gaps.
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>Was that why?
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>You can't remember.
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>Should you go deeper?
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>More lightning.
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>It's even closer.
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>You see something out of the corner of your eye.
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>Glinting in the flash from outside.
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>What's that in the darkness?
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>It's gone
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>No more lightning,
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>No more light.
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>A sound.
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>Barely audible over the din from outside
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>Different from the din outside.
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>faint
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>scraping
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>Like fingernails on stone
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>Fingernails, or...
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>No, this is real life.
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>More lightning,
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>More light.
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>Holy shit!
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Post 3
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>You are anon,
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>and there are jewels!
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>There are many jewels!
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>Rubies, Saphires, Diamonds, Emeralds!
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>Scattered a few meters further in the cave.
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>How convenient.
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>But they're big.
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>And your pockets are empty.
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>Before you realize it, you're squatting and stuffing them.
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>Hmmm, not as many as you thought.
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>Still a half-dozen thumb-sized gems are nothing to sneeze at.
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>Wait, what's that?
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>At the edge of the darkness?
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>Another one?
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>Sweet!
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>Oh, another?
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>Just a bit further?
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>And another!
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>And another!
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>And...
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>Lightning flashes again.
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>It doesn't seem so close this time.
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>Shit you're deeper than you realized!
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>But there are still more jewels.
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>Little sparks of light
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>laying one after the other.
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>a trail of winking eyes
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>beckoning you to follow.
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>To go deeper.
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>You look back.
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>You can see the mouth of the cave.
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>A distant, dark gray splotch against the black
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>You look forward.
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>Darkness. Not merely the absence of light.
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>A darkness so absolute it seems to be material.
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>Something...
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>Something's there.
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>You can feel it.
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>Like the abyss staring back at you.
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>A smell
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>rotting meat and unwashed fur.
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>Dread and fear wash over you like a wave
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>GET OUT NOW
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>You turn to run, dropping the gems in your hands.
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>That sound again.
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>Fingernails on stone
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>No, not fingernails:
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>claws.
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>Scrabbling for purchase
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>Louder than before,
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>and closer.
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>You break in to a sprint.
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>A step.
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>Two.
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>Something hits you from behind.
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>Large and filthy and hairy
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>Laughter like nothing from a human throat echos in the cave.
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>You're thrown to the ground
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>Bound with coarse rope.
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>Something wet and clingy and noxious goes over your head.
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>Darkness.
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Post 4
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>You are Trixie.
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>The day is looking good!
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>Sun
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>blue sky
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>Diamond Dogs.
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>They're kind of stinky, sure.
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>But easy to impress!
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>And loaded with Jewels!
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>Not much further now.
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>Good thing to
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>turning your wagon's wheels with magic is hard!
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>Not too hard of course.
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>You are Great and Powerful!
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>But hard enough.
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>Sure does impress though.
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>Even other ponies.
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>And the Diamond Dogs?
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>You giggle to yourself imagining their reaction.
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>You put on a haughty expression.
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>Nose up
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>sly smile
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>palpable arrogance.
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>Your wagon carries you through the tree line.
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>Showtime!
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>"Come one! Come all!"
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>"See the amaaazing feats of magic that can only be done by the most amaaazing unicorn in Equestria."
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>Memories rise unbidden.
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>A town not too far away.
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>An amulet.
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>Another unicorn.
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>...
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>Your expression never wavers
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>your eyes don't betray your thoughts,
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>Your smile even grows.
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>Magic isn't the only amazing thing about you.
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Post 5
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>You are Trixie
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>And you cary on with practiced ease.
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>Your vardo rolls on.
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>Toward the wide mouth of the Diamond Dog's cave.
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>"See the dextrous manipulation of reality itself!"
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>They've definitely noticed you.
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>"Be AWED with power you never knew existed!"
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>Diamond pups yip and jump excitedly
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>Some rush in to the cave
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>"Power you never knew *could* exist!"
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>More Diamond Dogs emerge
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>ears perked,
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>wagging tails,
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>some with lolling tongues.
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>The wagon trundles on.
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>"For while Trixie has graced your home with her presence before,"
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>that *was* some time ago."
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>The wagon stops.
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>"Gather round and see Trixie as you've never seen her before!"
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>You stand on your ledge.
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>Hat cocked just so.
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>Cloak billowing behind you.
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>"Blessed with talent beyond any other unicorn!"
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>"Trained by Princess Celestia herself!"
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>"Victor of a duel with *Princess* Twilight Sparkle!"
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>Memories
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>Not now
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>"Ruler of Ponyville..."
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>"Until I got bored and left!"
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>"The one! The only! The Great and Powerful Trrrixie!"
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>You leap from your vardo,
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>subtly hitting a switch as you go.
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>Your magic carries you higher than a mere leap would have,
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>and slows your descent to a glide.
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>From your wagon trumpets blare and cannons launch confetti.
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>Smoke erupts and a stage juts forth.
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>Perfect timing, you think,
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>magically adjusting your fall.
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>You touch down as the smoke clears.
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>A wand in your hoof.
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>A dramatic flourish and bow
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>To a cacophony of excited howls
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>and tails drumming the ground.
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Post 6
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>You are Trixie
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>And you have the audience in the frog of your hoof
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>You flash your perfect smile
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>And raise your wand
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>Sweeping the crowd
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>You can't help but laugh as their heads follow it's movement
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>Every last one of them
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>Silly things
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>You play to it.
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>"Hahaha!" Your voice gradually rising in pitch
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>"Behold! An artifact from *beyond*!
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>[spoiler]Just a stick, yo![/spoiler]
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>"Unknown to Griphons!"
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>What should I call it?
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>"Unknown to Taurs!"
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>Think fast
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>"Unknown to to the Dragons, and the mighty Diamond Dogs!"
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>What was that thing called?
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>"Unknown even to Ponies!"
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>Lives under the sea, part pony part octopus, little bat-wings?
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>"All but two, that is!"
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>Ah, that's it!
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>"Brought to this world by Starswirl the Bearded himself!"
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>"Used to work wonders!"
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>"Then banished beyond the sea by Princess Celestia herself
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>because even SHE feared it's might!"
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>"Tremble, for you are in the presence of the dreaded Wand of Colthulhu!"
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>They all actually gasped.
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>perfect
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>"But *I*, the Great and Powerful Trixie could not be denied!"
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>"I, through wit and sorcery unmatched,
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>stole this artifact from the depths of Tartarus itself!"
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>"I, and I alone know the secret to it's use!"
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>"But the Great and Powerful Trixie is not cruel!
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>"The Great and Selfless Trixie would share the marvels of this relic!"
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>"Who would witness it's power?"
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Post 7
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>You are Trixie
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>The center of attention
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>As it should be
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>The Diamond Dogs stand transfixed by the stick
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>Eyes glazed, ears down
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>You levitate the wand
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>Flourishing here and there
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>Your pink aura sparking and glowing
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>"Not even The Great and Powerful Trixie can use it in hoof."
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>"It's magic is too dangerous!"
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>"One of Starswirl's apprentices tried...
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>and was seen dragged away by tentacled horrors!"
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>"Things from beyond the veil of worlds!"
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>You hold it steady
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>A few meters over the crowd
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>With your magic you call forth screams
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>Shrill and wild
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>They sound like they're coming from the wand
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>with a wispy vapor
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>it darkens and thickens
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>A cloud
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>More magic!
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>From the lobes and pillows of smoke a face forms
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>Twisted and rotten
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>Then melts away.
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>Another one
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>larger and more monstrous than the last
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>You look around
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>They're all focused on the show above them.
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>A few of the pups are hiding their eyes behind their paws
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>More magic
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>A new shape rises
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>Swift and terrible
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>Like a shark attacking from below
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>it swallows the monsters face
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>and leers at the crowd
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>Gasps, and even a whimper or two.
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>Not just from the pups
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>Ha!
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>Here we go...
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>Dramatically you allow the pink aura of magic to sputter.
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>You make the screams louder
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>Add new voices
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>Twist them
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>Some stones fall down the mountainside
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>Some of them turn to look
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>Now a voice for the face
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>"Pathetic creatures"
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>"You can not hold me! I will devour you!"
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>Not good enough for ponies, you think
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>More than enough for these mutts.
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>Some of the pups flee in the cave
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>"Silence beast!" You shout.
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>"You are at my command!
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>I the Great and Powerful Trixie will not allow you to harm!"
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>"Begone!"
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>Your horn glows brighter, so does the wand.
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>The face contorts in agony
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>it keens as it's absorbed back in to the stick.
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>It drops
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>The Diamond Dogs flee from where it lands
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>You smile, allowing yourself to seem just a *bit* flustered.
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>They look back and forth from the wand to you
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>And erupt in cheers
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Post 8
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>You are Trixie
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>You just saved the day
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>Or so they think
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>You hop down from your stage
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>Suddenly, a pin drop would be loud
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>You stroll nonchalantly toward the wand
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>quietly laying in a circle of dumbstruck Diamond Dogs
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>They part like water as you approach
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>"Not e-ven the Immaterium's Horrors can match the Great and Powerful TrrrixIE!"
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>You emphasize the last sound
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>savoring it
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>"But really..."
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>Your horn glows and the wand jumps to your cloak-pocket
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>The Diamond Dogs jump too.
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>"was there *ever* any doubt?"
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>You smirk a moment
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>then saunter back to stage
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>Feeling their eyes on you
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>Relishing it
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>Sitting on stage now
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>Hind hooves crossed
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>dangling languidly off the edge
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>Time for the goodies
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>"Now then"
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>"The Great and Powerful Trixie,
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>quondam royal student,
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>triumphant in uncounted duels
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>and contests of magic,
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>has juuusstt
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>saved your bacon."
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>You like that phrase
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>Picked it up from the Gryphons
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>A murmur passes through the crowd
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>A trio of them sprint to the cave
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>"Trixie will accept your adulation..."
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>The briefest of pauses
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>The faintest of smiles
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>"Now"
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>As one they rush to you
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>Stopping just shy of your hooves
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>Yipping cheering and whining
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>Hopefully they don't piddle again
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>You raise your gorgeous face to the sun.
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>The sounds and more importantly
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>The feelings wash over you.
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>A warmth swells in your chest
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>You smile more broadly
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>And look toward the cave
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>careful to let only the barest of glances fall on your worshipers
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>They should be returning with your reward soon
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>Last time it was a basket full of glittering jewels
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>Ah there!
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>Two of the cave-sprinters emerge
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>Empty-handed
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>Behind them
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>Movement in the gloom
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>That must be number three
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>...
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>What under Celestia's sun is that!?
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Post 9
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>You are anon
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>Still alive
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>Maybe you'd be better off dead
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>Chains around your wrists and ankles
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>Pushing a heavy gem-laden cart
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>There's barely any light
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>Even less food
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>And brutish foul-smelling... things are everywhere.
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>Following you
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>taunting you
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>whipping you
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>How long have you been here?
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>It's hard to tell when you can't see the sky
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>Something's happening
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>The big blue hunchbacked one
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>Your captor, is coming
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>Where he is, the other two are never far behind.
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>They sniff the air and bee-line for you
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>Fuck
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>The big one's got something in his paws
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>One of them holds your chain
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>The big one shoves that thing over your head
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>It's wooden, and heavy
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>Baskets hang from its sides
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>They stuff gems in one basket
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>Bottles in the other
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>and drag you by your chain
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>You are Trixie
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>And for once in your life you are speechless
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>Something has emerged from the cave
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>It looks like...
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>well it looks like nothing you've ever seen
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>Walks on two legs
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>covered in dirty tattered cloth
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>It has a mane
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>of a sort
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>But no coat you can see
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>Bearing a yoke with two full baskets
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>And prodded along by...
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>Fido was his name?
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>Well the biggest of the three
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>Whatever his name was
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>They're heading your way
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>Rover and Spot push through the crowd
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>and genuflect at your hooves
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>Tails stiff
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>just the ends wagging
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>They're excited
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>trying to be subtle about it
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>"Oh Trixie..." He begins
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>Fuck that!
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>"AHEM!"
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>A pause
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>"Oh Great and Powerful Trixie!"
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>"You may continue."
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>"Thank you for saving us"
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>"Look, look!" The other one adds
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>"Our servant brings you treats!"
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>"Gems, and Cider, and Gryphon ale too!"
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>So it's their servant?
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>Why anything would serve the Diamond Dogs
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>Is beyond even the Great and Powerful Trixie's ken
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>It's closer now
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>back bent under it's burden
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>Wait a moment
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>What's that on it's... limbs?
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>Chains?
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Post 10
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>You are the Great and Powerful Trixie
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>You no longer feel good
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>Warm and smug a moment ago
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>Now chilled to the bone
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>Chains?
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>Memories rise
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>They always do
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>But never so soon after a show
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>An amulet
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>Incredible power in your veins
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>An even more incredible cruelty in your heart
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>Watching through your own eyes
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>Somehow not really comprehending
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>as you do things
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>Things you still can't believe you would have
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>But you did
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519.
>And Twilight...
-
520.
>NO!
-
521.
>No No No No No No No
-
522.
>...
-
523.
>Better now
-
524.
>Not a hair out of place
-
525.
>No matter how strong the feelings
-
526.
>Damn, you're awesome
-
527.
-
528.
-
529.
>You are anon
-
530.
>SUNLIGHT!
-
531.
>You can't see shit
-
532.
>Your eyes ache and burn
-
533.
>But it's a good pain
-
534.
>And the warmth on your skin is unmistakable
-
535.
>The thing behind you pokes
-
536.
>forcing you to go where it wants
-
537.
>Your eyes are starting to adjust
-
538.
>You're heading toward a large group of brutes
-
539.
>clustered around a stage
-
540.
>There seems to be a blue pony sitting on it
-
541.
>A blue pony
-
542.
>with a white mane
-
543.
>And a robe and wizard hat
-
544.
>Maybe you have been in the dark too long
-
545.
-
546.
>You are Trixie
-
547.
>And it doesn't look like an animal
-
548.
>As soon as it arrives
-
549.
>the dogs push it to the ground
-
550.
>and laugh
-
551.
>You aren't laughing
-
552.
>Neither is it
-
553.
>Such a weird face
-
554.
>but you can read it as clearly as anypony's
-
555.
>This is no thoughtless beast
-
556.
>"Why would I want your prisoner?"
-
557.
>Blase, but not overly
-
558.
>"No, Great and Powerful one
-
559.
>servant only bring treats!"
-
560.
>"Look, Look!" says another
-
561.
>They point to the baskets
-
562.
>They hold up the bottles
-
563.
>Wow! How did Dogs get luxuries like those?
-
564.
>They went all out this time
-
565.
>The show must have been better than you thought
-
566.
>memories
-
567.
>A stab of conscious
-
568.
>Damn it
-
569.
-
570.
-
571.
-
572.
Post 11
-
573.
-
574.
-
575.
>You are Trixie
-
576.
>And hard experience has taught you
-
577.
>reckless action is trouble
-
578.
>You need to know more
-
579.
>"Why do servants need chains?
-
580.
>Their pay *is* their chain, is it not?"
-
581.
>"He thief!"
-
582.
>"Come to cave in forest!
-
583.
>Steal Diamond Dog treasure!"
-
584.
>You've heard of this
-
585.
>Dogs baiting creatures and capturing them
-
586.
>For labor and eventually food
-
587.
>But always animals
-
588.
>Maybe he was a thief?
-
589.
>But even so
-
590.
>Does he deserve what they have in store for him?
-
591.
>And worse
-
592.
>what if he isn't?
-
593.
>How to proceed?
-
594.
>You have to know more
-
595.
>and honey catches more flies than vinegar
-
596.
>"The Great and Powerful Trixie approves!"
-
597.
>"Oh thank you Great and Powerful!
-
598.
>His pockets bulged when we found him!
-
599.
>They were so fat we almost couldn't net him!"
-
600.
>"Exaggeration, I'm sure." You sardonically reply
-
601.
>Another spoke
-
602.
>"Yeah he didn't even get them all. We laid out too many gems in the line."
-
603.
>Your heart sank
-
604.
>They DID lure him
-
605.
>You know what you have to do.
-
606.
-
607.
>You are anon
-
608.
>They're talking about you
-
609.
>Knuckle-walking dog-things conversing with a blueberry wizard pony
-
610.
>You'd laugh if you could
-
611.
>But you can't
-
612.
>So all this is for the blueberry?
-
613.
>You wonder who she is
-
614.
>She keeps looking at you
-
615.
>But not like the others
-
616.
>They leer
-
617.
>and scowl
-
618.
>and throw things
-
619.
>She-not human but clearly female
-
620.
>regards you with...
-
621.
>pitty?
-
622.
>A split second
-
623.
>Then it's gone
-
624.
>The set of her face
-
625.
>The carriage of her body
-
626.
>Everything exudes confidence and power
-
627.
>The dog-things extol their gifts
-
628.
>She actually looks somewhat impressed
-
629.
>A sideways glance at you
-
630.
>She asks about you
-
631.
>They say you're a thief!
-
632.
>Your anger overcomes your fear
-
633.
>You're just about to say something
-
634.
>Before you can the big dumb(er) one drops the truth
-
635.
>Their tails stop wagging
-
636.
>They wince and look at him
-
637.
>He doesn't seem to realize what he said
-
638.
>Blueberry does
-
639.
>She doesn't seem happy.
-
640.
>"Well, The Great and Powerful Trixie has need of a new servant."
-
641.
>What?
-
642.
>Does she mean you?
-
643.
>should you be happy?
-
644.
>"She will graciously relieve you of this burden."
-
645.
-
646.
-
647.
Post 12a
-
648.
-
649.
>You are Trixie
-
650.
>They are Diamond Dogs
-
651.
>and don't want to let their toy go
-
652.
>"But Great and Powerful one!
-
653.
>He's not a treat!
-
654.
>He's a thief!"
-
655.
>You scowl
-
656.
>"What Trixie wants
-
657.
>Trixie gets!"
-
658.
>[spoiler]Especially from Diamond Dogs[/spoiler]
-
659.
>"And Trixie wants him"
-
660.
>"If you take him maybe he try steal from you!"
-
661.
>The dog seems genuinely worried
-
662.
>"Great and Powerful Trixie might get angry at us!"
-
663.
>You laugh
-
664.
>A gentle melody
-
665.
>lilting on the breeze
-
666.
>"If it steals from Trixie it will be punished
-
667.
>The Great and Magnanimous Trixie
-
668.
>would not hold you responsible"
-
669.
>"But... but..." the dog stammers
-
670.
>"But!" Your voice hardens
-
671.
>"The Great and Terrible Trixie will get angry"
-
672.
>They whimper at this
-
673.
>"if you deny her!"
-
674.
>"The Great and Famous Trixie will tell all she meets
-
675.
>'Diamond Dogs have no gratitude!
-
676.
>I saved their town from unspeakable terrors
-
677.
>yet they refused my simple request!'
-
678.
>Who will trade with Diamond Dogs then?"
-
679.
>The dogs look at each other
-
680.
>indecision crumples their brows
-
681.
-
682.
-
683.
Post 12b
-
684.
-
685.
>"Ok" Spot relents
-
686.
>"No!" Shouts Fido
-
687.
>"He mine!"
-
688.
>"But Trixie saved us!"
-
689.
>Rover jumps between them
-
690.
>"We give her the servant
-
691.
>but we keep the jewels!"
-
692.
>Fido thinks a moment
-
693.
>It looks painful for him
-
694.
>"And Drinks!" He says finally
-
695.
>No
-
696.
>Not only no
-
697.
>but hell fuck no!
-
698.
>"Fine!"
-
699.
>Your horn glows
-
700.
>The wand leaps from your pocket
-
701.
>and drops to the sand
-
702.
>"Maybe I should leave that here?"
-
703.
>You smirk
-
704.
>"Maybe you can find a way
-
705.
>to defeat whatever comes out next?"
-
706.
>Their eyes widen
-
707.
>their ears droop
-
708.
>They even tuck their tails
-
709.
>"I the Great and Powerful Trixie will have it all
-
710.
>Or you will have it
-
711.
>plus everything that comes from that"
-
712.
>You gesture with your hoof
-
713.
>A subtle touch of magic
-
714.
>a faint wailing and a wisp of smoke
-
715.
>Most of the dogs break for the cave
-
716.
>You lock eyes with Rover
-
717.
>Head high
-
718.
>and cock an eyebrow
-
719.
>He grimaces
-
720.
>staring at the nascent cloud
-
721.
>"They yours Great and Powerful one
-
722.
>Just take away magic stick"
-
723.
>[spoiler]Especially from Diamond Dogs[/spoiler]
-
724.
>The wand is back in your pocket
-
725.
>You regard your new help
-
726.
>"Can you speak?"
-
727.
>"Yes Great and Powerful Trixie"
-
728.
>He not only picked up your name
-
729.
>But the proper way to say it
-
730.
>You like him already
-
731.
>"Good. Come with me if you want to live
-
732.
>And bring the baskets"
-
733.
-
734.
-
735.
Post 13
-
736.
-
737.
>You are anon
-
738.
>You belong to a pony
-
739.
>Pointy-ears-red-vest dog-thing relented
-
740.
>The screaming cloud vanished
-
741.
>The stick the cloud came out of glowed
-
742.
>then flew through the air and in to your pony's pocket
-
743.
>On any other day that would seem strange
-
744.
>But holy shit
-
745.
>Nothing's normal
-
746.
>Not since waking up in that forest
-
747.
>And this day has been the weirdest one yet
-
748.
>You still have no clue where you are
-
749.
>only the vaguest about
-
750.
>what's going on
-
751.
>But if belonging to her
-
752.
>gets you away from them
-
753.
>it's fine with you
-
754.
>She turns to you
-
755.
>"Can you speak?"
-
756.
>Don't fuck this up
-
757.
>They called her Trixie
-
758.
>Something else too
-
759.
>Was it a title?
-
760.
>The way she carried herself
-
761.
>The way she was treated
-
762.
>She was obviously important
-
763.
>Maybe a noble?
-
764.
>Better to say it
-
765.
>even if not needed
-
766.
>than not say it
-
767.
>and get in deeper shit
-
768.
>"Yes Great and Powerful Trixie"
-
769.
>Her eyes glimmered
-
770.
>A smile played across her lips
-
771.
>"Good" she said
-
772.
>She continued talking as she spun on her hooves
-
773.
>Wait did she really just say...
-
774.
>Well you heard the part about the baskets
-
775.
>So you pick them up and follow
-
776.
>She leads you around the stage
-
777.
>hunh
-
778.
>It's a wagon
-
779.
>With huge trumpets
-
780.
>And little cannons
-
781.
>Her horn glows
-
782.
>The door opens
-
783.
>"Put them in here"
-
784.
>She points with her snout
-
785.
>Done
-
786.
>"The Great and Compassionate Trixie
-
787.
>thinks you know how to behave"
-
788.
>She points her horn at your feet
-
789.
>A brilliant golden beam shoots out
-
790.
>The chains crumble
-
791.
>"You would be a FOOL to prove otherwise"
-
792.
>Of that you had no doubt
-
793.
>"The Great and Powerful Trixie wishes to depart forthwith"
-
794.
>Her horn glows again
-
795.
>A whirring comes from the wagon
-
796.
>the trumpets, cannons, and even the stage retract in to it
-
797.
>"You will follow alongside"
-
798.
>"Yes Great and Powerful One"
-
799.
>She climbs aboard the wagon
-
800.
>her snout up
-
801.
>Her horn glows
-
802.
>and stops
-
803.
>She looks at you askance
-
804.
>Then in a surprisingly soft and warm voice:
-
805.
>"Are you injured?"
-
806.
>"No Great and ...Kind One. I can walk"
-
807.
>"Good"
-
808.
>Nose up again
-
809.
>Her horn glows
-
810.
>The wagon lurches to motion
-
811.
>And you follow
-
812.
-
813.
-
814.
Post 14
-
815.
-
816.
>You are Trixie
-
817.
>and he called you kind
-
818.
>For some silly reason
-
819.
>that makes you very happy
-
820.
>Isn't that silly?
-
821.
>Feeling warm and fuzzy
-
822.
>because the help complimented you?
-
823.
>How silly!
-
824.
>A little "harumph" escapes your lips
-
825.
>But is lost in the wagon's sounds
-
826.
>Down the road
-
827.
>Continuing in silence
-
828.
>Stealing glances at him
-
829.
>He's so strange
-
830.
>And he smells good!
-
831.
>You thought one of the dogs found an equine cologne
-
832.
>But now that you're away
-
833.
>It's definitely him
-
834.
>Even though he's filthy
-
835.
>And those rags he's wearing need to go too
-
836.
>You've been down this road before
-
837.
>Countless times
-
838.
>There's a hot spring a bit further along
-
839.
>It's hard to find
-
840.
>You've never seen anpony else there
-
841.
>Your special place
-
842.
>Your magical realm
-
843.
>But you could use a bath too
-
844.
>Filthy Diamond Dogs
-
845.
>And there's no way you're taking him to town looking like that!
-
846.
>some time later you arrive
-
847.
>"What's your name?"
-
848.
>"Anon"
-
849.
>"We stop here anon"
-
850.
>You hop from the cart
-
851.
>"This place is very important to Trixie, anon
-
852.
>Normally, Trixie wouldn't bring anyone here
-
853.
>But today is special;
-
854.
>In her wisdom
-
855.
>Trixie can see that you need to rest
-
856.
>In her generosity
-
857.
>Trixie will let you
-
858.
>and let you do it here."
-
859.
>She stares into your eyes
-
860.
>"This place is magical to me
-
861.
>Treat it well
-
862.
>Do you understand?
-
863.
>Dare you enter my magical realm?"
-
864.
>The look on his face
-
865.
>You wonder what that's about
-
866.
>"Follow me"
-
867.
-
868.
-
869.
Post 15
-
870.
-
871.
>You are anon
-
872.
>following Trixie
-
873.
>Off the tiny path
-
874.
>through trees
-
875.
>and boulders
-
876.
>hidden among the stones
-
877.
>A small pool
-
878.
>And glorious blue sky
-
879.
>"Trixie wishes to bathe anon. You will wait
-
880.
>When she is finished
-
881.
>you will bathe too"
-
882.
>Without another word
-
883.
>She drops her cloak and hat
-
884.
>Hips sway as she makes her way to the pool
-
885.
>Is she so confident
-
886.
>nudity doesnt bother her?
-
887.
>Or is it because she's a pony?
-
888.
>Well it doesn't matter
-
889.
>You stretch back in the grass
-
890.
>Closing your eyes
-
891.
>Soaking in the warmth of the sun
-
892.
>Splashing
-
893.
>dripping
-
894.
>Your mind wanders
-
895.
>Some time passes
-
896.
>Is she singing now?
-
897.
>"You better believe
-
898.
>I've got tricks up my sleeve..."
-
899.
>You lay back again
-
900.
>Hands behind your head
-
901.
>The sun is so nice
-
902.
>"See me dominate"
-
903.
>A tugging
-
904.
>You look down
-
905.
>your hand is glowing pink
-
906.
>"cause Im powerful and bra-a-aaave"
-
907.
>You sit up
-
908.
>"Your turn anon"
-
909.
>She stands before you
-
910.
>Naked
-
911.
>Wet mane plastered to her neck
-
912.
>She shakes like a dog
-
913.
>Water goes flying
-
914.
>"What are you waiting for?"
-
915.
>"Can I have some privacy
-
916.
>Oh Great and Kind One?"
-
917.
>"You dont need privacy anon"
-
918.
>A trace of annoyance in her voice
-
919.
>"You need a bath
-
920.
>Strip"
-
921.
>You freeze
-
922.
>mind reeling
-
923.
>What to do?
-
924.
>"Anon the great and powerful Trixie is loosing patience!
-
925.
>You are a servant not a noble
-
926.
>and servants don't need clothes
-
927.
>Stop reaching above your station
-
928.
>and remove them at once!"
-
929.
>So that was it
-
930.
>Ponies dont care about nudity
-
931.
>In fact neither did the dog-things
-
932.
>They wore armor and vests
-
933.
>But those were for protection and pockets
-
934.
>No care for modesty at all
-
935.
>But you care
-
936.
>"Pardon Great and Powerful one
-
937.
>but humans always wear clothes!"
-
938.
>"That's probably why nopony's ever heard of them!
-
939.
>Those are ruined anyway
-
940.
>youd look better naked"
-
941.
>She turns up her snout
-
942.
>"Strip! Now!"
-
943.
>She stamps her hoof
-
944.
>"But Trixie..."
-
945.
>Her eyes widen
-
946.
>Oh fuck
-
947.
>Pink light shines from her horn
-
948.
>"I am the GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie to YOU!
-
949.
>"and YOU will obey ME! "
-
950.
>Suddenly youre airborne
-
951.
>"The Great and Powerful Trixie
-
952.
>has had enough!"
-
953.
-
954.
-
955.
Post 16
-
956.
-
957.
>You are anon
-
958.
>floating a meter or so above the ground
-
959.
>Flipping and turning about your own axes
-
960.
>Struggling to keep your clothes on
-
961.
>The friggin' things are glowing pink
-
962.
>and doing their best to fly off your body
-
963.
>"Damn it anon stop struggling!"
-
964.
>"Stop trying to tear off my clothes!"
-
965.
>Suddenly you drop
-
966.
>and stop just shy of the ground
-
967.
>That gets your attention
-
968.
>"From how high do you think
-
969.
>the Great and Powerful Trixie
-
970.
>could drop you
-
971.
>before you sustain injury?"
-
972.
>dead silence
-
973.
>"Would you like to find out?
-
974.
>"No great and powerful one!"
-
975.
>"Then take those cursed things off!"
-
976.
>She's bluffing
-
977.
>probably
-
978.
>You hope
-
979.
>"I will Great and Powerful one!
-
980.
>Just *please* give me some privacy!"
-
981.
>"UUUGGGHHHH!"
-
982.
>Your shirt flies off before you can react
-
983.
>Your pants open
-
984.
>and shoot down your legs
-
985.
>Your underwear too
-
986.
>You catch them just in time
-
987.
>Holding with all your might
-
988.
>desperate to keep them from slipping off your legs
-
989.
>You're rising higher too
-
990.
>Glowing bright pink
-
991.
>curled in a fetal position
-
992.
>pants around your ankles
-
993.
>spinning bare-ass over heels
-
994.
>cock poking backward between your thighs
-
995.
>Higher still
-
996.
>She was bluffing right?
-
997.
>Suddenly you're falling
-
998.
>oh shit
-
999.
>and falling
-
1000.
>She will catch you!
-
1001.
>and falling
-
1002.
>right?
-
1003.
>SPLASH!
-
1004.
>right in to the pool
-
1005.
>Holy shit
-
1006.
>hitting water *does* hurt
-
1007.
>It's warm
-
1008.
>and tastes horrible
-
1009.
>You look up at the surface
-
1010.
>and swim
-
1011.
>You emerge to a very amused looking unicorn
-
1012.
>She looks down at you
-
1013.
>smugly
-
1014.
>Then saunters to the grass
-
1015.
>tail swishing
-
1016.
>Lies down
-
1017.
>and laughs
-
1018.
-
1019.
-
1020.
Post 17
-
1021.
-
1022.
>You are anon
-
1023.
>You are clean
-
1024.
>So are your clothes
-
1025.
>So are Trixie's
-
1026.
>She eventually relented
-
1027.
>And let you wear them on the condition you wash and repair them.
-
1028.
>Of course you have to do hers too.
-
1029.
>But since she's been naked the whole time,
-
1030.
>You've only had to wash them once.
-
1031.
>You've been resting by the spring for over a week now.
-
1032.
>The sight of the heavenly bodies
-
1033.
>suddenly racing across the skies
-
1034.
>drove you to comment.
-
1035.
>She says there's a pair of princesses that raise and lower the sun.
-
1036.
>That's got to be figurative
-
1037.
>She seemed absolutely incredulous
-
1038.
>that your sun and moon move on their own.
-
1039.
>Or that the sun and moon could share the sky.
-
1040.
>You're feeling much better too.
-
1041.
>Getting tired of oatmeal though.
-
1042.
>She won't let you in the wagon,
-
1043.
>so you sleep wrapped in a blanket outside.
-
1044.
>Under the wagon,
-
1045.
>In case it rains.
-
1046.
>Also, it turns out
-
1047.
>She's not a noble at all:
-
1048.
>She's in show business!
-
1049.
>And practices her magic a lot.
-
1050.
>Uses you as a captive audience to try out new ideas.
-
1051.
>That's fine.
-
1052.
>You don't know how her magic compares to other unicorns,
-
1053.
>but it impresses the hell out of you.
-
1054.
>She's smart too.
-
1055.
>You share stories of your home with her,
-
1056.
>and she regales you with tales of her adventures.
-
1057.
>You don't know how much is true,
-
1058.
>But her observations are poignant,
-
1059.
>and her questions incisive.
-
1060.
>She uncovers things about you with a shocking talent for subterfuge.
-
1061.
>While she is more than a bit full of herself,
-
1062.
>she isn't mean.
-
1063.
>In fact,
-
1064.
>She's been kind to you:
-
1065.
>making sure you have enough to eat,
-
1066.
>offering you extra blankets
-
1067.
>those kinds of things.
-
1068.
>She's actually kind of sweet.
-
1069.
>In her own way.
-
1070.
>You like her more and more.
-
1071.
-
1072.
-
1073.
Post 18
-
1074.
-
1075.
>You are Trixie,
-
1076.
>and it's time to leave.
-
1077.
>Your wagon's mechanisms are reset,
-
1078.
>Your suplies are running low,
-
1079.
>and Anon is feeling better.
-
1080.
>Anon
-
1081.
>You smile despite yourself
-
1082.
>But how could you not?
-
1083.
>For the first time,
-
1084.
>you've found somepo-someone with as many stories as you have.
-
1085.
>Literally an entire other world's worth.
-
1086.
>Some of it you just can't believe:
-
1087.
>the sun and moon moving on their own?
-
1088.
>No way!
-
1089.
>Still, for all that,
-
1090.
>he's ignorant of things that anyone who grew up in Equestria would know.
-
1091.
>He's completely dependent on you.
-
1092.
>For some reason,
-
1093.
>you really like that.
-
1094.
>He's also patient,
-
1095.
>and attentive.
-
1096.
>Not in the tail-nosing way so many are to famous ponies.
-
1097.
>Neither in the simple brain-dead way servants are to their employers.
-
1098.
>He seems to be genuinely interested in you,
-
1099.
>and what you have to say.
-
1100.
>You like that too.
-
1101.
>A lot.
-
1102.
>Your smile broadens
-
1103.
>And...
-
1104.
>It's such a silly thing,
-
1105.
>but he smells good.
-
1106.
>He says all humans smell like that when they work.
-
1107.
>He also says they don't like it.
-
1108.
>Humans are silly.
-
1109.
-
1110.
-
1111.
-
1112.
-
1113.
Post 19
-
1114.
-
1115.
>You are Trixie.
-
1116.
>A couple of days further down the road.
-
1117.
>And you aren't a happy pony.
-
1118.
>It turns out Anon isn't as strong as you thought.
-
1119.
>he's taller than you,
-
1120.
>So he looks imposing.
-
1121.
>But a few hours in to the first day back on the road,
-
1122.
>and you could see it wasn't going to work.
-
1123.
>He was hitched properly
-
1124.
>and he really did try.
-
1125.
>But he was slow,
-
1126.
>even on flat ground.
-
1127.
>Trips at Anon-speed would take too long.
-
1128.
>And the first hill you came to...
-
1129.
>He tried that too, but slipped.
-
1130.
>You'd had to use magic to keep from careening backwards.
-
1131.
>How were you supposed to relax, or study, or do anything,
-
1132.
>when you might have to leap to the rescue at any moment?
-
1133.
>That put an end to that.
-
1134.
>Humans, it seems, just aren't as strong as equines.
-
1135.
>So you, the Great and Powerful Trixie,
-
1136.
>are pulling your own wagon.
-
1137.
>While your putative servant strolls beside you.
-
1138.
>Again.
-
1139.
>You are not a happy pony.
-
1140.
>Even if he does smell good.
-
1141.
-
1142.
-
1143.
Post 20a
-
1144.
-
1145.
>You are Anon.
-
1146.
>And you can see that Trixie is frustrated.
-
1147.
>She's been snippier than usual.
-
1148.
>And quieter when you've stopped.
-
1149.
>You want to help her,
-
1150.
>and you think you know a way.
-
1151.
>"We're stopping here, Anon."
-
1152.
>"All right, Great and Powerful one. Let me help you."
-
1153.
>You walk over and begin unhitching her.
-
1154.
>"The Great and Powerful Trixie doesn't need your help, Anon."
-
1155.
>You pause.
-
1156.
>She practically spat it,
-
1157.
>and hadn't referred to herself in the third person for a while.
-
1158.
>The buckles flared pink, and dropped to the road.
-
1159.
>"Pull it off to the side, Anon."
-
1160.
>"There's a stream beyond those trees."
-
1161.
>Her snout gestured to the left.
-
1162.
>"Get some water and start dinner."
-
1163.
>She disappears in to her Wagon.
-
1164.
>You did as you were told.
-
1165.
>A knock on her door.
-
1166.
>"Dinner is ready, Great and Powerful One."
-
1167.
>She emerges,
-
1168.
>walks to the fire,
-
1169.
>and begins to eat.
-
1170.
>You watch her take one glum bite after another.
-
1171.
>"Great and Powerful One," you began
-
1172.
>"I can tell you're upset."
-
1173.
>"I want to do something for you."
-
1174.
>"Like what?"
-
1175.
>"You can't pull the vardo, you can't work magic, and you can't eat hay."
-
1176.
>"I'm stuck feeding you oats."
-
1177.
>Then in a small voice, barely audible:
-
1178.
>"I want the oats."
-
1179.
>She pouts in to the flames.
-
1180.
-
1181.
-
1182.
Post 20b
-
1183.
-
1184.
>"It's something special, Great and Powerful One."
-
1185.
>"Something humans do for each other,"
-
1186.
>"when we... when we care."
-
1187.
>She looks up at you
-
1188.
>"You're always pulling the cart,"
-
1189.
>You say, sitting at her hooves.
-
1190.
>"And I think you must be sore."
-
1191.
>She watches you reach out,
-
1192.
>and cup her pastern;
-
1193.
>gently lifting it and setting it in your lap.
-
1194.
>She's stopped chewing,
-
1195.
>now silently looking you in the eyes.
-
1196.
>You rest your hand on her cannon
-
1197.
>"I'm not being too familiar, am I?"
-
1198.
>silence
-
1199.
>Gently you begin to stroke along it's length.
-
1200.
>Lightly at first,
-
1201.
>then with gentle pressure.
-
1202.
>Following the grain of her fur.
-
1203.
>It's extremely soft,
-
1204.
>and very fine.
-
1205.
>She's chewing again,
-
1206.
>Not so gloomily as before.
-
1207.
>Under her leg and up to her hock;
-
1208.
>pinching your way down to her fetlock.
-
1209.
>You do it again.
-
1210.
>And again.
-
1211.
>She's staring at the fire,
-
1212.
>very intently.
-
1213.
>An uncertain look on her face.
-
1214.
>Back to her pastern;
-
1215.
>caressing her coronet:
-
1216.
>Lightly running your fingertips between hoof and fur.
-
1217.
>Then work from hock to coronet again.
-
1218.
>You glance up; her eyes are closed.
-
1219.
>A quiet sigh
-
1220.
>You continue along her hoof wall,
-
1221.
>to her heel.
-
1222.
>Massaging her frog;
-
1223.
>Pressing and rolling in little circles.
-
1224.
>She winces and melts.
-
1225.
>You must be doing well.
-
1226.
>Up and down, from hock to hoof,
-
1227.
>Over and over.
-
1228.
>Feeling her tension drain,
-
1229.
>and body loosen with each pass.
-
1230.
>Kneading her hooves,
-
1231.
>with strength, and with great care.
-
1232.
>On and on.
-
1233.
>First one, then the other.
-
1234.
>firm muscle, soft blue fur,
-
1235.
>and a unicorn who's lost in the moment.
-
1236.
>...
-
1237.
>She hasn't moved or made a sound in some time.
-
1238.
>Her breath is deep and rhythmic.
-
1239.
>You can't help but smile,
-
1240.
>placing her hooves back on the ground.
-
1241.
>You gently brush an errant strand of mane from her face,
-
1242.
>And cover her with your blanket.
-
1243.
>Softly: "Good night Trixie."
-
1244.
>You clean up,
-
1245.
>and lay down a short distance away.
-
1246.
>The night is clear.
-
1247.
>The fire is warm.
-
1248.
>As it fades you drift off,
-
1249.
>to pleasant and unexpected thoughts of Trixie.
-
1250.
-
1251.
-
1252.
-
1253.
Post 21
-
1254.
-
1255.
>You are anon
-
1256.
>And you're being followed.
-
1257.
>This is your first time in a pony town.
-
1258.
>Ever since Trixie's show,
-
1259.
>you've had a handful of ponies around.
-
1260.
>They'd watch you from their windows.
-
1261.
>They'd watch from the streets.
-
1262.
>They'd even watch from the sky.
-
1263.
>You thought at first the clouds were chasing you too.
-
1264.
>Until you saw pegai peeking over the edges.
-
1265.
>Her show was, of course fantastic.
-
1266.
>She made what little you'd seen at the Diamond Dogs cave
-
1267.
>seem like parlor tricks.
-
1268.
>"It's for the ponies" she'd said in private.
-
1269.
>"They can use magic too"
-
1270.
>"so I have to pull out all the stops"
-
1271.
>But even so, you were a distraction.
-
1272.
>The ponies just couldn't focus on Trixie
-
1273.
>with you there.
-
1274.
>After the show, she seemed a little put-off.
-
1275.
>Then, an idea must have struck,
-
1276.
>because she immediately took a bag of bits,
-
1277.
>and told you to follow.
-
1278.
>So you found yourself being led through the streets
-
1279.
>by a gorgeous blue unicorn
-
1280.
>with a half-dozen others trotting along behind you.
-
1281.
>Trixie'd been much more relaxed lately.
-
1282.
>She smiled.
-
1283.
>Genuine smiles,
-
1284.
>no longer putting up a facade when you were in private.
-
1285.
>In fact, she had stopped referring to herself in the third person.
-
1286.
>Until you came to town.
-
1287.
>The difference was amazing.
-
1288.
>But you were in public now.
-
1289.
>Surrounded by equines of all colors and descriptions.
-
1290.
>She had an image to maintain.
-
1291.
>So, her demeanor came as no surprise when she said:
-
1292.
>"We're here, Anon."
-
1293.
>"Open the door for the Great and Powerful Trixie!"
-
1294.
>Then shouldered her way past
-
1295.
>with an annoyed little squeak
-
1296.
>and her snout in the air.
-
1297.
>"Anon, you will turn the lock, and take a seat."
-
1298.
>"The Great and Powerful Trixie will return momentarily."
-
1299.
>And with that, she vanished down a hall.
-
1300.
-
1301.
-
1302.
Post 22
-
1303.
-
1304.
>You are anon
-
1305.
>Sitting in the most enormous couch you'd ever seen.
-
1306.
>Wide, long and with padding thick enough to swallow you.
-
1307.
>You take stock of your surroundings:
-
1308.
>You are sitting in one of a pair of huge plush couches.
-
1309.
>Across from you, an ornate wooden counter.
-
1310.
>The hall down which Trixie vanished behind it.
-
1311.
>Short, but very wide windows in the walls just below the ceiling.
-
1312.
>A large door to the outside on your right,
-
1313.
>with many nosy ponies peering through the glass.
-
1314.
>The walls: lined alternately with full-length mirrors
-
1315.
>and equine dress-forms,
-
1316.
>adorned in the most ornate clothing you'd ever seen!
-
1317.
>A tailor's shop.
-
1318.
>And a high-end one by the looks of it.
-
1319.
>Why would she have brought you here?
-
1320.
>"Anon!"
-
1321.
>Speak of the Blueberry.
-
1322.
>"Stand up!"
-
1323.
>She trots in to the room, another pony in tow.
-
1324.
>"Come here, Anon. The Great and Powerful Trixie has need of you."
-
1325.
>You stop a step away from her.
-
1326.
>"Do you think you can do it?"
-
1327.
>She's speaking to the other pony.
-
1328.
>This one's wearing fancy clothes,
-
1329.
>with her mane in elaborate coifs and curls.
-
1330.
>She's even wearing make-up.
-
1331.
>"Maybe, great and Powerful one."
-
1332.
>"I need to get a better look."
-
1333.
>"Very well. Anon, strip."
-
1334.
>You look back at the door.
-
1335.
>Anxious faces still pressed against the glass.
-
1336.
>They follow your gaze.
-
1337.
>Trixie's horn glows and a shade drops.
-
1338.
>"He's easily embarrassed, the silly thing."
-
1339.
>Trixie replies to the other mares quizzical expression.
-
1340.
>"Now don't make Trixie repeat herself!"
-
1341.
>Well they are ponies...
-
1342.
>You disrobe in front of them
-
1343.
>and stand tall.
-
1344.
>"Nicely done, anon." she says with a mischievous grin.
-
1345.
>"That wasn't so bad, was it?"
-
1346.
>"Better than the alternative, Great and Powerful One."
-
1347.
>"For you."
-
1348.
>Your eyes lock; her mirth is unmistakable.
-
1349.
>Cheeky little blueberry.
-
1350.
>The other pony doesn't seem to care.
-
1351.
>Trotting around and around you
-
1352.
>then back to check your garments.
-
1353.
>Making notes on a piece of paper,
-
1354.
>measuring you,
-
1355.
>scribbling again.
-
1356.
>Finally she says:
-
1357.
>I can accommodate your request, Lady Trixie."
-
1358.
-
1359.
-
1360.
Post 23
-
1361.
-
1362.
>You are Anon,
-
1363.
>back under the wagon.
-
1364.
>After leaving the clothier's,
-
1365.
>Trixie had led you around the city.
-
1366.
>Pointing out the good and bad.
-
1367.
>Talking about how it had looked before
-
1368.
>or where such-and-such a thing had happened.
-
1369.
>Her memory must be incredible.
-
1370.
>She had obviously been in a good mood,
-
1371.
>and even treated you to a restaurant.
-
1372.
>She'd said it was a favorite of Pegai
-
1373.
>And that she'd chosen it for one reason:
-
1374.
>It served fish!
-
1375.
>And vegetables.
-
1376.
>Who knew how delicious they could be after so long on oatmeal?
-
1377.
>She also paid you.
-
1378.
>Minus expenses, of course.
-
1379.
>But that still left you with some bits in your pockets.
-
1380.
>Near the end of the scheduled day
-
1381.
>You had returned to the store and found an outfit waiting for you.
-
1382.
>And what an outfit!
-
1383.
>Based on what you'd worn,
-
1384.
>but embellished beyond belief:
-
1385.
>rhinestones, and showy fabric,
-
1386.
>with enormous liberties taken with the cut.
-
1387.
>It looked ridiculous, but fit suprisingly well,
-
1388.
>So Trixie had you carry it out, wrapped in brown paper.
-
1389.
>It seems Trixie had noticed how much attention you garnered.
-
1390.
>And being the keen business-pony she was,
-
1391.
>decided to capitalize on it.
-
1392.
>You were to join her show.
-
1393.
>Whether you liked it, or not.
-
1394.
>All in all it had been a very nice day.
-
1395.
>So even when the clouds rolled in and a drizzle started up,
-
1396.
>Your spirits were high.
-
1397.
-
1398.
-
1399.
Post 24
-
1400.
-
1401.
>You are Trixie.
-
1402.
>In your wagon.
-
1403.
>Thinking about the day.
-
1404.
>What a wonderful time you'd had with Anon.
-
1405.
>How happy he'd been to eat the fish.
-
1406.
>"Anything but oatmeal" he'd joked.
-
1407.
>But he seemed to enjoy the fish the most.
-
1408.
>Turns out you guessed right.
-
1409.
>That made you happy, of course.
-
1410.
>But Anon being happy...
-
1411.
>That made you feel...
-
1412.
>Good.
-
1413.
>So good.
-
1414.
>It made your chest warm
-
1415.
>And a funny little flutter creep in your stomach.
-
1416.
>Like some school-filly crush.
-
1417.
>How silly.
-
1418.
>But it *was* nice.
-
1419.
>You couldn't remember the last time you felt so good.
-
1420.
>In fact the memories hadn't come back, either.
-
1421.
>Not at all.
-
1422.
>Not since you'd met Anon.
-
1423.
>You hadn't had a good night's sleep since you were a filly.
-
1424.
>Your parents, other fillies,
-
1425.
>teachers, and so many others.
-
1426.
>They'd all rejected you.
-
1427.
>So you rejected them back.
-
1428.
>That didn't make them like you, of course.
-
1429.
>But it did make you feel stronger.
-
1430.
>No longer at their mercy.
-
1431.
>You didn't need anypony!
-
1432.
>Even as an adult mare.
-
1433.
>But they needed you.
-
1434.
>Your talent, your showponyship.
-
1435.
>They craved your attention
-
1436.
>and you gave it to them.
-
1437.
>Until Ponyville, and...
-
1438.
>that amulet.
-
1439.
>You had known the danger
-
1440.
>had known it twisted and corrupted the minds of it's wielders.
-
1441.
>You hadn't cared.
-
1442.
>You wanted revenge!
-
1443.
>Revenge for what she had done to you!
-
1444.
>You'd thought you could control it,
-
1445.
>or at least resist it.
-
1446.
>But you were wrong.
-
1447.
>And when your own mind had returned,
-
1448.
>you had so many new personal horrors to face.
-
1449.
>So many things to haunt your waking moments,
-
1450.
>and keep you up at night.
-
1451.
>Until you met Anon.
-
1452.
-
1453.
-
1454.
Post 25
-
1455.
-
1456.
>You are Trixie
-
1457.
>You sit lost in thought.
-
1458.
>The sound of rain drumming your caravan.
-
1459.
>Anon
-
1460.
>Anon
-
1461.
>Anon is...
-
1462.
>Out there.
-
1463.
>Can you really...
-
1464.
>What if he says "no?"
-
1465.
>No.
-
1466.
>You're no school-filly.
-
1467.
>You are the Great and Powerful Trixie.
-
1468.
>You will not be cowed by fear.
-
1469.
>You sigh, and open your door.
-
1470.
>A little touch of magic and a canopy forms over your head.
-
1471.
>"Anon?"
-
1472.
>Why was your voice so soft?
-
1473.
>"Anon!"
-
1474.
>He looks out from under your wagon.
-
1475.
>"Yes Great and Powerful One?"
-
1476.
>How to put this without giving the wrong idea?
-
1477.
>What was the right idea, anyway?
-
1478.
>You're no longer sure.
-
1479.
>"You..."
-
1480.
>"You shouldn't be out in the rain, Anon."
-
1481.
>"Dry off..."
-
1482.
>You levitate a towel.
-
1483.
>"and..."
-
1484.
>"come inside."
-
1485.
>"I... don't want those new clothes being ruined."
-
1486.
-
1487.
>You are anon
-
1488.
>You know the new clothes are in the wagon.
-
1489.
>She knows too; she put them there.
-
1490.
>That look on her face.
-
1491.
>What's wrong?
-
1492.
>You climb out from under the wagon
-
1493.
>and towel yourself on it's ledge.
-
1494.
>Suddenly your towel gains a life of it's own;
-
1495.
>ruffling your hair and stroking your face and neck
-
1496.
>"Hold still anon"
-
1497.
>"I don't want any of that in here."
-
1498.
>You realize she's using her forehooves,
-
1499.
>not her magic.
-
1500.
>"That's fine, Anon. You may enter."
-
1501.
>Her snout is up
-
1502.
>But she doesn't meet your eyes.
-
1503.
>You crawl in to the wagon for the first time.
-
1504.
>It's cozy.
-
1505.
>With small, modestly carved cabinetry
-
1506.
>stained a shade darker than the wooden walls.
-
1507.
>Scents of cedar, gardenias, and horse.
-
1508.
>She pulls another blanket and pillow from a net
-
1509.
>suspended from the ceiling.
-
1510.
>She gives them to you,
-
1511.
>her eyes at last meeting yours.
-
1512.
>"I... I hope there's enough room."
-
1513.
>There is.
-
1514.
>She snuffs out the candle.
-
1515.
>The steady patter of rain,
-
1516.
>and Trixie's gardenia-scented mane
-
1517.
>carry you softly to sleep.
-
1518.
-
1519.
-
1520.
Post 26
-
1521.
-
1522.
>You are Trixie,
-
1523.
>and you couldn't be happier!
-
1524.
>It's been weeks now,
-
1525.
>since you added Anon to your show.
-
1526.
>You've visited farms, and towns, and a big city too.
-
1527.
>Arriving to find that your reputation has preceded you,
-
1528.
>and everypony is just dying to see you.
-
1529.
>Your profits have skyrocketed!
-
1530.
>Not just from the show, either.
-
1531.
>Afterward, many of the ponies want to talk with him.
-
1532.
>You and Anon are invited to restaurants,
-
1533.
>pubs, cidereys and so many other places.
-
1534.
>They take vignettes,
-
1535.
>hang banners,
-
1536.
>And tell everypony who comes by
-
1537.
>that *their* establishment
-
1538.
>is a favorite of the Great and Powerful Trixie
-
1539.
>and her "pet."
-
1540.
>You rarely have to pay for food or supplies.
-
1541.
>Even your seamstress
-
1542.
>is offering to make new clothes gratis.
-
1543.
>If only you'll "Please, please, please,"
-
1544.
>"tell everypony who made them."
-
1545.
>Your little chest of bits is overflowing.
-
1546.
>Literally.
-
1547.
>Also, Anon.
-
1548.
>Anon.
-
1549.
>Your little human.
-
1550.
>You shared the wagon every night.
-
1551.
>His scent in your home.
-
1552.
>His warmth in your bed.
-
1553.
>You had gone to sleep facing the walls,
-
1554.
>that first unforgetable night.
-
1555.
>But when you awoke
-
1556.
>-before he did-
-
1557.
>snuggled in his arms,
-
1558.
>muzzle under his chin,
-
1559.
>You knew a peace you never thought you would.
-
1560.
>A warmth and contentment
-
1561.
>that had only grown stronger.
-
1562.
>You didn't think those feelings were silly any more.
-
1563.
>They were serious.
-
1564.
>And you wanted more!
-
1565.
>But what could you do?
-
1566.
>He was your employee, and not even a pony!
-
1567.
>Hiding your feelings around other ponies was easy;
-
1568.
>You are the Great and Powerful Trixie!
-
1569.
>And you act like it.
-
1570.
>Around them.
-
1571.
>But Anon was different
-
1572.
>You wanted him to like you
-
1573.
>Not just respect you.
-
1574.
>...
-
1575.
>What would you do when estrus came?
-
1576.
>What would he do?
-
1577.
>You thought and wondered.
-
1578.
>Wondered and thought.
-
1579.
>Until one day...
-
1580.
-
1581.
-
1582.
Post 27
-
1583.
-
1584.
>You are anon.
-
1585.
>Squatting by the fire, preparing lunch.
-
1586.
>Your arrogant, demanding,
-
1587.
>wonderful boss is lying under a tree.
-
1588.
>Clacking beads on an abacus and scratching in a notebook.
-
1589.
>A shadow passes overhead.
-
1590.
>A pagasus.
-
1591.
>You had seen many around.
-
1592.
>Especially in this part of Equestria.
-
1593.
>There were more pagai here than any other kind of pony.
-
1594.
>But this one was different.
-
1595.
>He wore gold armor.
-
1596.
>His mane and tail: blue.
-
1597.
>Cropped and pushed through his helmet.
-
1598.
>Redolent of a Roman soldier's comb on Earth.
-
1599.
>He circled, and flew overhead again.
-
1600.
>Much closer this time,
-
1601.
>and landed a few paces away.
-
1602.
>Trixie noticed him then.
-
1603.
>She stood, watching impassively.
-
1604.
>Upon seeing her, the pegasus spoke.
-
1605.
>"Are you Trixie Lulamoon? Magus of the Road, and Guardian of Anon?"
-
1606.
>"I am." She replies in an equally haughty voice.
-
1607.
>"What brings a royal guard"
-
1608.
>"to search out the Great and Powerful Trixie?"
-
1609.
>He produces a scroll from his saddlebags,
-
1610.
>and lays it at her hooves.
-
1611.
>"Their Royal Highnesses, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna,"
-
1612.
>"have heard of your magnificence!"
-
1613.
>"They wish to see your performance, and meet your pet!"
-
1614.
>"You are hereby summoned to appear in the royal court,"
-
1615.
>"no later than the end of summer. You are invited to stay,
-
1616.
>"as a guest of Their Royal Highnesses in the castle,"
-
1617.
>"and enjoy their hospitality. How do you answer?"
-
1618.
>She pauses a moment,
-
1619.
>raises the scroll with her magic,
-
1620.
>and reads.
-
1621.
>If you didn't know her like you did,
-
1622.
>You might believe her nonchalance.
-
1623.
>But you do,
-
1624.
>and her excitement is clear.
-
1625.
>With a smirk, and toss of her mane, she says:
-
1626.
>"You may tell Their Royal Highnesses,"
-
1627.
>"That The Great and Powerful Trixie,"
-
1628.
>"Magus of the Road, and Guardian of Anon,"
-
1629.
>"accepts their invitation."
-
1630.
>"She will make all due haste toward Canterlot."
-
1631.
>The pagasus bows and takes to the sky.
-
1632.
>Trixie watches him go, snout raised.
-
1633.
>Then suddenly prances circles on tippy-hooves
-
1634.
>swishing her tail and arching her back.
-
1635.
>"Yes!Yes!Yes!Yes!Yes!"
-
1636.
-
1637.
-
1638.
Post 28
-
1639.
-
1640.
>You are Anon
-
1641.
>marching beside your vardo.
-
1642.
>Well Trixie's vardo.
-
1643.
>But you can't help but think of it as yours too.
-
1644.
>Your relationship has blossomed.
-
1645.
>You work together, travel together
-
1646.
>eat together and share the same bed every night.
-
1647.
>And she's a real cuddlebug.
-
1648.
>Always finding excuses to touch you while you work.
-
1649.
>She particularly enjoys leaning against you,
-
1650.
>and uses your lap as a pillow for her naps.
-
1651.
>Many pleasant hours had passed under trees,
-
1652.
>watching your little pony dream her dreams.
-
1653.
>Herd animals are prone to physical contact,
-
1654.
>but this didn't feel casual.
-
1655.
>And you loved every moment of it.
-
1656.
>On this particular morning,
-
1657.
>she had put on her costume, chattering incessantly,
-
1658.
>Excited and nervous.
-
1659.
>Saying today was the day you'd reach Canterlot.
-
1660.
>You had seen the castle from far away,
-
1661.
>sprouting from a cliff in defiance of all prudence.
-
1662.
>But now you drew close,
-
1663.
>so with a little nuzzle of your arm,
-
1664.
>she put on her archetype.
-
1665.
>Tail and nose high,
-
1666.
>eyes: bright and imperious.
-
1667.
>Pride oozing from beneath her wide brim.
-
1668.
>"We are nearly there Anon."
-
1669.
>"As we have come by Royal Invite,"
-
1670.
>"doubtlessly they will be on the lookout for us."
-
1671.
>"In fact, Trixie wouldn't be surprised if they already know we're here."
-
1672.
>It turns out, she was right.
-
1673.
>Moments later 6 guard ponies in sparkling armor approached.
-
1674.
>The captain bowed.
-
1675.
>"Lady Trixie"
-
1676.
>"by order of Their Royal Highnesses, we bid you welcome."
-
1677.
>"Please allow us to escort you to the Royal Palace."
-
1678.
>"Yes Captain, The Great and Powerful Trixie accepts your welcome"
-
1679.
>"and bids you lead on."
-
1680.
>4 took position in front.
-
1681.
>Another behind you, buckled himself to your wagon.
-
1682.
>You had a retinue!
-
1683.
>The captain bowed again
-
1684.
>"At your convenience, Lady Trixie."
-
1685.
>She looks at you.
-
1686.
>Her smile is as smug as you'd ever seen.
-
1687.
>But this time she isn't smiling at you,
-
1688.
>she's smiling with you.
-
1689.
>Enjoying the moment, and inviting you to do the same.
-
1690.
>Your smile meets hers,
-
1691.
>and with pomp barely concealing glee,
-
1692.
>she marches forth.
-
1693.
-
1694.
-
1695.
Post 29
-
1696.
-
1697.
>You are Trixie
-
1698.
>Strutting over the drawbridge and through the gate.
-
1699.
>Guard ponies bow as you pass
-
1700.
>Acknowledgement, admiration, and respect:
-
1701.
>everything you've ever wanted
-
1702.
>made all the sweeter because Anon is here to share it!
-
1703.
>All ponies watch as you pass by.
-
1704.
>Probably wondering who's so important as to get a Royal escort.
-
1705.
>As if there was anyone more deserving!
-
1706.
>Well, maybe one...
-
1707.
>as deserving, anyway.
-
1708.
>You look at anon.
-
1709.
>He's watching you!
-
1710.
>All the grandeur, all the wonder of Canterlot
-
1711.
>and he's watching you!
-
1712.
>Of course you deserve it,
-
1713.
>but still...
-
1714.
>His smile rivals the sun
-
1715.
>But can't compare to the blaze in your heart.
-
1716.
>Could this day get any better?
-
1717.
>You close your eyes and savor the feeling.
-
1718.
>Anon
-
1719.
>You
-
1720.
>Together
-
1721.
>Shit!
-
1722.
>The hoi polloi can't see you like this!
-
1723.
>You force yourself to look away
-
1724.
>and notice other ponies in the crowd.
-
1725.
>Watching you and watching him.
-
1726.
>And who is that?
-
1727.
>Fleur Dis Lee!
-
1728.
>Very clearly watching him, not you.
-
1729.
>He's noticed too.
-
1730.
>A smile and that weird "hand-wave" thing he does.
-
1731.
>She turns as you pass
-
1732.
>gives him a wink[spoiler]with her eyes[/spoiler]
-
1733.
>and prances off.
-
1734.
>Why do you feel like this?
-
1735.
>He does that to all the ponies when you enter a new town.
-
1736.
>Smiling and flailing those "arms" around like the silly thing he is.
-
1737.
>Why do you feel like this?
-
1738.
>Suddenly, your facade is no act;
-
1739.
>genuine anger burns inside you.
-
1740.
>You never told anyone,
-
1741.
>but you're a monogamist.
-
1742.
>It's your dirty little secret.
-
1743.
>You don't like to share.
-
1744.
>Are humans monogamous?
-
1745.
>You don't know.
-
1746.
>You should tell Anon.
-
1747.
>He must know, it's not fair to keep it a secret if you love him.
-
1748.
>And you do.
-
1749.
>Beyond any shadow of a doubt.
-
1750.
>He's not a pony, so maybe he won't be angry.
-
1751.
>He might not...
-
1752.
>reject...
-
1753.
>No, no, not again!
-
1754.
>It's been so long!
-
1755.
>Sadness.
-
1756.
>Anger!
-
1757.
>You focus on it and let it focus you.
-
1758.
>All the ponies "great" and small make way for you.
-
1759.
>They had damn well better!
-
1760.
>All the way to the castle.
-
1761.
-
1762.
-
1763.
Post 30
-
1764.
-
1765.
>You are anon
-
1766.
>And Trixie is very, very angry.
-
1767.
>Not at you, thank goodness,
-
1768.
>but you can see right through her fauxequanimity.
-
1769.
>Not that she pretended out there.
-
1770.
>Her eyes had hardened and her stride lengthened unexpectedly.
-
1771.
>You had been pressed to keep up,
-
1772.
>until she noticed you lagging and slowed.
-
1773.
>Once you reached the castle you had been shown to your chambers.
-
1774.
>The guards said you would be summoned a little after sunset.
-
1775.
>Until then, you had the run of the place.
-
1776.
>The doors close and her demeanor changes.
-
1777.
>Like flipping a switch.
-
1778.
>"Trixie, what's wrong?"
-
1779.
>She looks at you.
-
1780.
>Calculatingly.
-
1781.
>Trying to decide how much to say.
-
1782.
>Then she smiles.
-
1783.
>It doesn't reach her eyes.
-
1784.
>"I'm thinking about meeting the princesses."
-
1785.
>Like hell, but it's best not to pry when she's like this.
-
1786.
>"There're only a few hours until sunset."
-
1787.
>"We should bathe, and make ourselves presentable."
-
1788.
-
1789.
>You are Trixie
-
1790.
>lying on a massage table in the Royal Spa.
-
1791.
>The masseuse was good, but not as good as Anon.
-
1792.
>Fingers really were better than hooves at this.
-
1793.
>It's just as well;
-
1794.
>you can't focus on it anyway.
-
1795.
>Images of Fleur's smirking wink dance in your mind.
-
1796.
>What if she asked him to herd with her?
-
1797.
>No, she wouldn't do that.
-
1798.
>She might try to use him as a cooler, though.
-
1799.
>He was famous, and exotic, and new.
-
1800.
>Just the kind of thing Fleur would want as an accessory.
-
1801.
>And you don't like to share.
-
1802.
>Suddenly, behind your closed eyes:
-
1803.
>Anon rutting Fleur.
-
1804.
>Sucking her horn.
-
1805.
>You grimmace,
-
1806.
>the masseuse's touch lightens.
-
1807.
>You love him.
-
1808.
>You love him,
-
1809.
>By Celestia you love him.
-
1810.
>And now that you know, you have to say something.
-
1811.
>You may be a monogamist,
-
1812.
>but that didn't mean you were heartless.
-
1813.
>Despite what some ponies would say.
-
1814.
>You want him to love you too.
-
1815.
>And how can he love you, if he doesn't know you?
-
1816.
>He'll probably leave after he finds out what a freak you are.
-
1817.
>But you need this show.
-
1818.
>You'll tell him after.
-
1819.
>Tears well up unbidden,
-
1820.
>But they are small, and easily hidden.
-
1821.
-
1822.
-
1823.
Post 31
-
1824.
-
1825.
>You are Anon
-
1826.
>And it's almost sunset.
-
1827.
>Trixie takes you to the window and points
-
1828.
>"See, Anon? Those are the princesses."
-
1829.
>"Celestia is the white pony, the other is Luna, her sister."
-
1830.
>"They're bigger th..."
-
1831.
>"Shhh." She chided.
-
1832.
>"Remember what I told you? About our sun and moon?"
-
1833.
>You nod
-
1834.
>This you had to see.
-
1835.
>She leans against you and whispers
-
1836.
>"Watch."
-
1837.
>The larger one's horn glowed brighter than any you'd seen.
-
1838.
>And the sun dipped.
-
1839.
>"That's impossible!"
-
1840.
>"I told you so. Keep watching."
-
1841.
>After the sun sank below the horizon, it was the other pony's turn.
-
1842.
>Her horn flared and the moon rose.
-
1843.
>"But..."
-
1844.
>She smirked and nipped your arm
-
1845.
>"Now what did the Great and Powerful Trixie tell you?"
-
1846.
>"But..."
-
1847.
>"Even if they did move it, we wouldn't see it had moved for... a few minutes!"
-
1848.
>"That doesn't make any sense Anon."
-
1849.
>"But..."
-
1850.
>"Magic."
-
1851.
>"But..."
-
1852.
>"Magic."
-
1853.
>What else could it be?
-
1854.
>"Magic." you finally agree.
-
1855.
-
1856.
>You are Anon,
-
1857.
>following guards through the palace.
-
1858.
>Trixie is beside you,
-
1859.
>leaning ever so lightly in to you as you walk.
-
1860.
>She hasn't left your side since your bath.
-
1861.
>After watching the day change to night
-
1862.
>She pillowed her head on your lap and talked.
-
1863.
>You could tell something was off, but she wouldn't say what.
-
1864.
>Eventually the guards came, and she switched personalities again.
-
1865.
>But she still wouldn't leave your side.
-
1866.
>It was actually frightening.
-
1867.
>Were the princesses tyrants?
-
1868.
>They didn't *look* all that bad,
-
1869.
>but looks could be deceiving.
-
1870.
>And there was no shortage of rumors about Luna.
-
1871.
>Suddenly, you stop at huge ornate double doors.
-
1872.
>A guard announces your arrival,
-
1873.
>and they swing slowly open.
-
1874.
-
1875.
-
1876.
Post 32
-
1877.
-
1878.
>You are anon.
-
1879.
>The doors opened on a fairytale room.
-
1880.
>Banners, stained glass, tall as the sky itself.
-
1881.
>Polished marble floors, red carpet,
-
1882.
>and a throne against the far wall.
-
1883.
>Both princesses waiting for you.
-
1884.
>Trixie took the lead.
-
1885.
>You followed, stopping when she did, bowing when she did,
-
1886.
>and let her do the talking.
-
1887.
>It seems your little pony had some history with the princesses:
-
1888.
>a former pupil at the royal school.
-
1889.
>Celestia seemed happy things turned out well for her.
-
1890.
>They also wanted to know everything about you.
-
1891.
>Who you were, where you came from, how you had arrived.
-
1892.
>They were surprisingly unconcerned you didn't know,
-
1893.
>but were angry to learn how you'd met.
-
1894.
>She promised to correct the Diamond Dogs.
-
1895.
>Princess Celestia was vague about what she meant, but
-
1896.
>she moves stars, united Equestria and held power for over a millennium.
-
1897.
>The thought of her true might,
-
1898.
>and what she could do if she chose made you shudder.
-
1899.
>The sisters set a date for the show:
-
1900.
>one week hence!
-
1901.
>Then dismissed you.
-
1902.
>A long time to wait,
-
1903.
>not long to practice.
-
1904.
>It didn't help that Trixie was distracted.
-
1905.
>She hid it well; you doubt any of the ponies picked up on it.
-
1906.
>But you knew her, and it hurt she wouldn't confide in you.
-
1907.
>Especially when was so much needier than usual.
-
1908.
>She never left you alone.
-
1909.
>Once, when you were out, you passed a flower cart.
-
1910.
>Trixie lingered a moment and asked:
-
1911.
>"Isn't that blue one pretty?"
-
1912.
>The florist's eyes widened, and gave you both a funny look.
-
1913.
>It really was a pretty flower.
-
1914.
>The same powder blue as Trixie's coat.
-
1915.
>You were about to say so when she laughed
-
1916.
>nervously
-
1917.
>and trotted on.
-
1918.
>Flower pony watched you go, looking a bit shocked.
-
1919.
>But the week did pass.
-
1920.
>Now here you are sitting backstage,
-
1921.
>about to give the show of your life.
-
1922.
>Trixie nuzzles behind your ear
-
1923.
>"Whatever happens after this Anon, this is our show tonight."
-
1924.
>Another nuzzle, and more leaning.
-
1925.
>"Forever and always, yours and mine."
-
1926.
>Is she crying?
-
1927.
>You're on!
-
1928.
-
1929.
-
1930.
Post 33
-
1931.
-
1932.
>You are Trixie,
-
1933.
>and it's time.
-
1934.
>The night's been wonderful:
-
1935.
>an incredible show, and a fabulous party.
-
1936.
>Mingling with the haut monde,
-
1937.
>with attention and admiration from the Princesses themselves!
-
1938.
>Of course you always knew it was your due,
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1939.
>but now the other ponies couldn't deny it!
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1940.
>Then she had come.
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1941.
>Stepping from the woodwork,
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1942.
>like a stupid, gangly, pink-haired termite!
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1943.
>Actually leaning against your stallion!
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1944.
>Nuzzling him!
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1945.
>In front of everyone!
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1946.
>You're the lead mare in your herd.
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1947.
>The only mare.
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1948.
>True, you and Anon weren't officially a herd.
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1949.
>You'd never given him a flower, after all.
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1950.
>But she doesn't know that.
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1951.
>How dare she not come to you for permission to court Anon!
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1952.
>Not that you would have given it.
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1953.
>Of course you didn't let it show.
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1954.
>You are the Great and Powerful Trixie!
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1955.
>You master your feelings, not the other way around.
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1956.
>But it hurt.
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1957.
>A lot.
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1958.
>So when the princesses retired,
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1959.
>you captured Anon's attention with a word,
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1960.
>guided him away with your touch,
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1961.
>and returned to your chambers straight away.
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1962.
>Making *damn* sure she saw it.
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1963.
>All but laughing at the look on her face when Anon told her "goodnight,"
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1964.
>and left with you.
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1965.
>Now here you were, behind closed doors.
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1966.
>It's time.
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1967.
>Celestia help you.
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1968.
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1969.
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1970.
Post 34
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1971.
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1972.
>You are Trixie
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1973.
>sitting with Anon.
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1974.
>He knows something is coming.
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1975.
>But not this, how could he?
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1976.
>"I love you, Anon."
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1977.
>"I love you too Trixie."
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1978.
>You blink
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1979.
>Just like that?
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1980.
>"You're not surprised?"
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1981.
>"Is this what all the matter's been?"
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1982.
>"Didn't you know I felt the same, Trixie?"
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1983.
>Such joy!
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1984.
>Such warmth!
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1985.
>Threatening to wash over and carry you away.
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1986.
>"Of course I knew, doofus."
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1987.
>He laughs
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1988.
>"My incredible little pony really didn't know?"
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1989.
>Pressure swelling in your chest.
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1990.
>It's almost painful.
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1991.
>Surely your heart will burst?
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1992.
>He moves to hug you,
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1993.
>but you stop him with a forehoof on his chest.
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1994.
>There's more, and he must know.
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1995.
>"But there's something about me you need to know."
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1996.
>"Something disgusting, and vile, and selfish."
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1997.
>"Something..."
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1998.
>You won't let yourself cry yet!
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1999.
>That comes later.
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2000.
>When you're alone again.
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2001.
>This is the hardest thing you've ever done.
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2002.
>But love, true love, demands honesty,
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2003.
>and just maybe,
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2004.
>love will demand you let him go.
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2005.
>You breathe.
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2006.
>"I'm a monogamist."
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2007.
>Your ears fold back despite yourself.
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2008.
>Your eyes cast themselves to the floor.
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2009.
>"I love you, Anon. With all my heart and soul."
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2010.
>"I want to be with you more than anything. But I can't share you."
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2011.
>"I can't."
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2012.
>"Seeing you with Fleur..."
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2013.
>"I... I just can't."
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2014.
>"I understand if you don't want somepony like me."
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2015.
>"Understand if you... hate me, for being so selfish."
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2016.
>"But I want you to love me."
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2017.
>"To know me. All of me, so you have to know this too."
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2018.
>There.
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2019.
>You've done it.
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2020.
>Whatever happens next, you've done what love required,
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2021.
>and bared your soul to this one, special someone.
-
2022.
>Moments pass.
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2023.
>Whole eternities,
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2024.
>but the expected castigation never comes.
-
2025.
>Instead he leans in and hugs you,
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2026.
>squeezing you against his chest.
-
2027.
>"I don't want anypony but you."
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2028.
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2029.
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2030.
Post 35
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2031.
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2032.
>You are Anon,
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2033.
>Holding your very special somepony.
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2034.
>Her sobs racking both your bodies.
-
2035.
>A kiss on her neck.
-
2036.
>A whisper in her ear:
-
2037.
>"I love you, Trixie."
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2038.
>"All of you, and only you."
-
2039.
>You look down:
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2040.
>tears,
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2041.
>hot and round
-
2042.
>running down her face
-
2043.
>Her eyes, so soft,
-
2044.
>and so very, very large.
-
2045.
>"Don't leave me, Anon."
-
2046.
>"Please, please don't ever leave me."
-
2047.
>You kiss away her tears, and hold her close.
-
2048.
>"I never will."
-
2049.
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2050.
>And they lived a life of love.
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2051.
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2052.
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2053.
>
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2054.
>
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>
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2056.
>
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2057.
>
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>
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2059.
>
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2060.
>
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2061.
>
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2062.
>
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2063.
>
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2064.
>
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2065.
>
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2066.
>
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2067.
>
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2068.
>
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2069.
>
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2070.
>
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2071.
Some people asked that I write a lewd scene for these two. It seemed like fun, but didn't fit anywhere in the story, so, here it is, after the end. Think of it as a "deleted scene", and not part of the tale. I hope you enjoy it, too.
-
2072.
-
2073.
>You are anon.
-
2074.
>Cuddling with your special somepony by the fire.
-
2075.
>The sky, clear and cold above.
-
2076.
>It's spring and you and Trixie are back on the road.
-
2077.
>She's been acting funny lately.
-
2078.
>Very touchy.
-
2079.
>Very friendly with you,
-
2080.
>very snippy with everypony else.
-
2081.
>She wants massages every night,
-
2082.
>so, when she kissed you, and asked for one,
-
2083.
>you thought nothing of it.
-
2084.
>She hopped up on the wagon-ledge,
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2085.
>"So you're at the just the right level" she'd said.
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2086.
>And set her left hind leg on your shoulder.
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2087.
>you tilt your head and kiss the inside of her hock.
-
2088.
>Gently taking her leg in your hands and holding it up, off your shoulder,
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2089.
>then kissing your way down her cannon.
-
2090.
>Stopping at her fetlock you look sideways;
-
2091.
>She's watching you, a smug little smile playing on her lips.
-
2092.
>"Keep going Anonymous. Trixie did not say to stop."
-
2093.
>You lean back against a stone and set her hoof on your chest.
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2094.
>Your fingertips follow the curve of her leg,
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2095.
>up and down it's length,
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2096.
>as your tongue finds her coronet.
-
2097.
>Kisses follow, and her eyes close.
-
2098.
>You gently reach to her thigh,
-
2099.
>kneading the firm muscle between fingers and thumb.
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2100.
>Then pinching gently from hock to fetlock,
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2101.
>and down to her hoof.
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2102.
>Pressing under it with your thumbs,
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2103.
>her frog flexing beneath your touch.
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2104.
>"Mmmmmm Anon."
-
2105.
>She raises her other leg and rests it on your shoulder too.
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2106.
>You look up;
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2107.
>she's leaned back on the wagon's ledge,
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2108.
>forehooves extended and touching the overhang,
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2109.
>eyes closed.
-
2110.
-
2111.
>"Anon, do your mares have any special times?"
-
2112.
>"What do you mean, Tixie?"
-
2113.
>She smiles and stares right in your eyes.
-
2114.
>"Heat, Anon. Do human mares go in to heat?"
-
2115.
>She leans down, mouth open just a bit, and sniffs you.
-
2116.
>"Not really, Great and Sexy Trixie"
-
2117.
>She smiles and bites her lip.
-
2118.
>"We do."
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2119.
>She trails her forehoof along your arm
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2120.
>"In fact..."
-
2121.
>little circles against your chest
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2122.
>"I am right now."
-
2123.
>"You're my very special somepony, Anon,"
-
2124.
>"and you're also my servant, little human."
-
2125.
>"Do you know what that means?"
-
2126.
>You think so
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2127.
>You *hope* so
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2128.
>You tilt your face to kiss her
-
2129.
>She pulls back at the last moment with another smile
-
2130.
>"Kisses are nice, Anon,"
-
2131.
>"but I want to do something else."
-
2132.
>She slides her hind legs from your shoulders and leans further in.
-
2133.
>Sitting on the wagon, legs spread, her marehood just at eye level.
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2134.
>She nuzzles you, nips your ear and whispers:
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2135.
>"Touch my horn."
-
2136.
>Trixie takes your hands in her hooves,
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2137.
>guides them to her face.
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2138.
>"The base first, sweety. Use those soft little fingers."
-
2139.
>She gasps a little as you trace circles around it
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2140.
>A strange feeling on the side of your face,
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2141.
>like static electricity.
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2142.
>She leans against you more firmly as her breath deepens.
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2143.
>"Mmmmmmmm good boy."
-
2144.
>She rubs your back
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2145.
>"Now...Oh!"
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2146.
>Her words catch in her throat.
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2147.
>You knew what she wanted, and began to stroke before she finished her sentence.
-
2148.
>Her breathing grows faster and deeper,
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2149.
>and her horn glows brighter, its light reflecting off the wagon.
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2150.
>"Suck my horn, Anon."
-
2151.
>"Do it now!"
-
2152.
-
2153.
>Your mouth opens, and you carefully guide her past your lips,
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2154.
>and close them around her tip, sliding along her shaft.
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2155.
>She actually tastes like blueberries.
-
2156.
>And whipped cream.
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2157.
>While you suckle, her muzzle finds it's way to your crotch.
-
2158.
>She nuzzles and licks at your pants,
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2159.
>little moans emerging now and then.
-
2160.
>"Anon, your dick belongs to me."
-
2161.
>"Give it to me. Now."
-
2162.
>Your hand slides down her shaft, around the back of her ear,
-
2163.
>curves along her jaw, and finally comes to your belt.
-
2164.
>She licks and nibbles at your fingers as they work the fasteners.
-
2165.
>Suddenly the blueberry and whipped cream flavor grows stronger,
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2166.
>Your trousers glow pink, and slide down your legs.
-
2167.
>Trixie takes you eagerly inside her mouth.
-
2168.
>Her nimble equine tongue turning circles and loops,
-
2169.
>even able to wrap itself completely around you.
-
2170.
>Your own ministrations flag as waves of pleasure wash over you.
-
2171.
>But only for a moment:
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2172.
>There's no way you're letting your little pony do all the work!
-
2173.
>Back down on her, pressing your own tongue against her horn.
-
2174.
>Copying her own motions as closely as you can.
-
2175.
>Little whinneys and moans escaping around your cock.
-
2176.
>She lays her ears back and forces herself down
-
2177.
>Taking you as deeply as she can
-
2178.
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2179.
>All the way in, and holding you there.
-
2180.
>Her tongue emerging and licking between your legs
-
2181.
>then back in and around your shaft again,
-
2182.
>actually rubbing you inside her mouth.
-
2183.
>You take her out and purse your lips against her horn
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2184.
>running your head up and down its length,
-
2185.
>It's blazing now.
-
2186.
>bright pink with little jets and sparks flying off now again.
-
2187.
>The feeling of static is warm and contagious,
-
2188.
>filling you with erotic energy.
-
2189.
>"Anon! I..!"
-
2190.
>You quickly pop her back in your mouth,
-
2191.
>taking in as much as you can.
-
2192.
>"Anon!"
-
2193.
>An odd heat fills your mouth as she convulses and grunts in your lap.
-
2194.
>A taste, overwhelmingly like blueberries, and whiped cream.
-
2195.
>With a little extra.
-
2196.
>In fact, it tastes just like...
-
2197.
>"Oh, Anon, I'm sorry. Right in your mouth, you didn't deserve that!"
-
2198.
>It's cute when she switches, you think to yourself.
-
2199.
>You purse your lips tightly and slide her out,
-
2200.
>letting your tongue find every crease in her spiral groove on the way.
-
2201.
>"It's fine Trixie. In fact it tastes just like Poprocks."
-
2202.
>"Blueberry and whipped cream Poprocks."
-
2203.
>"What are Poprocks?"
-
2204.
>"They're a kind of candy we have back on Earth."
-
2205.
>She looks at you strangely and lets out a languid laugh.
-
2206.
>"Somehow, I'm not surprised."
-
2207.
>"But we're not finished, little servant."
-
2208.
-
2209.
>She bites your hair and gently pulls you up in to the wagon.
-
2210.
>Trixie rolls over on the floor,
-
2211.
>sweeping the bedding up with her forelegs and pillows her head on it.
-
2212.
>She looks back: ass up, tail raised, hips swaying and bites her lip.
-
2213.
>"Make me whinney like a little filly, Anon."
-
2214.
>You pounce on her, sliding your hands up her back.
-
2215.
>Balling her mane in your fist and jerking.
-
2216.
>She whinneys.
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2217.
>Fuck me right now, Anon! Prove you're worthy of me!"
-
2218.
>You guide yourself inside her with your other hand.
-
2219.
>She's... wet would be an understatement.
-
2220.
>Sopping, would almost be enough to describe it.
-
2221.
>You slide in with no resistance.
-
2222.
>She moans loudly and her marehood convulses around you.
-
2223.
>It grips you like a vice, but is too slick to hold.
-
2224.
>Your thrusts slip in and out; balls deep, then just the tip.
-
2225.
>Her ponut swollen and sensitive,
-
2226.
>pressing against your stomach and drawing a fresh pony groan with each thrust.
-
2227.
>Her flanks begin to quiver
-
2228.
>She burries her face in the blankets
-
2229.
>Her ponytang clenches and holds,
-
2230.
>and she suddenly goes stiff and silent.
-
2231.
>Collapsing moments later.
-
2232.
>Time to get yours.
-
2233.
>She's lying now flat on the bed, and you continue to ride her.
-
2234.
>Thrusting into her, not bothering to pace yourself.
-
2235.
>Letting the sensations wash over you.
-
2236.
>Finally erupting inside her and crashing down to her flower-scented mane.
-
2237.
-
2238.
>After some moments you both rise to clean yourselves.
-
2239.
>Staring up in the cold night air, savoring your lingering pleasure.
-
2240.
>She leans against you.
-
2241.
>"Estrus lasts about a week, Anon."
-
2242.
>"Just so you know."
-
2243.
>Then she steps back in the wagon and begins straightening the bedding.
-
2244.
>The stars shine down on you.
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2245.
>This is going to be one hell of a week.
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2246.
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Note: This is the original draft of this story, but not the best one. Another version, expanded, and rewritten in prose can be found here:
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and here:
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I hope you'll check it out. It's much better than this one.
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