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/NMP/ /Completed/ The First One: A Neolithic Romance

By Appreciationproject
Created: 2021-07-16 21:31:33
Updated: 2022-08-01 01:42:18
Expiry: Never

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    Got idea for this from recent thread about /mlp/ pantheon and the First One
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  3. 3.
    >Be grug
  4. 4.
    >Walk forest
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    >Carry sharp stick
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    >Is cold
  7. 7.
    >Is wet
  8. 8.
    >Is early
  9. 9.
    >grugette chase grug away
  10. 10.
    >Say bring eat
  11. 11.
    >Stupid grugette
  12. 12.
    >grug say no
  13. 13.
    >grug say grugette go, bring fruits
  14. 14.
    >grugette say no snu snu
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    >Stupid grugette
  16. 16.
    >Wants too much
  17. 17.
    >Whines too much
  18. 18.
    >Smells
  19. 19.
    >But grug smells worse!
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    >Smile
  21. 21.
    >grug go to clearing, see—
  22. 22.
    >grug see four hooves!
  23. 23.
    >Four hooves eat grass
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    >Four hooves—
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    >grug never seen such four hooves!
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    >grug should hunt, but four hooves is—
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    >Four hooves is so nice!
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    >Strong, nice back, nice butt
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    >Tail
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    >Grug crouch, grug needs to get closer
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    >Tail swish-swish
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    >Oh… Oh!
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    >Grug never seen something so nice!
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    >Grug MUST get closer.
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    >Grug crawls closer, but Grug smells worse than grugette.
  36. 36.
    >Four hooves raises head. She smells Grug!
  37. 37.
    >Four hooves bolts.
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    >Grug drops the sharp stick.
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    >No four hooves, wait! Grug didn’t want to hurt you!
  40. 40.
    >Grug runs after her. But Four hooves is faster.
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    >She runs away.
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    >But Grug doesn’t give up. Grug jogs. Grug wants to see the tail go swish.
  43. 43.
    >Oh, Four hooves! There she is!
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    >No! Four hooves bolts again.
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    > Grug jogs, then walks, then jogs again. It’s alright.
  46. 46.
    >Four Hooves is faster than Grug.
  47. 47.
    >But Grug can jog longer.
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    >Both Grug and Four Hooves have one mouth. But she needs to feed four legs with one mouth, Grug only needs to feed two.
  49. 49.
    >Two is fewer than four.
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    >Hmm, Grug never ever thought about that before…
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    >Huge light in the sky goes up. Grug walks.
  52. 52.
    >Huge light hangs in the center of the sky. Grug walks. Reads tracks.
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    >Here she is! Four hooves, stop! Grug doesn’t want to hurt you.
  54. 54.
    >She’s tired. Breathes heavely. Scared. Poor four hooves. Grug doesn’t want to hurt pretty.
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  57. 57.
    >Four Hooves looks at Grug, then looks at Grug’s crotch.
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    >Erm… Yes, Little Grug likes Four Hooves too.
  59. 59.
    >She turns around.
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    >No, don’t ru—
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    >Oh, she lifts her tail.
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    >Grug just stands here and looks. Grug want’s to go closer, but is afraid to spook her.
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    >She squats a little.
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    >Grug approaches her and carefully places his hands on her flanks.
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    >Her coat is so nice. Smells very pleasant. So much better than grugette.
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    >Grug mounts her. Little Grug enters the—
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    >Oh, that’s beautiful! Everything about her is beautiful! Beautiful! Grug—
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    >No! You.
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    >You have never felt anything like this. You have never seen anything that beautiful.
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    >You rut her, like never rutted anyone before.
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    >Beautiful, she is beautiful! Gorgeous! You never ever thought that there is such a word, that there are so many words to describe something so utterly inexpressible!
  72. 72.
    >You look at her. You caress her back and her sides.
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    >You cum in her. She splashes you with something thick and yellow.
  74. 74.
    >You pull out.
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    “Thank. Thank… you!”
  76. 76.
    >She snorts and walks away. Then bolts again.
  77. 77.
    >You look after her go, wondering, if you will ever meet her again…
  78. 78.
    >Oh no! From the bushes! The Big Fangs! It goes after her!
  79. 79.
    >You run after it. The Big Fangs is dangerous and strong but you don’t care!
  80. 80.
    >You see a rock. The sharp rock. You grab it and go after the Big Fangs.
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    >It snarls and roars. It jumps at you. You two roll in the grass, interlinked in a deadly embrace.
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    >Your teeth aren’t that sharp, but you tear it’s throat with you’r rock.
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    >It’s dead. You look at it and spit on it.
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    >You are Grug the Victor!
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    >Go, Four Hooves! May the Huge Light keep you safe! Because… Because why else would it be there, so high, so bright, giving light to everyone?
  86. 86.
    >You look at Big Fangs and take the rock again…
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    ***
  90. 90.
    >You return to your camp, Big Fangs’ carcass atop your shoulders.
  91. 91.
    >Grugette growls something and tries to grab meat.
  92. 92.
    >You push her away.
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    “Shut up, you fucking smelly bitch! I am Grug the Victor! You will eat after I will sate my hunger!”
  94. 94.
    >She snarls, but you show her your fist.
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    >Small grugs and grugettes running around become quiet and bundle together at a respectful distance from you.
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    >You slice the meat with your sharp rock. You eat it. And while you eat, you think.
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    >Four Hooves, the beautiful four hooves. After you have met her you aren’t feeling quite yourself.
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    >She made you feel. Made you think. Made you admire…
  99. 99.
    >You look up, in the sky. Why haven’t you did this ever before?
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    >The Medium Light hangs up there, it’s also beautiful. Not exactly like Four Legs, but in a different way.
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    >You look at sobbing grugette at your feet and feel a bit angry. But also sad. You throw her some meat.
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    >Have you became kind?
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    >What is a kindness in a world where everything tries to kill everything? What is the purpose?
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    >The black sky is lit with small dots of light. What is the purpose?
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    >Why are so many beautiful things around you?
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    >Maybe… Maybe, if that small dots of light are shining up there, it means that someone needs it?
  107. 107.
    >The Four Hooves… She probably did strange things to you, while you were doing her.
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    >Strange, but wonderful ones, it seems.
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    >You need to…
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    >You need to tell your small grugs about that!
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    >If you have been able to realize all that after you met Four Hooves, maybe if they could met their Four Hooves, they will become en-ligh-te-ned as well?
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    >But they are stupid and could forget they need to meet Four Hooves…
  113. 113.
    >You raise up. You take your rock and approach the cave.
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    >Yeah, that cave wall would do.
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    “Small grugs, go here.”
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    >They obey.
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    >You need to tell your small grugs about Four Hooves!
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    >You raise your rock up and strike the cave wall.
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    >You are Grug who met Four Hooves! Grug the Victor! Grug the Enlightened!
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    >The First One!
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