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/NMP/ /Completed/ The First One: A Neolithic Romance
By AppreciationprojectCreated: 2021-07-16 21:31:33
Updated: 2022-08-01 01:42:18
Expiry: Never
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Got idea for this from recent thread about /mlp/ pantheon and the First One
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>Be grug
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>Walk forest
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>Carry sharp stick
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>Is cold
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>Is wet
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>Is early
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>grugette chase grug away
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>Say bring eat
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>Stupid grugette
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>grug say no
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>grug say grugette go, bring fruits
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>grugette say no snu snu
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>Stupid grugette
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>Wants too much
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>Whines too much
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>Smells
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>But grug smells worse!
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>Smile
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>grug go to clearing, see—
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>grug see four hooves!
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>Four hooves eat grass
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>Four hooves—
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>grug never seen such four hooves!
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>grug should hunt, but four hooves is—
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>Four hooves is so nice!
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>Strong, nice back, nice butt
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>Tail
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>Grug crouch, grug needs to get closer
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>Tail swish-swish
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>Oh… Oh!
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>Grug never seen something so nice!
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>Grug MUST get closer.
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>Grug crawls closer, but Grug smells worse than grugette.
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>Four hooves raises head. She smells Grug!
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>Four hooves bolts.
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>Grug drops the sharp stick.
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>No four hooves, wait! Grug didn’t want to hurt you!
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>Grug runs after her. But Four hooves is faster.
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>She runs away.
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>But Grug doesn’t give up. Grug jogs. Grug wants to see the tail go swish.
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>Oh, Four hooves! There she is!
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>No! Four hooves bolts again.
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> Grug jogs, then walks, then jogs again. It’s alright.
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>Four Hooves is faster than Grug.
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>But Grug can jog longer.
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>Both Grug and Four Hooves have one mouth. But she needs to feed four legs with one mouth, Grug only needs to feed two.
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>Two is fewer than four.
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>Hmm, Grug never ever thought about that before…
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>Huge light in the sky goes up. Grug walks.
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>Huge light hangs in the center of the sky. Grug walks. Reads tracks.
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>Here she is! Four hooves, stop! Grug doesn’t want to hurt you.
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>She’s tired. Breathes heavely. Scared. Poor four hooves. Grug doesn’t want to hurt pretty.
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>Four Hooves looks at Grug, then looks at Grug’s crotch.
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>Erm… Yes, Little Grug likes Four Hooves too.
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>She turns around.
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>No, don’t ru—
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>Oh, she lifts her tail.
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>Grug just stands here and looks. Grug want’s to go closer, but is afraid to spook her.
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>She squats a little.
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>Grug approaches her and carefully places his hands on her flanks.
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>Her coat is so nice. Smells very pleasant. So much better than grugette.
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>Grug mounts her. Little Grug enters the—
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>Oh, that’s beautiful! Everything about her is beautiful! Beautiful! Grug—
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>No! You.
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>You have never felt anything like this. You have never seen anything that beautiful.
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>You rut her, like never rutted anyone before.
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>Beautiful, she is beautiful! Gorgeous! You never ever thought that there is such a word, that there are so many words to describe something so utterly inexpressible!
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>You look at her. You caress her back and her sides.
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>You cum in her. She splashes you with something thick and yellow.
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>You pull out.
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“Thank. Thank… you!”
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>She snorts and walks away. Then bolts again.
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>You look after her go, wondering, if you will ever meet her again…
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>Oh no! From the bushes! The Big Fangs! It goes after her!
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>You run after it. The Big Fangs is dangerous and strong but you don’t care!
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>You see a rock. The sharp rock. You grab it and go after the Big Fangs.
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>It snarls and roars. It jumps at you. You two roll in the grass, interlinked in a deadly embrace.
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>Your teeth aren’t that sharp, but you tear it’s throat with you’r rock.
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>It’s dead. You look at it and spit on it.
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>You are Grug the Victor!
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>Go, Four Hooves! May the Huge Light keep you safe! Because… Because why else would it be there, so high, so bright, giving light to everyone?
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>You look at Big Fangs and take the rock again…
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***
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>You return to your camp, Big Fangs’ carcass atop your shoulders.
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>Grugette growls something and tries to grab meat.
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>You push her away.
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“Shut up, you fucking smelly bitch! I am Grug the Victor! You will eat after I will sate my hunger!”
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>She snarls, but you show her your fist.
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>Small grugs and grugettes running around become quiet and bundle together at a respectful distance from you.
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>You slice the meat with your sharp rock. You eat it. And while you eat, you think.
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>Four Hooves, the beautiful four hooves. After you have met her you aren’t feeling quite yourself.
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>She made you feel. Made you think. Made you admire…
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>You look up, in the sky. Why haven’t you did this ever before?
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>The Medium Light hangs up there, it’s also beautiful. Not exactly like Four Legs, but in a different way.
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>You look at sobbing grugette at your feet and feel a bit angry. But also sad. You throw her some meat.
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>Have you became kind?
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>What is a kindness in a world where everything tries to kill everything? What is the purpose?
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>The black sky is lit with small dots of light. What is the purpose?
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>Why are so many beautiful things around you?
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>Maybe… Maybe, if that small dots of light are shining up there, it means that someone needs it?
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>The Four Hooves… She probably did strange things to you, while you were doing her.
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>Strange, but wonderful ones, it seems.
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>You need to…
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>You need to tell your small grugs about that!
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>If you have been able to realize all that after you met Four Hooves, maybe if they could met their Four Hooves, they will become en-ligh-te-ned as well?
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>But they are stupid and could forget they need to meet Four Hooves…
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>You raise up. You take your rock and approach the cave.
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>Yeah, that cave wall would do.
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“Small grugs, go here.”
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>They obey.
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>You need to tell your small grugs about Four Hooves!
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>You raise your rock up and strike the cave wall.
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>You are Grug who met Four Hooves! Grug the Victor! Grug the Enlightened!
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>The First One!
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