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/NMP/ /Completed/ The First One: A Neolithic Romance

By Appreciationproject
Created: 2021-07-16 21:31:33
Updated: 2022-08-01 01:42:18
Expiry: Never

  1. Got idea for this from recent thread about /mlp/ pantheon and the First One
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  3. >Be grug
  4. >Walk forest
  5. >Carry sharp stick
  6. >Is cold
  7. >Is wet
  8. >Is early
  9. >grugette chase grug away
  10. >Say bring eat
  11. >Stupid grugette
  12. >grug say no
  13. >grug say grugette go, bring fruits
  14. >grugette say no snu snu
  15. >Stupid grugette
  16. >Wants too much
  17. >Whines too much
  18. >Smells
  19. >But grug smells worse!
  20. >Smile
  21. >grug go to clearing, see—
  22. >grug see four hooves!
  23. >Four hooves eat grass
  24. >Four hooves—
  25. >grug never seen such four hooves!
  26. >grug should hunt, but four hooves is—
  27. >Four hooves is so nice!
  28. >Strong, nice back, nice butt
  29. >Tail
  30. >Grug crouch, grug needs to get closer
  31. >Tail swish-swish
  32. >Oh… Oh!
  33. >Grug never seen something so nice!
  34. >Grug MUST get closer.
  35. >Grug crawls closer, but Grug smells worse than grugette.
  36. >Four hooves raises head. She smells Grug!
  37. >Four hooves bolts.
  38. >Grug drops the sharp stick.
  39. >No four hooves, wait! Grug didn’t want to hurt you!
  40. >Grug runs after her. But Four hooves is faster.
  41. >She runs away.
  42. >But Grug doesn’t give up. Grug jogs. Grug wants to see the tail go swish.
  43. >Oh, Four hooves! There she is!
  44. >No! Four hooves bolts again.
  45. > Grug jogs, then walks, then jogs again. It’s alright.
  46. >Four Hooves is faster than Grug.
  47. >But Grug can jog longer.
  48. >Both Grug and Four Hooves have one mouth. But she needs to feed four legs with one mouth, Grug only needs to feed two.
  49. >Two is fewer than four.
  50. >Hmm, Grug never ever thought about that before…
  51. >Huge light in the sky goes up. Grug walks.
  52. >Huge light hangs in the center of the sky. Grug walks. Reads tracks.
  53. >Here she is! Four hooves, stop! Grug doesn’t want to hurt you.
  54. >She’s tired. Breathes heavely. Scared. Poor four hooves. Grug doesn’t want to hurt pretty.
  55.  
  56.  
  57. >Four Hooves looks at Grug, then looks at Grug’s crotch.
  58. >Erm… Yes, Little Grug likes Four Hooves too.
  59. >She turns around.
  60. >No, don’t ru—
  61. >Oh, she lifts her tail.
  62. >Grug just stands here and looks. Grug want’s to go closer, but is afraid to spook her.
  63. >She squats a little.
  64. >Grug approaches her and carefully places his hands on her flanks.
  65. >Her coat is so nice. Smells very pleasant. So much better than grugette.
  66. >Grug mounts her. Little Grug enters the—
  67. >Oh, that’s beautiful! Everything about her is beautiful! Beautiful! Grug—
  68. >No! You.
  69. >You have never felt anything like this. You have never seen anything that beautiful.
  70. >You rut her, like never rutted anyone before.
  71. >Beautiful, she is beautiful! Gorgeous! You never ever thought that there is such a word, that there are so many words to describe something so utterly inexpressible!
  72. >You look at her. You caress her back and her sides.
  73. >You cum in her. She splashes you with something thick and yellow.
  74. >You pull out.
  75. “Thank. Thank… you!”
  76. >She snorts and walks away. Then bolts again.
  77. >You look after her go, wondering, if you will ever meet her again…
  78. >Oh no! From the bushes! The Big Fangs! It goes after her!
  79. >You run after it. The Big Fangs is dangerous and strong but you don’t care!
  80. >You see a rock. The sharp rock. You grab it and go after the Big Fangs.
  81. >It snarls and roars. It jumps at you. You two roll in the grass, interlinked in a deadly embrace.
  82. >Your teeth aren’t that sharp, but you tear it’s throat with you’r rock.
  83. >It’s dead. You look at it and spit on it.
  84. >You are Grug the Victor!
  85. >Go, Four Hooves! May the Huge Light keep you safe! Because… Because why else would it be there, so high, so bright, giving light to everyone?
  86. >You look at Big Fangs and take the rock again…
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  89. ***
  90. >You return to your camp, Big Fangs’ carcass atop your shoulders.
  91. >Grugette growls something and tries to grab meat.
  92. >You push her away.
  93. “Shut up, you fucking smelly bitch! I am Grug the Victor! You will eat after I will sate my hunger!”
  94. >She snarls, but you show her your fist.
  95. >Small grugs and grugettes running around become quiet and bundle together at a respectful distance from you.
  96. >You slice the meat with your sharp rock. You eat it. And while you eat, you think.
  97. >Four Hooves, the beautiful four hooves. After you have met her you aren’t feeling quite yourself.
  98. >She made you feel. Made you think. Made you admire…
  99. >You look up, in the sky. Why haven’t you did this ever before?
  100. >The Medium Light hangs up there, it’s also beautiful. Not exactly like Four Legs, but in a different way.
  101. >You look at sobbing grugette at your feet and feel a bit angry. But also sad. You throw her some meat.
  102. >Have you became kind?
  103. >What is a kindness in a world where everything tries to kill everything? What is the purpose?
  104. >The black sky is lit with small dots of light. What is the purpose?
  105. >Why are so many beautiful things around you?
  106. >Maybe… Maybe, if that small dots of light are shining up there, it means that someone needs it?
  107. >The Four Hooves… She probably did strange things to you, while you were doing her.
  108. >Strange, but wonderful ones, it seems.
  109. >You need to…
  110. >You need to tell your small grugs about that!
  111. >If you have been able to realize all that after you met Four Hooves, maybe if they could met their Four Hooves, they will become en-ligh-te-ned as well?
  112. >But they are stupid and could forget they need to meet Four Hooves…
  113. >You raise up. You take your rock and approach the cave.
  114. >Yeah, that cave wall would do.
  115. “Small grugs, go here.”
  116. >They obey.
  117. >You need to tell your small grugs about Four Hooves!
  118. >You raise your rock up and strike the cave wall.
  119. >You are Grug who met Four Hooves! Grug the Victor! Grug the Enlightened!
  120. >The First One!
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