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Moondancer's Bad Day by DCFTEF
By splishsplashCreated: 2022-01-05 17:01:21
Updated: 2022-03-17 13:38:41
Expiry: Never
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Moondancer's Bad Day by DCFTEF
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(Dad / Moondancer)
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M/f, over couch, switch, non-consensual
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(17/04/2016)
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>Hi.
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>My name is Moondancer
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>Student at Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns.
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>I got in big trouble this morning
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>In my house the rule is, last one to use the stove makes sure it's turned off
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>Well, that's usually Mama
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>Except last night I warmed up some pudding to have while I studied
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>I made sure the flame was out
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>But I forgot to turn the burner dial off
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>Luckily, Papa has to get up several times a night to pee
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>He smelled gas, and quickly shut it off
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>He opened all the windows to vent the gas out
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>When that was done he went back to bed
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>Papa never even woke up Mama, me, or my little cousin who's staying with us
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>He saved our lives and never even told us about it
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>But I sure heard about it the next morning
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>Papa was waiting for me at the breakfast table
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>He showed me what I'd done wrong and reminded me what could have happened
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>Then he told me what was going to happen
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>And he told me to go cut a switch
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>I begged Papa not to do it
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>Mama and my cousin were right there to see me pleading for my bottom
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>It was so embarrassing
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>But Papa didn't budge
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"Go out there and pick your switch unless you want ME to do it!"
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>Yikes
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>Holding back tears, I ran
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>My day only got worse
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>The newspaper colt saw me cutting my switch from the bush in front of the house
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"Ha, Ha! Somepony's gettin' a spankin'!"
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>Little brat, I hope he falls off his bicycle
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>Up to that point I hadn't cried
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>I deserved what I had coming, I knew it
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>I could have killed my whole family in our sleep
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>So I had resolved to endure Papa's punishment without tears or complaint
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>I wasn't fooling myself, I knew I'd cry when Papa whipped my behind
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>But I was gonna stay strong and accept it like a mare until that point
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>I was doing pretty good too, until that newspaper brat teased me
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>That just set off the waterworks
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>I'd messed up really bad
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>Papa was really mad
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>And this was really gonna hurt
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>I didn't even reach the house before things got worse
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>My eyes were so teared up I couldn't see well
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>It was fogging my glasses, but I didn't stop to clean them
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>I just wanted to get inside so the whole neighborhood didn't see me in disgrace
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>I shut my eyes and ran for the door
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*CRASH*
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>Straight into old Mr. Yasgur, the milk-stallion
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>Milk. Everywhere.
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>And of course, Papa comes to the door to see what the crash was
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>At least nobody is hurt
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>But Mr. Yasgur clearly sees what's going on
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>Weeping filly, angry daddy and a freshly cut switch
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>It doesn't take Fetlock Holmes to figure this mystery out
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"Awww, now Mister, what's the poor girl done to deserve all this?"
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>Well, at least he was nicer that the newspaper colt
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>But I desperately wanted my shame to be confined to the family
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>I internally prayed to Celestia;
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Please don't let Papa tell, please don't let Papa tell, please don't let Papa tell...
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>But he did worse;
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"Moondancer, tell Mr. Yasgur what you did."
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>I had to explain my offense
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>About the pudding. He asked what flavor it was (butterscotch).
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>About the flame and the burner. He asked what model stove we had so he and Papa talked about stoves for 5 minutes while I stood there, holding a switch and crying
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>About how I could have caused an explosion and burned my whole family
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>About how sorry I was and how lucky we were to avoid a disaster
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"Well, young lady, that is pretty serious, as I'm sure your Daddy will impress on you."
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>Papa offered to pay for the smashed milk bottles
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>Implying that my behind would be paying for those too
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"No, don't worry about that. The little lady has enough problems already. You let me worry about the spilled milk. And be gentle with her...I'm sure she's plenty sorry."
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>Then Papa said something really nice;
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"I'll give her all she deserves, because my heart would break if I were to give her a single lick more."
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>Well, it would have been nicer if he wasn't talking about whipping my bare heinie
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>At least Papa asked Mama to take my little cousin to school first.
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>He respected my dignity enough to let this be private.
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>But he didn't do it right away.
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"Eat your breakfast, your oatmeal is getting cold."
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>He set the switch right there on the table and poured his coffee
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>Then he sat there and ate his own breakfast like nothing was wrong
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>He even commented on a few stories in the newspaper; ones he thought might interest me
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>Papa is always trying to get me out of the dusty library, to be more up to date on current events
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>But this morning I had other things on my mind
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>I had to eat my oatmeal and half grapefruit, staring right at the branch that would soon be cutting blinding, painful streaks across my rear
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>How does he expect me to eat when I'm absolutely sick with worry?
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>It's really hard to choke down the next bite when you feel like throwing up.
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>But I would have choked down a whole barrel of oatmeal to delay what was coming.
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>I picked at the last few bites, making them smaller and smaller until I was just picking up a few oats on my spoon each time
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>Papa finally got impatient
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>He told me to wash my dishes and meet him in the living room
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>I must have taken forever washing my bowl and milk glass because before I knew it Papa was standing in the kitchen doorway
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>Tapping his hoof impatiently
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>Oh boy...my hooves felt like they were wearing lead horseshoes
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>I knew I deserved this and I was trying to be brave
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>But my back end didn't agree with my front end
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>It figures; that's the end that was going to get whipped
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>It didn't want to move
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>I had to take tiny steps, practically dragging my back legs on the way to certain doom
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>Papa went through the motions of inspecting the switch I'd cut
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>It was a formality; I knew it was okay
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>I've cut enough switches in my life to know what my Papa wants
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>Don't get me wrong!
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>I'm not a bad filly, who gets in trouble all the time
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>But if you'd ever gotten a switching from my Papa you'd know; once enough to make you an expert!
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>Sometimes Papa jokes that we don't need to pay a gardener
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"Moondancer will prune the bushes next time she's naughty."
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>But it doesn't happen as often as that
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>Papa is usually very forgiving
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>And that's why it hurts so bad to disappoint him today
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"Come on, Moony, let's get this over with."
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>It's time to get in position
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>Bent over the arm of the sofa
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>Just looking at it makes my heart race
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>But I've resolved to be brave
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>I lifted my front hooves up
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>I leaned forward so my back hooves came off the floor
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>Helpless now, just waiting for my punishment
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>Even though I couldn't see it now, from my awkward position I could hear Papa break the tip of the branch off with his teeth
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>He stomped on the end a few times too
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>Papa is kind to do this
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>Removing the hard tip...fraying the end of the switch
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>This way it doesn't leave a welt
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>But it's still gonna hurt plenty
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>No! I couldn't take it!
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>I lost my nerve and hopped up from the arm of the sofa
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>Crying for all I was worth I would beg Papa to punish me some other way
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>Surely he would melt when he saw how scared and truly sorry I was
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>I spun around to begin pleading in earnest
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"Papa, please, I..."
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>But the look in my Papa's face just froze the words in my mouth
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>He was sad
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>In fact he looked as close to tears as I was
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>And I understood
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>Papa loves me, it hurts him to do this
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>And I'm making it worse for him by begging and crying
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>He saved the whole family last night
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>He doesn't deserve this now
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>Head hung low, I apologized
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"Sorry Papa. I won't move anymore, I promise."
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>He nodded and gently motioned toward the sofa
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>And I got back in position without another word
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>I flinched when I heard a fearsome swish through the air
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>But Papa was only testing his swing
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>Oooohhhh...it's not like he hasn't had plenty of practice
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>The real sign that he was ready came next
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"Eek!"
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>I don't care who you are, a little blank-flank filly or a mature young mare
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>When a stallion, even her own Papa, grabs her dock and pulls her tail out of the way a girl is gonna squeak a little
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"Sweetheart, I'm very sorry to do this, but you know why I just can't let this slide, right?"
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>I sobbed with guilt
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>I deserved this, I should welcome it
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>But I was scared out of my wits
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>Any moment now my rump was going to be in agony and I'd be howling
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"Y-yes, Papa. I'm sorry I was careless. I could have *sob* killed everypony and I feel awful."
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>Papa didn't say anything else
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>He just gave a pat on my back
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>I clenched my teeth and tensed every muscle
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*Swishhhhh*SNAP!*
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>Oh my gosh it couldn't possibly have hurt that much last time!
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>I gasped for air before I could even squeal in pain
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>Papa gave me a moment to catch my breath after the first one but after that the switching really began
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*SNAP!* *SNAP!* *SNAP!*
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>Just a flick of the horrible switch was enough to paint a stinging line of pink across my backside
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"Whhhaaahhh! Ow! Ouch! Eek! WhaaAAAHH!"
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>I tried to stay still and be a good girl
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>I really did want to make this easy on Papa
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>And who am I fooling? I hoped behaving myself would end this ordeal sooner
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"OwwooOWWwwooOWWww! I'm EEK! sorry, P- Papa!"
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>But Papa had a certain number of lines he planned to paint across my tush and I wasn't getting up until the job was done
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>It was hard to believe how such a little stick could hurt so much
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>Barely enough to support a pigeon
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>But it stung so badly that my legs and rump danced despite my efforts to stay still
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>Stiff enough to hurt like murder
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>But bendy enough that it wrapped around my rump with each whack
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>Yep, I'd really picked a good one
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>BOO, HUUU, Why do I have to be so good at picking switches!?
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*THWOP* *THWOP* *THWOP*
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>The stinging flicks of the spanking's beginning gave way to more solid whacks
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>Now each painful lash burned and left a lingering streak of torment
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>The worst is where two lashes cross
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>And as the switching went on those horribly sore spots began to cover my cheeks
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>It might sound like this spanking went on forever
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>It certainly felt that way to me, laying on my belly crying my eyes out
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>Wishing on every magical fairy-tale star for this lash to be the last
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>But remember practicality; I still had to go to school, Papa still had to go to work
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>He didn't have all day to spend burning up my butt
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>Thank Celestia for that!
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"OWWW! Bwwwhhhuuuu, Paaappppaaaa, please, Eek! Please no more!"
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>Papa had a set number in mind, and when he reached it he just stopped
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>No warning, no grand finale...he just laid down the switch
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>And the worst was over
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>Allowed to get up, I danced around on all 4 hooves
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>My poor heinie was absolutely blazing
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>Moving it stung...standing still burned
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>Nothing made the pain feel better, I just had to wait for it to fade away
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>Which could take hours
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>Papa tolerated the 'Dance of the Well Spanked Filly' for a minute or two
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>Then it was time to get me moving
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"Gather your school bags now, or you'll be late"
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>Hey, you know me
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>My saddlebags were already packed last night
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>But it was torture bending down to slip them on my back
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>Why didn't I just use magic?
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>You try concentrating when you feel like you just sat down on a camp fire.
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>Before I left, Papa gave me a kiss and the money for a cab
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"School is important,
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"Just because you learned one lesson this morning doesn't mean you can be late for all the rest."
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>I thanked him and apologized again
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>As my taxi rolled away I saw him lock the front door and trot off to work
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>He'd be late because he'd spent time dealing with me
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>But he didn't spend money on a taxi for himself
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>He'd rather make sure I'm not late for school
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>That's just the kind of Papa he is
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>Well, at least I got to take a cab to school instead of walking, right?
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>Ugh...my bad day continues
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>It's one of the older model cabs with no leaf-spring suspension or padded seat
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>And Canterlot has cobblestone streets
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>EVERY bump in the road gets transmitted right up to the hard bench seat
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>And my pitiful punished posterior
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>I tried standing up but the driver didn't like it
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"I'm sorry Miss, you'll have to be seated on the bench
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"Safety first, you know!"
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>Ouch!
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"Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns? I'll have to gallop pretty fast to get you there before the first bell."
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>Oh, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, please don't do that!
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"That isn't necessary, Sir."
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"Nah, don't worry, Miss. You won't be late for class on my watch!"
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>And he took off running
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>My sore rear bouncing on the hard wooden bench
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>The whole cab shaking as we rattled along cobbled streets
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>It was like getting spanked all over again
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>But what was I supposed to do?
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>I couldn't ask the cabby to slow down
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>He might ask why, and I wasn't going to tell him I'd just gotten a switching from my Papa
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>He was kinda cute...I'd die of embarrassment
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>I got to school on time
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>Gave my driver the excess of what Papa had given me as a tip
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>Though I'd rather have given him a punch on the snout!
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>My poor bottom was worse than before
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>Ponies have pretty soft tails, but mine felt like sandpaper against my hindquarters
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>At least my friends would commiserate
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>I felt sore, guilty, ashamed, angry...just generally awful
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>But I knew my friends would make me feel better
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>There was one in particular I really wanted to talk to
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>Twilight Sparkle and I have been pals since foal-school
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>She'll understand me
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>I'll feel better once I talk to her
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>And that will help me get through the day
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"Hey, Have you seen Twilight Sparkle?"
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>By 4th period I'd had no luck finding Twilight
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>She's really busy these days
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>Full schedule of classes plus private lessons from the Princess
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>I'm proud of how successful my friend is
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>Years ago, when we were both little fillies we made a deal
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"One of us is gonna be Valedictorian, one of us will be Salutatorian"
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"It doesn't matter which one is which, the other won't be jealous"
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>That's gonna be a great day for both of us
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>But now I just want to talk to Twilight
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>Get a hug...some much needed sympathy
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>The other fillies are sweet, they told me how sorry they were I got in trouble
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>They tell me how glad they are I didn't get blown up
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>They tried to reassure me my rump doesn't look too bad
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"You can hardly notice it!"
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"Unless somepony looks right at your bottom."
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>I still felt like every pony in school was looking
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>Okay, 6th period
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>Twilight and I both have that period free
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>It's was huge relief, I'd been bottling up emotions all day
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>I just need to put my arms around Twilight and have a good, long cry
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>The fillies bathroom in the West corridor seemed like the best place to wait
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>She usually pops in there right after potions class
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>We'll have plenty of time to talk then
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>The door opened!
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>But it's only Lemon Hearts
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>She's my friend too
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>I'm happy to see her but she's not the one I was hoping for
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>She saw that something was wrong so I told her the whole story
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"Ohhh, I'm so sorry!"
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>It was nice to get a hug and a little sympathy
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"If it's any consolation I got yelled at last night too
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"My Dad threatened to cut my allowance if my Literature grade doesn't come up to at least a B."
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>I offered to help;
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"Okay, I'll come by after school then and we can study."
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"Thanks! That'll be a big help!"
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>But the bell rang and she had to gallop off to class
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>I was still waiting for Twilight...
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>I waited almost the whole period
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>Where was she?
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>Since I had this period free I checked all the usual spots
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>Library, cafeteria, library again
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>Seriously, this is Twilight we're talking about...where else would she be?
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>I began to get upset
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>I was gonna feel really lousy if I didn't get to talk to my best friend
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>It's all that was keeping me going
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>That little morale boost I knew Sparkle could give me
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>It would be enough to get me through the rest of this awful day
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>But where is she?
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"Are you looking for Twilight Sparkle?"
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>A colt in a lower grade asked me
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"Uh, yeah? How did you know?"
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"Because you're talking to yourself."
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>He pointed down the hall with his hoof
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"I saw her in the geology lab just a little while ago"
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>I totally forgot to thank him...I just went off running
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"A'Hem! No running in the halls, Miss Moondancer!"
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>Damn...Ms. Inkwell. Okay, I went off at a brisk canter
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>It didn't take me long to reach the geology classroom
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>And I was just in time
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*CRASH*
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>Yep, I ran straight into her
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>Second time today
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>We were both a little dazed, but Twi recognized me so I must not have run into her too hard
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"Hi Moondancer...what brings you here? I thought you had this period free?"
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>My muzzle hurt, but I was just so relieved I threw my arms around Twilight
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"Oh my gosh, I'm having the WORST DAY EVER!"
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>We ducked into the nearest fillies' room so we could talk
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>And I poured my heart out to Twilight
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>Beginning with the pudding
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>I told her about the stove, and the gas I left turned on
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>About how Papa found it
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>About picking my switch in the morning
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>The newspaper delivery brat...nice old Mr. Yasgur
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>And my switching,
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>How much it hurt, how humiliating it was
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>How ashamed I felt for almost blowing up my whole family because of pudding
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>I didn't leave out the torturous ride in the taxi either
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"And then I finally found you!"
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>Twi listened to every word of my story with sympathy
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"I'm so sorry for you, Moondancer!"
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"But everything is okay now, right?"
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>Wait, what did she say?
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>She's supposed to commiserate with me...agree with me even if I'm wrong
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>Make me feel better
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"It was super lucky your Dad smelled the leaking gas
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"And nopony was hurt."
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>Well, yeah...but...
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"I know the switching must have been awful, but it's all over now."
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>This is not right, this is not what I've been looking forward to all day
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>She gives you a quick hug and pulls away
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"I'm really sorry you got in trouble. I hope you're feeling better now but I've got to run. Princess Celestia gave me 3 new spells to practice"
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>She paused and asked me;
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"So, you're gonna be okay, right?"
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>I'd feel better if we could spend some time talking
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>But I didn't say that out loud like I wanted to
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"Yeah...I'll be fine."
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"Alright...ohmygosh, I'm late...I gotta go! We'll talk later, okay?"
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>Sure. Later.
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>That was it?
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>I was looking forward to that all day to help me through this sad abyss
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>Two minutes, a quick hug and she's gone?
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>I wanted to cry again, but what was the point?
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>So I just washed my face and left the bathroom
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>The last few hours of this day were gonna drag on like months
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>And the big morale boost I was hoping for amounted to a big pile of horseapples
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>I'm on my own
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>Well, there's still some time left on my free period
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>May as well hit the library
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>What else is there to do?
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>You can always count on books
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>They'll never leave you hanging
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>They'll always be there when you need them
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>Like you thought your friend would be
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>Sigh.
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