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Run Your Mouth by Pan
By splishsplashCreated: 2022-01-05 18:40:28
Updated: 2022-03-15 13:53:41
Expiry: Never
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Run Your Mouth by Pan
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(Granny Smith / Rainbow)
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(10/04/2017)
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>Rainbow Dash is not subtle
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>Or tactful
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>Or...
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>She's a nice pony. Let's leave it at that
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>The plan was to embark from Sweet Apple Acres on a day hike
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>no fillies who need life advice (and a primer on personal space) tagging along
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>Just AJ and Rainbow Dash
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>All the Apples pitched in for dinner
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>The Apple family way is to have guests not lift a hoof
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>All RD had to do was play along
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>Which went fine until halfway through dinner
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"We're going to visit some AWESOME waterfalls not too far from here."
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>Granny Smith was supportive
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"It'll be nice teh make some memories without some catastrophe happening."
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"Yeah, it's gonna be pretty damn cool."
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>Rainbow Dash had picked up this slang from a sporting magazine
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>The young Apples' mouths sprung open in shock
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>Applejack had warned Rainbow Dash a few times about Granny Smith's old-school ways
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>not in a while though
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>maybe what's happening is her fault, AJ thought guiltily
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>Granny's down-home demeanor was now replaced with emotion one might see at a sundown duel in Appleoosa
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"What did ye just say?"
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"Um, nothing, uh, Granny Smith."
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>Rainbow Dash was well underway to winning the Equestrian hoof-tapping title
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"I'm not deaf, Rainbow Dash. We don't tolerate that kinda language on the farm. Come with me if ye know what's good for ya."
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>Rainbow Dash looked to the other Apples
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>they motioned for her to follow Granny
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>off to a corner of the dining room
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"Stay here."
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"What are you doing?"
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"Hush. All in good time."
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>Rainbow Dash could see Granny Smith digging through cabinets
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>She grabbed a bar of soap and held it with just a few of her teeth
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>ran it under the faucet and lathered up a good layer of suds on the surface
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>She brought it to Rainbow
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"Puh dis in er moeh"
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"What?"
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>Rainbow Dash had a good guess what Granny wanted
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>Maybe she could play dumb
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>Granny grabbed her muzzle and turned Rainbow's face towards her
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>With some frustration (it tasted bad!) she pointed a hoof at the bar of soap in her mouth
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>and pointed at Rainbow Dash's mouth
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>Applejack broke the standoff, not wanting her friend to get in further trouble
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>"Just put it in your mouth, Rainbow"
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"Okay..." (grumble)
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>She put it just barely in her mouth, like Granny did
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>But Granny said that wasn't good enough
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(pth!) "Get that bar up in there."
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"Mu I dough wan--!"
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>Slowly, yet insistently, Granny Smith jammed it where she wanted it
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>Sweet Celestia it tasted awful!
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"Still got a bad attitude?"
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(hmph!)
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>Rainbow Dash's brow was furrowed at the indignity
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>And of course, the soapy taste
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"Maybe you need your rump spanked too."
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>Rainbow was not thinking clearly
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>Brain clouded by soap suds
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>That was Applejack's only explanation for what followed
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"Yeh got 5 seconds to wipe that look off yer snout, missy."
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"5... 4... 3..." (Rainbow Dash snorted) "2... 1..."
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"That's it, looks like I gotta beat a mule outta ya."
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>Granny grabbed a clean bucket and told the blue pony to spit the soap into it
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>She didn't have to be told twice
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>she tried to spit out all the soap from her mouth
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(pth! pugh!)
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>Rainbow was less enthused about what Granny did next
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>It wasn't Granny Smith's first time dragging a naughty pony over her knee
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>And she suspected it wouldn't be the last
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>The blue color was a change of pace
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>>29836192
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>Lately Granny was used to dealing with a yellow rump in this position
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>A little less often, some white and orange
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>But sometimes, even now, she would see bits of red and a different shade of orange from this vantage point
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>And years ago they were frequent sights
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>That is, aside from the red color she added to her grandfoals' coats
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>Granny didn't want her dinner to get cold
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>Dash's insolence was another reason Granny went straight to the crop
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>This was too harsh for Apple Bloom
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>Definitely an implement for a full-size filly
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>Granny felt nothing else needed to be said
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>She was upset, and rather than using stinging words, she stung Rainbow's rear with the riding crop
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(wsshSMACK!)
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>Rainbow Dash was brave
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(crack!)
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>Rainbow Dash was not some blankflank foal
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(wsshSTING!)
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>Rainbow Dash couldn't see her rump
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>with each new stinger across both cheeks, resistance was harder and harder to muster
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(wsshCRACK! wsshCRACK! wsshCRACK!)
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>Rainbow Dash was scared
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>and audibly hurting
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"Oww!" (hic) "Granny I-- OW OW OW OW!"
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>maybe Granny was deaf
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>she sure wasn't responding to any of Dash's entreaties
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>or, was--
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(wsshCRACK!)
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>--the flurry of whiplike, harsh smacks across her athletic backside Granny's response to Rainbow Dash?
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>After a few more crop cracks, Granny Smith ended the spanking
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"Back in the corner, half-pint."
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>Rainbow Dash was long past disagreeing
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>Even if she thought for a moment she wasn't a half-pint
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>Rainbow must have looked like one, a spanked filly in the corner like she was a third of her age
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>Her apparent age was done no favors when Granny Smith insisted that she put the bar of soap back into her mouth
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"Sit here 'n' wait. After the polite ponies finish their supper ye can spit that out, missy."
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>RD didn't take any chances
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>No look other than her tear-stained face
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(Ah!)
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>Sitting on the floor hurt her tush all over again
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>She assumed this part was non-negotiable
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>>29836321
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>The Apples must be used to this sort of thing
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>They carried on dinner like nothing happened
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>Rainbow sat and watched, shifting her weight in vain to try and find a position that didn't remind her what a naughty pony she was
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>She wondered how her bottom looked from the dinner table
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>Could anypony see the stripes tracing up her rear?
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>Dinner passed agonizingly slow
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>The other ponies talked about their days
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>Rainbow Dash tried to keep her mind off her spanking by following along
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>This plan back(side) fired when Apple Bloom kept talking about what a HOT, SCORCHING day it was
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>Finally, Granny Smith came back to the spanked filly corner
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"Alright, I reckon you suffered enough. Just don't do it again, y'hear?"
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"I hear ya, Granny! Loud and clear!"
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"Yer dinner might be a little cold so we can heat it up for ya."
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>heat was the last thing she wanted right now
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"No thanks, Granny. I'll just eat it the way it is."
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"Suit yerself."
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>As the two hikers got ready for bed, Applejack surveyed the damage
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"Ah guess I shoulda warned ya some more."
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"I shouldn't need any more warnings again from this house."
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>Applejack channeled her brother
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"Eeyup"
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>the next day went just about as planned
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>the riding crop stripes had faded, but not entirely
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>Rainbow Dash was thankful they were travelling secluded trails
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>every patch of shade was welcome relief from the effect the sun had on the remainder of the spank marks
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"Rainbow, you say your tail is rainbow, but I think it looks red from here."
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"Can it, AJ!"
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"Bahahaha!"
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"Does Granny Smith still spank you?"
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>Applejack's eyes darted back and forth and she scrunched up her muzzle
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"M-maybe."
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"Start talking, 'missy.'"
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The two had a lot to talk about, spankings both recent and not-so-recent, and witnessed and sadly, experienced firsthoof.
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END
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-----Appendix:-----
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