A Lost Bet Ch1-3 recap by SkyeHigh


                                            A Lost Bet Ch1-3 recap by SkyeHigh

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                                            (25/02/2014)


                                            https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/16464763/#q16490314


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                                            Hey guys, as promised I have another chapter for today.

                                            But I feel the need to do some explaining about my storyline before.

                                            Maybe some have noticed that my chapter title has absolutely nothing to do with the story and both of my posted chapters start with '3.x'. And of course there's a reason for that.

                                            Roughly a year ago I wrote Ch1, 2 & 3, purely for my own entertainment and then built up my newer writings on that.


                                            Q: Will you post them for reading?

                                            A: No, the writing is horrible and not up to my current standard. But I can give you a recap...


                                            Ch1: The real Lost Bet... So I noticed a little imbalance in the AJ and Dash fanfictions, because a lot of them had always AJ winning. I sought to fix that. So I wrote AJ losing to Dash (fair and square) with the stakes that loser gets spanked by the winner. To determine the amount of punishment I used this here, set it to random and worked with the result:

                                            http://animeotk.com/punishment.php

                                            Long story short, at the end of it I just typed and typed and somehow made AJ feel great happiness in the after-spanking cuddles and having her miss her late parents' discipline.


                                            Ch2: Basically AJ comes back for more. She doesn't like the pain, mind you, but the feeling of losing her guilt in a comforting embrace is nice to her.

                                            I tried out a lot of stuff and fetishes in this one, and didn't really like what I’d created. It was mainly too harsh for my own likings.


                                            Ch3: The day after. Small bit more with AJ and then changed to the first ‘incident’ with Scootaloo, which took my focus from then on.


                                            Q: stfu already and post what you have!

                                            A: That I'll do now. Thanks for your patience.