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Detrimental Attitude by DCFTEF
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Detrimental Attitude by DCFTEF
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(24/11/2021)
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>Peachy Sprite was a filly who liked to have fun
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>A lot
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>In fact it was one of the major problems of her life that she liked fun a lot more than the work required to earn that fun
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>Temptation drew her irresistibly, like a magnet
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>When she was little this didn't cause any problems
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>They youngest foal of her family by a significant number of years
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>she was indulged and allowed to remain the baby of the family far too long
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>While her elder siblings had responsibility laid upon them at appropriate ages
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>Peachy was sheltered from it by both mother and siblings
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>Of course, every filly gets into trouble and Peachy was no different
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>She got into more than her share in fact
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>But her adoring siblings often bailed her out of it
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>Or Mom brushed it off as cute, foalish mischief
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>When Sprite had done something that positively, undeniably required a response it was always;
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"You wait until your father gets home."
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>Peachy's father was a hard-working stallion who would rather have come home to anything but a naughty filly in need of a spanking
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>He hated being the disciplinarian
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>He worked all day at a job he did not like, so he could go home and spend time with his family
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>Having to punish one of them so frequently frustrated him and broke his heart
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>But he was a good father and did his duty
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>And Peachy Sprite was just a filly...she would get better.
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>Peachy Sprite's irresponsible behavior only got worse as she became a teenager
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>She had never learned restraint or mature decision making
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>And when faced with the tantalizing temptations of teenagerhood she indulged
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>Her Mom and siblings laughed, and called her a party girl
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>Her Dad grumbled because he now had to deal with issues like, curfew, drugs and colts
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>Her mother didn't do much to sanction her at all
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>Peachy's Dad felt she was too old for spanking
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>But nothing else worked
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>She hated being grounded, so she whined and Mom let her off the hook
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>When she lost privilege's her adoring older siblings snuck the same indulgences to her behind Dad's back
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>This was easy, because Dad had to work all the time
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>He wasn't around to ensure she stayed grounded, or didn't get her saddlebag money allowance
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>Spankings were his only option
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>Peachy hated and feared them intensely
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>So for a time they worked
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>Peachy generally stated out of trouble
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>Her grades were good
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>She completed High School
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>But only because her unwilling Dad was always there with that awful, horrible, no good, nasty paddle
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>Peachy Sprite gave her Dad a big hug and even acknowledged his painful discipline in her graduation speech, to much laughter in the audience
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>The good grades Peachy was required to get
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>(or else, WHACK!)
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>got her into Bridleburg University
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>It was a long way from home and Peachy's father cringed
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>But she was just a kid, she would get better, right?
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>The whole family was excited that Peachy Sprite had gotten into prestigious Bridleburg University
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>But her father was worried
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>She had only gotten through High School with a paddle constantly threatening her rear
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>Now she would be living miles and miles away
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>He had a serious talk with her when he traveled to campus to help her move into the dorm
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"You have to control yourself, honey
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"Your attitude is detrimental to success.
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"It's time you grew up."
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>Jokingly he added
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"You're a legal adult, I won't be there to spank you anymore!"
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>They both had a good laugh
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>That stuff was all in the past, they were both sure
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>Peachy Sprite had honestly wanted to be a good filly when her Mom & Dad left on the train
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>But that night she drank 15 cups of cider...stole the school mascot...lost her virginity and passed out in the Dean's flower garden.
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>Peachy could have been expelled on the spot.
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>But as usual ponies cut her slack and she got away with it.
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"She's only a freshman on her first weekend at college
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"She'll get better."
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>She begged the University not to send a report to her Dad, and they indulged her
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>So he never found out
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>By mid-term Peachy hadn't gotten better
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>She had a reputation as a party filly
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>She had blown through all the money Mom & Dad gave her to last the whole year
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>She was only attending half her classes
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>And was failing nearly all of them
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>One super embarrassing day...Dad arrived on the train to sort things out
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>He kinda lost his cool
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"Sprite, when are you gonna grow up?
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"You're blowing an incredible, one in a lifetime opportunity here!
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"All because of this detrimental attitude you have!
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"You can have fun, honey...I want you to.
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"But the work has to come first.
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"You can't do this all your life."
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>Peachy was genuinely listening
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>She was scared
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>She was about to flunk out and she knew all this partying was endangering her future
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>But she'd learned no self discipline over her life
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"D-Dad...I can't believe I'm asking you this but...
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"Could you do that thing you used to do when I was a kid?"
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>Sprite's father was totally against it
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"You're an adult now! That's a punishment for little foals!"
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>But one thing she had learned at college was debate
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>And she wore him down with her logic
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"Dad, please...you KNOW I don't want it.
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"But that's just the point.
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"I have problems, I know that, I'm sorry!
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"But you wouldn't make a drug addict or alcoholic just quit with no help, would you?"
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>Peachy was serious
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"I just need a little help.
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"Just ween me off of it and I promise I'll be more mature."
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>Sprite's father didn't like it
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>But he had to take the train back home and go to work on Monday
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>He couldn't stay in Bridleburg and supervise his legally adult daughter
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"I will do this ONCE but never again!
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"It's your detrimental attitude that needs attention,
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"Not your rear-end!"
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>Peachy would have been satisfied to be spanked in the dorm
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>Totally embarrassing but kinda the point
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>She wanted it to sink in
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>Plus, she wouldn't be the first college filly whose parents had to visit campus and straighten his daughter out
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>A few freshmen had already gotten visits from their daddies this term
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>Probably happened in the colts' dorm too.
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>But Dad was embarrassed by this
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"You're a legal adult
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"What I'm doing is assault!"
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>Peachy argued though;
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"Not if it's consensual."
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>But that didn't make Dad happy
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"It shouldn't be happening at all!"
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>He insisted that they do it at his hotel, just off campus
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>So Peachy Sprite was marched off on an extra-long walk of doom
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>Through campus, across the quad and finally to the hotel
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>The desk clerk must have thought he was a dirty old stallion
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>A sugar daddy checking in with a way-too-young college filly.
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>The sounds of smacking and squealing coming from the room only backed up this guess
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>It sounded like "Daddy" liked to play naughty schoolgirl with his "Little filly"
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>Little did they know it was 100% true
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>He was her father and he was legitimately giving his little naughty schoolfilly a spanking
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>A slat from the bed made a fearsome paddle
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>Painful enough to make Peachy sorry she ever took a sip of cider
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>But Dad found the whole situation so humiliating he wished the hotel DID assume he was a pervert rather than know the truth
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>But this was the last time, right? She would get better.
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>It wasn't the last time
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>Peachy Sprite's father had to take her across his knee once that summer
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>And he had to visit campus one more time during her sophomore year
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>But that was finally the last time
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>Peachy graduated with good grades and her Dad breathed a sigh of relief
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>It was over now
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>She was a grown up mare now, with the skills and degree to have a successful life
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>So he was a little worried when she announced her decision to backpack around the world for a few months before taking on a job
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>But she had absolutely no money so how much trouble could she get in?
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>It was her successful older siblings that indulged her this time
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>They each kicked in money so their little sister could make her world tour
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>By now they understood how their previous coddling hadn't helped Peachy
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>This was their misguided attempt to make it up to her
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>They thought the trip would help her learn some of the maturity she'd missed out on
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>Instead it just gave her another year to dodge responsibility and keep building bad habits
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>Detrimental attitudes...
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>Peachy Sprite ran out of money in the first month but fell in with experienced backpacking ponies who showed her how to live the life
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>Like this she bounced all over the world for months
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>All over Equestria
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>The Eastern Lands
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>Griffonstone and Yakyakistan
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>Mt. Arris...and even the dragon lands
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>Tourism had really opened up at this point
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>Since he did not have to deal with her any more, Peachy's father breathed a sigh of relief
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>But he still worried...
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>It made Dad and the whole family was proud when Peachy returned and announced she already had a job
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>She'd met some business ponies in Manehattan who always needed new entry level graduates in her field
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>Maybe her world tour had taught Peachy some maturity
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>Maybe some of her detrimental attitudes were being replaced
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>In truth Peachy had spent the whole year partying
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>Griffonstone, Mt Arris, Yakyakistan...
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>She wasn't there to see the arts and the beautiful scenery
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>It was just by pure dumb luck that she was at a rave in Manehattan with those office ponies
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>They were not bosses either, as she led the family to believe
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>They were just entry-level wage slaves like she would be
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>But a job interview is still valuable
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>Maybe she was finally getting better?
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>Sprite got the job
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>A big company with room to be promoted
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>Bottom of the ladder now but the pay was liveable
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>She could afford her first apartment
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>And a lot of drinks
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>Nights out at the club with her friends
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>Nights that resulted in hangovers
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>And those resulted in sick days
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>More than she should have taken
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>But every letter home sounded great
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>Making money, staying responsible, replacing detrimental attitudes.
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>Total lies.
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>But she was a grown mare now, with a job and a place of her own
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>It's not like any pony was going to spank her for taking too many sick days.
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>One dark and stormy night Peachy's father was at home in Fillydelphia
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>Reading one of her encouraging letters
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>His youngest was finally doing well
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>A relief...he thought she...
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[KNOCK] [KNOCK]
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>It was a surprise to hear any pony at the door at this late hour
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>Peachy's father checked the peep-hole carefully and then swung the door open
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"By Celestia...what's wrong?"
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>Peachy Sprite was there
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>Soaking wet in the rain
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>Still obviously crying
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"Dad...I really messed up!"
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>His heart sank
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"Alright, first thing let's get you inside."
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>Wrapped in a blanket, with a warm cup of tea
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>Sprite confessed the truth;
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"I've taken double my allowable sick days.
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"I'm behind on my rent.
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"I've gained 2 inches on my waistline.
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"and last weekend, I drank too much at a company party and flirted with the Boss'es husband."
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>Her father groaned
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>Was this ever gonna end? Was she ever gonna get better?
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"Dad..."
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>Oh, no, she's not gonna ask me that
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"Do you remember what you used to do?
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"When I got out of control as a kid?"
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>He shook his head.
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>He thought he would never have to do this,
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>But Peachy Swift's father looked her in the face and flatly said;
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"No."
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>Peachy was shocked
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>She knew Dad didn't like to do this,
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>he felt she was too old.
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>He was right of course.
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"Dad, please, I know it's super-weird, but this is important!
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"I'm gonna lose the job! I just know it!"
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>But her father shook his head
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>He'd had enough
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"Absolutely not and NEVER again!
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"Peachy, I can't keep solving your problems with a spanking paddle!
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"You are a grown mare.
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"I know you can be mature and handle your business because you do it perfectly...for the first few weeks after I've spanked you.
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"But we always come back to this, which means it didn't work."
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>Sprite did not expect such a flat refusal
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"But Dad, it's just this once...one time and I'll get my shit together, please!"
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>Sadly, he turned his begging daughter down
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"Sweetie...if you said the same thing to me about a drink, or pills I would bring you straight to the hospital.
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"Is this an addiction with you? Is it a dependency?
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"It doesn't matter, I'm not doing it anymore."
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>Peachy begged him, but Dad held his ground
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"I will always love and support you in any way I can.
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"But you're a mare now and need to regulate your behavior yourself.
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"or else I'm scared that your detrimental attitude is going to ruin you."
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>She had to be at work in Manehattan the next morning
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>So Dad rode the late-night train with her
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>Missed a day of his own work back in Fillydelphia
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>He found out that she wasn't as close to being fired as she thought
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>But she wasn't getting a promotion with all the rest of the group who hired on at the same time as her either.
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>He sorted things out with her landlord
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>Worked out a payment schedule that would have her caught up in a few months
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>Situation stabilized, Dad kissed her on the cheek and wished her luck
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>But his answer was firm as he boarded his train
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"I'll always be here to help, but I'm done correcting your behavior.
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"It's up to you now to correct your...
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>You get it by now.
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>Those first few weeks after Dad left were miserable
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>Peachy Sprite was walking on eggshells
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>Afraid to slip up at work and lose her job
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>Afraid to risk any fun in case things got wild and out of control
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>Things were so much easier when Dad could make it all better
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>By making things temporarily so much worse!
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>On her way home Peachy passed a shop
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>It was a sex shop
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>Peachy's apartment was not in the nicest neighborhood
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>She had been inside before, with her drunk friends
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>They'd been having fun
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>They all had a good laugh at the dildos and leather gear
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>Bought a few tubes of sex lube and some dirty magazines, but nothing else
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>It was something else that Peachy kept thinking about.
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>Paddles
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>Apparently a big seller, the store had lots of them
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>Big, little, thick, thin
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>Enchanted and budget choices
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>Peachy thought about them a lot but never had the nerve to go inside
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>Until this day...
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>A door chime announced her arrival, but Peachy still said;
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"Hello?"
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>She was greeted by a cheerful clerk filly about her age
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"Hi there, welcome to The Lovers' Stable.
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"I don't think I've seen you before. I'm Thistle Sting, how can I help you?"
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>Sprite took a great, big, deep, mighty breath...
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>and then whispered
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"Can I look at your paddles?"
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>The clerk gave her a smile and replied
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"Ooo, some pony's been a bad filly?"
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>Peachy blushed and confessed
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"You could say that."
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"Well we have lots of great choices, from budget to unicorn enchanted."
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>Thistle Sting showed her a selection of regular but very nicely made paddles in the 20 bit price range
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>That was really what Peachy was hoping to spend
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"Now these are made by a traditional craftstallion in a nearby town
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"He has the cutest colt apprentice, I love it when they come to deliver our order.
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"But I think the poor little guy got a spanking of his own recently, he seemed awfully squirmy last visit.
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"I wonder if he gets it with the very paddles he helps make? Ohhh, wouldn't that be awful!"
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>While Thistle babbled, Peachy looked over her choices
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>They all scared the fur off her
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>Wielded by a stern daddy any of these would keep her on the right path
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>But she didn't have a daddy willing to do it
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>That meant she'd have to spend a bit more
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"I think I need an enchanted one."
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>Thistle gave her a sympathetic look
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"No Very Special Somepony?"
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>Well, she'd had lots
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>None of them were all that special
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"Okay, these all levitate and spank on their own.
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"But the cheaper enchanted ones cost at least a hundred bits."
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>Peachy gasped
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>This was what she needed but at 5 times what she wanted to spend
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>Already on a restricted budget because of her rent embarrassment, this was a stretch
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"How do they work?"
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>Thistle looked overwhelmed and told her;
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"That would take an hour. They're all different. What do you need?"
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>Her customer seemed embarrassed to answer
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>She reconsidered her sales approach and said
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"We started at the bottom and moved up.
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"Let me show you the Top-of-the Line, our best paddle.
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"Then we can find something that's right for you in-between, right?"
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>Sounds reasonable
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"This is The Grande..."
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>Thistle drew a cardboard box out from under the counter and opened the lid
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>It was a beautiful slab of wood
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>Rich, tightly spaced wood grain from old growth forest
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"Once you pre-set some parameters this thing can actually calculate how many spanks you get based on how naughty you were."
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>Peachy Sprite almost jumped when she heard that
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"Ohmygosh that's EXACTLY what I need!"
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>She felt kinda dorky for getting that excited in a sex shop
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"I mean...please,,,tell me more..."
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>Thistle Sting cringed a little but went on...
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"There are 7 parameters to set, based on the Seven Deadly Sins."
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>Yeah, they got those in Horsie World too
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>Don't overthink this
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"So lets say your coltfriend is a couch potato who eats all the ice cream in the apartment..."
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>Dastardly!
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"You just crank up the importance setting on Sloth and Gluttony and WHAM!"
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>Peachy flinched when Thistle banged her hoof on the counter
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"He's gonna wish he saved some ice cream for his sore rear end."
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>And alternately
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"But let's say he's a nice colt who just lost his temper when another stallion was rude to you in line for a movie,
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"He still deserves a spanking for punching that other stallion,
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"But not a bad one, since he was defending my honor."
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>That slip told Peachy that the clerk was describing incidents from her own dating life
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>She wondered if Thistle ever borrowed the Grande from work
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"So you turn Wrath down low, and he doesn't get it so bad.
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"There's also settings for Lust, Pride, Envy and Greed.
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"Pretty much covers most naughtiness, but there's an open eighth slot for unexpected circumstances.
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"You gotta ask my boss how to set that one though...the instructions are kinda wonky."
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>Peachy trembled at the thought of this thing devastating her heinie
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>But it was everything she needed
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"How much is it?"
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>Thistle drew the box back and reminded her
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"I was just showing you what the Top-of-the-Line is!
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"This is a tool for professional leather dominaTrixies and sex clubs.
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"Don't fall in love...it costs 199.99 bits."
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>Whoa...let's look at something cheaper
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>But after seeing the Grande, none of the others have what she needs
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"Thistle, I don't enjoy spankings"
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>she confessed
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>The clerk looked confused and said
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"We've got lots of nice dildos too..."
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"I'm really messing up my life.
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"For years I blamed my Mom or my siblings who never let me learn responsibility
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"But I'm out of ponies to blame. This is my problem now.
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"Know who deserves none of the blame?
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"My Dad.
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"He's tried his whole life to help me get my shit together.
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"I'm so tired of him being disappointed in me."
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>Thistle Sting seldom had customers open up like this to her
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>But she felt like Peachy was a friend in need
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"I'm really sorry...
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"I could give you my employee discount on any other item but The Grande is a special order."
-
412.
>Peachy looked in her purse
-
413.
>The annual Monsters of Griffon Rock tour was coming to Manehattan soon
-
414.
>She had money for her ticket set aside
-
415.
>26 bands...3 days...it was gonna be awesome...she was gonna get so hammered drunk
-
416.
>But Peachy took a deep breath
-
417.
"What's the total with tax?"
-
418.
>Thistle couldn't believe it but she did the math
-
419.
"Ummm, 217.98 bits."
-
420.
>The reckless filly whimpered and made her decision
-
421.
>In one of the first self disciplined moments of her life she chose the Grande over a concert that was sure to be a blast.
-
422.
-
423.
"Oh my gosh, seriously?"
-
424.
>Thistle couldn't believe it when Sprite began counting out her money
-
425.
"If this doesn't work can I bring it back?"
-
426.
-
427.
"Doesn't work?"
-
428.
>Thistle was confused
-
429.
"Unless you've got a cast iron rear-end I can safely say it's gonna work."
-
430.
>Peachy shook her head
-
431.
"I just mean, what if I don't have the nerve?
-
432.
"What if it doesn't even work for...what I need?"
-
433.
-
434.
>Behind the counter, Thistle Sting looked a little worried
-
435.
"This is a sex shop...ponies don't typically like to buy the things we sell after they've been used."
-
436.
>taking a deep breath
-
437.
"and my Boss will kill me if I sell an expensive item then you just bring it back a month from now."
-
438.
"I can maybe give you...one day?"
-
439.
-
440.
>Peachy Sprite gulped hard
-
441.
>She had planned on keeping the scary thing ready until she needed it
-
442.
>Maybe the fear of knowing it was in the apartment would even help her impulse control
-
443.
>This time limit meant she would have to test it and make her decision tonight.
-
444.
-
445.
"Eeeeeeekkkk...ring it up quick before I can change my mind!"
-
446.
>Thistle was still surprised this filly who didn't enjoy spankings just bought the most expensive paddle in the shop
-
447.
>She worried that this might be a mistake that got her into trouble with her Boss
-
448.
>But she rang up the purchase as requested
-
449.
"Would you like to donate 3 bits to the Equestrian Nature Fund?"
-
450.
>Peachy growled
-
451.
>She was already cutting her budget razor thin
-
452.
>But she was trying to be a good girl from now on
-
453.
"Yeah...3 bits for the %&#%+ bunnies..."
-
454.
>Thistle blushed and told her;
-
455.
"Okay, that comes to 220.98."
-
456.
>This was gonna be a week of ramen noodles until next payday
-
457.
>'Last Chance' marked down bread and vegetables at the market
-
458.
-
459.
"Sooo, how do I get the parameters set?"
-
460.
>Thistle Sting packed everything up in the cardboard box and told her
-
461.
"Instructions are right inside.
-
462.
"You set the range number for each Deadly Sin
-
463.
"Then dial in how important you think each category is.
-
464.
"Plus there's a setting for increasing penalty for repeat offense...
-
465.
"And a switch that doubles the punishment if it catches you lying."
-
466.
>Eerily similar to Dad's rules...
-
467.
"It will just take you a few minutes to set it all up at home. You won't need any magic."
-
468.
-
469.
>Peachy stuck out her bottom lip and pouted a bit
-
470.
"But if I get to choose the spanking I get it's not much of a punishment, is it?"
-
471.
>Thistle had an idea for this;
-
472.
"Just get a pony who knows you really well to set it for you...then lock the settings cover so you can never see."
-
473.
-
474.
"But I don't have any pony like that..."
-
475.
>No colt friend
-
476.
>Her party friends wouldn't understand
-
477.
>Dad unwilling to do it
-
478.
>She would DIE of humiliation if anybody at work found out
-
479.
"Could you do it for me?"
-
480.
-
481.
>Thistle's face sank
-
482.
"Awww, that's a lot of extra work and it's almost my break time!
-
483.
>But Peachy's needy whimper made her concede that she'd spend that break struggling with complicated magical paddle settings
-
484.
"Am I gonna get anything out of this?"
-
485.
>Her customer blushed and emptied out the last few pennies from her purse
-
486.
>It wasn't even enough for a stingy tip
-
487.
>Thistle groaned and accepted that she'd be doing this favor in the name of Friendship.
-
488.
-
489.
>When Sprite got home she didn't open the cardboard box
-
490.
>Not right away
-
491.
>She boiled some noodles for dinner
-
492.
>Wasn't kidding about that ramen
-
493.
>But she couldn't eat
-
494.
>She was too nervous about what had to happen tonight
-
495.
-
496.
"No time like the present."
-
497.
>At least she lived on the top floor...no upstairs neighbors
-
498.
>The next door apartment was vacant
-
499.
>And the old mare a floor down was near deaf
-
500.
>If she screamed like she always did as a foal, at least the police would not be called
-
501.
-
502.
>She removed The Grande from its box
-
503.
>It was the first time she actually held it
-
504.
>She was impressed by its lightness, but unyielding rigidity
-
505.
"Let's try this."
-
506.
>The paddle could only communicate via a magical slab of slate
-
507.
>A little 2x4 inch chalkboard to write down confessions on
-
508.
>Peachy looked across the room at her half-finished bowl of noodles
-
509.
"Here goes..."
-
510.
>and she wrote on the chalk board;
-
511.
"did not finish my dinner"
-
512.
>and waited for the response
-
513.
>Nothing
-
514.
>The little jewels on the side indicating Greed and Gluttony flickered but nothing else happened
-
515.
"Was that not bad enough?
-
516.
"Two hundred and twenty bits and you won't work because you don't think I was naughty enough!?"
-
517.
>But she felt silly talking to a piece of wood.
-
518.
>She tried again
-
519.
>Since she had only finished half her noodles, Peachy was still hungry and had food on the brain
-
520.
>So she could only think of food-related crimes to confess
-
521.
>She wrote down;
-
522.
"Had a greasy hayburger for lunch instead of a salad."
-
523.
>This time Gluttony glowed brighter, but nothing from Greed
-
524.
>Sloth flickered a little though
-
525.
"So it takes combo's into account"
-
526.
>The chalk message disappeared as the paddle calculated her punishment
-
527.
"10 spanks."
-
528.
-
529.
>Peachy took a deep breath
-
530.
"Okay, here goes."
-
531.
>She laid herself down across the arm of her ratty old couch
-
532.
>Her hooves could not touch the ground
-
533.
>She hugged her throw pillows and squeaked out...
-
534.
"Begin!"
-
535.
-
536.
>At the pre-set command word
-
537.
>(Thistle let Peachy pick from 4)
-
538.
>the wooden terror floated over her ominously, taking position behind her
-
539.
>Shivering with nervous energy, Peachy expected a lecture
-
540.
-
541.
>She got a surprisingly hard crack across the rear instead
-
542.
>Not the worst she'd ever gotten
-
543.
>But from just one whack she knew the paddle meant business
-
544.
-
545.
>Peachy twisted and whimpered as her new purchase delivered its first service
-
546.
"Wow! Does that sting!"
-
547.
>Eight, nine and ten whacks couldn't come soon enough.
-
548.
>When it was finished, Peachy was breathing hard and wiping her eyes
-
549.
>A good first test
-
550.
>One thing she knew was; she didn't want a greasy hayburger for lunch tomorrow
-
551.
-
552.
>Peachy took a minute to catch her breath
-
553.
>She finished her noodles and put a cold towel on her stingy rear
-
554.
>It didn't quite need ice yet
-
555.
-
556.
>Yet.
-
557.
>Peachy knew she had to push further before she was sure about this
-
558.
>Thistle Sting had stuck her neck out
-
559.
>She had to either decide to keep it
-
560.
>or get it back to the shop before Thistle's boss noticed it missing.
-
561.
>She had to go harder.
-
562.
-
563.
>Sprite wasn't ready for a full-on butt busting yet,
-
564.
>nor did she believe she deserved one tonight,
-
565.
>but wanted to explore some of the other settings of the paddle
-
566.
"What if the number of burgers was different?"
-
567.
-
568.
>Time for a second round
-
569.
>Peachy got herself into position
-
570.
>Head down, rear up
-
571.
>Back hooves kicking helplessly above the floor boards
-
572.
>This time she scratched on the slate
-
573.
"I had three greasy hayburgers for lunch instead of a salad."
-
574.
>That felt like a good test
-
575.
>After all it was true
-
576.
>The punishment for 3 might be a little more than for one
-
577.
>But the main crime was giving in to temptation...so why should 3 be much worse than 1?
-
578.
-
579.
>The enchantment made its cruel calculus.
-
580.
>Her chalk scratches disappeared
-
581.
>A new sentence appeared in their place.
-
582.
>Peachy's eyes grew wide with surprise as she read along;
-
583.
"Thirty spanks? Awww, man!"
-
584.
>She expected half that
-
585.
>But what she saw next horrified her
-
586.
"Doubled FOR LYING!?"
-
587.
>She struggled to get out of the way before the paddle started its horrible work
-
588.
"Don't say begin...don't say begin...don't say...
-
589.
>Yeah
-
590.
>She actually said that out loud in her panic
-
591.
>So 'Begin' is exactly what the paddle did
-
592.
-
593.
[WHACK] [WHACK] [WHACK]
-
594.
>Peachy Sprite shrieked as she tried to remember the safe word that would halt the punishment
-
595.
"Why didn't I choose something easier to remember! Whhhaaaahhhh!"
-
596.
>Unable to escape she kicked and cried like a foal
-
597.
>It was harder this time...so much more painful
-
598.
>Through her tears and wailing Peachy remembered what Thistle Sting had said about the settings
-
599.
>This must count as a repeat offense
-
600.
"WHHhhhhaaaaAAAAHHHhhhhhooooaaaaAAWW!
-
601.
>The young mare bawled, as she could not escape without exposing the tender back of her legs to the worst of it
-
602.
>60 hard strokes!
-
603.
>It was so much more than Peachy wanted to try on the first day
-
604.
>But she had no choice now, the paddle had no mind of its own and was only running a magical program
-
605.
"I PAID TWO HUNDRED AND TWENTY ONE BITS FOR THIIIIIIISSSSSsssssss!"
-
606.
>She cried at the top of her lungs.
-
607.
>Lucky she had no neighbors that would complain.
-
608.
-
609.
>This magical wooden terror did a mighty job
-
610.
>It was heavier and harder than anything her father had ever spanked her with
-
611.
>But she was a bigger girl now
-
612.
>And her grown mare tushie was burning with pain as badly as any little filly tanning she'd ever experienced.
-
613.
-
614.
"OOooowwWWW! Ow! OW, Ow! Please stop, pleeeaaasseeee..."
-
615.
>She was begging a plank of wood for mercy
-
616.
>But Peachy didn't know what else to do
-
617.
>Never that attentive about such things, she'd lost count in the first few whacks
-
618.
>As the crying filly kicked and wiggled in a desperate effort to endure the pain, she had no idea if she had 5 or 55 spanks left to go
-
619.
>Even ONE was too many
-
620.
-
621.
>It was too much, Peachy had to escape
-
622.
"Please stop, please stop! I can't take it!"
-
623.
>But the enchanted paddle did not posses pity for her to appeal to
-
624.
>She yanked at the couch cushions, trying to drag herself out of reach
-
625.
>Hopefully the paddle would not chase her!
-
626.
>Peachy dug her hooves into the gaps between the cushions, looking for grip
-
627.
>But all she did was dislodge them, and when one fell all 3 followed, tumbling to the floor
-
628.
>These cushions had been the surface Peachy was leaning on
-
629.
>With their loss, her upper body fell forward and down, 4 more inches
-
630.
"WHHHHAAAAHHH NNNOOoooooo!"
-
631.
>This pushed her rear-end up higher, and at a sharper angle
-
632.
>The tender bits at the crease between rump and leg were painfully exposed
-
633.
>Worst, the paddle adjusted to her new position
-
634.
>It now spanked from almost directly above
-
635.
>The added help from gravity might not have added much impact if tested in a laboratory
-
636.
>But Peachy Sprite's bottom absolutely noticed the difference
-
637.
-
638.
"Bwwwhhhaaaahhh, please, please, please be over soon!"
-
639.
>She had completely lost track of how many she'd endured and forgotten how many she was supposed to get
-
640.
>For all she knew the paddle had malfunctioned hours ago and she was trapped in a timeless existence of agony
-
641.
>Peachy bawled like she did when she'd been a mischievous filly, finally forced to pay the price over Dad's knee
-
642.
>She was flooded with the same feelings
-
643.
>Peachy hated this...she wanted more than anything for it to be over
-
644.
>Yet she felt like this was entirely her fault
-
645.
>Nobody was persecuting her
-
646.
>No pony was responsible for this except herself
-
647.
>And her detrimental attitude.
-
648.
-
649.
>It went on for quite some time.
-
650.
>As Peachy learned from re-reading the instructions later, the Grande did not count a spank unless good, firm (painful) contact was made
-
651.
>Spanks that did not hit cleanly did not count
-
652.
>and many of those had hurt the worst!
-
653.
>Peachy had done herself no favors by kicking and squirming.
-
654.
>There was no official count but she had likely increased her number of spanks to 80 rather than the 60 she'd been condemned to
-
655.
-
656.
>For all the pain and crying the ending was anti-climactic
-
657.
>Dad always slowed down and lectured at the end
-
658.
>If the crime was bad enough to earn a 'grand finale', this is when it obviously happened
-
659.
>But for all its fancy features the Grande did not have a setting for a big finish.
-
660.
>It just stopped.
-
661.
-
662.
>Bawling Peachy took a few moments to realize she wasn't being spanked anymore.
-
663.
>Then, after wiping her muzzle she asked timidly;
-
664.
"Finished?"
-
665.
>The paddle took that as a command rather than a question.
-
666.
>It floated down and came to rest on the nearest flat surface.
-
667.
-
668.
>Peachy scrambled away from the paddle at first
-
669.
>Her rump still throbbed and burned
-
670.
>She was still freely weeping from the painful ordeal.
-
671.
>She didn't even want to go near that thing for a while.
-
672.
-
673.
>What she did want was a bag of frozen peas for her poor heinie
-
674.
>Looking in the ice box she cursed
-
675.
"Of course I don't have anything healthy like that."
-
676.
-
677.
>Peachy didn't go near the paddle for the rest of the night
-
678.
>but when payday came she spent her money on some healthy groceries instead of pizza and hayburgers
-
679.
>She also got a few bags of frozen peas
-
680.
>A necessity as she intended to use the Grande again
-
681.
-
682.
>Peachy began taking notes throughout her day
-
683.
>Behaviors and attitudes she knew were detrimental
-
684.
Flirted with a colt on the elevator even though I knew he was married.
-
685.
>Stuff at work
-
686.
Did not confess to a mathematical error that took my office 4 hours to track down and fix
-
687.
>To be fair Sprite did not know it was her mistake until it was found
-
688.
>but she could have owned up to it then instead of letting it remain a mystery and sharing the blame around
-
689.
>Even at lunch she critiqued her own behavior
-
690.
Enjoyed to a musician in the park for a half hour but then left without giving him a tip
-
691.
>She honestly felt guilty about that one
-
692.
-
693.
>Luckily all those notes were recorded on different days
-
694.
>because the paddle held her to account for all of them.
-
695.
>For the stallion in the elevator she got 20 sharp whacks for Lust and 10 more for Envy
-
696.
"Oow! Oow! Oow! I'm sorrrrryyy!
-
697.
"I wasn't gonna do anything, OW! his breath was horrible!"
-
698.
>Her math error got her 15 spanks for sloth
-
699.
>She hadn't checked her computations twice, clearly
-
700.
>Then another 30 for pride in not admitting her mistake
-
701.
"Please, please stop! Owwwie! I won't be such a chicken OW! next time!"
-
702.
>She felt lucky not to have triggered the lie detector this time
-
703.
>For her offense against the musician, however, the paddle gave her a sound butt blistering
-
704.
>Lust and Wrath were the only ones with nothing to say
-
705.
>All the other Deadly Sins had input that evening
-
706.
"WHHHHAAaaahhhHHH!
-
707.
"I'm sorrryyy! I'll go back and tip him tomorOW, OW, OW!"
-
708.
>And she did; although she fibbed to him and said she'd been out of cash the day before
-
709.
>Peachy didn't tell the paddle about that one
-
710.
>During her post-spanking cool down period;
-
711.
>as she had a good cry and soothed her sizzling bottom with a bag of frozen peas
-
712.
>her hoarse voice with a healthy juice popsicle instead of a half-gallon of ice cream
-
713.
>Peachy came to the revelation that the Grande had been created and enchanted by craftsponies
-
714.
>As such it took particular umbrage at an offense to a fellow artist
-
715.
>Good thing to remember.
-
716.
-
717.
>For a few weeks Peachy Sprite held the belief that the paddle somehow magically "knew" when she was lying
-
718.
>She finally realized this was silly
-
719.
>The paddle was a piece of wood brought to 'life' by a magical spell
-
720.
>It had no mind or free will
-
721.
>The only reason it had 'known' she lied about the number of hayburgers that first time was because she foolishly told it a made up number first then exposed her lie by telling the truth next
-
722.
-
723.
>She tested the theory one night when she'd been a bit lazy at work
-
724.
>Laying over the couch she had grown to fear
-
725.
>All cushions now securely locked in place
-
726.
>Peachy wrote her sin on the slate
-
727.
"Told the Boss I couldn't stay late because my cat was sick."
-
728.
-
729.
>In a few moments her relatively mild sentence replaced the chalk letters on the tablet
-
730.
>Only 5 for Sloth
-
731.
>Apparently the unicorn who enchanted this had a soft spot for cats
-
732.
>Then Peachy took a deep breath and tried Part 2 of her experiment
-
733.
"I don't even have a cat."
-
734.
>Five smacks, double for lying, is still not awful
-
735.
>But then...
-
736.
"40 FOR...WRATH? What the fuck!?"
-
737.
>But it was too late at that point and poor Peachy had to howl her way through 50 painful spanks
-
738.
"Whhhaaa! I don't even understand this one!
-
739.
"Whhhhyyyyy didn't I read the instructions mo, OW OW Owwhhhaa!!"
-
740.
-
741.
>Another bag of peas, another popsicle
-
742.
>Another good read of the full instruction sheet
-
743.
"Certain important crimes do not easily fit into the 7 categories are assigned at the digression of the enchanting Wizard."
-
744.
>Yeah, they like to be called Wizards so they can charge more
-
745.
"Incomplete list here."
-
746.
>Peachy scanned the list under Wrath and quickly found Animal Cruelty
-
747.
>She certainly agreed with that and felt that the punishment should be done with something a little more important than a sex toy
-
748.
>But crying wolf over a non-existent sick cat seemed like a stretch
-
749.
>There was no pony to complain to though
-
750.
>She was using a sex toy to change her lifetime pattern of behavior
-
751.
>Things were bound to get a little weird
-
752.
>Just remember never to fuck with cats.
-
753.
-
754.
>About 2 months after her purchase, Peachy returned to the shop
-
755.
"Welcome to the Lover...oh hi! I recognize you.
-
756.
"Please don't say you want to return the Grande...WAY too much time has passed."
-
757.
>Peachy had the Grande with her, but she did not intend to return it
-
758.
"Hi Thistle Sting!
-
759.
"I brought you a coffee 'cause I stiffed you on the tip last time.
-
760.
"No, I don't wanna return.
-
761.
"In fact, I think I'm ready to have it engraved."
-
762.
>The clerk was happy Peachy had remembered her name, and happy for the coffee
-
763.
>In time the two would become close friends
-
764.
"Great! I can do that right here in the shop
-
765.
"Or I can brand the inscription on with a wood burner
-
766.
"That's cheaper, but it looks really nice too."
-
767.
>Thistle remembered her prior financial pinch
-
768.
>But Peachy looked at the slab of wood she both loved and hated
-
769.
>Her behavior and attitude really had improved
-
770.
>She was healthier, happier
-
771.
>and she'd gotten the promotion she'd been passed over for last cycle
-
772.
>Best, she didn't have to lie about how well things were going when she wrote a letter home to Mom & Dad
-
773.
>He deserved the nice expensive engraving
-
774.
>and would be the generic Grande no more.
-
775.
-
776.
"I think it's time for a name, Thistle.
-
777.
"He's my Detrimental Attitude Destroyer."
-
778.
>Thistle Sting cringed and told her.
-
779.
"Awww, Peachy, that's WAY too many letters
-
780.
"I can only fit three."
-
781.
-
782.
>Peachy Sprite was okay with that, although she hadn't planned it this way.
-
783.
"Okay, just the initials then."
-
784.
>Do I have to spell it out for you?
-
785.
>
-
786.
>D.A.D.
-
787.
-
788.
END
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