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Detrimental Attitude by DCFTEF

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Created: 2022-01-08 03:34:46
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  1. Detrimental Attitude by DCFTEF
  2.  
  3. (24/11/2021)
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  5. https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/37813344/#q37872151
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  8.  
  9. >Peachy Sprite was a filly who liked to have fun
  10. >A lot
  11. >In fact it was one of the major problems of her life that she liked fun a lot more than the work required to earn that fun
  12. >Temptation drew her irresistibly, like a magnet
  13.  
  14. >When she was little this didn't cause any problems
  15. >They youngest foal of her family by a significant number of years
  16. >she was indulged and allowed to remain the baby of the family far too long
  17. >While her elder siblings had responsibility laid upon them at appropriate ages
  18. >Peachy was sheltered from it by both mother and siblings
  19.  
  20. >Of course, every filly gets into trouble and Peachy was no different
  21. >She got into more than her share in fact
  22. >But her adoring siblings often bailed her out of it
  23. >Or Mom brushed it off as cute, foalish mischief
  24. >When Sprite had done something that positively, undeniably required a response it was always;
  25. "You wait until your father gets home."
  26.  
  27. >Peachy's father was a hard-working stallion who would rather have come home to anything but a naughty filly in need of a spanking
  28. >He hated being the disciplinarian
  29. >He worked all day at a job he did not like, so he could go home and spend time with his family
  30. >Having to punish one of them so frequently frustrated him and broke his heart
  31. >But he was a good father and did his duty
  32. >And Peachy Sprite was just a filly...she would get better.
  33.  
  34. >Peachy Sprite's irresponsible behavior only got worse as she became a teenager
  35. >She had never learned restraint or mature decision making
  36. >And when faced with the tantalizing temptations of teenagerhood she indulged
  37. >Her Mom and siblings laughed, and called her a party girl
  38. >Her Dad grumbled because he now had to deal with issues like, curfew, drugs and colts
  39. >Her mother didn't do much to sanction her at all
  40.  
  41. >Peachy's Dad felt she was too old for spanking
  42. >But nothing else worked
  43. >She hated being grounded, so she whined and Mom let her off the hook
  44. >When she lost privilege's her adoring older siblings snuck the same indulgences to her behind Dad's back
  45. >This was easy, because Dad had to work all the time
  46. >He wasn't around to ensure she stayed grounded, or didn't get her saddlebag money allowance
  47. >Spankings were his only option
  48. >Peachy hated and feared them intensely
  49. >So for a time they worked
  50. >Peachy generally stated out of trouble
  51. >Her grades were good
  52. >She completed High School
  53. >But only because her unwilling Dad was always there with that awful, horrible, no good, nasty paddle
  54. >Peachy Sprite gave her Dad a big hug and even acknowledged his painful discipline in her graduation speech, to much laughter in the audience
  55.  
  56. >The good grades Peachy was required to get
  57. >(or else, WHACK!)
  58. >got her into Bridleburg University
  59. >It was a long way from home and Peachy's father cringed
  60. >But she was just a kid, she would get better, right?
  61.  
  62. >The whole family was excited that Peachy Sprite had gotten into prestigious Bridleburg University
  63. >But her father was worried
  64. >She had only gotten through High School with a paddle constantly threatening her rear
  65. >Now she would be living miles and miles away
  66. >He had a serious talk with her when he traveled to campus to help her move into the dorm
  67. "You have to control yourself, honey
  68. "Your attitude is detrimental to success.
  69. "It's time you grew up."
  70. >Jokingly he added
  71. "You're a legal adult, I won't be there to spank you anymore!"
  72. >They both had a good laugh
  73. >That stuff was all in the past, they were both sure
  74.  
  75. >Peachy Sprite had honestly wanted to be a good filly when her Mom & Dad left on the train
  76. >But that night she drank 15 cups of cider...stole the school mascot...lost her virginity and passed out in the Dean's flower garden.
  77. >Peachy could have been expelled on the spot.
  78. >But as usual ponies cut her slack and she got away with it.
  79. "She's only a freshman on her first weekend at college
  80. "She'll get better."
  81. >She begged the University not to send a report to her Dad, and they indulged her
  82. >So he never found out
  83.  
  84. >By mid-term Peachy hadn't gotten better
  85. >She had a reputation as a party filly
  86. >She had blown through all the money Mom & Dad gave her to last the whole year
  87. >She was only attending half her classes
  88. >And was failing nearly all of them
  89. >One super embarrassing day...Dad arrived on the train to sort things out
  90.  
  91. >He kinda lost his cool
  92. "Sprite, when are you gonna grow up?
  93. "You're blowing an incredible, one in a lifetime opportunity here!
  94. "All because of this detrimental attitude you have!
  95. "You can have fun, honey...I want you to.
  96. "But the work has to come first.
  97. "You can't do this all your life."
  98.  
  99. >Peachy was genuinely listening
  100. >She was scared
  101. >She was about to flunk out and she knew all this partying was endangering her future
  102. >But she'd learned no self discipline over her life
  103. "D-Dad...I can't believe I'm asking you this but...
  104. "Could you do that thing you used to do when I was a kid?"
  105.  
  106. >Sprite's father was totally against it
  107. "You're an adult now! That's a punishment for little foals!"
  108. >But one thing she had learned at college was debate
  109. >And she wore him down with her logic
  110. "Dad, please...you KNOW I don't want it.
  111. "But that's just the point.
  112. "I have problems, I know that, I'm sorry!
  113. "But you wouldn't make a drug addict or alcoholic just quit with no help, would you?"
  114. >Peachy was serious
  115. "I just need a little help.
  116. "Just ween me off of it and I promise I'll be more mature."
  117. >Sprite's father didn't like it
  118. >But he had to take the train back home and go to work on Monday
  119. >He couldn't stay in Bridleburg and supervise his legally adult daughter
  120. "I will do this ONCE but never again!
  121. "It's your detrimental attitude that needs attention,
  122. "Not your rear-end!"
  123.  
  124. >Peachy would have been satisfied to be spanked in the dorm
  125. >Totally embarrassing but kinda the point
  126. >She wanted it to sink in
  127. >Plus, she wouldn't be the first college filly whose parents had to visit campus and straighten his daughter out
  128. >A few freshmen had already gotten visits from their daddies this term
  129. >Probably happened in the colts' dorm too.
  130.  
  131. >But Dad was embarrassed by this
  132. "You're a legal adult
  133. "What I'm doing is assault!"
  134. >Peachy argued though;
  135. "Not if it's consensual."
  136. >But that didn't make Dad happy
  137. "It shouldn't be happening at all!"
  138.  
  139. >He insisted that they do it at his hotel, just off campus
  140. >So Peachy Sprite was marched off on an extra-long walk of doom
  141. >Through campus, across the quad and finally to the hotel
  142. >The desk clerk must have thought he was a dirty old stallion
  143. >A sugar daddy checking in with a way-too-young college filly.
  144. >The sounds of smacking and squealing coming from the room only backed up this guess
  145. >It sounded like "Daddy" liked to play naughty schoolgirl with his "Little filly"
  146. >Little did they know it was 100% true
  147. >He was her father and he was legitimately giving his little naughty schoolfilly a spanking
  148. >A slat from the bed made a fearsome paddle
  149. >Painful enough to make Peachy sorry she ever took a sip of cider
  150. >But Dad found the whole situation so humiliating he wished the hotel DID assume he was a pervert rather than know the truth
  151. >But this was the last time, right? She would get better.
  152.  
  153. >It wasn't the last time
  154. >Peachy Sprite's father had to take her across his knee once that summer
  155. >And he had to visit campus one more time during her sophomore year
  156. >But that was finally the last time
  157. >Peachy graduated with good grades and her Dad breathed a sigh of relief
  158. >It was over now
  159. >She was a grown up mare now, with the skills and degree to have a successful life
  160.  
  161. >So he was a little worried when she announced her decision to backpack around the world for a few months before taking on a job
  162. >But she had absolutely no money so how much trouble could she get in?
  163.  
  164. >It was her successful older siblings that indulged her this time
  165. >They each kicked in money so their little sister could make her world tour
  166. >By now they understood how their previous coddling hadn't helped Peachy
  167. >This was their misguided attempt to make it up to her
  168. >They thought the trip would help her learn some of the maturity she'd missed out on
  169. >Instead it just gave her another year to dodge responsibility and keep building bad habits
  170. >Detrimental attitudes...
  171.  
  172. >Peachy Sprite ran out of money in the first month but fell in with experienced backpacking ponies who showed her how to live the life
  173. >Like this she bounced all over the world for months
  174. >All over Equestria
  175. >The Eastern Lands
  176. >Griffonstone and Yakyakistan
  177. >Mt. Arris...and even the dragon lands
  178. >Tourism had really opened up at this point
  179.  
  180. >Since he did not have to deal with her any more, Peachy's father breathed a sigh of relief
  181. >But he still worried...
  182.  
  183. >It made Dad and the whole family was proud when Peachy returned and announced she already had a job
  184. >She'd met some business ponies in Manehattan who always needed new entry level graduates in her field
  185. >Maybe her world tour had taught Peachy some maturity
  186. >Maybe some of her detrimental attitudes were being replaced
  187.  
  188. >In truth Peachy had spent the whole year partying
  189. >Griffonstone, Mt Arris, Yakyakistan...
  190. >She wasn't there to see the arts and the beautiful scenery
  191. >It was just by pure dumb luck that she was at a rave in Manehattan with those office ponies
  192. >They were not bosses either, as she led the family to believe
  193. >They were just entry-level wage slaves like she would be
  194. >But a job interview is still valuable
  195. >Maybe she was finally getting better?
  196.  
  197. >Sprite got the job
  198. >A big company with room to be promoted
  199. >Bottom of the ladder now but the pay was liveable
  200. >She could afford her first apartment
  201. >And a lot of drinks
  202. >Nights out at the club with her friends
  203. >Nights that resulted in hangovers
  204. >And those resulted in sick days
  205. >More than she should have taken
  206. >But every letter home sounded great
  207. >Making money, staying responsible, replacing detrimental attitudes.
  208. >Total lies.
  209. >But she was a grown mare now, with a job and a place of her own
  210. >It's not like any pony was going to spank her for taking too many sick days.
  211.  
  212. >One dark and stormy night Peachy's father was at home in Fillydelphia
  213. >Reading one of her encouraging letters
  214. >His youngest was finally doing well
  215. >A relief...he thought she...
  216. [KNOCK] [KNOCK]
  217. >It was a surprise to hear any pony at the door at this late hour
  218. >Peachy's father checked the peep-hole carefully and then swung the door open
  219. "By Celestia...what's wrong?"
  220. >Peachy Sprite was there
  221. >Soaking wet in the rain
  222. >Still obviously crying
  223. "Dad...I really messed up!"
  224. >His heart sank
  225. "Alright, first thing let's get you inside."
  226.  
  227. >Wrapped in a blanket, with a warm cup of tea
  228. >Sprite confessed the truth;
  229. "I've taken double my allowable sick days.
  230. "I'm behind on my rent.
  231. "I've gained 2 inches on my waistline.
  232. "and last weekend, I drank too much at a company party and flirted with the Boss'es husband."
  233. >Her father groaned
  234. >Was this ever gonna end? Was she ever gonna get better?
  235.  
  236. "Dad..."
  237. >Oh, no, she's not gonna ask me that
  238. "Do you remember what you used to do?
  239. "When I got out of control as a kid?"
  240.  
  241. >He shook his head.
  242. >He thought he would never have to do this,
  243. >But Peachy Swift's father looked her in the face and flatly said;
  244. "No."
  245.  
  246. >Peachy was shocked
  247. >She knew Dad didn't like to do this,
  248. >he felt she was too old.
  249. >He was right of course.
  250. "Dad, please, I know it's super-weird, but this is important!
  251. "I'm gonna lose the job! I just know it!"
  252. >But her father shook his head
  253. >He'd had enough
  254. "Absolutely not and NEVER again!
  255. "Peachy, I can't keep solving your problems with a spanking paddle!
  256. "You are a grown mare.
  257. "I know you can be mature and handle your business because you do it perfectly...for the first few weeks after I've spanked you.
  258. "But we always come back to this, which means it didn't work."
  259.  
  260. >Sprite did not expect such a flat refusal
  261. "But Dad, it's just this once...one time and I'll get my shit together, please!"
  262. >Sadly, he turned his begging daughter down
  263. "Sweetie...if you said the same thing to me about a drink, or pills I would bring you straight to the hospital.
  264. "Is this an addiction with you? Is it a dependency?
  265. "It doesn't matter, I'm not doing it anymore."
  266. >Peachy begged him, but Dad held his ground
  267. "I will always love and support you in any way I can.
  268. "But you're a mare now and need to regulate your behavior yourself.
  269. "or else I'm scared that your detrimental attitude is going to ruin you."
  270.  
  271. >She had to be at work in Manehattan the next morning
  272. >So Dad rode the late-night train with her
  273. >Missed a day of his own work back in Fillydelphia
  274. >He found out that she wasn't as close to being fired as she thought
  275. >But she wasn't getting a promotion with all the rest of the group who hired on at the same time as her either.
  276. >He sorted things out with her landlord
  277. >Worked out a payment schedule that would have her caught up in a few months
  278. >Situation stabilized, Dad kissed her on the cheek and wished her luck
  279. >But his answer was firm as he boarded his train
  280. "I'll always be here to help, but I'm done correcting your behavior.
  281. "It's up to you now to correct your...
  282. >You get it by now.
  283.  
  284. >Those first few weeks after Dad left were miserable
  285. >Peachy Sprite was walking on eggshells
  286. >Afraid to slip up at work and lose her job
  287. >Afraid to risk any fun in case things got wild and out of control
  288. >Things were so much easier when Dad could make it all better
  289. >By making things temporarily so much worse!
  290.  
  291. >On her way home Peachy passed a shop
  292. >It was a sex shop
  293. >Peachy's apartment was not in the nicest neighborhood
  294.  
  295. >She had been inside before, with her drunk friends
  296. >They'd been having fun
  297. >They all had a good laugh at the dildos and leather gear
  298. >Bought a few tubes of sex lube and some dirty magazines, but nothing else
  299. >It was something else that Peachy kept thinking about.
  300. >Paddles
  301. >Apparently a big seller, the store had lots of them
  302. >Big, little, thick, thin
  303. >Enchanted and budget choices
  304. >Peachy thought about them a lot but never had the nerve to go inside
  305. >Until this day...
  306.  
  307. >A door chime announced her arrival, but Peachy still said;
  308. "Hello?"
  309. >She was greeted by a cheerful clerk filly about her age
  310. "Hi there, welcome to The Lovers' Stable.
  311. "I don't think I've seen you before. I'm Thistle Sting, how can I help you?"
  312. >Sprite took a great, big, deep, mighty breath...
  313. >and then whispered
  314. "Can I look at your paddles?"
  315. >The clerk gave her a smile and replied
  316. "Ooo, some pony's been a bad filly?"
  317. >Peachy blushed and confessed
  318. "You could say that."
  319.  
  320. "Well we have lots of great choices, from budget to unicorn enchanted."
  321. >Thistle Sting showed her a selection of regular but very nicely made paddles in the 20 bit price range
  322. >That was really what Peachy was hoping to spend
  323. "Now these are made by a traditional craftstallion in a nearby town
  324. "He has the cutest colt apprentice, I love it when they come to deliver our order.
  325. "But I think the poor little guy got a spanking of his own recently, he seemed awfully squirmy last visit.
  326. "I wonder if he gets it with the very paddles he helps make? Ohhh, wouldn't that be awful!"
  327.  
  328. >While Thistle babbled, Peachy looked over her choices
  329. >They all scared the fur off her
  330. >Wielded by a stern daddy any of these would keep her on the right path
  331. >But she didn't have a daddy willing to do it
  332. >That meant she'd have to spend a bit more
  333.  
  334. "I think I need an enchanted one."
  335. >Thistle gave her a sympathetic look
  336. "No Very Special Somepony?"
  337. >Well, she'd had lots
  338. >None of them were all that special
  339. "Okay, these all levitate and spank on their own.
  340. "But the cheaper enchanted ones cost at least a hundred bits."
  341. >Peachy gasped
  342. >This was what she needed but at 5 times what she wanted to spend
  343. >Already on a restricted budget because of her rent embarrassment, this was a stretch
  344.  
  345. "How do they work?"
  346. >Thistle looked overwhelmed and told her;
  347. "That would take an hour. They're all different. What do you need?"
  348. >Her customer seemed embarrassed to answer
  349. >She reconsidered her sales approach and said
  350. "We started at the bottom and moved up.
  351. "Let me show you the Top-of-the Line, our best paddle.
  352. "Then we can find something that's right for you in-between, right?"
  353. >Sounds reasonable
  354. "This is The Grande..."
  355. >Thistle drew a cardboard box out from under the counter and opened the lid
  356. >It was a beautiful slab of wood
  357. >Rich, tightly spaced wood grain from old growth forest
  358. "Once you pre-set some parameters this thing can actually calculate how many spanks you get based on how naughty you were."
  359. >Peachy Sprite almost jumped when she heard that
  360. "Ohmygosh that's EXACTLY what I need!"
  361. >She felt kinda dorky for getting that excited in a sex shop
  362. "I mean...please,,,tell me more..."
  363.  
  364. >Thistle Sting cringed a little but went on...
  365. "There are 7 parameters to set, based on the Seven Deadly Sins."
  366. >Yeah, they got those in Horsie World too
  367. >Don't overthink this
  368. "So lets say your coltfriend is a couch potato who eats all the ice cream in the apartment..."
  369. >Dastardly!
  370. "You just crank up the importance setting on Sloth and Gluttony and WHAM!"
  371. >Peachy flinched when Thistle banged her hoof on the counter
  372. "He's gonna wish he saved some ice cream for his sore rear end."
  373. >And alternately
  374. "But let's say he's a nice colt who just lost his temper when another stallion was rude to you in line for a movie,
  375. "He still deserves a spanking for punching that other stallion,
  376. "But not a bad one, since he was defending my honor."
  377. >That slip told Peachy that the clerk was describing incidents from her own dating life
  378. >She wondered if Thistle ever borrowed the Grande from work
  379. "So you turn Wrath down low, and he doesn't get it so bad.
  380. "There's also settings for Lust, Pride, Envy and Greed.
  381. "Pretty much covers most naughtiness, but there's an open eighth slot for unexpected circumstances.
  382. "You gotta ask my boss how to set that one though...the instructions are kinda wonky."
  383.  
  384. >Peachy trembled at the thought of this thing devastating her heinie
  385. >But it was everything she needed
  386. "How much is it?"
  387.  
  388. >Thistle drew the box back and reminded her
  389. "I was just showing you what the Top-of-the-Line is!
  390. "This is a tool for professional leather dominaTrixies and sex clubs.
  391. "Don't fall in love...it costs 199.99 bits."
  392. >Whoa...let's look at something cheaper
  393. >But after seeing the Grande, none of the others have what she needs
  394.  
  395. "Thistle, I don't enjoy spankings"
  396. >she confessed
  397. >The clerk looked confused and said
  398. "We've got lots of nice dildos too..."
  399.  
  400. "I'm really messing up my life.
  401. "For years I blamed my Mom or my siblings who never let me learn responsibility
  402. "But I'm out of ponies to blame. This is my problem now.
  403. "Know who deserves none of the blame?
  404. "My Dad.
  405. "He's tried his whole life to help me get my shit together.
  406. "I'm so tired of him being disappointed in me."
  407.  
  408. >Thistle Sting seldom had customers open up like this to her
  409. >But she felt like Peachy was a friend in need
  410. "I'm really sorry...
  411. "I could give you my employee discount on any other item but The Grande is a special order."
  412. >Peachy looked in her purse
  413. >The annual Monsters of Griffon Rock tour was coming to Manehattan soon
  414. >She had money for her ticket set aside
  415. >26 bands...3 days...it was gonna be awesome...she was gonna get so hammered drunk
  416. >But Peachy took a deep breath
  417. "What's the total with tax?"
  418. >Thistle couldn't believe it but she did the math
  419. "Ummm, 217.98 bits."
  420. >The reckless filly whimpered and made her decision
  421. >In one of the first self disciplined moments of her life she chose the Grande over a concert that was sure to be a blast.
  422.  
  423. "Oh my gosh, seriously?"
  424. >Thistle couldn't believe it when Sprite began counting out her money
  425. "If this doesn't work can I bring it back?"
  426.  
  427. "Doesn't work?"
  428. >Thistle was confused
  429. "Unless you've got a cast iron rear-end I can safely say it's gonna work."
  430. >Peachy shook her head
  431. "I just mean, what if I don't have the nerve?
  432. "What if it doesn't even work for...what I need?"
  433.  
  434. >Behind the counter, Thistle Sting looked a little worried
  435. "This is a sex shop...ponies don't typically like to buy the things we sell after they've been used."
  436. >taking a deep breath
  437. "and my Boss will kill me if I sell an expensive item then you just bring it back a month from now."
  438. "I can maybe give you...one day?"
  439.  
  440. >Peachy Sprite gulped hard
  441. >She had planned on keeping the scary thing ready until she needed it
  442. >Maybe the fear of knowing it was in the apartment would even help her impulse control
  443. >This time limit meant she would have to test it and make her decision tonight.
  444.  
  445. "Eeeeeeekkkk...ring it up quick before I can change my mind!"
  446. >Thistle was still surprised this filly who didn't enjoy spankings just bought the most expensive paddle in the shop
  447. >She worried that this might be a mistake that got her into trouble with her Boss
  448. >But she rang up the purchase as requested
  449. "Would you like to donate 3 bits to the Equestrian Nature Fund?"
  450. >Peachy growled
  451. >She was already cutting her budget razor thin
  452. >But she was trying to be a good girl from now on
  453. "Yeah...3 bits for the %&#%+ bunnies..."
  454. >Thistle blushed and told her;
  455. "Okay, that comes to 220.98."
  456. >This was gonna be a week of ramen noodles until next payday
  457. >'Last Chance' marked down bread and vegetables at the market
  458.  
  459. "Sooo, how do I get the parameters set?"
  460. >Thistle Sting packed everything up in the cardboard box and told her
  461. "Instructions are right inside.
  462. "You set the range number for each Deadly Sin
  463. "Then dial in how important you think each category is.
  464. "Plus there's a setting for increasing penalty for repeat offense...
  465. "And a switch that doubles the punishment if it catches you lying."
  466. >Eerily similar to Dad's rules...
  467. "It will just take you a few minutes to set it all up at home. You won't need any magic."
  468.  
  469. >Peachy stuck out her bottom lip and pouted a bit
  470. "But if I get to choose the spanking I get it's not much of a punishment, is it?"
  471. >Thistle had an idea for this;
  472. "Just get a pony who knows you really well to set it for you...then lock the settings cover so you can never see."
  473.  
  474. "But I don't have any pony like that..."
  475. >No colt friend
  476. >Her party friends wouldn't understand
  477. >Dad unwilling to do it
  478. >She would DIE of humiliation if anybody at work found out
  479. "Could you do it for me?"
  480.  
  481. >Thistle's face sank
  482. "Awww, that's a lot of extra work and it's almost my break time!
  483. >But Peachy's needy whimper made her concede that she'd spend that break struggling with complicated magical paddle settings
  484. "Am I gonna get anything out of this?"
  485. >Her customer blushed and emptied out the last few pennies from her purse
  486. >It wasn't even enough for a stingy tip
  487. >Thistle groaned and accepted that she'd be doing this favor in the name of Friendship.
  488.  
  489. >When Sprite got home she didn't open the cardboard box
  490. >Not right away
  491. >She boiled some noodles for dinner
  492. >Wasn't kidding about that ramen
  493. >But she couldn't eat
  494. >She was too nervous about what had to happen tonight
  495.  
  496. "No time like the present."
  497. >At least she lived on the top floor...no upstairs neighbors
  498. >The next door apartment was vacant
  499. >And the old mare a floor down was near deaf
  500. >If she screamed like she always did as a foal, at least the police would not be called
  501.  
  502. >She removed The Grande from its box
  503. >It was the first time she actually held it
  504. >She was impressed by its lightness, but unyielding rigidity
  505. "Let's try this."
  506. >The paddle could only communicate via a magical slab of slate
  507. >A little 2x4 inch chalkboard to write down confessions on
  508. >Peachy looked across the room at her half-finished bowl of noodles
  509. "Here goes..."
  510. >and she wrote on the chalk board;
  511. "did not finish my dinner"
  512. >and waited for the response
  513. >Nothing
  514. >The little jewels on the side indicating Greed and Gluttony flickered but nothing else happened
  515. "Was that not bad enough?
  516. "Two hundred and twenty bits and you won't work because you don't think I was naughty enough!?"
  517. >But she felt silly talking to a piece of wood.
  518. >She tried again
  519. >Since she had only finished half her noodles, Peachy was still hungry and had food on the brain
  520. >So she could only think of food-related crimes to confess
  521. >She wrote down;
  522. "Had a greasy hayburger for lunch instead of a salad."
  523. >This time Gluttony glowed brighter, but nothing from Greed
  524. >Sloth flickered a little though
  525. "So it takes combo's into account"
  526. >The chalk message disappeared as the paddle calculated her punishment
  527. "10 spanks."
  528.  
  529. >Peachy took a deep breath
  530. "Okay, here goes."
  531. >She laid herself down across the arm of her ratty old couch
  532. >Her hooves could not touch the ground
  533. >She hugged her throw pillows and squeaked out...
  534. "Begin!"
  535.  
  536. >At the pre-set command word
  537. >(Thistle let Peachy pick from 4)
  538. >the wooden terror floated over her ominously, taking position behind her
  539. >Shivering with nervous energy, Peachy expected a lecture
  540.  
  541. >She got a surprisingly hard crack across the rear instead
  542. >Not the worst she'd ever gotten
  543. >But from just one whack she knew the paddle meant business
  544.  
  545. >Peachy twisted and whimpered as her new purchase delivered its first service
  546. "Wow! Does that sting!"
  547. >Eight, nine and ten whacks couldn't come soon enough.
  548. >When it was finished, Peachy was breathing hard and wiping her eyes
  549. >A good first test
  550. >One thing she knew was; she didn't want a greasy hayburger for lunch tomorrow
  551.  
  552. >Peachy took a minute to catch her breath
  553. >She finished her noodles and put a cold towel on her stingy rear
  554. >It didn't quite need ice yet
  555.  
  556. >Yet.
  557. >Peachy knew she had to push further before she was sure about this
  558. >Thistle Sting had stuck her neck out
  559. >She had to either decide to keep it
  560. >or get it back to the shop before Thistle's boss noticed it missing.
  561. >She had to go harder.
  562.  
  563. >Sprite wasn't ready for a full-on butt busting yet,
  564. >nor did she believe she deserved one tonight,
  565. >but wanted to explore some of the other settings of the paddle
  566. "What if the number of burgers was different?"
  567.  
  568. >Time for a second round
  569. >Peachy got herself into position
  570. >Head down, rear up
  571. >Back hooves kicking helplessly above the floor boards
  572. >This time she scratched on the slate
  573. "I had three greasy hayburgers for lunch instead of a salad."
  574. >That felt like a good test
  575. >After all it was true
  576. >The punishment for 3 might be a little more than for one
  577. >But the main crime was giving in to temptation...so why should 3 be much worse than 1?
  578.  
  579. >The enchantment made its cruel calculus.
  580. >Her chalk scratches disappeared
  581. >A new sentence appeared in their place.
  582. >Peachy's eyes grew wide with surprise as she read along;
  583. "Thirty spanks? Awww, man!"
  584. >She expected half that
  585. >But what she saw next horrified her
  586. "Doubled FOR LYING!?"
  587. >She struggled to get out of the way before the paddle started its horrible work
  588. "Don't say begin...don't say begin...don't say...
  589. >Yeah
  590. >She actually said that out loud in her panic
  591. >So 'Begin' is exactly what the paddle did
  592.  
  593. [WHACK] [WHACK] [WHACK]
  594. >Peachy Sprite shrieked as she tried to remember the safe word that would halt the punishment
  595. "Why didn't I choose something easier to remember! Whhhaaaahhhh!"
  596. >Unable to escape she kicked and cried like a foal
  597. >It was harder this time...so much more painful
  598. >Through her tears and wailing Peachy remembered what Thistle Sting had said about the settings
  599. >This must count as a repeat offense
  600. "WHHhhhhaaaaAAAAHHHhhhhhooooaaaaAAWW!
  601. >The young mare bawled, as she could not escape without exposing the tender back of her legs to the worst of it
  602. >60 hard strokes!
  603. >It was so much more than Peachy wanted to try on the first day
  604. >But she had no choice now, the paddle had no mind of its own and was only running a magical program
  605. "I PAID TWO HUNDRED AND TWENTY ONE BITS FOR THIIIIIIISSSSSsssssss!"
  606. >She cried at the top of her lungs.
  607. >Lucky she had no neighbors that would complain.
  608.  
  609. >This magical wooden terror did a mighty job
  610. >It was heavier and harder than anything her father had ever spanked her with
  611. >But she was a bigger girl now
  612. >And her grown mare tushie was burning with pain as badly as any little filly tanning she'd ever experienced.
  613.  
  614. "OOooowwWWW! Ow! OW, Ow! Please stop, pleeeaaasseeee..."
  615. >She was begging a plank of wood for mercy
  616. >But Peachy didn't know what else to do
  617. >Never that attentive about such things, she'd lost count in the first few whacks
  618. >As the crying filly kicked and wiggled in a desperate effort to endure the pain, she had no idea if she had 5 or 55 spanks left to go
  619. >Even ONE was too many
  620.  
  621. >It was too much, Peachy had to escape
  622. "Please stop, please stop! I can't take it!"
  623. >But the enchanted paddle did not posses pity for her to appeal to
  624. >She yanked at the couch cushions, trying to drag herself out of reach
  625. >Hopefully the paddle would not chase her!
  626. >Peachy dug her hooves into the gaps between the cushions, looking for grip
  627. >But all she did was dislodge them, and when one fell all 3 followed, tumbling to the floor
  628. >These cushions had been the surface Peachy was leaning on
  629. >With their loss, her upper body fell forward and down, 4 more inches
  630. "WHHHHAAAAHHH NNNOOoooooo!"
  631. >This pushed her rear-end up higher, and at a sharper angle
  632. >The tender bits at the crease between rump and leg were painfully exposed
  633. >Worst, the paddle adjusted to her new position
  634. >It now spanked from almost directly above
  635. >The added help from gravity might not have added much impact if tested in a laboratory
  636. >But Peachy Sprite's bottom absolutely noticed the difference
  637.  
  638. "Bwwwhhhaaaahhh, please, please, please be over soon!"
  639. >She had completely lost track of how many she'd endured and forgotten how many she was supposed to get
  640. >For all she knew the paddle had malfunctioned hours ago and she was trapped in a timeless existence of agony
  641. >Peachy bawled like she did when she'd been a mischievous filly, finally forced to pay the price over Dad's knee
  642. >She was flooded with the same feelings
  643. >Peachy hated this...she wanted more than anything for it to be over
  644. >Yet she felt like this was entirely her fault
  645. >Nobody was persecuting her
  646. >No pony was responsible for this except herself
  647. >And her detrimental attitude.
  648.  
  649. >It went on for quite some time.
  650. >As Peachy learned from re-reading the instructions later, the Grande did not count a spank unless good, firm (painful) contact was made
  651. >Spanks that did not hit cleanly did not count
  652. >and many of those had hurt the worst!
  653. >Peachy had done herself no favors by kicking and squirming.
  654. >There was no official count but she had likely increased her number of spanks to 80 rather than the 60 she'd been condemned to
  655.  
  656. >For all the pain and crying the ending was anti-climactic
  657. >Dad always slowed down and lectured at the end
  658. >If the crime was bad enough to earn a 'grand finale', this is when it obviously happened
  659. >But for all its fancy features the Grande did not have a setting for a big finish.
  660. >It just stopped.
  661.  
  662. >Bawling Peachy took a few moments to realize she wasn't being spanked anymore.
  663. >Then, after wiping her muzzle she asked timidly;
  664. "Finished?"
  665. >The paddle took that as a command rather than a question.
  666. >It floated down and came to rest on the nearest flat surface.
  667.  
  668. >Peachy scrambled away from the paddle at first
  669. >Her rump still throbbed and burned
  670. >She was still freely weeping from the painful ordeal.
  671. >She didn't even want to go near that thing for a while.
  672.  
  673. >What she did want was a bag of frozen peas for her poor heinie
  674. >Looking in the ice box she cursed
  675. "Of course I don't have anything healthy like that."
  676.  
  677. >Peachy didn't go near the paddle for the rest of the night
  678. >but when payday came she spent her money on some healthy groceries instead of pizza and hayburgers
  679. >She also got a few bags of frozen peas
  680. >A necessity as she intended to use the Grande again
  681.  
  682. >Peachy began taking notes throughout her day
  683. >Behaviors and attitudes she knew were detrimental
  684. Flirted with a colt on the elevator even though I knew he was married.
  685. >Stuff at work
  686. Did not confess to a mathematical error that took my office 4 hours to track down and fix
  687. >To be fair Sprite did not know it was her mistake until it was found
  688. >but she could have owned up to it then instead of letting it remain a mystery and sharing the blame around
  689. >Even at lunch she critiqued her own behavior
  690. Enjoyed to a musician in the park for a half hour but then left without giving him a tip
  691. >She honestly felt guilty about that one
  692.  
  693. >Luckily all those notes were recorded on different days
  694. >because the paddle held her to account for all of them.
  695. >For the stallion in the elevator she got 20 sharp whacks for Lust and 10 more for Envy
  696. "Oow! Oow! Oow! I'm sorrrrryyy!
  697. "I wasn't gonna do anything, OW! his breath was horrible!"
  698. >Her math error got her 15 spanks for sloth
  699. >She hadn't checked her computations twice, clearly
  700. >Then another 30 for pride in not admitting her mistake
  701. "Please, please stop! Owwwie! I won't be such a chicken OW! next time!"
  702. >She felt lucky not to have triggered the lie detector this time
  703. >For her offense against the musician, however, the paddle gave her a sound butt blistering
  704. >Lust and Wrath were the only ones with nothing to say
  705. >All the other Deadly Sins had input that evening
  706. "WHHHHAAaaahhhHHH!
  707. "I'm sorrryyy! I'll go back and tip him tomorOW, OW, OW!"
  708. >And she did; although she fibbed to him and said she'd been out of cash the day before
  709. >Peachy didn't tell the paddle about that one
  710. >During her post-spanking cool down period;
  711. >as she had a good cry and soothed her sizzling bottom with a bag of frozen peas
  712. >her hoarse voice with a healthy juice popsicle instead of a half-gallon of ice cream
  713. >Peachy came to the revelation that the Grande had been created and enchanted by craftsponies
  714. >As such it took particular umbrage at an offense to a fellow artist
  715. >Good thing to remember.
  716.  
  717. >For a few weeks Peachy Sprite held the belief that the paddle somehow magically "knew" when she was lying
  718. >She finally realized this was silly
  719. >The paddle was a piece of wood brought to 'life' by a magical spell
  720. >It had no mind or free will
  721. >The only reason it had 'known' she lied about the number of hayburgers that first time was because she foolishly told it a made up number first then exposed her lie by telling the truth next
  722.  
  723. >She tested the theory one night when she'd been a bit lazy at work
  724. >Laying over the couch she had grown to fear
  725. >All cushions now securely locked in place
  726. >Peachy wrote her sin on the slate
  727. "Told the Boss I couldn't stay late because my cat was sick."
  728.  
  729. >In a few moments her relatively mild sentence replaced the chalk letters on the tablet
  730. >Only 5 for Sloth
  731. >Apparently the unicorn who enchanted this had a soft spot for cats
  732. >Then Peachy took a deep breath and tried Part 2 of her experiment
  733. "I don't even have a cat."
  734. >Five smacks, double for lying, is still not awful
  735. >But then...
  736. "40 FOR...WRATH? What the fuck!?"
  737. >But it was too late at that point and poor Peachy had to howl her way through 50 painful spanks
  738. "Whhhaaa! I don't even understand this one!
  739. "Whhhhyyyyy didn't I read the instructions mo, OW OW Owwhhhaa!!"
  740.  
  741. >Another bag of peas, another popsicle
  742. >Another good read of the full instruction sheet
  743. "Certain important crimes do not easily fit into the 7 categories are assigned at the digression of the enchanting Wizard."
  744. >Yeah, they like to be called Wizards so they can charge more
  745. "Incomplete list here."
  746. >Peachy scanned the list under Wrath and quickly found Animal Cruelty
  747. >She certainly agreed with that and felt that the punishment should be done with something a little more important than a sex toy
  748. >But crying wolf over a non-existent sick cat seemed like a stretch
  749. >There was no pony to complain to though
  750. >She was using a sex toy to change her lifetime pattern of behavior
  751. >Things were bound to get a little weird
  752. >Just remember never to fuck with cats.
  753.  
  754. >About 2 months after her purchase, Peachy returned to the shop
  755. "Welcome to the Lover...oh hi! I recognize you.
  756. "Please don't say you want to return the Grande...WAY too much time has passed."
  757. >Peachy had the Grande with her, but she did not intend to return it
  758. "Hi Thistle Sting!
  759. "I brought you a coffee 'cause I stiffed you on the tip last time.
  760. "No, I don't wanna return.
  761. "In fact, I think I'm ready to have it engraved."
  762. >The clerk was happy Peachy had remembered her name, and happy for the coffee
  763. >In time the two would become close friends
  764. "Great! I can do that right here in the shop
  765. "Or I can brand the inscription on with a wood burner
  766. "That's cheaper, but it looks really nice too."
  767. >Thistle remembered her prior financial pinch
  768. >But Peachy looked at the slab of wood she both loved and hated
  769. >Her behavior and attitude really had improved
  770. >She was healthier, happier
  771. >and she'd gotten the promotion she'd been passed over for last cycle
  772. >Best, she didn't have to lie about how well things were going when she wrote a letter home to Mom & Dad
  773. >He deserved the nice expensive engraving
  774. >and would be the generic Grande no more.
  775.  
  776. "I think it's time for a name, Thistle.
  777. "He's my Detrimental Attitude Destroyer."
  778. >Thistle Sting cringed and told her.
  779. "Awww, Peachy, that's WAY too many letters
  780. "I can only fit three."
  781.  
  782. >Peachy Sprite was okay with that, although she hadn't planned it this way.
  783. "Okay, just the initials then."
  784. >Do I have to spell it out for you?
  785. >
  786. >D.A.D.
  787.  
  788. END

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