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Loco Parentis by Pan

By splishsplash
Created: 2022-01-08 04:10:51
Updated: 2022-03-15 13:39:50
Expiry: Never

  1. Loco Parentis by Pan
  2.  
  3. (24/10/2021)
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  8. >Exchange student
  9. >From the faraway pony land of Coltla
  10. >In Tree Bark's home city, he is already an adult
  11. >Still living at home, true
  12. >But already with some university classes under his saddlebags
  13. >But he is not an adult in Ponyville
  14. >He moved here to study the Everfree Forest
  15. >And he and his family back home had to find a host family for him
  16. >He's a big colt, doesn't need anything special
  17. >The law says otherwise
  18. >In loco parentis
  19. >He knows what that means
  20. >Read a book a week for almost 15 years and you learn things
  21. >Outside of the mayor, he doubts anypony here has a clue what that is
  22. >His host family got instructions when the guardspony escorted him to his new home
  23. "You are legally his guardians until he concludes his studies here, moves away, or ages out."
  24. "Not counting vacations back home of course"
  25. >The guard passes Mrs. Healing Hooves her first moon's stipend
  26. >A small sack of bits
  27. >Tree Bark is a little embarrassed
  28. >Back home he often bought the groceries himself
  29. >He brushes it off and sets up his room
  30.  
  31. >Moons go by smoothly
  32. >Tree Bark even gets the groceries sometimes
  33. >Eventually the family gets into a habit
  34. >They start really treating each other as family members
  35. >And Tree Bark gets careless
  36. >Staying out later than he is supposed to
  37. >Staying in the Forest after dark
  38. >Course language
  39. >A sloppy room
  40. >Sloppy habits in the rest of the house too
  41. >Grouchy when asked to do household chores
  42. "That's what my rent is for! What did you do before I moved in?"
  43. "You aren't paying us any *rent*, young stallion. The government gives us a *stipend* for making sure you are safe and cared for. And that is hard to do sometimes!"
  44. "In Coltla I was self-sufficient. All I need from you is your seal on a form every moon. Allow my studies to continue. That is all I ask."
  45. "Watch your mouth, colt. Your saddle is starting to chafe."
  46.  
  47. Mrs. Healing hooves pleas for normalcy:
  48. "Let's be reasonable. We are all smart ponies here. Let's not let bickering get in the way of what matters."
  49. "Last chance, Tree Bark. You can see how reasonable or unreasonable I can be."
  50. "Dear..."
  51. "Is that a threat? I'll report you!"
  52. "I'll be right back."
  53. Broad Yoke took long, deliberate steps out of the room. As he left, Healing Hooves tried to calm things down:
  54. "He means well. You will do right to not provoke him."
  55. >Tree Bark rolls his eyes
  56. "I can only help you so much, young colt..."
  57. >She trails off
  58.  
  59. >Broad Yoke returns at a leisurely pace with a faux-leather strap in his mouth
  60. "Pth!"
  61. >He spits it into his hoof and drops it on the floor.
  62. >He takes charge:
  63. "The only ponies in this town who know what 'in loco parentis' means are in this farmhouse. Alright, smartypants... please define it for us."
  64. >Losing some of his nerve, but still not backing down, Tree Bark answers with a wavering voice:
  65. "'In-instead of a parent' or 'in place of a parent'"
  66.  
  67. "Good colt. And we have 'in loco parentis' treatment with you, correct?"
  68. >Tree Bark furrows his brow
  69. "Yeah. So?"
  70. "So I can feed you nothing but straw and oats until you graduate. I can keep you grounded nights and weekends. I can have Healing do all the shopping from now on."
  71. >That makes Tree step a hoof forward
  72. "I can even take this strap and spank your rump till the cows come home."
  73. "You can't!"
  74. "Missed that part of school? Corporal punishment is legal here. Or was that a bluff? You clearly know what spanking *is*... Have you ever been spanked, young colt?"
  75. "I'm a t-teenager! I-I'm even an adult!"
  76. "In Coltla you are an adult. Here you are another colt I have to teach some manners. Answer the question."
  77. "Yeah. S-s-s-s-so what?"
  78. "Scared now, aren'tcha? Clearly you know how effective it is."
  79. "Yes. No. What's that supposed to mean! Of course it's not effective. There's studies... And--"
  80. "Studies? Well let's make a deal. I will introduce my razor strop to your bottom, and you tell me how effective it is. If you're smart, you'll thank me."
  81. Before ushering Tree Bark towards the parents' bedroom, Broad announces:
  82. "We will be late for dinner, dear. I have to show Tree Bark how we handle disputes in the Yoke family."
  83.  
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  85.  
  86. Just a prompt or a setup. It could also work with a slower escalation. If I wasn't sick of writing, I could have had Yoke merely threaten Tree with the strap, and have him hang it up somewhere prominent as a reminder. Then things go to crap later and Tree gets lit up.
  87.  
  88. What's the parents' story? Originally I wanted them to be hicks but it's fun to make them sharp as tacks as well. If they are smart, their backstory is they are two earth pony doctors. Med school is hard, even harder with only your hooves. Mr. and Mrs. Healing Hooves are some of the smartest ponies in Ponyville.

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