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Dizzy Origin by RusticAnon

By splishsplash
Created: 2022-02-14 20:42:05
Updated: 2022-03-20 19:33:14
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    Dizzy Origin by RusticAnon
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    (11/10/2016)
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    https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28600638/#q28629511
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    Dizzy Cream is a normal earth pony filly who lives in Manehattan. she lives with her mother on one of the apartments there.
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    it was midsummer. Her mom sent Dizzy to one of a store across the block. she gave her a shopping list and a bag of bits .
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    On her way there, she saw a shady looking sign. it was pointing toward Tent in one of the dark ally in the city.
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    Written on it : Change your looks - cheap - Free mirror ,discount . another sign with a picture of a happy unicorn looking at her horn , under it Get your horn now cheap.
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    Dizzy Stood there looking cursorily at these signs. suddenly the tent door opened and a creepy smoke could leaked out.
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    she heard a deep dark voice saying .
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    >come in ..
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    Dizzy got a bit cheeped out.
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    then she heard a loud hacking cough!
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    #cleared his throat
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    a friendly soft female voice
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    >sorry come in...
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    Dizzy : oh in that case I will.
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    she entered the tent with her sack full of bits.
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    inside the tent. there was a red carpet. in the center of the room there was an old wooden chair with a huge mirror next to it.
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    >have a seat young one.
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    Dizzy looked around and she couldn't find the source of the voice.
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    she sat down on the chair.
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    >now TELL ME WHO.. ahem.. tell me what looks do you desire ?
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    the voice shouted with deep male voice at first then changed its tone to soft female voice.
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    >umm looks ? you mean you gonna change my mane style ... I did cut it few days ago..
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    >NOO YOU IDIOT LITTl... Sorry what I meant was here I can change your appearance ..
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    >Don't you want to be a unicorn or Pegasus... or even an Alicorn but that's gonna cost you extra 6000 bits.
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    >Really ?
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    >yes. anything but for a price of course..
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    Dizzy went into a deep thinking...
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    >well this is all sudden can I come later ?
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    >NO! I'm moving out in about an hour make your mind WHICH FORM DO YOU WANT TO TAKE!
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    Dizzy started brain storming..
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    A unicorn is great.
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    I can levitate stuff but ...
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    I always wanted to fly. the Pegasus sounds great. but I don't like feathers, and their grooming.. what would mom have to say if I go home looking like a different pony..
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    well she would be upset and I might get into trouble.. so I have to make it worthwhile...
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    >WELL ?
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    she continued brainstorming. Wait a min why limit myself to unicorn and pegaus ..
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    >umm I have a question ?
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    >YES ?
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    >am I limited to unicorn and Pegasus ? can't I be the other minor pony races or mythical ones ?
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    >NO mythical only real races . I'm losing my patience with you . pick a look already..
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    well.. a changeling would be cool , I can change in and out ... but In princess Twilight book she wrote that a changling must follow the hive and they feed on strong emotions... that kinda sucks.. speaking of sucking how about fruit sucking bats.
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    bat ponies looks cool and mysterious. with their intimidating fangs , and the night visions... and most importantly their wings. I always wanted wings and on the plus side. no feathers.
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    >WELL ?
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    >ok I made my mind . I want to look like a bat , I want to be a bat pony.
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    >very well.
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    the mirror started glowing red. a paper with a feather Quill came from there and hovered in front of her.
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    >would you kindly sign here.
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    >what is this ?
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    >well its just a contract. for finical reasons.
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    >oh well
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    eww a feather... I hope its from a bird and not from a filthy pegasus
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    Dizzy signed the contract. then a box appeared in front of her.
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    >what is that for ?
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    >the service is not free
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    >how much ?
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    >120 bits
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    '120 bits I don't think I got that much money' dizzy opened the money sack her mom gave her and started to count them.
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    she was 15 bits short.
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    well I hope he ... or she I'm not sure what I'm dealing with but Guess it can forgive me for my short coming.
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    She poured her sack into his box.
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    the box and the contract paper went back inside the mirror.
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    >Good now Gaze upon your former self in the mirror .
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    as she was looking at the mirror, a magical aura came from inside the mirror and formed around her . then suddenly with much force she was sucked inside the mirror and then she got thrown back at the chair outside the mirror.
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    >the contract have been made . your older form have been devoured and you got your new looks.
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    she looked at her new self.
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    her ear shape changed. she smiled to see some fangs, she turned around to look at her back.
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    it was normal.
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    Hey where is my wings?
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    the contract condition have been met, the case is closed.
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    Hey wait but
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    but you promised me wings ...
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    then everything around her dissolved and disappeared into thin air.
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    even the chair she was sitting on.
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    she fell on the ground in the middle of the ally
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    there was no trace of the signs or the tent she just went into.
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    she stayed there for awhile then went back home
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    Dizzy Casually opened her apartment door and went inside.
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    Her mom was in the kitchen.
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    >Dizzy are you back from the store ?
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    >yes mom.
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    >did you bring the stuff on the list ?
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    >umm no
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    >why not ?
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    >umm u see... errr
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    her mom stopped what ever she was doing and went toward her daughter and asked while she was walking
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    >What is it ? what did you do this time .
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    EEEeep !
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    her mom gasped when she saw her daughter
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    What is this ?
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    >umm I can explain
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    >what the hell did you do to yourself ?
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    >I .. the tent ..
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    her mom pulled her ears
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    aw aw aw
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    >what the hell are those why wont they come off.
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    >they are my ears mom.
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    >your ears ? who said its ok for you to pierce them ?
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    >i didn't pierce them its how bat po..
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    >wait u used the money I gave you to get your ears pierced ?
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    >umm nooo
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    >come here u
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    her mom dragged dizzy by her ears toward her bedroom.
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    few moments later you can here a cracking and smacking noises from inside the room with a faint eee sound.

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