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Center atrium by Anon
By splishsplashCreated: 2022-03-03 21:23:38
Updated: 2022-03-12 18:23:06
Expiry: Never
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Center atrium by Anon
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(22/10/2020)
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>Be a colt
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>Cutie mark age but not yet teenage
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>You know...obnoxious preteen phase
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One day...
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>Class trip to Manehattan
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>So much cool stuff to see and do
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>But dumb teachers make you go to the art museum
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>Can't even slip away and ditch because Mom is a volunteer chaperone on this field trip
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>So bored
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>Boredom manifests as brattiness
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>Stomping your hooves
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>Yawning loudly, rudely
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And finally...
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>You bump a priceless pre-Celestian statue
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>It wobbles
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>Uh-ho...might have taken this brat thing a little too far
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>The statue topples
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>Security and curators dash to the rescue
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>A long slapstick sequence occurs
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>The stone bust bounces from pony to pony
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>Other objects are imperiled; vases, paintings, ancient gold
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>But everything is saved
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>The statue is caught atop a pile of exhausted museum staff
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>Then, just as every pony sighed relief;
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>A medieval tapestry rips from its mountings on the wall, blanketing them
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>Jeeze, it's almost like this was a cartoon or something, am I right?
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>Colt you knows he's in ultimate trouble now
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>Mom snatches you up
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>Carries you, crying and begging, to the center atrium of the museum
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>The echo is tremendous
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>Oh no...not here, not here in front of every pony!
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>Mom puts you across her lap
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>Produces the manebrush from her saddlebag
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>You gulp
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>That thing is huge
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>Why does any mare need a manebrush that big?
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>The smaller ones are just as good at brushing hair.
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>The brush maker must be a cruel sadist
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>But Mom does not immediately begin spanking you
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>She sets the brush right where you can see it
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>You can hear her writing on a sign with a squeaky marker
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>She can see you are curious, so she shows you when she is done
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THIS NAUGHTY COLT WAS DISRESPECTFUL TO MUSEUM STAFF AND NEARLY DAMAGED PRICELESS EXIBITS
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HE IS NOW RAISING MONEY FOR THE MUSEUM
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>You gulp nervously
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>how?
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>Mom flips your ball cap off and sets it open side up, on the ground
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>And proceeds to PADDLE YOUR POOR HEINIE BRIGHT RED
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continued...
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>You are there for a while
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>It's not constant spanking
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>Mom lectures for a minute, then whacks you some more
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>Then more lecturing
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>The noise echoes through the whole museum
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>This is easily the most embarrassing thing that has happened to you this week
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>You can't help but bawl like a blank-flank
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>Mom's brush is brutal and your poor defenseless rear is on fire
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>Ponies approvingly drop a few bits in your ball cap
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>Mom stops
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>Makes you thank them
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>You can hardly speak through the tears, sobs and runny nose
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>Then it's right back to the spankin'
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>A few artsy looking unicorns spend a long time watching
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>They whisper between themselves and sip chardonnay
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>Are they perverts who enjoy watching you get your narrow coltie rear busted?
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>No...they're art critics
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>They think you're a performance art installation
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>At last, after 15 minutes of spanking, lecturing and soul mangling humiliation, Mom lets you up
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>The art unicorns applaud
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"Will you be performing at tonight's Gallery Gala?"
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>Equestria has a lot of galas.
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>You whimper and beg Mommy 'No, please no"
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>But you only raised 12 bits for the museum
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>Hardly enough to pay for the torn tapestry mountings
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"Yes, I think there will be another show."
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>[gulp]
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>So that night, as your friends go sightseeing, see shows or just play around the hotel, you have to go back to the dumb art museum
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>This time there's a quartet of musicians and a crowd of rich, classy ponies
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>But they all hush for your performance
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>Awww, horsefeathers...
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>Mom proceeds to paddle your posterior for a second time today
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>It's agony and humiliation but at least it doesn't last as long this time
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>Only about 5 minutes
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>The art loving crowd sees it as a brilliant, multifaceted piece of performance art
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>A demonstration of the duality yet unity of love and suffering in pony culture
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>All kinds of artsy babble like that
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>At least you get rich pony sized donations this time
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>No need for a third performance
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>Thank Celestia for that.
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