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Part 32 Review

By Adjudicant
Created: 2023-01-12 09:20:54
Expiry: Never

  1. >It’s evening by the time anyone checks in on you.
  2. >Celestia had long ago run out of tears.
  3. >The alicorn now curled up with her head on your lap and her body still on the bed.
  4. >She had called out a few things in her grief.
  5. >Old names for the most part, you guessed.
  6. >But two stood out.
  7. >Twilight.
  8. >Luna.
  9. >One of them you know to be her sister.
  10. >The other one could have been Twilight Velvet outside.
  11. >But you’d like to think it was her daughter - the illustrious student.
  12. >Though she was in a deep sleep - every now and then, a small shudder would go through her body.
  13. >Each time you’d gently squeeze her hoof.
  14. >Thankfully, it seems it calms her.
  15. >You still don’t know exactly what you’re doing for her.
  16. >But it doesn’t matter.
  17. >You don’t need to know.
  18. >What matters is being here for her when she needs it.
  19. >Slinking into the room, Emily carefully inspects the mare.
  20. >First, the IV going into her fore-hoof.
  21. >Next, she carefully pulls back the mane on the back of her neck to reveal a monstrous bruise showing through the white fur.
  22. >Your eyes go wide, but you hold your tongue.
  23. >Satisfied, she lays the mane back down and gives you a flick of the head towards the door.
  24. >You give her your fiercest frown, but she flicks her head again.
  25. >Carefully removing the sleeping mare from your lap and letting her rest her head on the chair,
  26. >It’s only a few steps from the door when she speaks up.
  27. >”You’re going again?” Celestia croaks with her hoarse voice.
  28. ”Just stepping out for a bit to make sure everything is okay out here. Going to be right outside the room, Celly. Try to get some rest, okay?”
  29. >The poor mare gives you a miserable look, and weakly curls up at the head of the bed, facing away from you.
  30. >Baby steps..
  31. >As you step outside, you find Coal and Velvet sitting on either side of the door.
  32. >A warm smile from Velvet, and a firm nod from Coal.
  33. >Emily has already moved down the hall to the kitchen, and you follow her to find Stint, Match Stick, and Tinder all sitting around a simple Kitchen table eating Pizza.
  34. >”Hi, Mr Anon!” Tinder shouts, waving his adorably short arm at you as he chews a huge mouthful of cheesy pastry.
  35. >”Tinder, Manners!”
  36. >His sister immediately admonishes him as she nibbles at the start of a new slice.
  37. >The young mare - still wearing your shirt around her hindquarters - only gets an eye roll from the defiant colt.
  38. >Stint, on the other hand, doesn’t even acknowledge your entrance.
  39. >The stallion looks like he’s been hit by a ton of bricks and is about to pass out at the table.
  40. >Your eyebrows go up, and you even spy a few slices that have some meat on them.
  41. “This is a nice surprise.”
  42. >”I thought we could all use a pick me up. Been a pretty intense week.” Emily says.
  43. “No kidding.”
  44. >You pick up a slice of ham and cheese and dig in, taking a moment to let it sit in your mouth and enjoy the taste.
  45. “I didn’t know horses ate meat.”
  46. >”We’re not horses. And horses can eat meat. Dumbass.”
  47. “Nice to see you too, Stint.”
  48. >He snorts back at you.
  49. “Where were you all day by the way?”
  50. >”Working. You know, that thing that most living things have to do to survive?”
  51. “Cool,” you brush past his sarcasm. “What do you do here?”
  52. >”Are you serious?”
  53. “I am actually. I wanna know what you do.”
  54. >Stint gives you a wary look, but pulls his head away from his plate.
  55. >”Well, like Emily, I’m a veterinarian by mark.”
  56. “By mark?”
  57. >”Talent. Gift. The great big tattoo on my ass like Match Stick has.”
  58. >Tinder giggles and Match Stick nibbling intensifies.
  59. “So you help with taking care of all your fellow ponies?”
  60. >The stallion rolls his eyes.
  61. “What?”
  62. >”Anon, do human veterinarians treat humans?”
  63. “No. Why?”
  64. >He gives you an unimpressed look until it finally clicks.
  65. “Ohhh. Okay, I get it now. But, wait. Do you still treat horses?”
  66. >”Once again, we aren’t horses. Dumbass. Just like you aren’t a monkey. Though I’m starting to wonder about that.”
  67. >That gets a genuine laugh out of you and Emily, the latter of which you notice is trying to pretend she isn’t carefully listening in on the conversation.
  68. “Okay. Okay. So you treat the horses in Emily’s stead, and she looks after the ponies. Have you had to cover for her since she’s in here?”
  69. >”Actually,” Emily speaks up, mouth full of pizza. “I did my Equestrian rounds today while you were watching things.”
  70. “Oh okay. So why are you exhausted, Stint? The Earthen Horses nibble on your ear a bit?”
  71. >He shivers.
  72. >”Look Anon, I don’t know where this-” he gestures at all of you with a hoof. “-Is coming from, but it’s making me feel weird. Can we just go back to thinly veiled animosity?”
  73. “No.”
  74. Tinder laughs.
  75. >”They’re funny.”
  76. >The colt reaches another slice of pizza, only to be slapped down by his sister’s magic.
  77. >”You’ll be sick.”
  78. >”No I won’t.”
  79. “How many slices have you had, Champ?”
  80. >He looks to the ceiling then holds up his hooves to count.
  81. >The lack of fingers means he counts one whole hoof at a time.
  82. >”Seven slices!” He beams.
  83. >Your heart feels weaker in your chest again.
  84. >”You’ll definitely be sick. That’s enough for tonight, now go wash up.”
  85. >The colt pouts, but does what he’s told.
  86. >”Fine.”
  87. >Though not without jumping down from his seat and scurrying off to the bathroom before his sister can yell out for him to not run down the hallway.
  88. >His hooves thumping against the wooden floorboards the whole way.
  89. >All of you collectively hold your breath.
  90. >Thankfully, no sounds come from Emily’s room.
  91. “Was he always that energetic?”
  92. >”I-” she stops like a record just scratched in her head, “I don’t really remember… I think so?”
  93. >Emily and Stint stop eating and look over at her.
  94. >”He’s been so sick for so long. Yet he still always needed more medicine than a full grown stallion.”
  95. >She stares wistfully down the hallway.
  96. “Well, thanks to you, he’s up and running around like he’s on a sugar high. Good job, big Sis.”
  97. >”Mmm.” she murmurs her agreement, and resumes nibbling on her pizza.
  98. >But you see the smile creeping near the corner of her mouth.
  99. “So, Stint. About what you do around here.”
  100.  
  101. >The pizza hits the spot.
  102. >It’s only after you finish that you finally look at the time.
  103. >Nearly eight-thirty.
  104. >Once you got Stint going, he began rambling non-stop about the finer points of horse care.
  105. >You had zoned out a short way in.
  106. >But it was adorable to see the way Emily smoldered over her partner's ramblings.
  107. >Smoldering and love drunk.
  108. >While not as taxing as some other days, the general exhaustion that’s been building up the past week is weighing heavily on your shoulders.
  109. >You wish you could cut to the end, where everything is better again.
  110. >But you’re not alone in that wish.
  111. “”Right.”
  112. You cut Stint off ten minutes into a lecture about the finer points of horse nutrition.
  113. “Time for a movie.”
  114. >”Hold on, there’s still a lot more that I haven’t even scratched at when it comes to the difference between vitamin balance and potential supplementation?” Stint looks stunned.
  115. >”You’re such a big horse nerd. I love it.” Emily gives him a big smooch on his cheek, placating him immediately.
  116. >”Well, alright then. But anytime you wanna know more about horses, or anything that isn’t a pony really, let me know.”
  117. “Is that how it works? You’re a Vet, so anything non-pony, you’re good at treating and taking care of?”
  118. >”Well, duh. Isn’t that what Vets in your world are like?”
  119. >”Maybe after a few years at University, or some other private training course, or a very long internship.”
  120. >She rests her cheek against his muzzle.
  121. >”You know I’m only good with horses and ponies, Stint.”
  122. >”Oh you definitely know how to treat me right.” He leans back into her.
  123. “Ehem!”
  124. >The couple gives you an irritated look before glancing over at the non-plussed Match Stick still nibbling on a slice of Pizza.
  125. >”Oh don’t mind me.” She smiles politely and returns to her food.
  126. “Alright, I’m gonna go take Tinder down to see a movie before he passes out. Otherwise I don’t think we’d hear the end of it all tomorrow.”
  127. >”Movie?” Emily furrows her brow.
  128. >”He used the projector in Stable one, babe.”
  129. >The confused vet shakes her head.
  130. >”I didn’t think you could do that.”
  131. “Yea, you just use one of the HDMI cables hanging out of the…”
  132. >She looks to Stint to see if he knows what you’re talking about.
  133. >He shrugs.
  134. “Really? You’re both dinosaurs.”
  135. >”As long as it still works when you’re done, Anon.”
  136. >Emily yawns and stands up.
  137. >”Care to join me, Stint?”
  138. >”Oh yeah.. Just, uh…”
  139. >He looks over at Match Stick.
  140. >”Wh-what?”
  141. >”Think you could suck my-”
  142. >”Stint!” Emily scolds him.
  143. >The maroon mare goes an even darker shade of red.
  144. >”Magic! I was gonna say Magic! Yeesh.”
  145. “Hah.”
  146. >”Shut up, Anon.”
  147. >Putting down her Pizza, Match Stick breathes a sigh of relief.
  148. >”I can do that.” she says.
  149. >Climbing down from the table, she quickly lights up her horn and zaps the stallion.
  150. >What once took several dozen seconds now only takes a few moments.
  151. >Again, Match Stick's body shivers once she finishes hoovering up his magic, and her coat seems to glow with an otherworldly sheen.
  152. >You can’t shake the heavy feeling that something isn’t right here, but getting their magic back just seems too important for you to intervene.
  153. >The mare then quickly hits up her usual pit stops.
  154. >First Velvet.
  155. >Next is Coal.
  156. >Finally she disappears up the hallway, and after a few infantile objections, you hear her magic go off and she returns with a very eager Tinder.
  157. >”We’re gonna see a movie?” he nearly yells in the hallway.
  158. >Only to be shushed by six mouths.
  159. >”Sorry… We’re gonna see a movie?” he asks again in an excited whisper.
  160. “Yup. We’re gonna head down to the barn while these four hold the fort.”
  161. >You impishly watch Match Stick as the look of confusion grows on her face.
  162. >The others seem to have caught on, and they smile softly as they wait for her to work it out.
  163. >”Don’t you mean, five?” she asks nervously.
  164. “Nah, You’re coming too. Who else is gonna carry Tinder?”
  165. >You fake a shoulder injury, making the small colt on her back giggle.
  166. >”But what about my mark? If anypony sees that, they’re gonna know right away.
  167. “Then don’t let them see it.”
  168. >The mare doesn’t appear convinced in the slightest.
  169. “Don’t worry about it. I figure that cat is gonna get out of the bag sooner or later. Right guys?”
  170. >Emily and Stint give each other a concerned look.
  171. >Coal and Velvet share a gentle smile and agree.
  172. “Alright then. We’re good to go. But same rules as this morning. No magic. And no talking about it. Okay?”
  173. >”Okayyy.” They both drone back, trying to hide their smiles.
  174. >Saying goodnight to the two couples, you slip out the backdoor and make your way down the back hill in the sparse nighttime light.
  175. >As you approach the barn, you see a cluster of ponies hanging out in a circle around the side.
  176. >One of them notices you, and it suddenly hits you.
  177. >You don’t know whether it was the movie last night.
  178. >Or the run today,
  179. >Or whether it’s because you know Match Stick is a bundle of nerves right now.
  180. >But the panic is gone.
  181. >You’re still a bit nervous, and you wish Coal and Velvet were here as backup.
  182. >But you think that you can handle things.
  183. >One of the ponies of the practice notices your approach, and yells out to the others.
  184. >Rather than rushing you, they rush to stable one where your laptop is set up.
  185. >Someone has even managed to get the barn door at least part way open for you to step under.
  186. >But as you lead Tinder and Match Stick inside, you’re a bit blown away.
  187. >Small couches and other pieces of furniture have been transplanted from who knows where all over the now very crowded stable.
  188. >A few heads turn to look at you, a small cheer goes out, some hooves wave, but most are still engaged in vibrant chatter.
  189. >Snacks and small sleeping bags litter the floor, and a few of the ponies with stronger presences in the herd are sitting on a cluster of stools near the laptop.
  190. >The stool closest to the laptop is empty.
  191. >And they’re looking at you pretty expectantly.
  192. >The maroon mare hiding behind your legs is nearly shaking.
  193. >The colt on her back is staring in wonder at the projector screen.
  194. >No time like the present.
  195. “Good evening, everyone.”
  196. >The buzz of excited chattering quiets down, and the ponies of the practice all turn to face you.
  197. “To start with what you’re all most concerned about; Coal, Emily, Velvet, and Stint are looking after Celestia tonight, but rest assured, she’s well on the road to recovery in their very capable hands.”
  198. >There’s a pleased murmur across the seated herd of miniature horses.
  199. “My hands, on the other… Hand.”
  200. >You pause for comedic effect, and get a few sympathetic chuckles from the audience and a gaggle of giggles from the kids crowding one of the corners.
  201. “-Are quite exhausted. Especially after that race with Coal.”
  202. >A few whoops and hollers go through the crowd.
  203. “I’d like to sincerely thank you all for joining us. It was a fantastic surprise that made for an incredible afternoon. But I have here two new ponies who missed out on today's fun, and would like to join us for tonight’s movie.”
  204. >You step aside and Match Stick tries following.
  205. >Clinging to your legs like a shy kid at a party.
  206. >”What are you doing?” Tinder whispers in her ear.
  207. “Care to introduce yourselves?”
  208. >Frustrated with her sister’s tepidness, Tinder hops down from her shoulders and gives a friendly wave.
  209. >”Hi!. Tinder. I’m seven and a half years old.”
  210. >There’s a collective hello from the herd, and the group of kids loudly whisper ‘Over here’ and wave back at him.
  211. >You bend down on a knee and whisper to Match Stick.
  212. >”You want me to introduce you, Big Red?”
  213. >The skittish mare looks at her brother, eager to introduce himself and chomping at the bit to run off and hang out with the other kids.
  214. >”I’m good. Thank you, Mr Anon.”
  215. “Alright then.” you smile at her.
  216. >She steps forward.
  217. >Clears her throat.
  218. >”Good evening everyone. I’m Big Red. No. Wait. I mean Match Stick. My name is Match Stick.”
  219. >The mare cringes so hard you think her face might collapse.
  220. >“Big Red it is.” One of the mares in the back calls out with a gentle southern twang to the herd’s gentle bemusement. “How old are ya, Sugar?”
  221. >Match Stick shoots you an angry look.
  222. >”Seventeen.”
  223. >”That’s perfect. Means you’re around our age. Name’s Pink Lady.”
  224. >Funny name for a mare that isn’t Pink.
  225. >Match Stick gives you an unsure look as the small group of ponies wave expectantly.
  226. “You’ll be right. Go make some friends.”
  227. >Tinder doesn’t wait an instant.
  228. >The colt galloping over to the group of kids as fast as his legs will carry him and nearly bowling over the other foals.
  229. >His sister though, she gives you a dour smile and slowly trots off.
  230. >Flinching slightly as ‘Pink Lady’ immediately hooks a hoof around her neck once she’s close enough - dragging her into the circle of ponies near the back.
  231. >Now that the kids are taken care of, you look over to the laptop and the group of ponies waiting for you.
  232. >Taking your own deep breath, you confidently stroll over.
  233. >All of them are smiling at your approach.
  234. >”Prince Anon.”
  235. >One of them addresses you straight away with a slight bow.
  236. >You nearly trip at the title.
  237. >The other ponies glare at him.
  238. “Prince?”
  239. >”You are the royal consort, are you not? Coal declared so last night.”
  240. >”We were meant to ask him together.” one of the other ponies hisses at him.
  241. >”Just showing a little bit of initiative my dear.”
  242. >The others silently fume behind stiff smiles and turn to you.
  243. >”Well then… Prince Anon.” She purses her lips, as if the words had a strange taste.
  244. >’We were all looking to enjoy a nice bit of small talk during the movie.”
  245. >”If it wouldn’t bother you.”
  246. >Ah.
  247. >This is something you remember not so fondly.
  248. >”I think it sounds wonderful.” The fourth pony chimes in before you even respond.
  249. >Aristocrats.
  250. >Brown-nosers.
  251. >Bottom-feeders.
  252. >You should be more ticked off, but a part of you is secretly delighted.
  253. >These ponies may have suffered quite a bit, but they’re still strong enough to be stuffy.
  254. >They still have some form of dignity.
  255. >It also means that you don’t need to prove anything to these ponies.
  256. “While I would love to chat with all of you-”
  257. >All four ponies lean in slightly, fake smiles stretching from ear to ear.
  258. “I think it’s rather impolite to talk during a movie. And the herd is waiting for us.”
  259. >None of them look at the other ponies, their eyes glued to you and their facades cracking as they quickly grab for something to talk about.
  260. >”A bit of a chat never hurt anyone.”
  261. >”That’s right. Good point. Why don’t we start with…” She twirls a hoof. “What you, er, do for a living?”
  262. >”Yes yes, what do you do for a living, Prince Anon? Clearly a man of your… Resourcefulness must be quite talented. Your generosity to Emily has already been gratefully received here.”
  263. >You’re not feeling all that sympathetic to their desperation, so you stand up and turn to the laptop.
  264. “That stuff’s boring, we can talk about it some other time.”
  265. >”Not at all! We’d love to hear about you and the kind of pon-, uh, person you are.”
  266. >The others shoot daggers at her for that little slip-up.
  267. “Like I said. Celestia’s doing well, and everyone is waiting for the movie. Lets just watch it and have fun. Okay?”
  268. >You walk past the empty spot and organize tonight’s viewing.
  269. >Their smiles quickly melt as they smolder on their stools.
  270. >Prince Anon.
  271. >Now that’s bizarre.
  272. >Oh well.
  273. >Those types aren’t the ones who just give up.
  274. >You scroll through your library until you find one that’s perfect.
  275. >You’re trying to avoid human centric films, and a comedy feels like it’lll lighten up the mood.
  276. >Hmmm.
  277. >It might be a bit much, but it’ll give a much needed culture boost.
  278. >Turning on the projector, another crowd of ‘ooo’s go through the crowd.
  279. >In the corner, you can see Tinder absolutely dumbstruck by the giant blue screen from the midst of a scrum of tiny ponies..
  280. >Near the back, Match Stick is frantically fielding off question after question from the group of older teens in the herd.
  281. >Smiling at the sight, you press play and sit down on the empty stool.
  282. >The dejected aristocrats light up again.
  283. >”So about your-”
  284. “Shhh, it’s about to start.”
  285. >”Ah right.”
  286. >The ones facing away from the screen regretfully spin on their stool to watch the show.
  287. >And as Mike Myers’ voice narrates a typical fairy tale story intro from a book, you find your gaze drawn to the rest of the herd so you can watch how they react.
  288. >”~SOME-BODY ONCE TOLD ME~”

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