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Love Burns [yandere/wip]
By NotAWriterAnonCreated: 2021-07-16 21:31:33
Updated: 2021-04-24 06:52:59
Expiry: Never
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>She is still Celestia, she just tends to be a bit more forceful than usual......as well as somewhat burny on occasion.
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>Love burns of course.
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>She is still very loving and caring, but you could say she can also be a bit dominant from time to time, as well as maybe being somewhat possessive......and controlling.
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>She isnt unreasonable by any means though!
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>You were able to convince her to let Luna have at least 4 hours of the day for night time which was a big win, but.......you did have to give up a few things in exchange for that to happen.
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>Your not allowed to talk to other mares anymore, especially Luna, Twilight, and the rest of the mane 6.
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>Also your not really allowed to go anywhere by yourself anymore either.
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>If your not accompanying her, you have to stay in her room until she comes to get you.
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>You also have to service and submit to her no matter where you two are.
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>Like when you two are in bed together, or in the bathroom, or eating in the dining room, and even in public.......espically in public.
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>Its okay though!
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>She gets really pent up with stress sometimes and she needs you to help her relieve that stress.
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>The more stressed out Daybre....Celestia is, the worse off everyone else will be.
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>So you d-dont mind that she feels the need to ride on top of you while she is giving a speech to thousands of onlooking ponys
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>Like you said, the less stressed she is, the better off everyone will be
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>Fortunately Luna had told you that her and the elements of harmony were working out a way to turn Celestia back to normal
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>That was a couple of months ago, but that doesnt mean you have gave up hope!
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>Even though she acts different now, you still know your old Celly bean is still in there somewhere
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>You feel like you can sometimes see her old self when you stare into her bright orange eyes
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>[spoiler]She looks sad[/spoiler]
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>Your heart is pounding
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>Your breath is shallow and sweat is trickling down your brow
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>Your crouched in fetal position in the corner of the bathroom that's connected to your's and Celestia's room
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>The door is locked
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>The temperature around you is gradually rising
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>Each moment that passes you can feel it get hotter and hotter inside the room, but despite the increasing heat you cant stop shaking
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>She is coming for you
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>And she is very upset
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>You violently flinch when you hear the door to your room open and swiftly close
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>She is here
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>"Anon! My little green bean! Im back!"
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>You instinctively halt your breathing, only allowing yourself to inhale small amounts of oxygen every couple of moments
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>It must be at least 85 degrees in the bathroom that your currently hiding in and its only getting hotter
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>She is furious
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>"Anon where are you~? You arent hiding from me are you? You know how much I dislike it when you hide from me! If I were you, I would come out here WITHIN THE NEXT FIVE SECONDS!"
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>The malice at the end of her words sends shivers down your soul
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>"One."
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>Oh god she has started counting
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>"Two."
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>With each second passed the room greatly increases in temperature
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>"Three."
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>If you were smart you would go out and confront her
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>"Four!"
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>But as much as you want to leave the confines of the bathroom, your own fear keeps you paralyzed.
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>"FIVE!"
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>You clamp your eyes shut and lower your head, preparing for the worst
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>Here it comes....
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>...........Silence
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>All you can hear is the sound of your own heart pounding in your chest
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>Sweat is falling from you and pooling on the ceramic bathroom floor
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>You slowly lift your head from your knees
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>Why hasnt she...
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>"Oh I understand now Anon!" Her cheery voice rings in the other room
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>You feel the hairs on your neck stand up
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>"My poor sunshine must have been so bored cooped up in our room all day! He just must have felt like playing a little game of hide and seek to rid himself of the boredom! Though I prefer games that involve a bit more....*huff*..bodily contact, I will play your game Anon." LETS SEE HOW LONG IT TAKES ME TO FIND YOU!"
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>Your so fucked
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>"Hmmmm maybe your hiding under the bed?"
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>A loud boom can be heard from outside the bathroom and the ceiling violently shakes for a moment causing tiny pieces of plaster to come raining down upon you
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>"Ah, it doesnt look like you were hiding under there~!"
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>Suddenly another loud slam can be heard and this one causes the floor to vibrate roughly for a moment, likely its the bed leaving the ceiling and retuning to the floor
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>"Oh! I know! Let me see if your in the closet!"
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>You hear the sound of wood being ripped and torn into many pieces
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>"Wrong again......it would appear.......I must say Anon, you are just to good at this game, but im not worried. There are only a few places left you can hide and I WILL find you, even if I have to tear this whole side of the castle apart!"
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>Shes......not bluffing.....
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>"I dont think I have tried the balcony yet!
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>She is getting more and more frustrated with each passing moment that she cant find you
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>You really dug your own grave this time
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>Suddnely a very nearby explosion violently shakes the room around you
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>The sound of falling ruble and shattering glass rings from the other room
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>She blew up the balcony......
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>"WHERE ARE YOU ANON! COME OUT HERE RIGHT NOW!"
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>The murderous screech paired with sudden explosion and sweltering heat causes you to let out a light gasp
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>You quickly cover your mouth with hands
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>OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK
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>M-maybe she didnt hear over the sound of all the chaos caused by the explosion......
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>You wait a few moments trying to anticipate what she will do next, but you cant hear anything coming from the other side of the door
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>She hasnt said or done anything since her last shout
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>What is she-
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>Suddenly the temperature in the bathroom rapidly decreases back to normal room temperature and the loud clicking of horseshoes clicking on marble floor can be heard
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>The clicking sounds like its slowly getting closer to the bathroom door
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>She knows
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>She knows where you are and you have no hope of escaping her
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> You're finished
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>The clicking of hooves stops right outside the bathroom door
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>She still hasnt said or done anything, but then you hear her lightly knock on the door
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>"Anon, my love, are you in there?" she asks with an eerie calmness
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>You cant think...
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>No words that could possibly help you now come to mind
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>Nothing can save you now
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>Failing to reply, you just intently stare at the door that separates you from her
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>Thats all there is left to protect you from her
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>Just the single wooden bathroom door
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>The handle of the door attempts to turn, but is impeded by its own lock
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>Suddenly the handle of the door suddenly begins to gradually glow brighter and brighter until its shining a blinding orange color
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>As it grows in brightness it begins to sag and move towards the floor
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>The door handle loses its solid form and pools on the ground
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>The wood on the door where the handle had once been begins to combust and char
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>With no lock to keeping the door shut, it slowly swings open
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>You really wanna cover your eyes in a desperate hope that maybe if you cant see her, she cant see you
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>But you know that its hopeless
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>All you can do is stare at the now open door and wait for her to enter
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>An alabaster hoof ornamented with dark orange hoof plate steps through the door
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>Celestia cranes her neck around the open door and looks down upon your huddled self
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>You look up and lock eyes with her
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>Fear....you feel....
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>You feel the fear slowly leaves you as you stare deep into her bright yellow eyes
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>Your heart begins to settle and your trembling ceases
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>You know you should be feeling the depths of despair right now
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>But you dont
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>What you feel is.....relief
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>Being able to look upon the face of your beautiful wife eliminates all your fears and doubts and fills you with strong feelings of love and comfort
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>She is your sun
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>She is the what keeps you going
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>She is the mare that you love with all of your heart
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>She is the only being that you would want to spend eternity with
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>She is your wife, Princess Celestia
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>You feel a somewhat dopey grin creep up on your face
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"Welcome back Celestia! I missed you while you were away. Sorry I wasnt out there to greet you earlier, I was just taking care of some "business" in the bathroom hehe." you chuckle awkwardly
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>She actually almost made you lose control of your "business" a few times when she was tearing apart the room earlier
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>Her cold gaze quickly morphs into an amused smile
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>She lowers her head down towards the ground so your face to face with her stone-cold glare "You had me worried for a moment Anon. I was beginning to think that you were maybe trying to hide from your caring and loving wife." she says with a displeased coldness
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"Pfft, You know me Celly, I would never even consider doing something idiotic like that! Why would I ever want hide from you Sunny buns?
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>"Hmmmmm why indeed." she hums right before she pushes her lips upon yours
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>As she pushes into you, you unconsciously let out a small moan and close your eyes
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>You reach a hand up and tenderly grasp her ear that is poking out of the top of her helmet and begin to lightly work your thumb along its tip
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>Its a little sweet spot of hers
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>She lightly moans into your mouth and presses onto you even harder
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>Her almost burning hot tongue begins to forcefully invade the inside of your mouth and begins vigorously probe towards the back of your throat
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>Fuck, you forget how long it can be sometimes
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>You have little room to move your own tongue as hers dominates the inside of your mouth
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>Any attempt to pull away from her conquest is met with her forcing her mouth even harder upon yours
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>You feel your gag reflex begin to kick in as she continues to explore even further
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>You let out light coughs for air but they are muffled by the horse tongue currently filling the inside of your mouth
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>Fuck, she is gonna suffocate you
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>Air......you really need air....
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>As a result from the gagging, tears build up in the corner of your eyes and roll down your cheeks
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>You know you need to pull yourself away and free yourself from Celestia's asphyxiating tongue, but you force yourself to endure it
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>You have learned from past experiences that it is just best to let her have her way
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>If you try to interrupt her, you will be punished
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>And her punishments are something that you will do anything you can to avoid
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>Besides you and her have an agreement that you cant afford to go back on
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>So....you....will....submit
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>Your vision begins to blur and you feel yourself go light headed
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>As your on the verge of passing out, Celestia retracts her tongue and pulls away from your mouth, a thin strand of scalding saliva keeps your mouths connected
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>You fall back a little and hit the back of your head on the bathroom wall
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>You cough between desperate gasps for air
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>fortunately you were able to stop anything from coming up and out of you
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>As you slowly recover from almost being asphyxiated, you glance up at the face of your wife
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>She has a smug grin on her face
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>"Oh my, it seems I might have went a bit overboard there, so sorry about that dear~!"
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>You do your best to crack a slight smile
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"Im....*huff*.....fine......just...*huff*....a little light-headed...."
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>"Oh, well thats a relief my dear Anonymous." Celestia brings her face close to yours again, and you notice that all the amusement she had been feeling had suddenly vanished "If you are finished with your "business" than I advise that you meet me in the bed room at once, we need to have a little chat about that mare that you had interacted with during breakfast....."
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>Your blood turns cold
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>A million thoughts flood your mind
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>How did she find out about that?
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>Celestia had already left and you were certain the guards couldn't see you
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>You didn't even talk to her
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>She was just cleaning up your mess when she "bumped" into you and "accidentally" dropped something
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>Did one of the other maids rat her out?
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>Your heart begins to race again
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>Does she know about Luna's letter?
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>Celestia turns around and is about to leave the bathroom, but suddenly calls back to you
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>"Oh! And Anon!"
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"Y-yes Celestia?"
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>Dont forget to wash your hands my sweet little sun flower~!"
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>With that Celestia exits to the bedroom and closes the bathroom door
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>You shakily drag yourself up and practically cling to the bathroom sink
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>Glancing into the mirror, your not surprised with what you see
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>You look like a mess
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>Being almost cooked alive in a bathroom and nearly choking to death on a sun goddess's burning hot tongue will do that to you
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>Turning on the cold faucet on the bathroom sink, you cup your hands and bring the water to your mouth
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>You greedily drink as much as you can knowing that a blazing inferno that also happens to be your wife awaits you in the other room
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>Your unsure what her "chat" entails, but you know that whatever it is, its probably gonna get heated pretty fast
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>Gotta stay cool and hydrated if your gonna survive
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>You splash a couple hand fulls of water on your face and turn off the sink
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>Avoiding the pile of still molten metal goo on the floor, you hesitantly open the door and exit the bathroom
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>Poking your head slowly out of the bathroom, you see exactly what you had expected
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>Your's and Celestia's bedroom is in utter shambles
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>Rubble and what you believe to be the wooden remains of your closet door litter your bedroom floor
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>You can feel a light breeze blowing against you
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>Likely from the gaping hole in the wall where the balcony once was
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>Looking over to your bed, you see Celestia resting on top of it
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>Chunks off the ceiling and debris litter the mattress around Celestia, but she doesn't seem to notice, or maybe its more like she just doesn't care
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>She is busy scratching away at a levitating scroll with a quill
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>You cautiously avoid the still smoldering parts of your bedroom as you make your way to your beautiful loving wife
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>You try your best not make any noise as well
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>Wouldnt want to disturb her while she is working
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>That scroll she is writing on looks important
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>As you near the edge of the bed, you carefully sit down on the edge of the bed not wanting to disturb your lovely Celly
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>The bed creaks only slightly as you sit down upon it
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>Considering that the mattress now lays directly upon the floor due to the frame giving out, it doesnt make as much noise as you had expected
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>Fortunately for you, Celestia didnt notice your presence and the slight noise you had caused
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>She was too invested in her work to pay you any mind.......for now
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>All you could do was just sit there and wait for her to finish
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>You could feel dread welling up inside you
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>You knew whatever she wanted to talk about would most likely end up being a painful conversation
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>In more ways than one.....
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>You continued to silently wait for her, occasionally sneaking a glance at her out of curious fear
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>All you could hear was the scratching of the quill on paper and crackling of dying embers around your room
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>Sometimes She would mutter a quick curse or let out an unsatisfied grunt
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>Her eyes never left the scroll
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>This continued on for several minutes
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>The anticipation was killing you
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>You had no idea what she was planning and that scared the hell out of you
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>The dread continued to build as your heart began to try and beat out of your chest once again
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>It wasnt even so much the idea of the pain that she would inflict upon you that scared you now
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>It was more so the idea of what she knew about Luna's letter and what she might decide to do to her
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>The idea of anything bad happening to Luna because of a mistake you might have made fills you with dispair
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>No matter what you do, what you say, you have to protect her and Celestia
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>You glance at her once more
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>She is still oblivious to your presence and continues with her writing
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>Suddenly you feel your heart begin to slow back down and your nerves begin to calm
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>You notice now that you are now in fact staring at her and haven't looked away
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>Your dread starts to dissipate and your panicked thoughts are soon replaced
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>Replaced with thoughts of how beautiful she looks in the sun set
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>The large hole in the wall gives you the perfect view of the sun resting slightly above the hills
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>It baths the room in a comforting dark orange
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>Without a doubt this was probably your favorite time of the day
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>Sunsets always seemed to relax you and make you feel all cozy, like you were ready to tuck into bed and fall asleep
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>Your not exactly sure when you started to feel this way about sunsets, but you had a feeling it started to develop when you had begun to watch most of the sunsets with the love of your life
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>Celestia
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>You both would watch the sun be lowered below the horizon together everyday, and once Celestia lowered the sun all the way and Luna raised the moon, you would both hop into bed and snuggle up in each other's embrace
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>That......doesn't happen as often anymore
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>Its actually kind of a rarity now these days
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>Celestia is usually far to busy with her royal duties to watch the sunset with you. You also dont really sleep during the night anymore either
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>You and her go to bed now during the middle of the day now
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>This is because the nights only last 4 hours now and Celestia has to make sure Luna doesnt try to overextend the time she has been allowed to have the moon raised
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>If Luna even tried to over extend by even a minute, the agreement would be null and the repercussions would be dire
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>Well.....at least you still have the memories of those past sunsets together
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>Still staring at Celestia and the sunset, you subconsciously reach a hand over to her and gently rest it upon her withers
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>Just as you touch her, the intensity of her body heat knocks you back into reality and makes you realize what you had just done
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>You internally panic expecting her to lash out at your interruption of her concentration
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>But she doesnt lash out
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>She just lets out a soft hum and briefly glances at you with her bright yellow eyes and then turns her attention back to her scroll
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>Seeing her posoti- well.....neutral reaction you hatch a small plan and decide to push your luck a little
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>Maybe you can help her calm down a little and ease her temper
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>When Celestia was herself, you would always help her wind down from her duties, even when she was still in the midst of them
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>Right now isnt that much different and this is the first time in a while Daybre- CELESTIA has given you an opening to wind her down a little
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>You slowly slide your other hand onto her back and begin with soft slow circling motions
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>She gives no reaction other than a small exhale of air from her nostrils as she continues to intently write in her scroll
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>Daring to continue, you slowly slide a hand down to her cutie mark and begin to rub there as your other hand travels closer to the base of her tail
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>You begin to rub the lower area of her back right before her tail begins with a slight roughness
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>She used to love getting scratched right here because its an area where she just cant reach without using her magic and it is usually pretty itchy
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>Also a little to close to more private areas to be able to scratch it in public
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>Apparently one of her favorite things about your hands is how it can dig into that area just right
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>Remebering when she told you that a long time ago brings a smile to your face as you lightly work into the area
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>Celestia closes her eyes and lets out a sigh of relief
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>Or at least your praying it was a sigh of relief
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>Her eyes open back up and continue to stay focused on her scroll, paying you no mind
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>A little part of you sadden that she hadnt acknowledged your efforts, but mostly your relieved she wasn't glaring you down
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>Despite your nervousness, you almost subconsciously, you lower your head down towards the beginning of the back of her neck and lay a soft kiss upon it
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>Your face being this close to her body allows you to feel the full force of her body heat
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>You could only compare to the feeling of being right up close to a large campfire
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>Your just barely able to tolerate the heat, and if it were to get any warmer, you would have to pull away
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>Honestly her body heat now is pretty cool compared to her usual heat that her body gives off
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>She is about the temperature she would be when you and her would call it a day and go to bed
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>Knowing this and seeing how its not quite close to bedtime yet makes you feel optimistic about the effects of your attempt to help wind her down
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>Thus encouraging you to continue with your small pecks against her neck
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>You slowly move slightly closer up her neck laying down small kisses, moving a little bit upward with each peck while your hands continue to slowly move softly across her body
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>Celestia finally gives way and lets out a small gasp as you reach just around the middle of her neck with your kisses
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>The sudden sound causes you to freeze and your body to tense up with fear
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>Fearing the worse, you wait a brief moment for her to say something, yet she doesnt
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>The scrawling she had been doing on the scroll seems to have suddenly stopped as well
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>Seeing no obviously negative reaction and deciding to push your luck, you continue the trek up the back of her neck
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>You eventually reach just below her ear
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>Whether by pure luck or her own doing, Celestia's flame-like mane had been shifting away from your trail allowing you to make your journey upwards unhindered
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>You lean and leave an especially long kiss just behind her ear
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>You put all the passion and love you feel towards Celestia into it, and you feel like it was worth it too as Celestia lets a out short moan in response
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>Your heart flutters hearing that moan
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>It makes you think about the last time you two were together like this and this wasnt the first time you made this journey upwards Celestia's neck
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>But the last time you had, it had been a very important night for the both of you
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>A night you would never forget as it was the first night you two spent together after you had sworn your oath to her
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>And she swore her oath to you
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>Remebering how different things were back then makes your heartache with a longing for the past
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>You fight back the desire to let tears loose as you bring yourself back to attending to Celestia.
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>You move from below her ear to her outer cheek and lay a soft peck upon it
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>As you pull slightly away from her with the intent to move in only closer, Celestia suddenly brings her face to yours, and with surprising tenderness, she compassionately locks you into a kiss
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>This one being quite the opposite from the one she had forced onto you previously in the bathroom
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>She doesnt force herself into your mouth with her scalding hot tongue this time around, but tenderly presses her mouth onto your's with loving gentleness
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>Her eyes are closed softly and light pink is brushed on her cheeks as she continues her kiss
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>You are slightly taken aback as she has never shown this amount of care and compassion towards you since she became....well....the pony that she is right now....
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>Despite how out of character this is for her now, you quickly decide to quickly reciprocate to her
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>You use your hand to cup her cheek in an effort to bring you closer to her
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>You have been yearning for this
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>You longingly stare into her closed eyes
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>You hope that when she opens them, you will be greeted with the same eyes that you have longed so long to see again
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>The eyes that promised you a love that would last longer than the sun itself
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>The eyes that make you want to endue the hottest flames of the sun just to prevent any water from ever gathering in them
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>The eyes that you hope to see passed onto newer generations that you long to bring into this world someday
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>Her eyes...
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>You wish you could stay like this with her forever
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>It is the closest she has been to her old self in a very long time
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>You can swear it almost seems like her firey mane has even cooled and setteled a bit
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>You promise yourself you want ever break this kiss
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>If you were able to, you would stay like this with her forever
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>Death is a more welcomed fate than the seperation of her mouth from yours
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>Your old Celestia is back and you cant bare to let her leave once again
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>The very thought is torture to your mind
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>How you wish she wouldnt leave you again
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>But unfortunately, you know all good things must come to an end
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>And that includes what has yet to change
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>She hasnt returned to you
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>Or actually she hasnt ever left you
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>Your heart knows thats a fact
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>Celestia is Daybreaker
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>And Daybreaker is......Celestia
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>She may seem like a different pony now, but you know the Celestia you know and love isnt gone
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>Her kiss is what proved that to you
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>It was the same as the one you both shared on your honeymoon
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>No anger, no sadness, no fear, only love and hope
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>It tells you that your Sunlight is still in there
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>It tells you that you can get herback
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>Lost in your kiss with Celestia, you dont feel the hoof resting upon your chest gently push you away
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