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That Good Car Smell, a coombait story by Anonymous

By Spiderbloke2099
Created: 2021-07-16 21:31:33
Updated: 2023-12-11 14:41:50
Expiry: Never

  1. Copied for posterity.
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  3. >It's after school hours now
  4. >You just got finished with your [] club meeting and Sunset Shimmer just got out of hers
  5. >The sun has turned a hazy amber glow as it set down across the sky
  6. >You gaze at the drifting clouds up above while you wait for her to come by your car
  7. >A couple more minutes pass and you see Sunset walking towards you now
  8. >A feeling of relief and gladness fills you, seeing her glowing face
  9. >She's wearing skintight jeans and a v-necked shirt underneath her iconic short-jacket
  10. >Soon she reaches you
  11. >"Oh, hi Anon." She says in exasperated but happy breath
  12. >"Sorry my club ran over a few minutes."
  13. "Oh it's no problem at all. I was just watching these beautiful clouds, thinking how soft they must be. How soft they must be...like you."
  14. >You give a flirtatious grin as you said that
  15. >"Awww. Thanks." She responds
  16. >The sun reflecting off her own orange skin and bi-toned hair makes her glow so beautifully
  17. >Butterflies flutter in your stomach
  18. "Alright. Let's get going." You say to her
  19. >Nodding, she goes around to the other side and gets in, throwing her backpack onto the back seat
  20. >Your car is nothing impressive, just a regular old junker that gets you from point A to point B
  21. >You enter into the driver's seat yourself and turn the ignition
  22. >As you're driving by, you see Flash Sentry walking to his car alone
  23. >You leave him be
  24. >As you get on the road, Sunset turns and reaches for her backpack, opening it up and rummaging for something
  25. >You catch a whiff of her hair scent as she does so
  26. >It smells so fresh and good
  27. >Whether you could help it or not, it reflexively triggered a response inside of you, imagining more things
  28. >If her hair smelled that good, what else might she smell like?
  29. >She's still rummaging
  30. "What are you looking for?" You ask
  31. >"I'm just checking to see if I forgot something."
  32. "Did you?"
  33. >"I don't think so, but I can't help but feel like I am."
  34. "I'm sure you didn't."
  35. >"Yeah I guess."
  36. >She turns back around and sits back in her seat
  37. >In silence the two of you ride for another minute
  38. >While you were, you kept thinking about her scent
  39. >Your young adult male hormones made it so you could think of nothing else
  40. >Against better judgment, you decide to blurt out
  41. "Your hair smells really good."
  42. >"Really? Thanks for noticing. Rarity gave me some of her own new shampoo the other day."
  43. "Yeah, it's really good stuff."
  44. >At the word "shampoo", your mind drifted adjacently to her shower ritual
  45. >Naturally, as you did so, you envisioned her naked, sensual, beautiful
  46. >You bit your lower lip, thinking about
  47. >And against your own wishes, your penis started to harden as well
  48. >Damn, what a time to get hard
  49. >You hope she doesn't notice
  50. >"Anon?"
  51. >Welp
  52. >You take a side glance at her and see her looking exactly where you hoped she wouldn't be
  53. >She's grinning to herself
  54. >"Anon. What are you thinking about right now?"
  55. >Shit. How do you answer this?
  56. >The truth, obviously, dummy
  57. "I'm thinking about how you smell, about how...other parts of you might smell."
  58. >"Really. You think I smell that nice, huh? Hmmm~."
  59. >She takes her hand and starts caressing your bulge gently
  60. >You shiver at her touch
  61. >"That's funny, because I was thinking about how much I liked your smell too." She says seductively
  62. >You glance at her again, and gulp
  63. >She stops caressing and brings her fingers up to her nose, giving them a gentle sniff
  64. >She bites her own lower lip as she does
  65. >WEW
  66. >This makes your erection stronger and it would be visible to all but only the most oblivious
  67. >You look out the side of your window and see that you're passing by the mall
  68. >With the window of opportunity closing quickly, you make the hasty decision to turn into the large parking lot
  69. >There's a decent amount of cars there, but that's fine
  70. >There's an area behind the mall which sees little traffic
  71. >That's where you're going
  72. >Surprised, Sunset asks
  73. >"Where are you going?"
  74. "You'll see" You reply with a mischievous look
  75. >Sunset gives you a quizzical look all the while
  76. >It seems your sporadic actions haven't done much to dampen the increasing level of primal arousal
  77. >You pull around to the lesser traveled area and park the car
  78. >No one should come by and see you here
  79. >Unless it's a custodian hauling out the day's trash
  80. >Your erection hasn't softened at all since it started
  81. >You look at her now understanding face
  82. >She licks her lips
  83. >You take a lock of her hair and bring it to your nose, giving it a gentle sniff
  84. >You sigh happily
  85. "You know, I'd would like to know what the rest of you smells like."
  86. >Sunset softly laughs
  87. >"Me too."
  88. >She reaches across the seat to your bulging crotch once more, unbuttoning your pants and quickly unzipping them
  89. >Your underwear is the only obstacle in front of your anticipating member now
  90. >Sunset doesn't pull it out yet
  91. >Instead, she leans forward and brings her nose right up to your penis
  92. >She audibly inhales the dampened fumes of your cock after being rubbed around inside all day
  93. >She gives out a shaky moan
  94. >God, it sounds so cute
  95. >You feel a tiny bit of precum spurt out and make a small moist spot on your underwear
  96. >You place your hand on her head and lean forward yourself, smelling the deep of her head now
  97. >Oh yeah
  98. >Unlike her hair, this smells way more Sunset
  99. >This is her essence
  100. >Sunset starts tickling your cock with her fingers, playing a little dance
  101. >Finally she proceeds to grab your underwear and pull it down
  102. >You erection springs out in glee, hard and pulsing
  103. >Sunset makes another audible moan
  104. >"MMMhmmmm."
  105. >She grabs your shaft and pulls it down, allowing your glans to fully emerge from the partially covered foreskin
  106. >As she does, a strong waft of your penis musk comes out
  107. >Sunset literally brings her nose to the tip of your dick and rubs it, giving deep inhalations as she did
  108. >Holy shit
  109. >You start moving your own way down and sniff her neck
  110. >Her skin smells so...Sunny
  111. >It fills you with tremendous gladness and increasing hornyness
  112. >More precum spurts out of your tip
  113. >Sunset notices and gives your head the smallest lick before giving it multiple tiny little kisses
  114. >She's worshiping your cock now, making sure to get the scent of every single part of your genitals
  115. >She moves from the head, down the shaft, all the way to your testicles, which have an equally potent musk of sweat and masculinity
  116. >She nibbles on your scrotum a bit before working her way back up your shaft
  117. >Your breathing has become loud and hard now as your heart pounds in sheer excitement
  118. >You can only imagine it's the same for her
  119. >You want more, though
  120. >You want her
  121. >You want HER
  122. "S-S-Sunset?" You stagger out
  123. "I would *really* like to smell *you* now."
  124. >Taking the hint, she gives your head a final suck like a lollipop, then lifts her head back up
  125. >You look down at her crotch and see that it's slightly darker than the rest of her jeans
  126. >Good lord, she must be more aroused than you are
  127. >The both of you look around to ensure no one has stumbled upon your olfactory intimacy
  128. >No one has
  129. >Sunset repositions herself on her seat so her ass is in the air, in position and proximity for you to smell
  130. >Her skintight jeans do her so many favors, outlining the most perfect, most beautiful, heartachingly pretty shape
  131. >You touch her ass, gently journeying across its firm yet plush shape before settling on a destination - her pussy
  132. >You rub your fingers up and down, teasing her like she teased you
  133. >The dampness on your fingers feels amazing
  134. >You lean in finally and bring your nose directly against her
  135. >The sheer scent of evaporating pheromones drives you wild
  136. >You begin to feel an absolute frenzy which you may soon lose control over
  137. >You move upwards to sniff where her anus would be
  138. >A lesser scent, but one which you begin salivating at nonetheless
  139. >Sunset turns to you, breathing heavily
  140. >"hah, hah, do you like it? Do I smell good?"
  141. "Sunset...you smell like...something indescribable. I want you so bad. I don't know if I can hold back."
  142. >"I don't want you to." She replies back, desperation in her voice too
  143. >You lean in for another hard sniff of the musk through her jeans which was merely a fraction of her true self
  144. >But before you could truly appreciate it, she pulls away and turns around, leaning quickly to give your dick a quick taste again, licking the across your whole glans surface
  145. >You shudder in sheer pleasure
  146. >Immediately after, she clumsily tumbles into the back seats
  147. >You give her a look of "what the hell are you doing?, but understand soon after as she begins unbuttoning her own pants, shoving them down
  148. >Her panties are revealed to you and they're, wait...cute?
  149. >They're pink and white with Hello Kitty on them
  150. >Aww, that's so adorable
  151. >But enough of that
  152. >You see Sunset's long, naked slender legs as she finally kicks off her tight jeans
  153. >Her panties are close to sopping
  154. >Taking a clue, you turn and scramble yourself into the back seats
  155. >While you're doing that, Sunset takes off her jacket too
  156. >It seems it's getting too steamy in here for her, and that's quite alright
  157. >As quickly as she took off her pants, she began sliding down her panties
  158. >Oh my lord
  159. >You see her gorgeous pussy
  160. >Never in your life will you ever see as beautiful a sight as you did right here, right now
  161. >Her smooth, orange mounds were puffed to such arousal that they were practically blushing themselves
  162. >Sticky fluids coated her lips everywhere
  163. >And in the confines of this car, all you could smell now was the sheer, potent musk of Sunset Shimmer's genitals
  164. >She spread her legs for you and immediately you leaned in to smell her most intimate innermost femininity
  165. >Oh God it smelled so good
  166. >You give her coated clitoris a gentle lick and gave her lips gentle kisses, as she did for you mere moments go
  167. >Sunset's giving out louder moans now, higher pitched too, of sheer anticipatory bliss
  168. >You lick the juices off her lips, savoring the taste
  169. >Your cock is harder than the hardest diamond in the world now
  170. >Feeling that it was time to switch once more, you back off from her crotch and position yourself on the opposite seat, spreading your own legs to allow Sunset full access herself
  171. >She repositions onto her knees and leans her head forward and down to your now towering rod
  172. >She takes her hand and strokes your penis slowly, allowing your foreskin to cover your head before stroking it back down, releasing it in utterly complete nakedness
  173. >You toys with it with her tongue, prodding your dick hole with her tongue and nibbling on the very tip
  174. >She envelops the glans with her lips, swirling her tongue around while sucking on it as a baby would nurse a teat
  175. >Your moans have similarly become louder, cherishing every little bit of contact she gave
  176. >It wasn't long before she started to take more length
  177. >She was giving you full on fellatio now
  178. >Up and down her head bobbed, and every passing second you began to see more and more white light in your eyes
  179. >You were mere moments away from orgasm
  180. >Until
  181. *pop*
  182. >She stops
  183. >She knew
  184. >She fucking knew
  185. >You were about to cum and she blue-balled you on purpose
  186. "AWWW! Why'd you stop!" You exclaim
  187. >"Because it's my turn again." She answers with a devilish, knowing grin
  188. >You groan
  189. "Arrgh, alright, fine. But you better finish me off after this. I was *this* close."
  190. >"Deal. But only if you finish me off too afterwards."
  191. >She turns around again, respositioning once more
  192. >This time she's on her knees again, presenting her ass to you
  193. >More of her juices have coated her pussy again
  194. >Besides that, however, you see her anus too
  195. >Equally as beautiful as her pussy in its shape, form, aesthetic
  196. >You were compelled
  197. >You were way too aroused to decide otherwise
  198. >You brought your face up close once more
  199. >This time not to her pussy, but to her asshole
  200. >You gave it tentative sniff, expecting something something...less than
  201. >You were wrong
  202. >Sunset's anus smelled just as sweet as her pussy, if but a little different
  203. >You throbbed yet again
  204. >To your great delight, her anus smelled of an utterly erotic sweat distinct from her pussy, but every bit just as delicious
  205. >It was clean and pristine, much to your great relief
  206. >Against every single evolutionary instinct which you chose to ignore, you decided to taste it
  207. >You inhale halfway before sticking your tongue out and giving her butthole a nice, long, broad, slow lick, trying to take in every flavor you could of her
  208. >Sunset gasps
  209. >"Ah! Anon, Anon, haha, you dirty boy."
  210. >Apparently she didn't seem to mind
  211. >The taste of her skin, sweat and pheromones seemed to overpower the fact that you were literally tasting Sunset Shimmers asshole
  212. >In a strangely shameful way, it felt even more intimate than tasting her pussy
  213. >But it was probably just the hormones messing with you
  214. >But who cares at this point, right?
  215. >Wanting to return the favor to Sunset for her superb oral skills, you continue to lick from the bottom of her pussy all the way to her anus, but you decide that she deserves a bit more and start rubbing her (at this point) massively swollen clitoris, giving her a gentle fingering at the same time
  216. >Sunset's high pitched moans return and her whole body is literally shuddering now
  217. >Her hips pulse back and forth, shoving her ass into your face as you pleasured her
  218. >You were certain that you smelt of nothing but her pure erotic essence now
  219. >The fragrance (or stench) of her pussy would be noticeable to everyone within a 15 foot radius of you
  220. >But fuck it
  221. >It's Sunset Shimmer's, and you love her
  222. >You tongue her asshole while vigorously rubbing her clit now
  223. >She's practically shouting in pleasure now
  224. >"AH! AH! AH! OOOOH! Anon, I'm gonna cum! I'm gonna cum! I'M GONNA...AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!"
  225. >She squeals in such ecstatic delight as her pussy squirts out her female cum all over your face in such force
  226. >For whatever reason, you didn't even need her to finish you off
  227. >Making her cum so hard in delightful pleasure was enough to set you over the edge too
  228. >As her vaginal fluids drenched and coated your face, you reach down to your cock and begin stroking yourself
  229. >You couldn't take it anymore, and you couldn't wait any longer
  230. >You stroke your cock quickly with your thumb and index finger
  231. >And right before you cum, you left yourself back up and aim your dick towards Sunset's ass
  232. >She turns to see what you're doing in her post-orgasm haze and widens her eyes as she realizes what's happening
  233. >Not wanting to disappoint you, she quickly maneuvers herself to get her face right in front of your cock
  234. >Right as she does, you let out a loud groan of your own
  235. "UUUUUAAAAAGHHHHHHH!"
  236. >You're blinded in pure white light of orgasmic pleasure, shocking through your entire body
  237. >Semen rockets out of your shaft harder than any masturbation session you've done, and all right onto Sunset's beautiful, eager face
  238. >Rope after rope of hot, sticky, pungent semen splatters onto her face
  239. >She tries to catch some of it in her mouth
  240. >Some ropes do make it in
  241. >She closes her mouth and savors the taste of your own essence as your remaining blasts leak out in smaller and smaller increments
  242. >By the time you're finished and spent, Sunset takes and suckles on your now deflating cock, trying to suck out any remaining cum
  243. >The pleasure you felt was so good, you could find no words to truly give it credit
  244. >As you recovered, you held Sunset's head again, lowering your own to give a final post-coitus inhale
  245. >Back to normal functions now
  246. >Sunset takes your now totally spent cock out of her mouth
  247. >The two of you look at each other, each other's most precious, most intimate and loving fluids on each other's face
  248. >What an absolute sex-stenched mess
  249. >You want to feel regret at the created mess in your car, but you don't
  250. >You can't
  251. >Because you made this mess with Sunset Shimmer'
  252. >And you love her
  253. "Let's go home." You say to her
  254. >Sunset warmly smiles
  255. >"Ok, Anon."
  256. >She kisses you, and you taste her just a little bit more
  257. >Your beautiful...Sunset Shimmer

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