That Good Car Smell, a coombait story by Anonymous


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                                            >It's after school hours now

                                            >You just got finished with your [] club meeting and Sunset Shimmer just got out of hers

                                            >The sun has turned a hazy amber glow as it set down across the sky

                                            >You gaze at the drifting clouds up above while you wait for her to come by your car

                                            >A couple more minutes pass and you see Sunset walking towards you now

                                            >A feeling of relief and gladness fills you, seeing her glowing face

                                            >She's wearing skintight jeans and a v-necked shirt underneath her iconic short-jacket

                                            >Soon she reaches you

                                            >"Oh, hi Anon." She says in exasperated but happy breath

                                            >"Sorry my club ran over a few minutes."

                                            "Oh it's no problem at all. I was just watching these beautiful clouds, thinking how soft they must be. How soft they must be...like you."

                                            >You give a flirtatious grin as you said that

                                            >"Awww. Thanks." She responds

                                            >The sun reflecting off her own orange skin and bi-toned hair makes her glow so beautifully

                                            >Butterflies flutter in your stomach

                                            "Alright. Let's get going." You say to her

                                            >Nodding, she goes around to the other side and gets in, throwing her backpack onto the back seat

                                            >Your car is nothing impressive, just a regular old junker that gets you from point A to point B

                                            >You enter into the driver's seat yourself and turn the ignition

                                            >As you're driving by, you see Flash Sentry walking to his car alone

                                            >You leave him be

                                            >As you get on the road, Sunset turns and reaches for her backpack, opening it up and rummaging for something

                                            >You catch a whiff of her hair scent as she does so

                                            >It smells so fresh and good

                                            >Whether you could help it or not, it reflexively triggered a response inside of you, imagining more things

                                            >If her hair smelled that good, what else might she smell like?

                                            >She's still rummaging

                                            "What are you looking for?" You ask

                                            >"I'm just checking to see if I forgot something."

                                            "Did you?"

                                            >"I don't think so, but I can't help but feel like I am."

                                            "I'm sure you didn't."

                                            >"Yeah I guess."

                                            >She turns back around and sits back in her seat

                                            >In silence the two of you ride for another minute

                                            >While you were, you kept thinking about her scent

                                            >Your young adult male hormones made it so you could think of nothing else

                                            >Against better judgment, you decide to blurt out

                                            "Your hair smells really good."

                                            >"Really? Thanks for noticing. Rarity gave me some of her own new shampoo the other day."

                                            "Yeah, it's really good stuff."

                                            >At the word "shampoo", your mind drifted adjacently to her shower ritual

                                            >Naturally, as you did so, you envisioned her naked, sensual, beautiful

                                            >You bit your lower lip, thinking about

                                            >And against your own wishes, your penis started to harden as well

                                            >Damn, what a time to get hard

                                            >You hope she doesn't notice

                                            >"Anon?"

                                            >Welp

                                            >You take a side glance at her and see her looking exactly where you hoped she wouldn't be

                                            >She's grinning to herself

                                            >"Anon. What are you thinking about right now?"

                                            >Shit. How do you answer this?

                                            >The truth, obviously, dummy

                                            "I'm thinking about how you smell, about how...other parts of you might smell."

                                            >"Really. You think I smell that nice, huh? Hmmm~."

                                            >She takes her hand and starts caressing your bulge gently

                                            >You shiver at her touch

                                            >"That's funny, because I was thinking about how much I liked your smell too." She says seductively

                                            >You glance at her again, and gulp

                                            >She stops caressing and brings her fingers up to her nose, giving them a gentle sniff

                                            >She bites her own lower lip as she does

                                            >WEW

                                            >This makes your erection stronger and it would be visible to all but only the most oblivious

                                            >You look out the side of your window and see that you're passing by the mall

                                            >With the window of opportunity closing quickly, you make the hasty decision to turn into the large parking lot

                                            >There's a decent amount of cars there, but that's fine

                                            >There's an area behind the mall which sees little traffic

                                            >That's where you're going

                                            >Surprised, Sunset asks

                                            >"Where are you going?"

                                            "You'll see" You reply with a mischievous look

                                            >Sunset gives you a quizzical look all the while

                                            >It seems your sporadic actions haven't done much to dampen the increasing level of primal arousal

                                            >You pull around to the lesser traveled area and park the car

                                            >No one should come by and see you here

                                            >Unless it's a custodian hauling out the day's trash

                                            >Your erection hasn't softened at all since it started

                                            >You look at her now understanding face

                                            >She licks her lips

                                            >You take a lock of her hair and bring it to your nose, giving it a gentle sniff

                                            >You sigh happily

                                            "You know, I'd would like to know what the rest of you smells like."

                                            >Sunset softly laughs

                                            >"Me too."

                                            >She reaches across the seat to your bulging crotch once more, unbuttoning your pants and quickly unzipping them

                                            >Your underwear is the only obstacle in front of your anticipating member now

                                            >Sunset doesn't pull it out yet

                                            >Instead, she leans forward and brings her nose right up to your penis

                                            >She audibly inhales the dampened fumes of your cock after being rubbed around inside all day

                                            >She gives out a shaky moan

                                            >God, it sounds so cute

                                            >You feel a tiny bit of precum spurt out and make a small moist spot on your underwear

                                            >You place your hand on her head and lean forward yourself, smelling the deep of her head now

                                            >Oh yeah

                                            >Unlike her hair, this smells way more Sunset

                                            >This is her essence

                                            >Sunset starts tickling your cock with her fingers, playing a little dance

                                            >Finally she proceeds to grab your underwear and pull it down

                                            >You erection springs out in glee, hard and pulsing

                                            >Sunset makes another audible moan

                                            >"MMMhmmmm."

                                            >She grabs your shaft and pulls it down, allowing your glans to fully emerge from the partially covered foreskin

                                            >As she does, a strong waft of your penis musk comes out

                                            >Sunset literally brings her nose to the tip of your dick and rubs it, giving deep inhalations as she did

                                            >Holy shit

                                            >You start moving your own way down and sniff her neck

                                            >Her skin smells so...Sunny

                                            >It fills you with tremendous gladness and increasing hornyness

                                            >More precum spurts out of your tip

                                            >Sunset notices and gives your head the smallest lick before giving it multiple tiny little kisses

                                            >She's worshiping your cock now, making sure to get the scent of every single part of your genitals

                                            >She moves from the head, down the shaft, all the way to your testicles, which have an equally potent musk of sweat and masculinity

                                            >She nibbles on your scrotum a bit before working her way back up your shaft

                                            >Your breathing has become loud and hard now as your heart pounds in sheer excitement

                                            >You can only imagine it's the same for her

                                            >You want more, though

                                            >You want her

                                            >You want HER

                                            "S-S-Sunset?" You stagger out

                                            "I would *really* like to smell *you* now."

                                            >Taking the hint, she gives your head a final suck like a lollipop, then lifts her head back up

                                            >You look down at her crotch and see that it's slightly darker than the rest of her jeans

                                            >Good lord, she must be more aroused than you are

                                            >The both of you look around to ensure no one has stumbled upon your olfactory intimacy

                                            >No one has

                                            >Sunset repositions herself on her seat so her ass is in the air, in position and proximity for you to smell

                                            >Her skintight jeans do her so many favors, outlining the most perfect, most beautiful, heartachingly pretty shape

                                            >You touch her ass, gently journeying across its firm yet plush shape before settling on a destination - her pussy

                                            >You rub your fingers up and down, teasing her like she teased you

                                            >The dampness on your fingers feels amazing

                                            >You lean in finally and bring your nose directly against her

                                            >The sheer scent of evaporating pheromones drives you wild

                                            >You begin to feel an absolute frenzy which you may soon lose control over

                                            >You move upwards to sniff where her anus would be

                                            >A lesser scent, but one which you begin salivating at nonetheless

                                            >Sunset turns to you, breathing heavily

                                            >"hah, hah, do you like it? Do I smell good?"

                                            "Sunset...you smell like...something indescribable. I want you so bad. I don't know if I can hold back."

                                            >"I don't want you to." She replies back, desperation in her voice too

                                            >You lean in for another hard sniff of the musk through her jeans which was merely a fraction of her true self

                                            >But before you could truly appreciate it, she pulls away and turns around, leaning quickly to give your dick a quick taste again, licking the across your whole glans surface

                                            >You shudder in sheer pleasure

                                            >Immediately after, she clumsily tumbles into the back seats

                                            >You give her a look of "what the hell are you doing?, but understand soon after as she begins unbuttoning her own pants, shoving them down

                                            >Her panties are revealed to you and they're, wait...cute?

                                            >They're pink and white with Hello Kitty on them

                                            >Aww, that's so adorable

                                            >But enough of that

                                            >You see Sunset's long, naked slender legs as she finally kicks off her tight jeans

                                            >Her panties are close to sopping

                                            >Taking a clue, you turn and scramble yourself into the back seats

                                            >While you're doing that, Sunset takes off her jacket too

                                            >It seems it's getting too steamy in here for her, and that's quite alright

                                            >As quickly as she took off her pants, she began sliding down her panties

                                            >Oh my lord

                                            >You see her gorgeous pussy

                                            >Never in your life will you ever see as beautiful a sight as you did right here, right now

                                            >Her smooth, orange mounds were puffed to such arousal that they were practically blushing themselves

                                            >Sticky fluids coated her lips everywhere

                                            >And in the confines of this car, all you could smell now was the sheer, potent musk of Sunset Shimmer's genitals

                                            >She spread her legs for you and immediately you leaned in to smell her most intimate innermost femininity

                                            >Oh God it smelled so good

                                            >You give her coated clitoris a gentle lick and gave her lips gentle kisses, as she did for you mere moments go

                                            >Sunset's giving out louder moans now, higher pitched too, of sheer anticipatory bliss

                                            >You lick the juices off her lips, savoring the taste

                                            >Your cock is harder than the hardest diamond in the world now

                                            >Feeling that it was time to switch once more, you back off from her crotch and position yourself on the opposite seat, spreading your own legs to allow Sunset full access herself

                                            >She repositions onto her knees and leans her head forward and down to your now towering rod

                                            >She takes her hand and strokes your penis slowly, allowing your foreskin to cover your head before stroking it back down, releasing it in utterly complete nakedness

                                            >You toys with it with her tongue, prodding your dick hole with her tongue and nibbling on the very tip

                                            >She envelops the glans with her lips, swirling her tongue around while sucking on it as a baby would nurse a teat

                                            >Your moans have similarly become louder, cherishing every little bit of contact she gave

                                            >It wasn't long before she started to take more length

                                            >She was giving you full on fellatio now

                                            >Up and down her head bobbed, and every passing second you began to see more and more white light in your eyes

                                            >You were mere moments away from orgasm

                                            >Until

                                            *pop*

                                            >She stops

                                            >She knew

                                            >She fucking knew

                                            >You were about to cum and she blue-balled you on purpose

                                            "AWWW! Why'd you stop!" You exclaim

                                            >"Because it's my turn again." She answers with a devilish, knowing grin

                                            >You groan

                                            "Arrgh, alright, fine. But you better finish me off after this. I was *this* close."

                                            >"Deal. But only if you finish me off too afterwards."

                                            >She turns around again, respositioning once more

                                            >This time she's on her knees again, presenting her ass to you

                                            >More of her juices have coated her pussy again

                                            >Besides that, however, you see her anus too

                                            >Equally as beautiful as her pussy in its shape, form, aesthetic

                                            >You were compelled

                                            >You were way too aroused to decide otherwise

                                            >You brought your face up close once more

                                            >This time not to her pussy, but to her asshole

                                            >You gave it tentative sniff, expecting something something...less than

                                            >You were wrong

                                            >Sunset's anus smelled just as sweet as her pussy, if but a little different

                                            >You throbbed yet again

                                            >To your great delight, her anus smelled of an utterly erotic sweat distinct from her pussy, but every bit just as delicious

                                            >It was clean and pristine, much to your great relief

                                            >Against every single evolutionary instinct which you chose to ignore, you decided to taste it

                                            >You inhale halfway before sticking your tongue out and giving her butthole a nice, long, broad, slow lick, trying to take in every flavor you could of her

                                            >Sunset gasps

                                            >"Ah! Anon, Anon, haha, you dirty boy."

                                            >Apparently she didn't seem to mind

                                            >The taste of her skin, sweat and pheromones seemed to overpower the fact that you were literally tasting Sunset Shimmers asshole

                                            >In a strangely shameful way, it felt even more intimate than tasting her pussy

                                            >But it was probably just the hormones messing with you

                                            >But who cares at this point, right?

                                            >Wanting to return the favor to Sunset for her superb oral skills, you continue to lick from the bottom of her pussy all the way to her anus, but you decide that she deserves a bit more and start rubbing her (at this point) massively swollen clitoris, giving her a gentle fingering at the same time

                                            >Sunset's high pitched moans return and her whole body is literally shuddering now

                                            >Her hips pulse back and forth, shoving her ass into your face as you pleasured her

                                            >You were certain that you smelt of nothing but her pure erotic essence now

                                            >The fragrance (or stench) of her pussy would be noticeable to everyone within a 15 foot radius of you

                                            >But fuck it

                                            >It's Sunset Shimmer's, and you love her

                                            >You tongue her asshole while vigorously rubbing her clit now

                                            >She's practically shouting in pleasure now

                                            >"AH! AH! AH! OOOOH! Anon, I'm gonna cum! I'm gonna cum! I'M GONNA...AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!"

                                            >She squeals in such ecstatic delight as her pussy squirts out her female cum all over your face in such force

                                            >For whatever reason, you didn't even need her to finish you off

                                            >Making her cum so hard in delightful pleasure was enough to set you over the edge too

                                            >As her vaginal fluids drenched and coated your face, you reach down to your cock and begin stroking yourself

                                            >You couldn't take it anymore, and you couldn't wait any longer

                                            >You stroke your cock quickly with your thumb and index finger

                                            >And right before you cum, you left yourself back up and aim your dick towards Sunset's ass

                                            >She turns to see what you're doing in her post-orgasm haze and widens her eyes as she realizes what's happening

                                            >Not wanting to disappoint you, she quickly maneuvers herself to get her face right in front of your cock

                                            >Right as she does, you let out a loud groan of your own

                                            "UUUUUAAAAAGHHHHHHH!"

                                            >You're blinded in pure white light of orgasmic pleasure, shocking through your entire body

                                            >Semen rockets out of your shaft harder than any masturbation session you've done, and all right onto Sunset's beautiful, eager face

                                            >Rope after rope of hot, sticky, pungent semen splatters onto her face

                                            >She tries to catch some of it in her mouth

                                            >Some ropes do make it in

                                            >She closes her mouth and savors the taste of your own essence as your remaining blasts leak out in smaller and smaller increments

                                            >By the time you're finished and spent, Sunset takes and suckles on your now deflating cock, trying to suck out any remaining cum

                                            >The pleasure you felt was so good, you could find no words to truly give it credit

                                            >As you recovered, you held Sunset's head again, lowering your own to give a final post-coitus inhale

                                            >Back to normal functions now

                                            >Sunset takes your now totally spent cock out of her mouth

                                            >The two of you look at each other, each other's most precious, most intimate and loving fluids on each other's face

                                            >What an absolute sex-stenched mess

                                            >You want to feel regret at the created mess in your car, but you don't

                                            >You can't

                                            >Because you made this mess with Sunset Shimmer'

                                            >And you love her

                                            "Let's go home." You say to her

                                            >Sunset warmly smiles

                                            >"Ok, Anon."

                                            >She kisses you, and you taste her just a little bit more

                                            >Your beautiful...Sunset Shimmer