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Getting the fat outta the Bat

By Batbooper
Created: 21st June 2022 12:17:13 AM
24th June 2022 01:48:03 AM

  1. Update June 23rd
  2. >Setting one park illuminated by moonlight. One human standing by a running track while an extremely out of shape bat mare runs on it.
  3. "Come on fatty one more lap"
  4. >Mostyn “I hate you Anon"
  5. >So this is what is keeping you busy in the late evenings.
  6. >Trying to turn this walking and flying fridge into a lean and mean fit machine
  7. >She had came to you last week. Apparently she had seen you working out for a few weeks and wanted to get in shape herself.
  8. >Her goal was getting into the Royal Night Guard
  9. >But she had to lose some weight. Some is not the right word, a lot of weight.
  10. >Mostyn is struggling to run this extra lap. She is covered in sweat, that gut is slapping her sides with every stride. Those extremely plump cheeks are jiggling like crazy.
  11. >You blow your trusty whistle "Come on faster pastry perfection lets go"
  12. >She huffs her way to the finish line and almost collapses onto the ground.
  13. >You look down at her. She is breathing heavy, her whole body moving in unison with the large breaths she is taking. Sweat droplets rain down onto the track. Her mane and tail matted to her body.
  14. >You hand her a water bottle, to which she greedily chugs the contents.
  15. >Looking at your watch. You both have been out here for forty minutes. You shake your head.
  16. "Ok get up on that bar and knock out your pullups and then you are done for today"
  17. >She looks up at you with eyes showing fear but your ice covered heart is having none of it. You point at the bar and tap your feet.
  18. >She struggles to walk the ten feet to the pullup bar. Ears splayed back against her head.
  19. >"Anon please im dead tired, can’t we quit” Mostyn tells you as she reaches the bar
  20. "And how do you think it would be if you joined the guard right now. All your fellow bats would see you struggling just like this. No its better it’s just you and me out here. No up up there come on and show me what a mare can do."
  21. >Mostyn grumbles "oh I will show you what a Mare can do"
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  23. >12 Pullups later
  24. >She is laying on the ground looking like a sack of potatoes.
  25. >This is going to take a few months.
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  27. >Later that evening you wander into Hollow Shade's own fast food joint "The Lucky Bat".
  28. >Instead of bright lights there is a fluorescent blue and purple that radiates softly from the walls on the inside
  29. >You are down for that fish and tater pie that’s tonight's special
  30. >Just as you are about to order, something from the dining area grabs your attention.
  31. >Well son of a bat, its Mostyn with a giant platter. Not on your watch.
  32. >You march on over there as Mostyn sucks down on a shake with a half-eaten chicken burger deluxe lying on a serving tray surrounded by fries.
  33. >She doesn’t see you until you plop down in front of her.
  34. >But when she does, it startles her to her core.
  35. >She drops the shake [spoiler]it doesn’t spill[/spoiler]and looks down at the table, directly at her feast.
  36. >You shake your head in annoyance
  37. "Seriously Mare I take the time out of my nights to help you get in shape, and what do you do? Sabotage all your efforts. Is that what you do every night after your workouts?"
  38. >She sniffles then looks up at you with sad bat eyes, ears folded behind her.
  39. >Mostyn " I can’t help it I get so hungry after working out. I...I..need help. And I know you have been helping me work out, but......I need help with this too. "
  40. >You look away from her
  41. >This is why she isn’t losing weight, she can’t out exercise her diet. Maybe, just maybe she will listen.
  42. >You look back at her. You could swear there is a violin playing in the background with how pitiful she looks. Those big watery eyes stare at you for help.
  43. "Ahhhhright ok I'll help you. "
  44. >Mostyn tries to be fast but her gut gets in the way, she stumbles into you with a hug. You don’t know if its the wings are greasy or the hooves so you try to shift away.
  45. "On one condition"
  46. >Mostyn " Sure yeah anything"
  47. "You take my advice about dieting. If I catch you breaking it then my helping you is done.
  48. >Mostyn nods her head "Yes sure Anon I promise bats honor"
  49. >She goes back to trying to hug you and you relent letting her do so. Mental note check the shirt for grease stains when you get home.
  50. >For the next hour you explain to her how to diet and what to avoid. This gets a lot of groans out of her. But no one likes rain on their parade.
  51. >Now let’s see if she pulls through
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  53. >A week later you have finished helping her with a workout. She actually seemed like she lost a few pounds.
  54. >You enter your house and get ready for work
  55. >Opening the door to your room. A groan is elicited from you.
  56. >There she sits on your bed holding her large stomach. Sweating all over your bed. Thanking you for helping her exercise.
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  60. >Of course she uses your shower
  61. >For the last half an hour she has been in there soaking up all the hot water
  62. >Sniffing your pits you realize you need one as well.
  63. >[spoiler] See pic[/spoiler] (Mostyn is standing beneath the shower head rubbing shampoo into her mane, soaking in all your hot water. You yell out to her about taking as long as she is)
  64. >Ten minutes later she trots out with one of your towels being used in her wings, drying off her mane.
  65. >You are already shirtless and in your skivvies trudging past her. As you close the door behind you, you swear you saw her sniffing your shorts. Nah must have been your imagination
  66. >One shower later you are in your kitchen getting some midnight chow before you go to work. [spoiler] This town runs at night, a guy has to work to eat[/spoiler]
  67. >Mostyn must have left after taking up all the hot water. That Bat is going to get what’s coming to her.
  68. >Where do you work? At an orchard on the outskirts of town. Run by the peach clan. Think they are Earth Ponies? Why no they are bat ponies. And they have been growing peaches out here for generations. Why according to the old bat herself, Golden Monarch, they were growing peaches just outside of caves for over 900 years. You never asked why they were doing that but dang are these peaches good.
  69. >Since its early fall you are in the process of removing the last late blooming type of peaches from the trees. You worked alongside her grand daughters Glo Haven, Beau Mont, and Crest Haven. They were all young adult ponies but have all been pre-arraigned to be wed many years ago. Something about to keep the orchard in peach clan hooves for many more generations.
  70. >The pay isn’t the greatest but you proved your loyalty by never stealing from them and from not putting your seed in the bellies of those daughters. So they keep you around to pick peaches and sometimes to be a neutral arbitrator on new peach recipes.
  71. >Its close to quitting time as the sun’s rays start to rise over the mountains. Once you stop working the chill in the air starts to permeate into your bones. You clock out at their barn house collecting up your generous salary for the morning. 20 bits every night of good work.
  72. >On your way back home shaking a little thinking that a coat is definitely something you need to buy, a familiar bat comes into view.
  73. >Why its your best pal Mostyn looking happy as a clam…correct that she looks a little surly looking up at the upper level of a house
  74. > a saddlebag is tossed out of a second story window landing on the ground, followed by another
  75. >??? “You can take your things and leave all ready. I didn’t raise no daughter to go against her family like this”
  76. >From out of the window appears a very portly bat stallion. You are surprised the balcony is supporting his weight. As he yells at Mostyn you can see his many chins vibrate. Pieces of undigested food flies with every word he spits out.
  77. >??? “Just go join the guard now, just like your mother did. She never came back and the same will happen to you”
  78. >Battus Fattus Maximus turns around and goes back inside. If you had a glass of water, both of them would be vibrating right now.
  79. >Mostyn looks at her bags and goes to pick them up. She puts both of the stuffed bags on her back and slowly walks off.
  80. >Where is she even going?
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  85. >You give her a few minutes and then try to catch up to her. You give some waves to ponies on your way through Hollow Shades looking for the bat that was once really fat.
  86. >She wasn’t in the market, was not at the park, not even at the food joints. Where is she?
  87. >You are lost in thoughts on where she could be as you power walk by the cemetery. A blue and white tail connected to a plump behind grabs your attention. There she sits by a tombstone looking as if she is talking to something there. You should give her some time.
  88. >Maybe it’s a half an hour later and boy are you bored. You yawn out and stretch out your arms. Your arm brushes by something warm. You pull back and look as Mostyn is beside you giving you a curious stare.
  89. >”Why are you out here Anon? Were you waiting for me?”
  90. >Oh no you did that thing that you said you should stop doing. You didn’t plan ahead if she asked you what you were doing. Well better be honest then.
  91. “Well you see after work I saw you walking away from a house with your bags and thought you might need someone to talk to.”
  92. >Mostyn looks away from you towards town.
  93. “Then you must have seen that spat between my Dad and I. He’s taken it really hard since my Mom died during the Zebrican riots. I have too. He just beat me to the punch and threw me out before I walked out on my own.”
  94. >Mostyn shakes her head and looks back up at you.
  95. >”I don’t have anywhere to go and now Im not sure if I even want to join the guard” She sighs “Im sorry to put all these problems on you Anon”.
  96. >She turns away and starts walking.
  97. >Her tail strikes you in the face on her way out.
  98. “Hey w-
  99. >You grab her tail and give her a good yank back. Mostyn places her front hooves into the soil with her head down shooting her large back end up. Her breath catches and she looks back at you. There is something in those eyes burning right now.
  100. “Mosty stop, look I might not be the best listener or person, but I’m not about to let you sleep on the streets like I had to. I know I’m going to regret this but ….you can stay with me “
  101. >She stays in that position breathing and exhaling deeply. Her tail is still in your hand, realizing this you drop it. Her eyes close and reopen. She runs a wing over her mane and then fully turns around.
  102. >She gives you the look [spoiler] see pic[/spoiler] (She raises an eyebrow, eyes half lidded, while biting down on her tongue, wings partially open)
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  104. >Later at Anon’s headquarters
  105. >Her bags are parked next to the couch
  106. >Mostyn “Thanks for letting me stay here so……where exactly am I sleeping?”
  107. >She looks up at you with the same weird look she gave you outside the graveyard
  108. “Well I didn’t think that far ahead.”
  109. >Think genius. Lets see you have the front room, the kitchen, the bathroom, and your bedroom. That couch looks semi-comfy and she weighs less than she did a month ago so you suppose she won’t deform it.
  110. “Say how would you like the couch?”
  111. >She bats her eyelashes at you
  112. >”Isn’t there someplace else you would like me to sleep?”
  113. >Mostyn leans forward continuing to flash those eyelashes
  114. >Hmm is there? I don’t have a spare bedroom, and there is no shed out back. Where is she talking about?
  115. >As you are pondering this mystery she has taken upon herself to start walking deeper into the house and disappears behind a door.
  116. >You hear her call from the back of the house
  117. >”Wow this bed is really comfy what about here Anon?”
  118. >You focus changes from the dilemma back to your bedroom.
  119. >What is going on back there? You head in that direction
  120. >She is laying on her stomach with her legs stretched out. Her tail draped behind her on the bed. She lets out a large yawn displaying her bright white fangs, wings flared out, making eye contact with you as you walk inside.
  121. >She must think this is her’s now.
  122. “Your my guest not my bed warmer, now get off the bed before your brake it fatty”
  123. >She laughs
  124. >”I won’t be fat for long with your help Anon, maybe your mind will change then”
  125. >[spoiler]see pic related[/spoiler]
  126. >She gives you a flirty wink
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  129. >The next evening
  130. >You awake shivering in your bed. This house isn’t insulated that well and you need to get some covers for your bed so you can make it through winter.
  131. >Getting up you yawn and stretch then head out into the front room.
  132. >You see Mostyn sleeping soundly on the couch. When her mouth isn’t moving she is kinda cute for being a fatty. You wonder what she will look like about 12 pounds lighter.
  133. >Her ear twitches as you walk out towards the bathroom
  134. >A few minutes later you walk out and she is up in the kitchen drinking some water from the tap [spoiler] like an animal [/spoiler].
  135. “Are you going to be ready in a few minutes, we should go the gym tonight”
  136. >She moves her head off the faucet licking the water of her lips, using a wing to turn the water off.
  137. >”Im ready now if you are. It will be great to burn more of this fat off and get back to be the bountiful bat I was.”
  138. >She shakes her hips to reinforce that point. There is still some jiggling on her backside and that stomach, while smaller, is still there.
  139. “Yeah sounds good lets go”
  140. >You and Mostyn head out the door and make it to the gym in a few minutes.
  141. >The receptionist DoItipHer Scales welcomes you both back and you both giver here a greeting.
  142. >Today is a leg day. You do some sets of squats and deadlifts. Mostyn does something similar to squats with the pony equivalent of a squatting bar set on her back. To her credit she has a full plate on both sides. After you both finish up with the weights you head over to the pull up bar and knock out some pull ups and chin-ups. She only does pull ups [spoiler] pony biology bruh[/spoiler]. With her shrinking stomach you swear you see two other fat deposits that were fully concealed and are now lightly visible. You hope its not cancer.
  143. >After that you finish up with about 10 minutes of calisthenics and call it a night.
  144. >To your continual surprise Mostyn is following through with her dedication to get in shape, she didn’t even bitch at you today during her pullups. And it should be easier to monitor what she is eating since you are living together now.

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