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Just One More
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Part I:
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"HUFF! HRRK!"
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>The pain surging through your wings is almost unbearable.
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>"Just one more!"
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>Fluttershy continues to cheer you on while nestled on your back.
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"F-Fluttershy!" You gasp. "It's *WHEEZE* just too much!"
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>Your wings are trembling to support the weight of two ponies.
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>"You can do it, Anon!"
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>'doitforherdoitforherdoitforherdoitforherdoitforherdoitforher' you frantically think to yourself.
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>This mare believes in you, so you should too!
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>You take a deep breath and try to lift yourself once more.
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>The tall training platform beneath you shudders as though it's going to collapse, but you can't stop now.
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>This is it. All of your hard work comes down to this one last pushup.
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>Suddenly your front legs slip over the edge of the platform.
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"NOOOOOOO!"
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>*THUMP*
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>You fall from the platform and crash to the floor, sending the petite yellow pegasus flying across the training room.
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>"Oof?!" Fluttershy cries out in pain as she violently collides with a large training weight.
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"Fluttershy!" You stumble over and try to help the pegasus to her hooves. "Are you okay?!"
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>The frazzled mare looks into your eyes tries to nod, but is quickly cut off by a sharp groan of pain.
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>Her left wing hangs limp against the ground, and after a close inspection, you understand why.
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>It's broken.
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>Tears begin to flow while you embrace the trembling mare.
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>This wasn't supposed to happen.
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>THIS.
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>WASN'T.
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>SUPPOSED.
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>TO.
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>HAPPEN.
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>You look up to see your fellow cadets gathering around and murmuring amongst themselves.
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>"Poor Coach Fluttershy!" A blue pegasus stallion exclaims.
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>"I always knew Anon was a klutz." A pink pegasus mare snidely remarks.
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>"Who invited this clown to Wonderbolt Camp again?" Another cadet chimes in.
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Part II:
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>*FWEEEEEEEEEEE*
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>The sound of a whistle shatters the tension, taking the angry cadets' attention off of you.
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>"What the hay is going on over here?!"
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>Your ears perk up to the sound of a familar voice.
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>"Cadet Anon!" Rainbow Dash lands next to you and angrily stomps her hoof.
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>"Are you slacking off again?! Don't make me bring out the wing weights!"
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>Her sour demeanor quickly dissipates after seeing Fluttershy's crippled wing.
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"Coach Dash, I..."
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>She puts a hoof to your mouth and shakes her head.
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>"You'll have plenty of time to explain yourself later, but right now we need to get Fluttershy to the hospital."
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>You silently nod in agreement and grab a stretcher from the supply closet.
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>"Alright, listen up everypony!" She turns to address the crowd of concerned cadets. "Wonderbolt training is hereby postponed until further notice!"
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>The group of pegasi are understandably upset, but pony health and safety always comes first.
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>It's Rule #1 at this training academy, and everypony knows it.
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>In what feels like the blink of an eye, Coach Rainbow Dash flies outside and returns with two pegasus paramedics.
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>They gently place Fluttershy onto a stretcher and fly off to the Couldsdale Hospital.
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>"Way yo go, Buckhead." A red stallion slaps you upside your head and angrily flies home.
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>The rest of your fellow cadets stare you down while making their exit from the academy.
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>Now it's just you and Coach Rainbow Dash.
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>"My office. NOW."
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>You gulp nervously and follow the rainbow pegasus into her office.
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>"Alright Cadet, it's time to spill the beans."
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>She angrily slams the door and seats herself at the nearby desk.
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>"WHAT IN CELESTIA'S NAME HAPPENED TO FLUTTERSHY?!"
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>You fight back tears and turn to stare at the wall, the trash can, the office window, ANYTHING dodge Coach Rainbow Dash's angry eyes.
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>"WELL?!" She slams a forehoof on the desk.
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>There's no running from the truth, not this time.
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>You take a deep breath and try to compose yourself.
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>The last thing you want it to break down crying in front of the Coach.
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Part III:
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"You see, Coach Fluttershy was helping me with some w-wing pushups..."
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>"And?" Rainbow Dash raises an eyebrow.
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"W-Well, my hooves slipped and we both fell off of the t-training platform!" You sniffle and look down at the floor.
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>"That explains the loud crash, but it doesn't explain why Coach Fluttershy got hurt and YOU didn't"!
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>She accusingly points a hoof at you.
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"Coach Fluttershy was sitting on my back to act as a counterweight."
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>Rainbow Dash's eyes widen.
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>"What?!" She jumps out of her chair and hovers right in front of your face. "WHY IN EQUESTRIA WOULD YOU FORCE HER TO DO THAT?!"
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"I didn't force-"
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>"You KNOW better than to put your fellow ponies at risk with such dangerous stunts!"
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>You raise a hoof to interject but she's in full lecture mode now.
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>"What were you trying to accomplish with such a boneheaded move?"
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"I was trying to break the academy wing pushup record, Coach."
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>The multicolor mare freezes in shock.
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"I'm sorry Coach, it was a stupid idea. I see that now." You wipe tears from your eyes.
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>Rainbow Dash gradually calms down and returns to her desk.
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>"It's not ME you should be apologizing to, Cadet."
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>Damnit, she's right. What were you thinking, hurting such a sweet and innocent pony like Fluttershy?!
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>"Look Anon, I'll be frank with you." Rainbow Dash pulls a paper from her drawer and begins writing something.
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>"You have potential as a Wonderbolt, even if you are too reckless, too impulsive, and too dependent on others to succeed!"
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>She slides the paper across the desk.
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>"It's for your own sake that I've put up with your nonsense all these moons."
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>You look down at the document and quickly skim it.
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>"But putting a pony in the ER is the last bucking straw, Anon."
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>Your ears droop.
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>"As the Head Coach of the Wonderbolt Training Academy, I hereby discharge you from the Wonderbolts."
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>Your hooves shake.
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>"Effective RIGHT NOW!"
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>Your heart sinks.
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>"Now go clean out your locker."
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>Your vision is quickly overtaken by saltwater as you fly out of Coach Rainbow Dash's office.
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>This is it. Your life is officially OVER.
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Part IV:
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>You begin the agonizing flight home with duffel bag in tow.
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>Today is the worst day of your miserable existence, and it's ALL. YOUR. FAULT.
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>Joining the Wonderbolts was your lifelong dream.
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>You remember your foalhood, often begging your parents to attend every single Wonderbolt show they organized.
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>Who knew that years later the legendary RAINBOW DASH of all ponies would see you practicing one afternoon and recommend you join the training academy!
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>It's how you learned to believe in yourself and work hard.
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>How you met Fluttershy.
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>How you found the inner courage to ask her out on a date.
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>All of that means nothing now.
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>You practically divebomb the front door to your house and quickly fly to bed.
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>Fluttershy's friends are going to hate you forever once they find out YOU put her in the hospital.
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>You didn't even mean for all of this to happen, but would they really see it that way?
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>For all you know, Rainbow Dash could twist the story to make it sound like you WANTED to hurt the sweet yellow pegasus.
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>You shouldn't have talked Fluttershy into being your coach.
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>You shouldn't have tried to break the wing pushup academy record.
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>You shouldn't have signed up for Wonderbolt training at all.
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>All you can think about now is Fluttershy, and how badly you hurt her.
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>One thing's for sure: whatever kind of relationship you may have had with her is dead and buried now.
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>Nevertheless, you can't help but feel the need to visit her at the hospital, just to make sure she's okay.
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>After all, (You)'re the reason she ended up in there in the first place.
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>The sun slowly sets on the horizon, casting a shadow of darkness over your room.
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>The many Wonderbolt posters adorning your walls disappear into the darkness, no doubt a metaphor mocking your dishonorable discharge.
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>'Please dear Celestia,' You silently pray. 'Please let this all be a bad dream!"
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>With eyelids grow heavier, you soon drift off to sleep.
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Part V:
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>*BANG* BANG* *BANG*
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>Your eyes shoot open at the sound of somepony, or someTHING, trying to beak your front door down.
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>With a grunt of effort, you roll out of bed and head downstairs.
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>It's probably a mob of Fluttershy's friends ready to tear you limb from limb.
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>You open the door to find...Rainbow Dash?
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>"Hey Anon."
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>You raise an eyebrow.
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>"Look, I know we aren't exactly on the best terms right now, but the truth is-" She pauses as her confidence suddenly falters.
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>The flustered mare stares at the ground and takes a deep breath.
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"The truth is what, Rainbow Dash?" Anger begins bubbling up within you. "That you're GLAD I'm out of the Wonderbolts?!"
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>"T-that's not what I-"
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"That I'm the laughing stock of Cloudsdale?!"
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>"Anon, wait-"
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>She raises a hoof interject but you're not having it.
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"That Fluttershy will never want to speak to me again?!"
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>"SHUT THE BUCK UP AND I'LL TELL YOU!" She screams loud enough to wake up the entire neighborhood!
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>You end your rant for the time being, but continue to glare at the rainbow horse with eyes full of rage.
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>"Ahem, as I was saying..." She straightens up and looks you right in the eye. "The truth is, you need to come with me."
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>She motions for you to follow her, but you stand firmly in your doorway.
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"Why on earth would I follow you?" You reply bitterly. "There's nothing left that you can take away from me."
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>Rainbow Dash growls with annoyance and facehoofs.
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>"That's not what I meant you dweeb." Rainbow Dash's face is turning beet red.
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>"The truth is, Fluttershy wants to see you down at the hospital."
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>Your mouth hangs open. Your wings stretch out. Your eyes widen.
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"W-What?"
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>You can barely form a response. Is she being serious?!
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>Why would Fluttershy want to see you, especially after you...HURT HER?!
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>"I'm serious, Anon! She said she wants to see you."
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>She looks just as puzzled as you are.
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>"WHY she wants to see you is anypony's guess..." She mutters under her breath.
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Part VI:
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>You're ready to kick this bitch over the rainbow, no pun intended.
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>Then again, Fluttershy wouldn't like you hurting her friends, even if it might actually be justified.
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>Rainbow Dash has a big mouth, and one day it'll get her into big trouble.
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>But enough about this whorse. It's time to start thinking about Fluttershy.
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"Alright, let's go." You sigh and lock the front door.
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>"Ugh, FINALLY!" She rolls her eyes and takes off into the sky, leaving you standing on your porch like a dimwit.
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"I don't know why, but I'm starting to hate that mare." You grumble to yourself.
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>With one strong wing flap you're soaring through the air, eager to catch up with Rainbow Dash.
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>"C'mon slowpoke!" She teases you while doing a double twist flip. "Don't tell me you've lost your competitive edge already~!"
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>Rgh, this annoying mare really knows how to push your buttons.
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>Your wing flaps become stronger with every passing second, and soon you're neck and neck with Rainbow Dash.
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>Fluttershy consumes your thoughts as you absentmindedly soar through the clouds.
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>Why could she possibly want to see you?
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>M-Maybe she wants to break up face to face? Perhaps it's a trap so her friends can all chew you out at once?
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>You wipe a tear from your eye and try to focus on the sky, but fear continues to cloud your heart and mind.
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>What you said before was wrong, so VERY wrong. There IS still something left to lose...
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>The hospital quickly comes into view on the horizon.
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>You gulp nervously and begin to descend, much to Rainbow Dash's annoyance.
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>"Giving up already?" She sneered as she lands next to you. "You're no fun."
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>You ignore her and enter the administration wing. Thankfully it's not overly crowded.
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>The kind receptionist directs you to room 222 on the second floor.
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>You don't hesitate to leave Rainbow Bitch in the dust and frantically gallop towards Fluttershy's room.
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>Wow, it feels like you made it in 10 seconds flat.
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>You raise a hoof to knock, but stop short when you hear multiple voices conversing inside.
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>This can't be good.
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Part VII:
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>*KNOCK* *KNOCK*
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>There's no turning back now.
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>Either you make up with Fluttershy, or hang yourself at home.
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>The door bolts open, revealing a bedridden Fluttershy surrounded by her friends.
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>You nervously trot into the room but stop short after realizing everypony (except Fluttershy) is glaring at you.
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>"So, y'all must be that A-N-O-N feller Fluttershy told us about." An orange earth pony mare breaks the silence. "Ya roughed her up real good Anon, ya dang bonehead!"
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>"What? THIS scruffy-looking scoundrel is Fluttershy's stallion in shining armor?" A white unicorn mare asks condescendingly.
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>"So YOU'RE the sour snickerdoodle who served up some hot-baked pain on poor little Fluttershy!"
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>A pink earth pony mare pops up in front of you from nowhere, ready to blast you with some kind of...cannon?
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>"Girls please!" A purple alicorn mare tries to defuse the room of rabble-rousers. "At least let Anon explain himself!"
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>Suddenly you fly forward and land on top of the pink pony.
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>"Thanks for leaving me behind, bonehead." A raspy voice calls out from behind.
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>It's about time Rainbow Dash got here. What was she doing, playing 'hippity hop at the barber shop'?!
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>"Uh Nonny, I like your eagerness and all, but I'm not THAT kind of mare!" The pink pony cries out from underneath you.
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>You blush and quickly flutter to the side.
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>Admittedly, Pinkie is cute in her own way but she's far too energetic for your tastes.
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>You prefer the more soft-spoken, gentle type of mare...
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>"Anon! I'm so glad you came!"
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>A soft voice beckons to you from the other side of the room.
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>Your ears perk up.
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>Your heart races.
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>Your breathing intensifies.
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>With a nervous gulp, you trot towards the hospital bed.
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>A familiar face emerges from the covers and smiles warmly at you.
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"Oh hey, Flutters. You're a sight for sore eyes!"
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>That cheesy quip has you smiling like a complete dork-a-doofus, earning a chuckle from the pretty pegasus.
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>Her friends were less enthusiastic with a series of groans and eye rolling.
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>"Enough horsing around!" Twilight interjects.
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>Fluttershy's friends quickly surround you and glare angrily.
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>"It's time to come clean Anon." The purple alicorn narrows her eyes. "Why-"
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>"Why did you hurt Fluttershy?! Huh? HUH?"
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>Rainbow Dash cuts her off and hovers right in front of your face.
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>"What did she ever do to you?!"
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>The rainbow bitch is snorting angrily mere inches away from your face.
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Part VIII:
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"Listen here feathers-for-brains!" You angrily reply. "I already told YOU it was an accident!"
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>You're ready to knock this whorse's block off when a fourth voice enters the fray.
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>"A-Anon?! Why are you being so rude to the head coach?!" She whimpers.
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>You remove yourself from the multi-mare argument and fly towards Fluttershy, landing next to her bed with a soft *POMF*.
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"She's not my coach anymore, Flutters." You sniffle. "And neither are you."
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>"Huh?!" Her eyes widen in a mix of shock and confusion. "W-What do you mean Anon?!"
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>You turn towards Rainbow Dash.
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"Do you want to tell her or should I?"
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>Your cold tone sends the Rainbow rabble-rouser scrambling towards Fluttershy.
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>"W-Well you see, I uh...."
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>She scratches the back of her head and tries to avoid eye contact with Fluttershy.
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>"I kinda went ahead and discharged Anon from the Wonderbotls." She tries to save face with an awkward smile.
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>The entire room gasps in disbelief.
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>Welp, the cat's out of the bag now.
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>"Rainbow Dash, why would you do such a thing?" Fluttershy begins tearing up.
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>"Woah woah WOAH, hold your horses Fluttershy!" The multi-colored mare frantically flails her hooves. "It wasn't personal or anything!"
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>She looks around at her friends and tries to clear her throat. "I did it to protect Fluttershy-"
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>"And...?" Twilight raises an eyebrow.
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>"A-And the cadets of course!" RBD quickly adds. "We can't have reckless showhorses like Anon endangering the Wonderbolt trainees and faculty!"
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>"I can't believe I'm saying this, but Rainbow Dash is right!" Rarity chimes in.
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>The elegant white unicorn steps forward and points a hoof at Fluttershy's crippled wing.
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>"That ruffian's actions, intentional or not, led to one of our closest friends being injured severely enough to land in the hospital!"
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>You hear small murmurs of agreement among the rest of the mares, much to your dismay.
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"Ladies please!" You try to assuage their concerns. "It was an accident!"
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"I would never hurt you Fluttershy." You gently nuzzle her without even realizing it.
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>"Awwww!" Pinkie Pie squees.
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>"Ahem!" Rainbow Dash glares at the cooing pink pony.
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>Pinkie quickly apologizes and reverts to angrily glaring at you like the rest of her friends.
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Part IX:
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>You ignore the peanut gallery and focus on Fluttershy.
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>Well, she isn't punching you in the face after that nuzzle...
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>"Anon, I-" She takes a deep breath before continuing.
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>"Never want to see you again?" Twilight quickly jumps in and grabs you with her magic. "Sure thing Fluttershy! Haha! What are friends for?!"
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>The unhinged mare carries you to the door and prepares to toss you out like a sack of garbage.
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>Twilight's eye begins twitching as a deranged grin forms across her lips.
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>It's strange, Twilight is usually the voice of reason in delicate matters such as this.
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>You seem to have grossly underestimated the gravity of this situation.
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>Fluttershy isn't just an average ordinary mare.
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>She's one of the MANE FREAKIN' SIX, not to mention she's helped save Ponyvil- neigh, ALL OF EQUESTRIA on a regular basis!
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>The true weight of your fuckup begins to dawn on you.
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>Maybe you really ARE too reckless. Maybe you really ARE too dependent on others.
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>There will be time to dwell on this self-defeating attitude later.
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>Alicorn magic is far more powerful than that of a regular unicorn's, so struggling your way out isn't an option.
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>Nothing to do now except close your eyes and prepare for a turbulent landing.
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>"Wait! Please don't throw him out, Twilight!"
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>Fluttershy reaches out a hoof in protest to your rude removal.
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>Her friends stare at her in awkward silence, unsure of how to respond to their friend's outburst.
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>"What's going on Fluttershy?" Twilight speaks up. "Why on earth do you want this stallion here after what he did to you?!"
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>Fluttershy frowns and sits up in her bed. "Because he's not the one causing trouble!"
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>The mood of the entire room suddenly shifts from pure tension to an awkward silence.
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>Her friends stand there awkwardly and shuffle their hooves on the ground.
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>"Poor Anon here has been trying to talk to me about the accident but all of you keep picking on him!"
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>The 5 mares exchange glances and then lock eyes on you.
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>"I'm sorry everypony, but if you insist on being such silly fillies then I'm afraid I'll have to ask you to leave!"
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>She pouts in the cutest way imaginable and points towards the door.
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Part X:
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>Nopony dares to speak in the moment.
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>Wow, this is the most assertive Fluttershy you've ever seen! Note to self, never piss her off...
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>"You're right Fluttershy, we've been acting like a mob this entire time." Twilight sighs and releases you from her magic. "I'm sorry."
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>"Well shucks, when ya put it that way Ah guess we were gangin' up on poor Anon." Applejack confesses. "A'hm sorry too."
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>"Oooo! Is this the part where we become sad now?" Pinkie Pie exclaims while putting on her best sad face.
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>"I suppose I did lose control in the heat of the moment." Rarity admits. "I'm sorry as well, Fluttershy."
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>Rainbow Dash grits her teeth and tries to ignore her friends' sentimental apologies.
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>"Rainbow Dash?" Fluttershy crosses her hooves and frowns.
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>She sighs in defeat. "I-I'm...s...o...r...r...y too Fluttershy."
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>"Thank you." The yellow mare smiles with approval.
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>Rainbow Dash makes a "I'm watching you" gesture with her hoof before closing the door behind her.
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>It's just you and Fluttershy now, but tension still lingers in the air.
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>You approach the suffering mare and place your hooves on the bed's guardrail.
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"Fluttershy I-"
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>You take one look into those beautiful cyan eyes of hers and choke up immediately.
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>Confound these frazzled nerves!
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>Fluttershy places a hoof over yours and smiles.
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>"Yes, Anon?"
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>Oh Celestia give you strength.
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"I..."
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>Come on you stupid foal. USE. YOUR. WORDS.
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>"Mmhmm?"
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>Her smile ignites your heart with the grace of pouring gasoline on a dumpster fire.
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>You quickly slap yourself with your free hoof.
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"I'M SORRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYY!"
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>Your shouting forces the startled mare to recoil in surprise.
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"I NEVER MEANT TO HURT YOU FLUTTERS! I THOUGHT THAT BREAKING A WONDERBOLT RECORD WOULD...*sniff*...w-would..."
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>Tears stream down your cheeks as you wrap your hooves around Fluttershy and hold her tight.
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"I thought it would impress you..." You nuzzle into her soft mane and sob like a foal.
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Part XI:
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"Rainbow Dash was right." You sniffle. "I'm too reckless and stupid for my own good."
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>Suddenly Fluttershy pushes you away and frowns with the force of a thousand Nightmare Moons.
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>"Anon!"
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>She tries to slap a hoof across your face, but it ends up feeling like a soft tap instead.
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>Nevertheless, you're in shock that Fluttershy would attempt to do such a thing.
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>"Please don't say such terrible things about yourself!"
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>She cups your face with her hooves and leans in.
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"Flutter-MMPH?!"
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>*SMOOOOCH*
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>Your wings stretch and stiffen as her delicate lips caress your own.
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>Is this really happening?! Oh Celestia she tastes so delicious!
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>*THUMP*
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>Looks like your wings aren't the only thing stiffening. Hopefully Fluttershy doesn't notice.
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>Her lips soon part from your own, leaving you almost entirely speechless.
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>You swear there's a small stream of smoke emanating from your mouth.
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"H-Holy bits."
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>The mare giggles and places a hoof on your bewildered face.
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>"Feeling better now, Anon?" She asks in a silky voice.
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>You frantically nod your head.
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>"I'm glad to hear that." She sighs with content and nuzzles into you. "I'm also glad you came to see me."
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>Your face must be as red as a tomato at this point.
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>The gentle mare's affections have awoken something inside of you.
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>A primal desire to love and protect this pegasus at all costs.
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>"I love you Anon." She coos.
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>You nuzzle her in return and sigh happily.
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"I love you too, Flutters..."
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Part XII:
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>"You don't have to break a silly record to impress me."
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>Would've been nice to know a couple days ago.
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>"Just be yourself!"
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>You look right into her big beautiful eyes and smile.
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>"Daaaaaawwwwwwwwww! They're so adorbs together!"
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>Your eyes shoot open as you turn towards the door, which is now ajar with 5 pony heads peeking out from it.
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>Pinkie Pie is making one of those "that's so cute" kind of faces, which is a sharp contrast to the scowls of disapproval from the rest of her friends.
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>"Pinkie!" Her friends shout in unison.
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>"What?" The pink mare crosses her forelegs and pouts. "They ARE adorbs!"
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>Fluttershy gasps and withdraws from your tender embrace.
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>"G-Girls?!" She squeaks as she buries her head under the blanket. "You were supposed to wait outside!"
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>"Well we did..." Twilight poofs into the room and trots towards you and Fluttershy. "Until we heard some strange noises."
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>Rainbow Dash immediately kicks the door open and lands next to Twilight. "Would you happen to know anything about that, ANON?"
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>You frown and remain silent in defiance of her implied accusations.
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>What happens between you and Fluttershy in private is none of their business.
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>You look to your newfound lover for support.
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>How the buck do you explain this...this...THING you have with Fluttershy?
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>"Anon is my c-coltfriend now." The gentle mare blurts out beneath the blanket.
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>The room falls silent.
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>Even Pinkie Pie, who seemingly approved of your lovely-dovey shenanigans, stares in shock with her jaw firmly planted on the floor.
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>On the one hoof, you were hoping to announce this budding romance in a more subtle manner.
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>On the other hoof, it's very rare for shy mares to get straight to the point like that.
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>Are Fluttershy's feelings for you somehow changing her?
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>Only time will tell.
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Part XIII:
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>The girls try to speak, but only silence emanates from their group.
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>You can only imagine the thoughts running through their minds right now.
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>"ARE YOU KIDDING ME, FLUTTERSHY?!"
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>Of course Rainbow Whorse is the first to break the silence with more of her bull-headed ranting.
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>"THIS GUY IS A TOTAL CLOWN!"
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>She pulls the blanket away and angrily points a hoof in your direction.
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>"Ooooo a clown? I wouldn't mind dating a clown." Pinkie licks her lips and ogles you like a lovestruck schoolfilly. "Especially one as cute as Nonny here..."
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>"P-Pinkie!" Twilight scolds the amorous pink mare. "You're not helping!"
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>Twilight grabs Pinkie and poofs her out of the room.
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>You gulp nervously and quickly turn back to Fluttershy.
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>The LAST thing either of you need is a stupid love triangle ruining this relationship before it even gets off the ground.
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>Wait, was that a pegasus joke you just slid into that thought?
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>"But Darling!" Rarity steps forward to give her unwanted opinion. "Are you sure you want such a reckless brute as your special somepony?!"
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>Rarity trots over and begins tugging at your messy mane. "Especially one with such a scruffy sense of style?"
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>"Mmhmm..." Fluttershy sits up in her bed and quickly nods. "Anon is a wonderful stallion once you get to know him!"
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"H-Hey! Easy on the mane Rarity!" You smack her hoof away and blush. "I didn't exactly have time to clean up this morning."
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>"Hmph!" Rarity turns her nose up with disgust and saunters over to Twilight's side of the room.
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>That just leaves Twilight and Applejack.
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>Oh horsefeathers. What toxic ingredients will THEY add to this awkward sundae?
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>Rainbow Dash continues to glare at you in silence while her country bumpkin friend steps forward.
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>"Anon, Ah'm gonna be honest with ya." She tilts her hat back. "We were mighty angry with ya after finding out about Fluttershy's broken wing."
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>You prepare to apologize once again, but Applejack silences you with a raised hoof.
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>"Personally, Ah don't think yer some kinda ruffian who goes around hurtin' ponies for the fun of it."
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>You shake your head in agreement.
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>"Fluttershy sees sumthin' in ya that we can't quite figure out." She motions to her angry friends.
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>Rarity and Twilight turn to stare at you with puzzled expressions while Rainbow Dash stares out the window.
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>"We don't like the idea of our friend dating the feller who put her in the hospital ta begin with."
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>Dear Celestia above, will these mares ever stop harping on you for that?!
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>"But this is her decision, and no matter what happens..." Applejack takes off her hat and holds it to her heart. "...we'll respect it."
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Part XIV:
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>"Thank you, Applejack." Fluttershy fidgets with her blankets and smiles.
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>Twilight suddenly snaps out of her stupor performs a silly double-take between you and Fluttershy.
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>"But I-" It seems like she wants to add her two cents to this mess.
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>She shakes her head and sighs in defeat. "No, Applejack's right."
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>You can only imagine what was really on her mind.
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>"Fluttershy is our friend, and we should trust her judgement."
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>"I apologize for giving you such a hard time, Anon." She trots over to you and extends a hoof. "We just want what's best for Fluttershy."
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"So do I."
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>You reluctantly shake her hoof and return to Fluttershy's side.
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>Just a few minutes ago these mares wanted to draw and quarter you.
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>Now they seem more at peace with the idea of you dating Fluttershy.
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>You really should thank Applejack for playing the mediator.
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>Without her, you're sure the rest of her friends would've torn you apart.
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>Quite possibly in the literal sense.
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"Thanks for having my back, Applejack." You smile at her. "You're a true friend."
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>"Now don't get all sappy about it, Anon." She blushes and hides her face behind her hat.
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>"Just take good care of Fluttershy and that'll be thanks enough fer me."
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>Suddenly a clock chimes somewhere outside, sending the 5 mares into a panic.
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>Twilight poofs a small clock out of thin air and gasps at the time. "Oh no! We're going to be late!"
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>Rainbow Dash sighs with relief but makes sure to give you one last 'I'm watching you' gesture before leaving. "Last one to the balloon is a rotten egg!"
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>You'll be sure to "catch up" with Rainbow Dash later. She doesn't get to hide from her feelings THAT easily!
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>"Y'all take care now." Applejack waves to Fluttershy, tilts her cowboy hat and trots after Rainbow Whorse.
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>"Get well soon, darling!" Rarity carefully hugs Fluttershy. "And if Anon gives you any more trouble..."
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>Rarity turns to face you, stands on her hind legs and assumes a...kung fu stance?
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>"I shall correct him!"
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>"T-There's no need for that, Rarity!" Fluttershy squeaks in protest. "Anon won't cause anymore trouble. Right, h-honey?"
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>You quickly nod in agreement, much to her delight.
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>Rarity raises an eyebrow, but knows there's no time to continue harassing you.
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>"Remember Anon, when it comes to relationships, patience is key." Twilight adds while loading up her saddlebag and going over a small checklist.
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>"Taking unecessary risks is a foal's errand!"
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>You salute Twilight and begin trotting back and forth in front of Fluttershy's bed as though you were some kind of guard.
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>Fluttershy can't help but giggle at your tomfoolery.
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>"We'll be just fine Twilight." She reassures Twilight.
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>Twilight smiles and flies out of the room.
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>Rarity grabs the remaining saddlebags from a nearby table hastily departs with Twilight.
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>The door is set ablaze with purple magic and closes behind them.
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