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In Too Deep

By BlueForce
Created: 2026-04-02 01:12:20
Expiry: Never

  1. 1.
    >It's a quiet night
  2. 2.
    >Maybe too quiet
  3. 3.
    >The only sound comes from your van's stereo, playing music with the volume almost all the way down
  4. 4.
    >You are still trying to figure out what happened
  5. 5.
    >You were killing time between classes
  6. 6.
    >You went for a coffee at a nearby coffee shop
  7. 7.
    >You opened the coffee's lid
  8. 8.
    >The contents were hot indeed, no need for a warning on the cup
  9. 9.
    >You pressed play on the van's stereo
  10. 10.
    >You took a few sips, so far so good
  11. 11.
    >Next time you realized you weren't in the city anymore
  12. 12.
    "This can't be true"
  13. 13.
    >The city literally vanished in front of you, replaced by the countryside
  14. 14.
    >You tried to grab the wheel but couldn't
  15. 15.
    >Because your hands were no longer hands, but hooves.
  16. 16.
    "Click"
  17. 17.
    >Your reminiscing was abruptly cut short when the stereo made the mechanical sound it always makes when the tape is reversed
  18. 18.
    >Now you realize you've been listening to the same music for several hours straight and quickly press stop
  19. 19.
    >You don't know where you are but you're hungry
  20. 20.
    >You look around and immediately notice the huge stain on the passenger seat, caused by the spilled coffee
  21. 21.
    >Clearly hooves aren't meant to grab coffee mugs, yet that's the least of your worries
  22. 22.
    >Trying to stop the panic from coming back, you violently hit the glove box with your one of your front hooves and get it to open
  23. 23.
    >You use both front hooves to grab a chocolate bar you had, hoping for it not to have melted
  24. 24.
    >You use your (surprisingly sharp!) teeth to open
  25. 25.
    >Never had a chocolate bar tasted better in your entire life
  26. 26.
    >Music... You canny eat without music
  27. 27.
    >No... Changing the tape would be impossible without actual hands
  28. 28.
    "Sod it"
  29. 29.
    >You press play on the stereo and let the same tape repeat for the umpteen time
  30. 30.
     
  31. 31.
     
  32. 32.
    "Yes, finally!"
  33. 33.
    >You cannot contain your excitement while you make sure you're not missing anything for the trip
  34. 34.
    "Equestria's best weekend is about to start! 48 straight hours of fun in the countryside, because we deserve it!"
  35. 35.
    >Starlight Glimmer comes near you, barely containing the laughter
  36. 36.
    >"Calm down, Trixie! You sound like a radio announcer about to sell a dishwasher"
  37. 37.
    "Sorry, it's just we haven't left the town in quite a while! I still can't believe Sunburst invited us to his 'tâteau'"
  38. 38.
    >"I think it's pronounced 'château'. But yes I'm happy we get to visit him. He told me how lonely he felt over there, as there aren't many neighbours around"
  39. 39.
    >You start pulling your wagon's harness
  40. 40.
    >Thanks to Starlight, the wagon feels light as you left any unnecessary belongings at her house
  41. 41.
    >Sadly, that meant no melon spoons or books about optometry will be at hand during the trip
  42. 42.
    "Okay, you tell me which road to take"
  43. 43.
    >Starlight happily walks next to you, guiding you with a map
  44. 44.
    >Around half an hour later you start seeing less and less crowds and more grass around you
  45. 45.
    >"Want me to carry the wagon for a bit? I don't mind!"
  46. 46.
    >You appreciate how Starlight cares so much but there is no need! You're Equestria's finest pony, scientifically proved!* (*Not really)
  47. 47.
    "No need to worry about Trixie! I'm in a really good mood today! But if you want to do Trixie a favor, take her to the burger place we went last time!"
  48. 48.
    >Starlight cannot help but chuckle
  49. 49.
    >"You can count on that!"
  50. 50.
    >By the time an hour had passed, you start feeling thirsty
  51. 51.
    >You stop moving the wagon to catch a break
  52. 52.
    >Starlight immediately notices you're tired and offers you a drink
  53. 53.
    "Not going to lie, Trixie would love it if you could find the water battle for her!"
  54. 54.
    >"Not a problem!"
  55. 55.
    >You sit on the ground to catch a break while Starlight looks for the water inside your wagon
  56. 56.
    >However, something catches your attention
  57. 57.
    >A wagon, bigger than yours, parked a few meters from you, right next to a tree
  58. 58.
    "Starlight?"
  59. 59.
    >"Yes?", you can hear your friend answering from inside the wagon
  60. 60.
    "Is there anything in-between a wagon and a garbage truck?"
  61. 61.
    >"It really doesn't look that bad, Trixie! It just needs a paint job!"
  62. 62.
    "I'm not talking about my wagon, I'm talking about that wagon!"
  63. 63.
    >Starlight comes out with the water bottle, looking intrigued
  64. 64.
    >"What are you talking about?"
  65. 65.
    "Well, look over there"
  66. 66.
    >Your friend takes a look at it
  67. 67.
    >It's some kind of transportation, looking clearly more modern than garbage truck
  68. 68.
    >Both of you are intrigued, as you don't seem to remember seeing one of those lately
  69. 69.
    >Maybe a fellow magician travelling from town to town?
  70. 70.
    >A fellow magician with deeper pockets than you, clearly
  71. 71.
    >Without saying anything, Starlight takes the initiative
  72. 72.
    >She starts approaching that odd white wagon while you take a sip of water
  73. 73.
    >You don't give it much importance at first, until you see Starlight's face expression changing
  74. 74.
    >You quickly leave the bottle aside and call up her attention
  75. 75.
    "Is everything alright?"
  76. 76.
    >Uh... Well, could you come here for a second, Trixie?"
  77. 77.
    >You cannot help but wonder what's happening. You start walking towards her but before even getting close to the wagon you start listening to something... Odd
  78. 78.
    >Music
  79. 79.
    >A song you don't remember having heard before, coming from inside the mysterious piece of transport
  80. 80.
    "What is that... music?"
  81. 81.
    >You asked quietly, not that you are scared! It's just you don't want to scare any animals that might be around
  82. 82.
    >"I have no idea"
  83. 83.
    >You try to pay attention and recognize any lyrics
  84. 84.
     
  85. 85.
    And we're all to blame,
  86. 86.
    We've gone to far, from pride to shame,
  87. 87.
    We're trying so hard,
  88. 88.
    We're dying in vain
  89. 89.
     
  90. 90.
    "Oh, I get it"
  91. 91.
    >You don't get it
  92. 92.
    >Starlight eventually approaches the wagon's window
  93. 93.
    >She didn't say anything, she just kept looking
  94. 94.
    >You come closer, not before talking a peek at your own wagon
  95. 95.
    >What did she try to imply with "it only needs a paint job"?
  96. 96.
    >"Oh, they moved!"
  97. 97.
    "What? Who moved?"
  98. 98.
    >"The pony who is sleeping inside that thing... And frankly my sixth sense tell me they aren't feeling well"
  99. 99.
    >As soon as you approached the window, you understood why Starlight said that
  100. 100.
    >You saw a green pony, with their eyes clothes but shaking their head, as if they were having a nightmare
  101. 101.
    >They were surrounded by assorted garbage like disposable cups and candy wraps
  102. 102.
    >"I'd normally not wake up somepony having a nap...", started to say Starlight before you interrupted them
  103. 103.
    "Leave it to Trixie! I'm excellent at interrupting!”
  104. 104.
     
  105. 105.
    >The image repeats itself again and again
  106. 106.
    >You taking a sip of coffee, and then the city vanishing
  107. 107.
    >Your hands are no longer there
  108. 108.
    >You feet are no longer there
  109. 109.
    >Not even your clothes are there
  110. 110.
    >And suddenly you want to scream but you can't
  111. 111.
    >Instead, the images repeat all over again
  112. 112.
    >You try to understand what is happening but you can't, you simply can't
  113. 113.
    >And then a sudden burst of panic erupts
  114. 114.
    >You violently wake up from your nightmare, grasping for air
  115. 115.
    >And then you saw it
  116. 116.
    >Someone knocking at your window
  117. 117.
    >Well, not someone. but... "somehorse"?
  118. 118.
    >"Hello? Is everything okay?", you hear saying
  119. 119.
    >And now you are indeed able to scream, and don't hold it
  120. 120.
    >The blue horse at the other side of your window gets scared and starts running away
  121. 121.
    >But it won't compare to you, as you manage to open the door and start running away in panic
  122. 122.
     
  123. 123.
    "Oh, my!"
  124. 124.
    >Someday you will have to start speaking up everytime Trixie tries to do something without thinking
  125. 125.
    >All of the sudden, your weekend has turned into a two different races
  126. 126.
    >Trixie is screaming and running towards a tree by your left, while the green-colored pony that was inside the wagon runs to the north, also screaming like crazy
  127. 127.
    >You need to act fast
  128. 128.
    >That poor pony looked heavily distressed and could be a danger to himself
  129. 129.
    >You need to think fast
  130. 130.
    >Come on, Starlight, you can do this
  131. 131.
    >You take a quick look at your surroundings
  132. 132.
    >You think for a moment about teleporting Trixie and using it as a speed bump to stop the green pony
  133. 133.
    >"No, Starlight, surely you can do better than that"
  134. 134.
     
  135. 135.
    >Grass won't help
  136. 136.
    >Tiny branches won't help
  137. 137.
    >No rocks around
  138. 138.
    "Welp"
  139. 139.
    >You lock your sight on your friend, who is looking for refuge behind a tree
  140. 140.
    "Sorry, Trixie
  141. 141.
    >You use a teleport spell and suddenly, she's no longer approaching the tree, but serving as a speed bump for the green horse
  142. 142.
    >"Aaaah!", they keep yelling
  143. 143.
    >Their synchronized screaming is suddenly interrupted when the green horse trips and violently falls to the ground
  144. 144.
    >Trixie looks clearly shocked, still not knowing how he changed places, until a clear "oh, right" expression shows up on her face
  145. 145.
    >"Sorry, Trixie, but now the utmost priority is the well-being of that pony"
  146. 146.
    >You help Trixie get up and then you take a peek at the pony
  147. 147.
    >He seem to be unconscious, with his head up, mouth open and eyes wide shut.
  148. 148.
    "Are you alright?"
  149. 149.
    >"Yes, but please, next time something else to stop him!"
  150. 150.
    "You're right, I'm sorry. Listen, maybe we should take him to Sunburst's house and see if we can find a doctor nearby."
  151. 151.
    >"But we don't even know the guy!"
  152. 152.
    >Fair point
  153. 153.
    >"Yes, but think... If we ever have a problem and hurt ourselves while traveling, wouldn't we appreciate being aided by others?
  154. 154.
    >Trixie looks at the green pony, still unconscious on the ground
  155. 155.
    >"Well, I guess so, but... Don't you think he might be dangerous? I mean, he started screaming as soon as he saw me. Why would anyone react that way at the mere sight of Trixie?"
  156. 156.
    "Eh..."
  157. 157.
    >"Trixie's hair looks fantastic!", she yelled at your face
  158. 158.
    "I didn't say anything!"
  159. 159.
    >You chuckle, but quickly remember the unconscious pony near you
  160. 160.
    "Okay, that's it. I'm going to carry him on your wagon to Sunburst's house. I'll think about what to do there."
  161. 161.
    >"Oh, I can't afford to miss his expression when he sees you arriving with a half dead pony!"
  162. 162.
    "He's not dead!"
  163. 163.
    >You lift him using telepathy and Trixie looks at his body slowly flying towards her wagon
  164. 164.
    >"Does Twilight approve of you moving other ponies against their will?", she asks without taking her eyes from the green horse
  165. 165.
    "Please, she wishes she could do the same!"

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