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[MMP] Xibalba's sacrifice
By BtMessCreated: 2021-07-16 21:31:33
Updated: 2021-01-31 23:14:02
Expiry: Never
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Original paste date: Jan 15th, 2019
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>Earthquakes announce that your time has come
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>Every 100 years or so, this great being comes by your village
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>And every time your tribe prepares her a sacrifice, so the peace may be kept intact for all
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>Xibalba, how your tribe named her, never wandered close, so all you've known until now was her earth-shaking steps
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>That and how no one ever came back from the ritual, even the warriors
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>Warriors who were supposed to be the three best warriors or the current generation
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>The biggest and strongest warriors of the tribe
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>The three warriors who accompanied you by your sides and back
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>Minding your steps so they don't think you're slowing down, you look at the ones by your side
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>You can see how they're also afraid, knowing that no one ever came back
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>Even though you're the sacrifice, you can only wonder what s in it for them
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>"Less staring, more walking"
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>The one in the back says, pushing you forward
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"Right, right, sorry"
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>But shortly after, the tremors stopped
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>You're late
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>Still walking through the dense forest, you can't make up what's to come
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>Only thing you can see in the temple coming up far ahead
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>"Hmm, I guess I arrived first for once, maybe I will wait a bit"
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>Shock envelops you as you hear the booming girl voice and you stop waking
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>Since you weren't pushed around, you can say the warriors had the same reaction
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>"G-get it together guys, we're the best, just remember the training"
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>"HOI" - the other two shout, grabbing you by the legs and arms
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>They start sprinting, the third one going ahead and opening the way for the two warriors with you
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>Soon enough the forest opens up and a quick jog gets you to the temple stairs
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>No one is allowed here but the ones who will partake in the sacrifice
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>So you had no idea it would be this big
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>No, big is an understatement
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>Before long you're being carried upstairs
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>They start slowing down after the first hundred steps or so, and slow down their pace
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>It only helps to show how large this thing really is, not even having gone up half or perhaps even a third of the way
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>There s no way you d be able to climb all this in one go
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>Perhaps that s what they meant with the training, already expecting the need to carry you up
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>But you guys are late
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>And as you climb the last set of stairs a massive plumage shows itself above
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>What kind of bird would even have blue-ish feathers that big
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>Slowing down to get their breath and not look weak, the warriors finally put you down
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>After a single deep breath you four get back to walking, revealing something as big as an elephant skull tying the headdress together
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>Probably bigger than an elephant skull, as it didn't look like anything...
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>The first green hairs from her head finally show up
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>Which is quickly followed by the yellow fur of her face
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>Her eyes are closed and apparently she doesn't notice your approach, remaining still
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>Finishing the climb, you have no other words to describe this gigantic horse being besides beautiful
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>Also huge and heavy, with how the simple act of her laying her head down has cracked the structure slightly
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>But that wouldn't be good to say to the being you were supposed to be a sacrifice to
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>The three warriors step in front of you, before hitting the back of their spears on the floor with all their strength
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>The knock makes the mare snap her eyes open and raise her head swiftly, looking even more massive now
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>You're level with the bottom of her chest fluff when she finally stops and looks down
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>"Oh, you've arrived, hello~"
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>You could notice she was whispering, comparing to what you heard before
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>Yet her voice still arrived like thunder
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>All three warriors knelt down, before the middle one spoke up
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>"We've brought the sacrifice, may our peace reign for 100 years more..."
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>You see her hoof raising slowly as he spoke, waiting for him to finish
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>Yet, he stopped talking, all of you four frozen in fear from it
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>It could easily kill all you four at once if she decided to lower on you
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>Instead, it lowered on the side, not aiming at any of you
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>"You're late"
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>She said, not whispered, actually speaking out loud while hitting the top of the temple on the side
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>It was more of a tap than actually hitting it, but it shook it enough to finally bring you to your knees
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>"And the sacrifice didn't show proper respect until I made it do it myself"
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>You were supposed to kneel too!?
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>No one said anything
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>Her booming voice and irritation made you tremble in fear
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>"Perhaps I should give a personal visit to the village to teach you all some manners"
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>At that, the first warrior managed to bring himself back enough to plead
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>"No! Mistress please, don't destroy our village for our mistakes"
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>"Hmph, come forward"
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>Audibly gulping, he got up and walked forward, past the sacrifice spot and to the other side
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>"So you want my mercy? Fine"
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>Her other hoof that was on the ground started to rise and, filled with fear, he turned around to get some distance
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>The hoof that was planted on the temple shook it violently in reaction
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>The three of you who were knelt down fell to your sides and he fell on his face
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>"Don't you dare run, did you not want my forgiveness?"
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>All of you stood still, her piercing gaze coming from the skies
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>"DO YOU WANT IT?"
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>"Y-y-yes"
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>"Then get up"
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>Slowly he stood up, but neither of you three dared to move
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>Her other hoof slowly lowered on him, prompting him to put his hands up to hold it back
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>It was like he was trying to hold back an entire building, larger than the biggest one back home
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>As soon as both his hands touched the underside of her hoof it stopped
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>"There, if you can hold the weight and duration of my ire I will forgive you"
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>Immediatelly his legs and arms stiffed up, as if holding back some inhumane weight
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>Looking up you could see the mare smirk
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>Staring back down, you watched the bizarre sight of the tiny ant holding the finger back
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>Or what was the closest thing you could compare it to
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>It tilted left and right slightly, the warrior trembling underneath it
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>"Okay that s enough, who s the next warrior"
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>It was so quick you barely even saw it
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>One moment the warrior, who opened the way for you three, was holding up to his life
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>The next was like the sky itself had fallen on him
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>The ground shook when the whole weight of her hoof finally was fully released and fell, you now staring at it
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>"Do I have to repeat myself?"
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>This is madness
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>Like you, none of them dared to move out of fear
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>"I was expecting more from "the best warriors of this generation"..."
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>"But I guess it can't be helped with these manners of yours"
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>At that she got up, her hooves leaving the temple and hitting the ground softly with a loud thud
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>Only now you realized that she was sitting down as if at a table
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>Wait, the previous threat of hers and now getting up to leave
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>"So be it"
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>As she started to turn for her first step you got up to your knees and screamed
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"Wait!"
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>You don't know what you expected, but she actually stopped
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>Turning around and seeing you, she raised one of her eyebrows
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>But not long after she smiled, seeing how you were on your knees and not in the same outfit as the warriors
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>Having the undivided attention of the gargantuan mare actually shook your bones, and you had to rely on your hands to stay above the ground
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>"Well? Speak up human, I don't have all day"
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"I-I came here ready to give my life for the village, please give me a chance"
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>"Oh?" - she said, sitting back down and shaking the earth once more
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>Slowly she lowered her head down
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>"I don't know, you were late and didn't even had the manners to kneel, how do you think you're fit to die for your village?"
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"I..."
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>"You...?"
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"I'm..."
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>Her right hoof rose to the edge, and you were reminded of the other dude
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>You're too far gone to stop
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>And you knew what you were signing up to
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"I'm not, but even late and with mistakes I'd like to have a chance"
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>Your whole body vibrated as she hummed at your answer
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>"Hmmm...come closer"
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>Her hoof landed on the edge as she had done before
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>And seeing it there sent shivers down your spine
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>You get up on shaky legs and walked to the middle of the altar
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>It was surprisingly clean, blood and cracked ground around, but the sacrifice area looking rather pristine
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>Her head stopped lowering as the bottom of her snout reached the same height as your ground
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>Yet it was twice or perhaps even three times as tall as you
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>And with a frown, she slowly tapped the ground where the warrior last stood
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>"No, here" - she said, the loud thuds of her gentle tapping not being enough to silence her deafening voice
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>And with her mouth so close, you could feel the strong winds created by her simply speaking, almost sweeping you off your feet
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>Gulping, you walked to where her hoof just had retreated from
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>Closer to her face, you can't even fathom the size difference between the both of you
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>"So, you want a chance huh?"
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>Her mouth opened in a grin, each of her teeth being big enough to be a door
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>You fell back on your butt, and the grin quickly turned into a pout
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>Y-you went too far, you can't stop now
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>"Here was I thinking you d be more courageous than that, fine"
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>Her soft lower lips hit the edge and she opened her mouth wide in front of you
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>Proceeding to move her massive tongue around in the air, she licked each of her teeth before closing it back down
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>"Here s your challenge, if you walk into my mouth willingly I'll spare your home, how does that sound?"
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>She opened her mouth wide once more
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>Surely she knew you didn't need it to go that high, but the show of its size put her intended fear in you
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>The last straw was seeing her tongue unroll forwards towards you, actually rolling over your bottom half before stopping
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>You even dragged yourself back, but since you were sitting you didn't get far before your legs got trapped under its weight
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>Unable to lift her tongue or drag yourself out, you look back at the warriors
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>After all this time they hadn't moved at all, playing dead or simply too scared to move
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>And too scared to help you out apparently
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>No matter how you tried to pull yourself out, its huge weight held you in place
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>It was malleable enough to not be uncomfortable, but it still felt heavy enough to crush you if she applied any pressure
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>Finally giving up, you relented, staring at it and feeling powerless
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>It wasn't long until it lazily lifted itself up, the mare apparently enjoying your struggles under it with her rosy cheeks
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>Moving away from your previous spot, it descended once more to make a red-carpeted entry
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>And having seen her blushing cheeks helped your resolve to go inside
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>If you could get her to enjoy herself then perhaps you could in fact save everyone
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>And so you stepped forward
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>And immediately slipped
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>Falling face first on her tongue was less painful than you expected
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>It vibrating along with her throaty hums of approval screamed that she would pull you in any time now
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>But true to her words, it went back to being still after a while
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>Although there was now a lot of drooling in her mouth, slowly coming to you by her tongue
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>So you decided to keep going on fours to not slip again
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>And as soon you went past her teeth, her tongue receded
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>You didn't knew how far inside you were, but it just kept going further and further back
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>When you thought you were going to go straight into her throat it stopped, and you felt a great upwards force as her head rose again
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>Closing her mouth she tilted her head forwards, making you slide towards her teeth
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>At least you weren't going to fall from whatever height you were at now
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>But before you hit them, she tilted her head sideways, sliding you underneath her tongue
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>"My, my, you really did it. I didn't think you had it in you"
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>Inside, her voice was so loud and encompassing you felt you d go deaf even with her whispering
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>"Since you were a nice one I will leave you for last"
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>Light shone in from the sides of her mouth as she grinned
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>"But for your two, I only have one last thing to say..."
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>"Run~"
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>While you couldn't see outside, the screams still reached your ears
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>The movement also implied that she had gotten up, starting to walk somewhere
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>Before you could think too much about what was happening outside, her tongue decided to remind you about the inside
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>It slid your body back on top of it, before throwing you around and pinning your body on various places in her mouth
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>Not only was she playing with you inside, but she was also tracking something outside, as her head kept moving around
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>Before long you were harshly pinned to the top, with a strong pressure following, with her sucking your form
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>From outside, a massive boom rang out, similar to the first thunder from a sacrifice
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>Releasing you, you were shot to her cheeks, as she moved her head sideways
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>When it stopped, you were once more pinned to the underside of the tongue, as a massive g-force pulled you upwards
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>She had jumped...
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>The second thunder soon echoed, louder than the first and no doubt crashing many houses with the following earthquake
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>The ritual was complete
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>But you were alive...
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>Rhythmic thuds came from outside as she started walking somewhere
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>You d think she had forgotten about you, but her tongue pulling you back on top of it said otherwise
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>You felt gravity shift as she opened her mouth, seeing now that she was walking opposite direction than the village
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>What worried you is that she kept tilting her head more and more...
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>She was dropping you off from the skies
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>You wouldn't even be allowed to die an honoured death by her actions
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>But as soon you fell off, you saw one of her hooves line with your fall
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>Falling on the soft frog, you didn't even feel the impact, the winds blasting you with the speed of her walk
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>You couldn't even get off the leg, as the other three legs extended far down below kept walking forwards
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>"Am I a bad pony?"
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>That question took you by surprise, and all you could do was stare at her head, way up in the sky
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>Receiving no answer, she stared at you, her sad eyes seeking comfort from the one she had just taken off from her mouth
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>Not able to stare at you, she looked back ahead
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>"Everytime I come to talk, I end up killing and crushing you guys like a monster, I...it feels so good but..."
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>She kept walking a while more with both of you in silence
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>After getting to a clearing she sat down and tilted her hoof, prompting you to climb down
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>It was still quite the fall, but nothing too bad
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>Turning back to her, not being up in the temple anymore, you could see how big the mare really was compared to you
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>Her bottom was about as wide as the temple, but she was easily twice its size
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>"Am I a bad pony?" - she asked again
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"N-no of course not"
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>"I know you're scared, but please don't lie to me" - she said sadly
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>"I just walk there like the place was mine, kill some of you for my own enjoyment and then walk out like nothing happened...I'm a monster"
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>She laid down in front of you, her belly right ahead of you and her head far to your left but turned to stare at you closer
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>Her sad eyes were all you needed to see to know she indeed felt bad for it
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"No you aren't, if you were you d go for the city and destroy everything there, surely that would beat killing three tiny humans...or four"
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>"Well yea" - she said biting her lip, a fierce blush appearing on her cheeks before she shook her head
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>"No, that s just bad, destroying everything for my enjoyment, I couldn't..."
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>"Maybe i could actually" - she whispered the end, loud and clear as always
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"And that s why we have the peace treaty, you can have your fun, we can have our lives, everyone wins"
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>You don't know when you had gotten so bold, but before you noticed you had already walked to her belly
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>To think you could be inside there right now makes you shudder again
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>But something drives you to pet and rub the fur on wherever you can reach along with her
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>She looks at you, surprised at your actions, letting out a giggle
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>"You know, it was never supposed to be a peace treaty"
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"Huh?"
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>"It was an accident, they were building something there, I was walking past with this silly costume and saw it"
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>"Then I went to look closer, and before I knew it, I had stepped on one of the construction workers and its carriage"
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>She looked at her hoof as if reliving the memory
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>"In the panic I ended crushing many others who were running around, trying to stop them"
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>"And while I wasn't this big before, you guys were always really small and I had no idea how fragile you all really were"
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>"In the end I almost let myself get carried away, I always loved the feel of power from things under my hoof but..."
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>You notice her hoof coming after you and stop rubbing her belly, fear taking over for what she has in mind
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>"Sorry I'm blabbing, but then I saw the little houses and the panic on everyone's eyes and left"
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>She pressed you on her belly and slowly brought you upwards to her chest
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>"I ve came back everytime I have to pass by there, and you guys always send a few people for me, so I thought..."
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>You stopped at her forest of chest fluff, as she took a deep sigh
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>"I really am a monster, aren't I?"
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>You don't know why but you felt safe here with this mare
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>No need to worry about her rampaging and killing everyone
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>Just a lone girl in need of someone to talk to
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>A really big girl but still
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>You almost felt safe enough to crack a joke
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>Almost
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>I-is this the power of fluff?
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>Ah fuck it, let's do it
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"Well, tell me who told you that so I can kick their butt"
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>She didn't even pause to answer or think
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>"I said it myself so"
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>Taking the pressure away from her hoof, you feel yourself being taken away from the fluff
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>And with a flick of her leg you're sent flying through the sky
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>You close your eyes, not willing to see your doom
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>But when you land you bounce into something soft twice, before sliding into the tall grass where you slowed down to a stop
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>Which is actually yellow fur with a massive picture of-
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>"So what were you going to do again?"
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"I-it was a joke, please have-"
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>"Drop that goddess act, are you guys serious with that?"
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>She starts to move to get into a more comfortable position, taking off the headdress
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>"Look at me, I'm a simple mare, I never thought you guys-"
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>With her loud sigh you can almost feel her frustration
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>"Just kick it, show me how much of a bad mare I have been. I deserve that"
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>You look at the massive globe you're laying in and wonder if she d even feel it
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>Getting up, you stomp the ground once
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>But looking above to the skies it got no reaction from her, still staring at you like before
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>So you stomp as hard as you can
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>But its softness spreads the impact everywhere and into your anchored feet, making you lose your balance and fall down
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>The mare giggles at that at least, so hopefully she isn't feeling so bad
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>"Don't know how you guys call me, but I'm Sequoia"
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"I'm Anon, pleased to...meet you"
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>She giggles at that, repeatedly tensing and softening her butt, moving you along with it
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>"You're cute, hope you don't mind staying with me. I'm not sure how they d react with you going back"
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"I'd be killed if I went back, so it's fine"
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>With a gasp, her hooves shoot to cover her muzzle
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>"Killed? Can I have the honours?"
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"What do you- please no!"
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>"Kidding, kidding...or am I?"
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>You punched her fat flanks as she giggled, knowing she d be fine with it
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>That was the start of a long friendship...
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